Una noche en un tren

by Kelsey Charisma

Cuando Megan hizo un largo viaje por Europa, le tocó compartir cuarto con Paulo, un sexy europeo. Sin duda unas vacaciones que no olvidará jamás.

Este libro está a la venta SOLAMENTE PARA ADULTOS. Contiene escenas sexuales explícitas y lenguaje gráfico que puede ser considerado ofensivo por algunos lectores. Por favor, guarde bien sus archivos para que los menores no tengan acceso a ellos. Todos los personajes sexualmente activos en este trabajo son mayores de 18 años.

Genres: Erotica, Smut, Short Stories, Adult, Contemporary, Romance

12 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 20, 2012

About the author

Kelsey Charisma is a young stay-at-home wife, who started writing erotic short stories for her husband as special treats to whet his appetite while they read them aloud.... Her husband encouraged her to publish her work for other couples that may want to share fantasies--though, they're fun to read alone, too.


http://www.kelseycharisma.blogspot.com/

Reviews

[Selene]

This book went from zero to a hundred instantly! No build-up necessary! It's a brief story about a sexual encounter between two strangers on a train. It's predictable and strictly a fantasy-based read--no romance, no fluff, no common sense, and a more simplistic writing style. But it was a dirty-as-hell quickie and a very much enjoyed smutty read!

[Funzee Shu]

*** 2.8 / 5 stars ***

Seriously ?
You let a stranger fuck you without any protection ??
Stupid huh ?

But well, it's hot anyway !!! ;)

[Paula]

Wow! This little book was too hot to handle. It was very EROTIC. I couldn't put it down. Now please excuse me while I go take a cold shower.

And just think I own this little story and can read it whenever I want to. Cause I'm sure I'll want to.

[Ben Jackson]

Short erotic and a little creepy

This was an ok erotica novella. The situation described is a little creepy when you a think about it. A stranger raping you while you’re pretending to be asleep. The action described was hot though. If you’re interested in these kind of stories, check it out. If not, look elsewhere.

[Geovanna Maya]

Una muy buena historia, es muy entretenida y vale la pena, me gusto mucho como la autora describe todo en tan pocas hojas todas esas escenas eróticas.

[Lisa]

Really really hot! Train erotica mixed with sleep fantasy erotica hits all the right spots.

[UberApril]

I'm not usually a fan of sleep erotica but this was kinda hot. I like the author's writing style.

[Sam Spencer]

This was short

I have exactly one problem with most novellas and this was much the same. It had so much potential for development that I felt was unrealized due to the length of the story.

[Amanda]

Sexy and fun

A girl on her graduation trip learns she is sharing a sleeping cart with a hot guy. She wakes up feeling him get up.to to go to the bathroom and watched his naked behind. She tried to pretend she is asleep and entice him.

[Srijita Bhattacharyya]

Trashy erotic novel check√
Heroine is a dumbhead check√
Made you hot check√√√

[April Connett]

HOT! HOT! HOT!

This was a Kindle melting vignette with just enough of a plot to give necessary info, but not enough to bog you down. Definitely a one-handed read 😉

[Jennifer Bolla]

What a nice fantasy

It is short and sexy. Just the right amount of play and smutty words. It wasn't over done, to point where it would be vulgar. Enjoyable sensual read.

[Evangeline Luguna]

Short

Sweet and to the point... he takes her while she pretends to be sleeping and they end up having the whole
Trip together since her friend ended up sick...

[Jandira Pimentel]

Incredibly short! You won’t spent not even 7mins reading it.
Extremely hot though!

[Sabi]

It was like a train wreck... it went on and on an on. At least it was a short novel...

Seriously, she wanted it, but he didn't know. Can you say r*pist?

[Regina Lopez]

Excelente desarrollo 😏

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****FREE ON AMAZON****

[Yelania Nightwalker]

+18 | Libro gratis en Smashword

Evidentemente no es una historia romántica, así que si están buscando eso, vean alguno de los otros libros de la autora.

No podemos pedir profundidad en los personajes, a fin de cuentas, es una historia corta. Su fin es entretener, divertir, estimular... Si están para ese tipo de libros, entonces lean Una noche en un tren.

Disfruté mucho de este libro, me pareció una propuesta muy interesante, en algunos momentos me divirtió mucho la protagonista y Paulo fue un verdadero atrevido!! Pero bien dicen que a quien le dan pan que llore no?

Una noche en un tren es una historia muy corta sí, pero es sexy, caliente y divertida. El final sería la única pega, la última frase, diría yo. Pero por lo demás, estuvo bastante bien.

*El libro fue enviado por la autora a cambio de una reseña honesta.

[Jeanne]

Meh.

This is the stranger on a train scenario. It gets right to the fucking, which is a plus in my book, but that's about the best I can say.

There are numerous grammar and even a couple spelling errors. Not to mention the same tired sex descriptors used over and over again during the sex scene. There is nothing creative or new here. While this book is free, you could find better porn on Literotica.com.

It's dirty porn, sure, and i have absolutely no problem with that.

Bad writing and lame sex scenes that's hard for me to forgiven.

Too bad. I've always loved the stranger on a train fantasy and it'd be nice to read a well written version of it.

[Nikki "The Crazie Betty" V.]

I thought I'd give this a try because it was short and free but I definitely discovered in reading this story that I don't find it sexy in the least to pretend to be asleep so a total and complete stranger will take advantage of you thinking you're asleep the whole time. That's just wrong and regardless of the girl in the story wanted it or not, we're talking about a man who has no problem taking advantage of a girl who isn't in their right state of mind. She may have been pretending but he didn't know that.

Bleh and yuck.

[Larry Johnson]

What is the best story short stories I've read yet

I absolutely love the way the author took a very probable situation in today's society and turn it into one of the most amazing erotic short stories possible . Excellent detail in action . A very short story that leaves you wanting more .

[Vickie]

This plot is just maddening.

The girl just experienced rape(in my opinion) & she is all blushing and shy the next morning. I understand she was awake & pretending to be asleep, but that was wrong on so many levels. And then she let him have sex with no protection. You don't even know if he is sick or not. Use some common sense girl.

[Kathryn Parry]

Not sure I like the idea of a young girl on her own with a older stanger sharing a sleeping appartment on a train. The story was as she slept he started to take advantage, being a mum with a young girl I found it a turn off but if that is what you like than you should enjoy the book

[Katrina Simpson]

Seductive tease

this was a tease... it does need a part two..it needs to be continued.
this was a great story line-strangers meeting and setting up a rendezvous..
basically a hot quickie.

[Ashley]

wtf

Um what? I have so many questions about this book and I need answers. First of all how does somebody even pretend to be asleep during that. Secondly what kind of man does that? All in all it was a great story and I can't wait to read more by the author!

[Lindsay]

something is wrong with this girl. does she not realize how wrong this is? this story is disturbing

[Tonya]

It's free on Amazon right now. Free smut. Nuff said.

[♡ Sasha - TEAM ELLIE. ♥]

It was hot and short and straight to the point...

Full review coming soon...

[Andi]

Second time...

I read this story. I am not sure if it was good enough for a second read. It was predictable.

[Corbie Jamieson]

I accidentally came across this on my sisters Kindle. An interesting find! I really enjoyed the writing style and could picture the scene quite well. Good for a sneaky 15 alone!