I’ve come to the conclusion that this woman is a truly mediocre writer—one that I cannot read without skimming and being frustrated.
Her style of writing is to fill page after page with redundancy (perhaps she used to run the department of redundancy department). What a concise author would write in a half page takes Amy Fillion 3+ pages. She hits the reader over the head many, many times with the same information, perhaps thinking that we’re too stupid to get it, and we need our noses ground in what she’s trying to express. Well, I’m not stupid.
Her style of writing is also disjointed and illogical. She will spend many, many pages on minutia we do NOT need, then jump ahead to some future time.
She needs a good editor, because it’s evident that she’s not up to the task. I made it halfway through this book and wish I’d given up sooner. Catherine Ryan Hyde she is not, though she seems to want to write in the same genre.
I’d give her a half star if I could. Amazon needs to find better writers than her to fill its stable.