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The Dragonlord's Heir
Instead of doing math homework or playing video games like any other 13-year-old kid might be doing, Logan Lockwood is a bit more preoccupied with slaying a dragon.
Descended directly from Saint George, the legendary dragon slayer of old, Logan's responsibility as the current Dragonlord is to keep the great dragons entombed and slay any if they should ever be released.
But when a man named Cain Hunter attempts to resurrect Bolla, the dragon of the western world, Logan finds himself embarking on a dangerous adventure to stop an enemy with a personal vendetta against the father he's never met. Trekking from hidden tombs to watery graves, it's up to Logan alone to recover the mighty lance, Ascalon, and slay the beast before time runs out.
The deadline is Saint George's Day, April 23rd.
To protect the world from the folly of the great beast and save his father's life, Logan must assume his identity as the Dragonlord and reclaim Ascalon before Bolla is resurrected.
Descended directly from Saint George, the legendary dragon slayer of old, Logan's responsibility as the current Dragonlord is to keep the great dragons entombed and slay any if they should ever be released.
But when a man named Cain Hunter attempts to resurrect Bolla, the dragon of the western world, Logan finds himself embarking on a dangerous adventure to stop an enemy with a personal vendetta against the father he's never met. Trekking from hidden tombs to watery graves, it's up to Logan alone to recover the mighty lance, Ascalon, and slay the beast before time runs out.
The deadline is Saint George's Day, April 23rd.
To protect the world from the folly of the great beast and save his father's life, Logan must assume his identity as the Dragonlord and reclaim Ascalon before Bolla is resurrected.
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First published January 22, 2014
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April 14, 2014
First, I'd like to thank Christina Kenway, the author, for giving me the chance to read and review her book.
I'll start with the cons: My biggest problem with this book was the voice. It's supposed to be in the voice of the 13 year old protagonist, Logan Lockwood. Unfortunately, the language and dialogue is written from a much more mature perspective, and it provided a disconnect and made it less believable, at least for me. But that's also a compliment, as the writer has a fantastic and mature writing style and a great grasp on vocabulary. Aside from a few places where she neglected to start a new paragraph when a different person started speaking (aka two lines of dialogue in the same paragraph weren't spoken by the same person, a little confusing), her grammar was spot on -- a rare thing to find in a young author OR in a self-published author.
I also thought there were a few bumps in the story -- the importance of the trials was said but not shown. There wasn't a lot of fleshing out of history or character development or plot development in the case of this world of The Order and The Trials and the villains and Ascalon.
Overall, though, the plot was a lot of fun, and even though the characters felt a little "stock," there's a massive amount of potential in this author. I think she'd benefit greatly from a professional editor in the genre, who could help focus the plot points, find the inconsistences (a fresh set of unbiased eyes can always help!), and narrow down the things that need more developing to a short list for improvement. She's got a lot of creativity, and the story itself won't disappoint -- plenty of action and decent twists and turns. I feel like a very young adult/middle grade reader wouldn't catch all the things I've seen as an adult reader and would enjoy the story very much. I enjoyed it, in spite of those things I've mentioned.
I look forward to Ms. Kenway polishing up her work as she gains experience, and picking up the story of Logan Lockwood and the dragons!
I'll start with the cons: My biggest problem with this book was the voice. It's supposed to be in the voice of the 13 year old protagonist, Logan Lockwood. Unfortunately, the language and dialogue is written from a much more mature perspective, and it provided a disconnect and made it less believable, at least for me. But that's also a compliment, as the writer has a fantastic and mature writing style and a great grasp on vocabulary. Aside from a few places where she neglected to start a new paragraph when a different person started speaking (aka two lines of dialogue in the same paragraph weren't spoken by the same person, a little confusing), her grammar was spot on -- a rare thing to find in a young author OR in a self-published author.
I also thought there were a few bumps in the story -- the importance of the trials was said but not shown. There wasn't a lot of fleshing out of history or character development or plot development in the case of this world of The Order and The Trials and the villains and Ascalon.
Overall, though, the plot was a lot of fun, and even though the characters felt a little "stock," there's a massive amount of potential in this author. I think she'd benefit greatly from a professional editor in the genre, who could help focus the plot points, find the inconsistences (a fresh set of unbiased eyes can always help!), and narrow down the things that need more developing to a short list for improvement. She's got a lot of creativity, and the story itself won't disappoint -- plenty of action and decent twists and turns. I feel like a very young adult/middle grade reader wouldn't catch all the things I've seen as an adult reader and would enjoy the story very much. I enjoyed it, in spite of those things I've mentioned.
I look forward to Ms. Kenway polishing up her work as she gains experience, and picking up the story of Logan Lockwood and the dragons!
March 6, 2014
I would like to thank the author for a free electronic copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
The Dragonlord's Heir was a wonderful read full of adventure and action. The protagonist of this tale is Logan Lockwood an interesting young teen destined for greatness. The story follows this youthful hero as he faces many trials and attempts to prevent the resurrection of Bolla, a terrifying dragon that could destroy the world, and find his father. Overall, I loved the characters and felt that the book definitely pulled me in. Logan's world is one that I could return to again and again. I would definitely recommend this book to all who enjoy a great fantasy read.
The Dragonlord's Heir was a wonderful read full of adventure and action. The protagonist of this tale is Logan Lockwood an interesting young teen destined for greatness. The story follows this youthful hero as he faces many trials and attempts to prevent the resurrection of Bolla, a terrifying dragon that could destroy the world, and find his father. Overall, I loved the characters and felt that the book definitely pulled me in. Logan's world is one that I could return to again and again. I would definitely recommend this book to all who enjoy a great fantasy read.
February 1, 2014
For the debut offering of Christina Kenway this was a good start.
The positive: I loved the cover. It was inviting and drew me in.
I can identify with where the author is at in her publishing journey, for about a year ago I, too, was here. I published my first work and assessed I knew how to write well. Because of that I did not acquire the services of an editor and the first version of my first book quickly reflected that in reviews that were less than enthusiastic.
Opportunities for learning: I say that to say this. I think the concepts and plot twists are there, but the work as a whole needs polishing. I found myself confused at times re: who was saying what line. As well, I found some of the descriptions repetitive. I can only handle so many chills going up someone's spine to reflect fear.
I saw a few bigger problems though -
1) The story begins with Logan's mom releasing her 13-year old son, Logan, to a man she only barely knows and doesn't trust. I understand that the middle grade reader may not have an issue with this, but as a mom, there's NO way I would have sent my child away with someone like this. Also, Logan's reaction is quiet acceptance. There's not much resistance and it just wasn't believable, to me.
2) The trials - there wasn't much transition into WHY the trials were needed. I'm still a bit confused as I write this review. They all of a sudden happen and I'm not clear how they fit into the plot. Why did Logan have to go through the trials? I understand he was the dragonlord, but was the point to toughen him up? Was it to test him? With the first test David accompanied him... which, against the other 2 tests, really confused me. Those he was with kept telling Logan he would be fine and would come out alive. I understand that only the dragonlord could retrieve the parts of Ascalon. I understand all this, but I'm still lost as to why the trials had to be so all of a sudden and what their true purpose was. The author never clearly says and so I was left confused.
Overall, the book felt disjointed and needed to flow better between events. I think a good editor could give some help and pointers. For me, having now had two books professionally edited, I have seen significant improvement in the quality of my writing as I've learned from the feedback she has given. I would encourage the author to do the same. As I said at the beginning, I see some elements in the writing that could easily be refined and crafted into a book that all middle grade readers would love.
It appears the author plans to write more books in this series and potentially make a career of it. IF that is the case, I encourage her to accept constructive criticism as it is offered at this point as it is meant to help, not hurt. She can be a truly great author one day.
The positive: I loved the cover. It was inviting and drew me in.
I can identify with where the author is at in her publishing journey, for about a year ago I, too, was here. I published my first work and assessed I knew how to write well. Because of that I did not acquire the services of an editor and the first version of my first book quickly reflected that in reviews that were less than enthusiastic.
Opportunities for learning: I say that to say this. I think the concepts and plot twists are there, but the work as a whole needs polishing. I found myself confused at times re: who was saying what line. As well, I found some of the descriptions repetitive. I can only handle so many chills going up someone's spine to reflect fear.
I saw a few bigger problems though -
1) The story begins with Logan's mom releasing her 13-year old son, Logan, to a man she only barely knows and doesn't trust. I understand that the middle grade reader may not have an issue with this, but as a mom, there's NO way I would have sent my child away with someone like this. Also, Logan's reaction is quiet acceptance. There's not much resistance and it just wasn't believable, to me.
2) The trials - there wasn't much transition into WHY the trials were needed. I'm still a bit confused as I write this review. They all of a sudden happen and I'm not clear how they fit into the plot. Why did Logan have to go through the trials? I understand he was the dragonlord, but was the point to toughen him up? Was it to test him? With the first test David accompanied him... which, against the other 2 tests, really confused me. Those he was with kept telling Logan he would be fine and would come out alive. I understand that only the dragonlord could retrieve the parts of Ascalon. I understand all this, but I'm still lost as to why the trials had to be so all of a sudden and what their true purpose was. The author never clearly says and so I was left confused.
Overall, the book felt disjointed and needed to flow better between events. I think a good editor could give some help and pointers. For me, having now had two books professionally edited, I have seen significant improvement in the quality of my writing as I've learned from the feedback she has given. I would encourage the author to do the same. As I said at the beginning, I see some elements in the writing that could easily be refined and crafted into a book that all middle grade readers would love.
It appears the author plans to write more books in this series and potentially make a career of it. IF that is the case, I encourage her to accept constructive criticism as it is offered at this point as it is meant to help, not hurt. She can be a truly great author one day.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 23, 2016
I was given a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review
This was a great start to a series! Granted there was not a lot of world building in this book, but I am sure that as the series progresses we will learn more about the the history of this world and the importance of The Order and the Trials.
The plot was fun and fast-paced with enough twists to keep it interesting and not bog the story down with them at the same time. Can't to see where the series goes from here.
This was a great start to a series! Granted there was not a lot of world building in this book, but I am sure that as the series progresses we will learn more about the the history of this world and the importance of The Order and the Trials.
The plot was fun and fast-paced with enough twists to keep it interesting and not bog the story down with them at the same time. Can't to see where the series goes from here.
March 19, 2014
I would first like to thank the author for sending me an electronic copy of this book. This book is full of action and adventure. This book is very intriguing and very well written. Christina Kenway is a very imaginative author.
March 2, 2014
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for a review.
In "The Dragonlord's Heir," we are introduced to Logan Lockwood on his thirteenth birthday where he learns that he has reached the age where he inherits his father's power as the Dragonlord, a person with the power to use Ascalon the lance to fight dragons. Unfortunately, Logan's existence must be kept secret so that a man named Cain Hunter cannot find him and end the lineage of the Dragonlord. Logan goes on the run with members of the Order of Ascalon - a group of people who protect the Dragonlord and the lance - Wolf and David in order to retrieve the three pieces of Ascalon before Saint George's Day arrives and Cain Hunter resurrecting the dragon Bolla.
I enjoyed reading "The Dragonlord's Heir." Logan and Emma were the best parts of the books. It was amusing and satisfying to watch their relationship grow. Emma's back story was a little odd , but I liked how Logan sympathized with another child being put through difficult and unusual circumstances that forced them away from everything they'd ever known and then being treated with less respect and regard than they deserve. I'd say their budding relationship was the best part of the book.
My other two favorite parts contain spoilers, so read at your own risk:
Unfortunately, despite those events, there were some things about "The Dragonlord's Heir that I did not like as much. I would like to say upfront that while the list may seem long, most of these are pretty minor things that I'm only commenting on because I'm a picky reader. Pretty much all of these wouldn't detract from the enjoyment of this book for the intended age group.
- Logan's character seemed unrealistic. He went along with what was happening too quickly and was too Most thirteen year old boys I know would probably be excited to go fight a dragon, but then would probably have a breakdown or would argue with every command given to them. Maybe Logan's just a really mature thirteen year-old, but he didn't seem like he had the appropriate responses to a lot of stuff, especially when he almost died like eight times. Most people - not even just thirteen year-olds - would have a hard time dealing with that. Logan didn't. Maybe it's some side-effect of being the Dragonlord, but some aspects of Logan's character didn't feel right to me.
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Other, minor complaints that I have but aren't as glaring:
- I didn't get the same sense that Logan did of how terrifying Julianna is. She was described as having a "cool demeanor [that] could
shatter in an instant," which indicated to Logan that Julianna was the head of the Order for a reason and that she would be the one person who could protect him if anyone could. However, I found that the logic of Logan's conclusion didn't match the description of Julianna. That coldness doesn't necessarily mean she's capable of protecting Logan, and, to be honest, she wasn't in the end.
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Overall, though, I enjoyed "The Dragonlord's Heir." It's a new story about dragons, which are always fun to read about. I like how it incorporated historical figured and is based on real stories from history. I'm interested to see how the trilogy will turn out and how Logan will ultimately defeat Cain and any evil dragons out there.
A special thanks to Christina Kenway for asking me to read "The Dragonlord's Heir" and giving me the chance to read this great book!
In "The Dragonlord's Heir," we are introduced to Logan Lockwood on his thirteenth birthday where he learns that he has reached the age where he inherits his father's power as the Dragonlord, a person with the power to use Ascalon the lance to fight dragons. Unfortunately, Logan's existence must be kept secret so that a man named Cain Hunter cannot find him and end the lineage of the Dragonlord. Logan goes on the run with members of the Order of Ascalon - a group of people who protect the Dragonlord and the lance - Wolf and David in order to retrieve the three pieces of Ascalon before Saint George's Day arrives and Cain Hunter resurrecting the dragon Bolla.
I enjoyed reading "The Dragonlord's Heir." Logan and Emma were the best parts of the books. It was amusing and satisfying to watch their relationship grow. Emma's back story was a little odd , but I liked how Logan sympathized with another child being put through difficult and unusual circumstances that forced them away from everything they'd ever known and then being treated with less respect and regard than they deserve. I'd say their budding relationship was the best part of the book.
My other two favorite parts contain spoilers, so read at your own risk:
Unfortunately, despite those events, there were some things about "The Dragonlord's Heir that I did not like as much. I would like to say upfront that while the list may seem long, most of these are pretty minor things that I'm only commenting on because I'm a picky reader. Pretty much all of these wouldn't detract from the enjoyment of this book for the intended age group.
- Logan's character seemed unrealistic. He went along with what was happening too quickly and was too Most thirteen year old boys I know would probably be excited to go fight a dragon, but then would probably have a breakdown or would argue with every command given to them. Maybe Logan's just a really mature thirteen year-old, but he didn't seem like he had the appropriate responses to a lot of stuff, especially when he almost died like eight times. Most people - not even just thirteen year-olds - would have a hard time dealing with that. Logan didn't. Maybe it's some side-effect of being the Dragonlord, but some aspects of Logan's character didn't feel right to me.
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Other, minor complaints that I have but aren't as glaring:
- I didn't get the same sense that Logan did of how terrifying Julianna is. She was described as having a "cool demeanor [that] could
shatter in an instant," which indicated to Logan that Julianna was the head of the Order for a reason and that she would be the one person who could protect him if anyone could. However, I found that the logic of Logan's conclusion didn't match the description of Julianna. That coldness doesn't necessarily mean she's capable of protecting Logan, and, to be honest, she wasn't in the end.
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Overall, though, I enjoyed "The Dragonlord's Heir." It's a new story about dragons, which are always fun to read about. I like how it incorporated historical figured and is based on real stories from history. I'm interested to see how the trilogy will turn out and how Logan will ultimately defeat Cain and any evil dragons out there.
A special thanks to Christina Kenway for asking me to read "The Dragonlord's Heir" and giving me the chance to read this great book!
August 20, 2014
I didn’t receive a free copy of this book nor was I asked to review it.
Just want to say that overall I really enjoyed this book! Despite this not being my typically read genre since it was more of a Percy-Jackson-preteen-audience feel that maybe wouldn’t be fit for a twentysomething year old, I thought the book was really creative, exciting, and well written. Especially considering you are a young, self published author writing her first book, I was very impressed with the level of structure and adventure here! So, incredible job!
Disclaimer: I’m not really a review writer and have never done one, so sorry if my thoughts are a little jumbled, but hopefully some of the more constructive criticism stuff will at least help you out a bit!
I really enjoyed the whole concept of the Dragonlord and the fate of Order being left to a 13 year old kid. It was so creative and pulled off very well I think. I loved a lot of the characters, especially Emma who totally reminded me of the blonde girl in How to Train Your Dragon (the dragon parallel here merely being coincidental…)
Though I will say that your character names are maybe a little too well placed. Even though Logan and Emma are fairly generic names, it was literally impossible for me to not picture a younger Logan Lerman and Emma Watson playing these roles. I mean let’s face it, they are pretty dang cast-able in any role, but I think the names were a bit too limiting for that reason maybe. Though I’m sure this was unintentional. Just worth pointing out.
Unfortunately, I do agree with the inconsistency of the voice that has been mentioned in other reviews. I feel like Logan doesn’t have a distinct voice and maybe that’s because some of his thoughts and phrases are a bit unbelievable given he is only a 13 year old boy. I think I remember him repeatedly describing himself as “ill-equipped” as a Dragonlord and realistically, most 13 year olds would not use this in their vocabulary.
Even some of Emma’s dialogue is not relatable for a young girl. The line, “Stay alive, Dragon boy” was good, but probably too cliché and FAR TOO Hunger Games reminiscent. Like, Haymitch literally gives this advice to Katniss.
Also, sometimes things are pointed out that are not consistent with a 13 year old boy’s thoughts. Like when we finally meet William Lockwood and the first thing Logan notices about him is that he is “strikingly attractive.” Now, it makes sense for him to describe Emma in this way upon him first seeing her, but you probably wouldn’t hear a boy think of a middle aged man that way. I’m sure William is attractive, but if this is relevant information you feel the reader should know, come up with a way to do it that is more consistent with your respective character.
Perhaps this would have been better written as a third person limited, like Harry Potter (Sorry, not to compare any aspect of this book to Potter, but just an idea). If you do write again from first person, make the writing very distinct to the character, especially in respect to age and gender. It makes a HUGE difference in believability and even likability in your character.
I noticed that there were some parts you even go into 2nd person. I think there was one point at the end where the reader is addressed and Logan says something like, “As you can remember, I’ve had quite a few bad ideas.” So just stay away from addressing the ‘you’ in your writing.
There were also a few “show, don’t tell” parts in the writing that if were fixed would make the writing flow better. Most of the time it was subtle. But times you would come out and say things before they even happened like “the second trial wasn’t as bad as the first” and then state things like, “then something irreversible happened…” before it actually happened. I’d say you don’t need to tell us these things; it’s bad foreshadowing. Just write about it.
One obvious “telling” part were the dream sequences in both chapter 4 and 7. You would kind of literally have Logan tell us, “and then I had a dream. It was a nightmare. Here is what happened….” I appreciate you not wanting to confuse your readers, but I think it may have been unnecessary.
One more suggestion for the next few books if I may? You really need more characters Logan’s age! Emma can’t be the only friend in his younger circle. He needs a Ron Wesley (Again sorry for the Potter comparison…) But you should maybe have a group of young boys fighting dragons along side Logan. That would be awesome and it could have a lot more of a Maze Runner feel which would take everything up a notch and give your readers more options on relatable characters! Understandably, I feel like not many of your readers couldn’t relate to David or Julianna. So yeah, just give us a Weasley. Or a Neville. Or, my goodness, even a toned down Malfoy would do it for me!
Another note on Julianna. I think there was maybe a little too much build up for her character. She is described as this evil queen everyone should fear, but I remember being a little disappointed when I finally met her. I guess I did like her character overall looking back on the book, but she was fairly overhyped when we first met her. So yeah just be careful with that.
Anyways, I hope you can appreciate the review and take some of it into account for your other writing. I’m excited to read more from you. Best of luck to you.
Just want to say that overall I really enjoyed this book! Despite this not being my typically read genre since it was more of a Percy-Jackson-preteen-audience feel that maybe wouldn’t be fit for a twentysomething year old, I thought the book was really creative, exciting, and well written. Especially considering you are a young, self published author writing her first book, I was very impressed with the level of structure and adventure here! So, incredible job!
Disclaimer: I’m not really a review writer and have never done one, so sorry if my thoughts are a little jumbled, but hopefully some of the more constructive criticism stuff will at least help you out a bit!
I really enjoyed the whole concept of the Dragonlord and the fate of Order being left to a 13 year old kid. It was so creative and pulled off very well I think. I loved a lot of the characters, especially Emma who totally reminded me of the blonde girl in How to Train Your Dragon (the dragon parallel here merely being coincidental…)
Though I will say that your character names are maybe a little too well placed. Even though Logan and Emma are fairly generic names, it was literally impossible for me to not picture a younger Logan Lerman and Emma Watson playing these roles. I mean let’s face it, they are pretty dang cast-able in any role, but I think the names were a bit too limiting for that reason maybe. Though I’m sure this was unintentional. Just worth pointing out.
Unfortunately, I do agree with the inconsistency of the voice that has been mentioned in other reviews. I feel like Logan doesn’t have a distinct voice and maybe that’s because some of his thoughts and phrases are a bit unbelievable given he is only a 13 year old boy. I think I remember him repeatedly describing himself as “ill-equipped” as a Dragonlord and realistically, most 13 year olds would not use this in their vocabulary.
Even some of Emma’s dialogue is not relatable for a young girl. The line, “Stay alive, Dragon boy” was good, but probably too cliché and FAR TOO Hunger Games reminiscent. Like, Haymitch literally gives this advice to Katniss.
Also, sometimes things are pointed out that are not consistent with a 13 year old boy’s thoughts. Like when we finally meet William Lockwood and the first thing Logan notices about him is that he is “strikingly attractive.” Now, it makes sense for him to describe Emma in this way upon him first seeing her, but you probably wouldn’t hear a boy think of a middle aged man that way. I’m sure William is attractive, but if this is relevant information you feel the reader should know, come up with a way to do it that is more consistent with your respective character.
Perhaps this would have been better written as a third person limited, like Harry Potter (Sorry, not to compare any aspect of this book to Potter, but just an idea). If you do write again from first person, make the writing very distinct to the character, especially in respect to age and gender. It makes a HUGE difference in believability and even likability in your character.
I noticed that there were some parts you even go into 2nd person. I think there was one point at the end where the reader is addressed and Logan says something like, “As you can remember, I’ve had quite a few bad ideas.” So just stay away from addressing the ‘you’ in your writing.
There were also a few “show, don’t tell” parts in the writing that if were fixed would make the writing flow better. Most of the time it was subtle. But times you would come out and say things before they even happened like “the second trial wasn’t as bad as the first” and then state things like, “then something irreversible happened…” before it actually happened. I’d say you don’t need to tell us these things; it’s bad foreshadowing. Just write about it.
One obvious “telling” part were the dream sequences in both chapter 4 and 7. You would kind of literally have Logan tell us, “and then I had a dream. It was a nightmare. Here is what happened….” I appreciate you not wanting to confuse your readers, but I think it may have been unnecessary.
One more suggestion for the next few books if I may? You really need more characters Logan’s age! Emma can’t be the only friend in his younger circle. He needs a Ron Wesley (Again sorry for the Potter comparison…) But you should maybe have a group of young boys fighting dragons along side Logan. That would be awesome and it could have a lot more of a Maze Runner feel which would take everything up a notch and give your readers more options on relatable characters! Understandably, I feel like not many of your readers couldn’t relate to David or Julianna. So yeah, just give us a Weasley. Or a Neville. Or, my goodness, even a toned down Malfoy would do it for me!
Another note on Julianna. I think there was maybe a little too much build up for her character. She is described as this evil queen everyone should fear, but I remember being a little disappointed when I finally met her. I guess I did like her character overall looking back on the book, but she was fairly overhyped when we first met her. So yeah just be careful with that.
Anyways, I hope you can appreciate the review and take some of it into account for your other writing. I’m excited to read more from you. Best of luck to you.
March 4, 2014
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review
Don't you hate it when you write a great review and then your computer glitches out and you lose everything? 8D
So short version: Percy Jackson meets Indiana Jones. Plus dragons. Lots of fun, but had a few flaws. Why did Logan's mother just let him run off to do Dragonlord things with a person she doesn't trust? And said person she doesn't trust
I think this was a book of many twists. Let's count them, shall we?
As pointless as the trials seemed to be, I really enjoyed them. I mean it wasn't consistent at all. David goes with Logan through the first trial, but that's not allowed and supposedly only the Dragonlord is allowed to do these trials and honestly the rules were confusing because they weren't consistently followed. They were tons of fun, though. That's where the Indiana Jones comes in. Logan has to go through all these underground caverns and tunnels and jump over lava and swords and it's really great to read. Even if it makes no sense. I really don't care. Why's a thirteen year old allowed to do this. How does he just take all of this as truth and be totally okay with it. I question all of this, but I can still enjoy what I'm reading.
So does this have flaws? Yeah, sure. But so did Percy Jackson. And I still enjoyed the shit out of that series. I hope to enjoy this series in the same way.
Don't you hate it when you write a great review and then your computer glitches out and you lose everything? 8D
So short version: Percy Jackson meets Indiana Jones. Plus dragons. Lots of fun, but had a few flaws. Why did Logan's mother just let him run off to do Dragonlord things with a person she doesn't trust? And said person she doesn't trust
I think this was a book of many twists. Let's count them, shall we?
As pointless as the trials seemed to be, I really enjoyed them. I mean it wasn't consistent at all. David goes with Logan through the first trial, but that's not allowed and supposedly only the Dragonlord is allowed to do these trials and honestly the rules were confusing because they weren't consistently followed. They were tons of fun, though. That's where the Indiana Jones comes in. Logan has to go through all these underground caverns and tunnels and jump over lava and swords and it's really great to read. Even if it makes no sense. I really don't care. Why's a thirteen year old allowed to do this. How does he just take all of this as truth and be totally okay with it. I question all of this, but I can still enjoy what I'm reading.
So does this have flaws? Yeah, sure. But so did Percy Jackson. And I still enjoyed the shit out of that series. I hope to enjoy this series in the same way.
November 3, 2016
The debut offering from author Christina Kenway was a thrilling venture into the life of a 13 year old boy tasked with saving the world from the Great Dragons. Logan Lockwood must fight his way through grueling trials that test his physical fortitude as well as his cunning. Logan ducks scimitars, hops collapsing pillars, and escapes a room full of lava, which pales in comparison to looking cool for the beautiful Emma.
The Dragonlord's Heir is a fun story that keeps you wanting more. Set in modern day America, it's a refreshing take on the classic dragon tale. Instead of a valiant knight in shining armor, the fate of the world is set in the hands of a normal 13 year old boy. Instead of racing through a fantasy realm, the story takes us through parts of the United States, bringing a feeling of familiarity not often found in a regular story involving dragons.
Kenway develops her characters well, giving each their own distinctive personality and perspective on the events taking place. She has a knack for comedic timing and well placed sarcasm throughout the story. While the jokes are well timed, the thrills of the story are nonstop! Logan is constantly faced with challenges, often testing his loyalty and morals as opposed to his strength. Logan not only has to deal with all that comes with being the Dragonlord, but he still faces the problems of a regular 13 year old boy. Growing up without his father in a single parent home, Logan meets his father for the first time, in less than standard fashion, and struggles with balancing his duties and making up time with his father. Logan also finds himself in a budding romance with the beautiful and bold Emma.
I loved book one of The Ascalon Trilogy and certainly can't wait for the next! As an adult, I was captivated throughout the entire reading, and I'm certain people of all ages will be just as enthralled. I am very impressed with what Kenway was able to produce, and I know she has a successful career of entertaining us with her stories ahead of her. I plan on purchasing multiple copies for my elementary and middle schools and I know my kids will be arguing over who gets to be Logan in their latest game of The Dragonlord's Heir on the playground. I can't express enough how much I enjoyed reading this book, and if you're looking for an exciting, quality read, you would be doing yourself a big favor by picking up Christina Kenway's The Dragonlord's Heir today!
The Dragonlord's Heir is a fun story that keeps you wanting more. Set in modern day America, it's a refreshing take on the classic dragon tale. Instead of a valiant knight in shining armor, the fate of the world is set in the hands of a normal 13 year old boy. Instead of racing through a fantasy realm, the story takes us through parts of the United States, bringing a feeling of familiarity not often found in a regular story involving dragons.
Kenway develops her characters well, giving each their own distinctive personality and perspective on the events taking place. She has a knack for comedic timing and well placed sarcasm throughout the story. While the jokes are well timed, the thrills of the story are nonstop! Logan is constantly faced with challenges, often testing his loyalty and morals as opposed to his strength. Logan not only has to deal with all that comes with being the Dragonlord, but he still faces the problems of a regular 13 year old boy. Growing up without his father in a single parent home, Logan meets his father for the first time, in less than standard fashion, and struggles with balancing his duties and making up time with his father. Logan also finds himself in a budding romance with the beautiful and bold Emma.
I loved book one of The Ascalon Trilogy and certainly can't wait for the next! As an adult, I was captivated throughout the entire reading, and I'm certain people of all ages will be just as enthralled. I am very impressed with what Kenway was able to produce, and I know she has a successful career of entertaining us with her stories ahead of her. I plan on purchasing multiple copies for my elementary and middle schools and I know my kids will be arguing over who gets to be Logan in their latest game of The Dragonlord's Heir on the playground. I can't express enough how much I enjoyed reading this book, and if you're looking for an exciting, quality read, you would be doing yourself a big favor by picking up Christina Kenway's The Dragonlord's Heir today!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 13, 2014
As far as middle grade novels go The Dragonlord’s Heir is pretty spot on, maybe even too perfect for the age group. The main character Logan is the epitome of a thirteen-year-old. He acts without thinking, but thinks he is bigger and better than he is. He over estimates himself and underestimates everyone else. He craves independence, acts independently, all the while thinking it’s the honorable way to face his problems. He is a typical teenager just about to come of age. He is cocky and dumb. His epic journey of becoming the Dragonlord progresses quite quickly. The story plunges the reader headfirst into this alternate universe and hopes that they can hang on to the treads that are dragging them. It takes off quickly and continues at a fast pace without slowing down much. The greatest insight the reader gets into the characters and their personalities is in the last chapter. Throughout the story Logan rushes along a path of self destruction and always barely escapes with his life. He has no skill and no means for which it would ever be assumed that he can win. And he doesn’t. The majority of the story is a series of events in which Logan continually looses, very easily I might add, without putting up much of a fight. He seems to just roll over and take it. But miraculously he prevails over the dragon in the end.
Throughout this book I continually found myself frustrated with the main character and his lack of fighting. He just takes every mishap that occurs and lets it happen. He doesn’t put up a fight to even try and win. He is only thirteen and perhaps this is how any normal person would react, but it was still infuriating. I struggle to get through the book because it was difficult to become engaged with such a plain character. There were also some grammar issues and inconsistencies but my biggest issue was the lack of strong character development.
As a middle grade novel it works well. My issues may be geared a little too high for the level at which the book is set. But as a reader I wanted to be more invested and engaged with the characters. As it is I didn’t really care how it came out.
Throughout this book I continually found myself frustrated with the main character and his lack of fighting. He just takes every mishap that occurs and lets it happen. He doesn’t put up a fight to even try and win. He is only thirteen and perhaps this is how any normal person would react, but it was still infuriating. I struggle to get through the book because it was difficult to become engaged with such a plain character. There were also some grammar issues and inconsistencies but my biggest issue was the lack of strong character development.
As a middle grade novel it works well. My issues may be geared a little too high for the level at which the book is set. But as a reader I wanted to be more invested and engaged with the characters. As it is I didn’t really care how it came out.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 17, 2014
Every year, Logan Lockwood wishes for the same thing on his birthday - to finally meet his father and get to know him. Well, on his 13th brithday, his wish does come true - but who would have that along with meeting said father, a whole lot of dangers and secrets would take a permanent hold of Logan's life? Now, with Saint George's day vastly approaching, and a madman trying to set the dragons free, Logan must man up and face things he never thought possible, or even real...
The first book of The Ascalon Trilogy was certainly a wonderful opening act. Kenway has a way to keep the reader turning pages and, while her timing and pace might seem weird at first, they work just fine with her storytelling voice. Her imagination was something she used to its full potential, and helped with the many surprises she kept stored for the reader.
The only problem was the narrative POV. It wasn't so much because it was in first-person. It was because the narrator was Logan himself. Logan was a 13-year-old boy, yet his thoughts - which, since he was the one telling the story, were visible to us readers - were too adult-like (with words and adjectives a normal teenager would never use or think) and too serious. At times he was naive, contradicting this inner serious nature of his, and this only added to the confusion. If the POV was in 3rd-person, this would all have been avoided, in my humble opinion...
Even so, The Dragonlord's Heir was a delightful quick read. I'm sure the teenage readers will come to enjoy it as much as I did. I can't wait to see what else this writer has in store for us!
***I was given a free copy from the writer in exchange for an honest review. The opinion stated in this review is solely mine, and no compensation was given or taken to alter it.***
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The first book of The Ascalon Trilogy was certainly a wonderful opening act. Kenway has a way to keep the reader turning pages and, while her timing and pace might seem weird at first, they work just fine with her storytelling voice. Her imagination was something she used to its full potential, and helped with the many surprises she kept stored for the reader.
The only problem was the narrative POV. It wasn't so much because it was in first-person. It was because the narrator was Logan himself. Logan was a 13-year-old boy, yet his thoughts - which, since he was the one telling the story, were visible to us readers - were too adult-like (with words and adjectives a normal teenager would never use or think) and too serious. At times he was naive, contradicting this inner serious nature of his, and this only added to the confusion. If the POV was in 3rd-person, this would all have been avoided, in my humble opinion...
Even so, The Dragonlord's Heir was a delightful quick read. I'm sure the teenage readers will come to enjoy it as much as I did. I can't wait to see what else this writer has in store for us!
***I was given a free copy from the writer in exchange for an honest review. The opinion stated in this review is solely mine, and no compensation was given or taken to alter it.***
Read this and other reviews at: http://cupcakesandpopcorn.wordpress.com/
March 4, 2014
I received this book as an ARC from the author in exchange for a review.
Let's start with Logan. He is the main character in a young adult book. Of course you expect a bit of fearlessness, sarcasm, and skepticism. That said, he almost fits the cookie-cutter teen protagonist. Though a little more accepting of this "new world" into which he's been thrust, he's still the character you see in many other novels.
The other characters work well, both alone and with one another. Cain, especially, was frightening in that Kenway made him incredibly sympathetic. He was terribly villainous, but he also wasn't. He was likeable and I felt sorry for him, and that made him my favorite character in this novel. My only wish was that we could see a little more of Emma. She seems a brave and smart girl, and we didn't see much of her in this book.
Plot-wise, it started pretty typically: a teenaged boy is chosen for a fantasy quest and is taken away in order to fulfill his task. But this quest is a little different in that his new and sudden occupation is surrounded by a spy-like organization with the mission to protect him.
The three trials to retrieve Ascalon seemed rushed, trivial, and sort of glossed-over.
Logan's suspicion over Wolf was almost too clear and his betrayal was predictable. One thing that stood out, though, was that Wolf was sympathetic to both Dragonlords. Though ultimately on Cain's side, he still had sympathy toward the boy he'd "helped."
The end also seemed a bit rushed. He defeated Bolla almost too quickly and easily and the sea serpents seemed out-of-place.
I think this series has a lot of potential, if run through a professional editor, and I'm looking forward to seeing the author improve.
Let's start with Logan. He is the main character in a young adult book. Of course you expect a bit of fearlessness, sarcasm, and skepticism. That said, he almost fits the cookie-cutter teen protagonist. Though a little more accepting of this "new world" into which he's been thrust, he's still the character you see in many other novels.
The other characters work well, both alone and with one another. Cain, especially, was frightening in that Kenway made him incredibly sympathetic. He was terribly villainous, but he also wasn't. He was likeable and I felt sorry for him, and that made him my favorite character in this novel. My only wish was that we could see a little more of Emma. She seems a brave and smart girl, and we didn't see much of her in this book.
Plot-wise, it started pretty typically: a teenaged boy is chosen for a fantasy quest and is taken away in order to fulfill his task. But this quest is a little different in that his new and sudden occupation is surrounded by a spy-like organization with the mission to protect him.
The three trials to retrieve Ascalon seemed rushed, trivial, and sort of glossed-over.
Logan's suspicion over Wolf was almost too clear and his betrayal was predictable. One thing that stood out, though, was that Wolf was sympathetic to both Dragonlords. Though ultimately on Cain's side, he still had sympathy toward the boy he'd "helped."
The end also seemed a bit rushed. He defeated Bolla almost too quickly and easily and the sea serpents seemed out-of-place.
I think this series has a lot of potential, if run through a professional editor, and I'm looking forward to seeing the author improve.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 28, 2014
Thanks to the author for a copy of the book in exchange for a truthful review.
This is a story for all the 13-year-old boys out there who love dragons and would love to fight them.
There were some great action scenes where the boy, Logan, is working to get all the pieces of the dragon spear that will help him control the evil dragon Bolla. He has to do lots of Indiana Jones-type things from water filling up the room to jumping over lava. We also has an awesome fight against a dragon. What 13-year-old wouldn't love to read about those things?
Logan is also a very typical boy of that age - so the author is spot on with the characterization - as he wants to be a grown up and have responsibilities, but he doesn't yet have the wisdom to know how to tackle them. He is a little bit of a fish out of water here too because he learns at the start of the story that he is the Dragonlord's heir (you get that from the title of the book - so that is not really a spoiler). In that way, this is a little like the Harry Potter franchise. It is also similar in that he has to go up against a "bad guy" and he must somehow come out on top. Where Harry uses his wits and friends to help him, Logan relies more on his own luck and naivete to get him through the day.
There are some problems with the book, as some other reviewers have pointed out. And I also recommend that Christina find a good editor to help her improve her writing and next book even more. She does have the beginnings of a nice story and interesting characters - especially the girl "puppy love interest".
All in all, it is a nice read and I expect the next book to be even better!
This is a story for all the 13-year-old boys out there who love dragons and would love to fight them.
There were some great action scenes where the boy, Logan, is working to get all the pieces of the dragon spear that will help him control the evil dragon Bolla. He has to do lots of Indiana Jones-type things from water filling up the room to jumping over lava. We also has an awesome fight against a dragon. What 13-year-old wouldn't love to read about those things?
Logan is also a very typical boy of that age - so the author is spot on with the characterization - as he wants to be a grown up and have responsibilities, but he doesn't yet have the wisdom to know how to tackle them. He is a little bit of a fish out of water here too because he learns at the start of the story that he is the Dragonlord's heir (you get that from the title of the book - so that is not really a spoiler). In that way, this is a little like the Harry Potter franchise. It is also similar in that he has to go up against a "bad guy" and he must somehow come out on top. Where Harry uses his wits and friends to help him, Logan relies more on his own luck and naivete to get him through the day.
There are some problems with the book, as some other reviewers have pointed out. And I also recommend that Christina find a good editor to help her improve her writing and next book even more. She does have the beginnings of a nice story and interesting characters - especially the girl "puppy love interest".
All in all, it is a nice read and I expect the next book to be even better!
February 23, 2014
This was a difficult book for me to rate. I'm thinking 3.5 stars, maybe 4.
First of all. I did enjoy it and will read the next in the series. But I found it somewhat disjointed and maybe aimed at a younger audience then I thought.
The character, Logan, while likeable forms very strong opinions very quickly. He hates Wolf, but I really see no reason for it. Yes, he ends up the bad guy, but Logan doesn't know this and it was like he already knew. The same for other characters. He never question his father, he pretty much forgives him on sight, which seems unrealistic.
The story itself is a good one. What kid doesn't find dragons exciting. I had to remember this was aimed at a much younger audience than me. I also tried not to compare it to books like the Percy Jackson series. Although I believe fans of the series would enjoy it. I just found the story wasn't fleshed out enough. Logan seemed to jump from one thing to another with no real flow. For instance, the trials. They just sort of appear. We don't hear anything of them and then that's what he's there to do. The trials themselves were very quick. Not only that but Logan spoke as if he'd done this forever, saying he was sick of things. For a start he was the one who just walked ou of his house with a stranger because the strange said to. I find that a bi weird.
Overall, I enjoyed the book though. I think with a bit more background and substance the series could be great. Looking forward to the 2nd book.
I received this book as an ARC from the author, in exchange for an honest review.
First of all. I did enjoy it and will read the next in the series. But I found it somewhat disjointed and maybe aimed at a younger audience then I thought.
The character, Logan, while likeable forms very strong opinions very quickly. He hates Wolf, but I really see no reason for it. Yes, he ends up the bad guy, but Logan doesn't know this and it was like he already knew. The same for other characters. He never question his father, he pretty much forgives him on sight, which seems unrealistic.
The story itself is a good one. What kid doesn't find dragons exciting. I had to remember this was aimed at a much younger audience than me. I also tried not to compare it to books like the Percy Jackson series. Although I believe fans of the series would enjoy it. I just found the story wasn't fleshed out enough. Logan seemed to jump from one thing to another with no real flow. For instance, the trials. They just sort of appear. We don't hear anything of them and then that's what he's there to do. The trials themselves were very quick. Not only that but Logan spoke as if he'd done this forever, saying he was sick of things. For a start he was the one who just walked ou of his house with a stranger because the strange said to. I find that a bi weird.
Overall, I enjoyed the book though. I think with a bit more background and substance the series could be great. Looking forward to the 2nd book.
I received this book as an ARC from the author, in exchange for an honest review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 27, 2014
The Dragonlord's Heir centers on Saint George, the patron saint who according to legend slayed a dragon. There is also a really cool sword named Ascalon that was split into parts and need to be reunited in order for thirteen year old Logan to kill a dragon named Bolla that Cain is trying to resurrect. In order to do this, Logan goes through various trials to attain each piece.
I really enjoyed the historical aspects of the story, even though events take place in the current time period. I can see middle graders getting wrapped up in the action and betrayals that go on in the story. I kinda felt Logan reads as a somewhat older thirteen year old at times, but then again he makes enough mistakes by being impulsive with his desire to protect the people who join him on his quest to come off as authentic. I do take some issue with the idea that Logan's mother would let Markus take him off on this adventure without either her or Logan showing more emotion over the situation. Yet, children may not have an issue with this as much as I would. Overall, I felt the plot was engaging and the action kept the pace going. There was nice teenage moments between Emma and Logan that could hopefully be expanded upon in the next book. Plus, I kinda liked how Emma saved Logan on numerous occasions rather then the other way around. A fun read for those who like stories about thirteen year old dragon slayers with lots of action. An ebook copy of The Dragonlord's Heir was provided for my review and in no way influenced my opinion.
I really enjoyed the historical aspects of the story, even though events take place in the current time period. I can see middle graders getting wrapped up in the action and betrayals that go on in the story. I kinda felt Logan reads as a somewhat older thirteen year old at times, but then again he makes enough mistakes by being impulsive with his desire to protect the people who join him on his quest to come off as authentic. I do take some issue with the idea that Logan's mother would let Markus take him off on this adventure without either her or Logan showing more emotion over the situation. Yet, children may not have an issue with this as much as I would. Overall, I felt the plot was engaging and the action kept the pace going. There was nice teenage moments between Emma and Logan that could hopefully be expanded upon in the next book. Plus, I kinda liked how Emma saved Logan on numerous occasions rather then the other way around. A fun read for those who like stories about thirteen year old dragon slayers with lots of action. An ebook copy of The Dragonlord's Heir was provided for my review and in no way influenced my opinion.
February 5, 2014
Readers of fantasy adventures will find themselves quickly drawn into The Dragonlord’s Heir, which tells the tale of a Logan, a normal, every day boy who discovers on his thirteenth birthday that he has become the Dragonlord. Moreover, he must immediately assume the responsibilities that come with this position to save his father, whom he has never met, and to prevent a legendary dragon from awakening ready to uncoil its angry and fury at the world. And that’s just the beginning….
Author Christina Kenway has masterfully crafted a fantasy tale that takes the reader on an adventure full of plot twists and turns, peril, betrayals, and danger as Logan tries to find his father and stop the wicked Cain from awakening the dragon. To do so, he must pass a series of treacherous tests with a number of strangers who may or may not be his friends.
As Logan journeys in search of his father and to find Cain before he can awaken the legendary dragon, he encounters multiple settings, from mansions to mausoleums, each well realized by Kenway’s talent for writing descriptions that are both vivid and atmospheric.
Logan narrates his adventure with wit and charm. This is a kid you want to succeed. Your pulse races when he’s in danger, you laugh out loud as he understates the perils he faces, and you hope that this brave young man will not be disappointed when at last he meets his father.
Oh – and as a bonus – Logan finds himself smitten with a mysterious girl along the way.
Author Christina Kenway has masterfully crafted a fantasy tale that takes the reader on an adventure full of plot twists and turns, peril, betrayals, and danger as Logan tries to find his father and stop the wicked Cain from awakening the dragon. To do so, he must pass a series of treacherous tests with a number of strangers who may or may not be his friends.
As Logan journeys in search of his father and to find Cain before he can awaken the legendary dragon, he encounters multiple settings, from mansions to mausoleums, each well realized by Kenway’s talent for writing descriptions that are both vivid and atmospheric.
Logan narrates his adventure with wit and charm. This is a kid you want to succeed. Your pulse races when he’s in danger, you laugh out loud as he understates the perils he faces, and you hope that this brave young man will not be disappointed when at last he meets his father.
Oh – and as a bonus – Logan finds himself smitten with a mysterious girl along the way.
August 14, 2016
Logan Lockwood is not your typical teenage boy. On the day of his 13th birthday he is thrust into a world he never knew existed as Earth's protector from dragon's.
The Dragonlord's Heir is written in first person from Logan's point of view and seems very targeted to a preteen audience. Kenway has done an excellent job of coming up with a unique and fun story, the characters and storyline are entertaining but could be more fully developed.
At times while reading this book I found myself asking questions that were never really resolved. In addition, parts of the story seemed a bit choppy, and the same words and phrases tended to be repeated often. Despite it's rough edges I did enjoy reading this book overall. Kenway has potential with her creativity and some polishing to make the next two books in the trilogy even better. I look forward to seeing what she writes in the future.
I received this book as part of a Goodread's Giveaway (Thanks Christina!) however all the views expressed in this review are 100% my own
The Dragonlord's Heir is written in first person from Logan's point of view and seems very targeted to a preteen audience. Kenway has done an excellent job of coming up with a unique and fun story, the characters and storyline are entertaining but could be more fully developed.
At times while reading this book I found myself asking questions that were never really resolved. In addition, parts of the story seemed a bit choppy, and the same words and phrases tended to be repeated often. Despite it's rough edges I did enjoy reading this book overall. Kenway has potential with her creativity and some polishing to make the next two books in the trilogy even better. I look forward to seeing what she writes in the future.
I received this book as part of a Goodread's Giveaway (Thanks Christina!) however all the views expressed in this review are 100% my own
March 19, 2014
Logan is an average 13 year old guy, or at least he thinks so. He learns with surprise that he is actually the Dragon Lord, a title and power he inherited from the Father that he never met. He is swept into an unexpected adventure to save his Father from the clutches or a madman.
This book is very fast paced. Logan is being pursued by the baddies the whole time and is almost constantly on the run. I always wanted to keep turning the pages to see what would happen next.
Being a typical teenager, Logan makes all the worst decisions in the world and has to suffer the consequences. I had a hard time with how stupid Logan was in most of his decisions, but he is a typical teenager so I got over it pretty fast. As far as teenagers go, Logan is a likable character. The other characters are well done, the baddies are creepy, the good guys have their own hidden agendas, and they all felt real.
Also, this book has a dragon in it. I hope that doesn't surprise you. I love dragons and this one didn't disappoint me. So plus 1 awesome point for having a good dragon :D
This book is very fast paced. Logan is being pursued by the baddies the whole time and is almost constantly on the run. I always wanted to keep turning the pages to see what would happen next.
Being a typical teenager, Logan makes all the worst decisions in the world and has to suffer the consequences. I had a hard time with how stupid Logan was in most of his decisions, but he is a typical teenager so I got over it pretty fast. As far as teenagers go, Logan is a likable character. The other characters are well done, the baddies are creepy, the good guys have their own hidden agendas, and they all felt real.
Also, this book has a dragon in it. I hope that doesn't surprise you. I love dragons and this one didn't disappoint me. So plus 1 awesome point for having a good dragon :D
March 21, 2014
I would like to thank the author for giving me a chance to review her book through a free Kindle ebook.
I really did enjoy this story. There are a couple of editing/flow issues, but they didn't take away from the full adventure. I would like to read the rest of the trilogy specifically if the few editing issues are acknowledged and handled. Specifically the animal that attacks the hero, Logan, is changed from one to another toward the end of chapter 7. Also, there are a couple of places where the story has repeating paragraphs.
This was a fun adventure that I really enjoyed reading. The Dragonlord was a nice twist on middle reader fantasy that is a great way to introduce new readers to this genre. The action was continual and there were some fun ideas and adventures in this story. I would read this with my kids and look forward to reading more of Logan's adventures.
I really did enjoy this story. There are a couple of editing/flow issues, but they didn't take away from the full adventure. I would like to read the rest of the trilogy specifically if the few editing issues are acknowledged and handled. Specifically the animal that attacks the hero, Logan, is changed from one to another toward the end of chapter 7. Also, there are a couple of places where the story has repeating paragraphs.
This was a fun adventure that I really enjoyed reading. The Dragonlord was a nice twist on middle reader fantasy that is a great way to introduce new readers to this genre. The action was continual and there were some fun ideas and adventures in this story. I would read this with my kids and look forward to reading more of Logan's adventures.
May 1, 2014
While I was reading this book, I went between enjoying it and not enjoying it so many times that I really don’t know what to think about this book. Some of the solutions to major problems were too easy, sometimes the writing was a little choppy, and there were several editing errors such as the inconsistency from page 107 to 109 when a coyote suddenly became a mountain lion. However, the concept behind this novel was very intriguing and it had some elements that seemed reminiscent of the Jimmy Fincher Series in a good way. Overall, I liked about as much as I didn't like, so I guess that means I am neutral towards this book.
April 29, 2014
Any book that mentions the words Dragon and Batman within the first two pages has already scored major brownie points with me. I am pleased to say that as the story continued it only got better and better. The author was able to capture each character's voice in a unique and believable way throughout the novel. No spoilers here but I also applaud the way she ended her book giving me enough to leave happy but also wondering what else she has in store for us with her next installment. Bravo Christina can't wait for book two.
May 4, 2014
This is a tale of a young boy, Logan, who finds out that dragons are real. He finds out on his birthday that he is the Dragon Lord. He also find out that his father has been kidnapped by Cain, a villain who wants to wake up the sleeping dragons. Cain also wants to use dragons to destroy the world as we know it.
Logan sets off in an adventure full of mystery, action and some pretty quick thinking. He has to try to rescue his dad, stop a dragon from rising, and figure out who he can trust.
I really recommend this book for middle grade readers- 5-8th grade.
Logan sets off in an adventure full of mystery, action and some pretty quick thinking. He has to try to rescue his dad, stop a dragon from rising, and figure out who he can trust.
I really recommend this book for middle grade readers- 5-8th grade.
May 19, 2014
Thank you Christina for allowing me to read and review this book for you.
I enjoyed this book. It was full of action from the beginning. I liked Logan's character especially that he wants to do what is right just because it is the right thing to do. It did feel that the author portrayed him as if he was older than thirteen, his maturity level seemed as if he was around 15 or 16. It was fairly well written, but could use a little polish. Overall it was an enjoyable read and I hope to read more in this series.
I enjoyed this book. It was full of action from the beginning. I liked Logan's character especially that he wants to do what is right just because it is the right thing to do. It did feel that the author portrayed him as if he was older than thirteen, his maturity level seemed as if he was around 15 or 16. It was fairly well written, but could use a little polish. Overall it was an enjoyable read and I hope to read more in this series.
April 14, 2014
Well written book about the story of a 13 year old boy who suddenly finds out he is a dragonlord. This book was a very quick read that I didn't want to put down. I would recommend this book to any teenage boy or anyone with an adventurous spirit. I can't wait to read the next book.
I would like to thank the author for a free copy of this book.
I would like to thank the author for a free copy of this book.
January 28, 2014
This book was exciting and once I started reading it I didn't want to put it down! I can't wait to read the sequel!!! If you like adventure and being able to escape into another reality then you will LOVE Miss Kenway's book! I definitely recommend it!
March 1, 2014
I really enjoyed this book. I was drawn in immediately and had a hard time putting it down. It provided a nice break in my studies. I liked the fantasy meets current day perspective. I really enjoyed the story and can't wait for book two!
I was sent an advanced copy for review.
I was sent an advanced copy for review.
February 9, 2014
Great in depth story from a new author. Well thought out characters and story line. Looking forward to the next book.
March 30, 2014
A very good book. Suspense, action, humor and thrills await. Recommend highly
May 13, 2014
Loved it!!
Once I got started it was hard to put down.
Best book i have read for some time!!
Once I got started it was hard to put down.
Best book i have read for some time!!
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