Cute story
Very cute story, but it moved so fast it didn’t feel authentic. From enemies to lovers to in love in a few weeks. For me, it didn’t give me enough time to go on their journey. I still have questions about Jordan’s mom. Also, Sam’s animosity didn’t just come out of no where. What’s the deal with that? Overall, the plot was cute, but I think the storyline and details needed some more umph.
And, just a note, you can’t test positive for pregnancy until 4 weeks and a heartbeat doesn’t form until somewhere between 6-7 weeks pregnant. Ultrasounds early in pregnancy are done internally.