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244 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 28, 2014
















I don't want to be here when Inspector Cramer or, heaven forbid, his dull-witted, stuttering underling, Lieutenant George Rowcliff, shows up. Each of them would try to pin this on me somehowWhat's wrong with this? Sure, Archie might say "Inspector Cramer" here, rather than simply "Cramer," but I doubt it. But there's no way he rambles on with full name and rank of Rowcliff -- period. And that lumbering "dull-witted, stuttering underling"? Pfui. Saul knows Rowcliff. Archie might put that in his narration, but he's not going to do that in dialogue with his old pal.
Your old friend and poker-playing adversary Lon Cohen, no doubt.No. No. No. Lily's lines should sing. The banter between she and Archie should have zip. Not this tin-eared nonsense.