The Proposal

by Nik Valentine

Valentine's Day has always been a special occasion for Taylor, not because it's a holiday made for lovers, but because it was the day he met the love of his life, Rob, in a BDSM club. After ten wonderful years of serving the man, he wants to take the next step in their relationship, but when Rob turns him down he is left heartbroken, but determined to change his man's mind.***Contains gay sex, spanking, penetration and all that good stuff!***

Genres: M M Romance, BDSM

27 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 25, 2014

Reviews

[Catherine · Rating 3 out of 5]

*** 3.5 Stars ***

*blushes and clears throat*

Well, this one worked for me in a BIG way! I was exactly in the mood for something naughty, short, and not too serious and this story delivered all of that.

[~✡~Dαni(ela) ♥ ♂♂ love & semi-colons~✡~ · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5

**scratches head** I guess I don't understand how Rob accepting Taylor's "proposal" would have changed their relationship? How is living together as Master/slave different from a 24/7 M/s relationship? Isn't living together pretty much 24/7? But I liked Rob's counter-proposal, and the belt whipping was hot.

The typos, however, were not: I saw several instances of "to" used where "too" should have been and "wont" without the apostrophe (WHAT? That is just. Not. OK.)

Also, these guys have been together for ten years and monogamous for several, but they're still using condoms? I don't get that. **shrugs** Is that like "must have safe sex on the page so people don't get any ideas" or what?

[Gigi · Rating 3 out of 5]

Great M/M BDSM snack!

[Sue bowdley · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sweet short story x

[Cee Brown · Rating 4 out of 5]

BDSM isn't my kink, but I overlook it due to good storyline, and this was good.
I enjoy established couples, especially those who live for one another .

[Sandi ♥'s way too many M/M books · Rating 3 out of 5]

Sweet quickie