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My Vampire System #28
My Vampire System: Book 28
178 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 3, 2023
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May 15, 2025
For god sakes edit
My biggest problem other than editing is that I think this book maybe the one just before #27 and #29 should all be connected. In a single book! Perhaps it should be #28, #29, and #30! But they're cutting them down to really small books, novellets! Most of the time, it's to charge more money, and that's just chinzy. That's just disgusting! If you got them all edited right, maybe it wouldn't be such a bitch! But come on guys, cheating your customers makes me not want to read, "My Werewolf System!" I don't like being cheated...
My biggest problem other than editing is that I think this book maybe the one just before #27 and #29 should all be connected. In a single book! Perhaps it should be #28, #29, and #30! But they're cutting them down to really small books, novellets! Most of the time, it's to charge more money, and that's just chinzy. That's just disgusting! If you got them all edited right, maybe it wouldn't be such a bitch! But come on guys, cheating your customers makes me not want to read, "My Werewolf System!" I don't like being cheated...
August 17, 2025
Complete and utter stupidity
Can an author make their characters any more stupid than this one? I doubt it at this point. He has made every main character a complete moron in order to progress his story. This is like the 8th season of Game of Thrones level of stupidity!!! If I could give it zero stars, it would not be low enough. This author deserves the “Misery” level type of attention after this disaster.
Can an author make their characters any more stupid than this one? I doubt it at this point. He has made every main character a complete moron in order to progress his story. This is like the 8th season of Game of Thrones level of stupidity!!! If I could give it zero stars, it would not be low enough. This author deserves the “Misery” level type of attention after this disaster.
April 28, 2025
Non stop roller coaster
This series has so many twists and turns. You never know what comes next. Amazing detail and entertainment factor. Fights are epic as well as character development.
This series has so many twists and turns. You never know what comes next. Amazing detail and entertainment factor. Fights are epic as well as character development.
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