✨DNF at 25%✨
I got this as a physical ARC from Berkley and I was so excited because the story seemed right up my alley. Unfortunately, I had to stop after 100 pages. Sadly it wasn't for me.
What I liked:
The premise of two book lovers falling in love. I mean, who doesn't want to read about a shy girl who falls for her hot neighbor who also happens to be the author of her favorite fantasy novel???
The emails. It's a cute idea to introduce the characters and develop their relationship. However, I wish they were woven into the story instead of given to us all at the same time.
What I didn’t like:
To my point above, that the emails were not woven throughout the story. It didn’t really allow the reader time to connect with Lily and Nick’s relationship and their growing feelings. So when it comes to an end, I just didn’t really care.
I didn’t connect with Lily at all. She’s an introvert who loves books so you’d think I would. But she’s such a pushover with her family that I couldn’t respect her or relate to her. (Continue to my next point).
I absolutely hated Lily’s dynamic with her family. They are just straight up jerks. Lily is a 26 year old who’s trying to break into publishing (which is difficult). Give the girl a freaking break! She doesn’t need to have the perfect career yet or to be in a serious relationship. Her family relentlessly pushes these topics, but it’s like they don’t even know Lily at all. And her sister, Violet, keeps setting her up with guys she so obviously wouldn’t ever be interested in. So I guess keeping all this in mind, I’m wondering, why she is close to them in the first place if they truly don’t know her or her heart's desires? I get this was done to create drama but the way it was done didn’t really do anything but make me feel angry with Lily and her family. Angry at Lily for not putting up boundaries, and angry at her family for thinking they have the right to guilt trip and 'guide' Lily.
It annoyed me that Lily’s dating life was the main point of conflict in this story. At least it was for the first 25% of the story and seemed like that was the direction it was going since she needs to find a date to her sister's wedding. Lily is constantly degrading herself internally whenever she meets a new guy. She says, “ he probably won’t like me” or “I’m not his type” or “he’s probably in love with Violet” (her sister). These types of thoughts are repeatedly mentioned during her inner dialogue and I just couldn’t handle it.
When Nick tells Lily in one of the emails the name of the column he writes, I thought, “she’s probably going to go and google that immediately.” But she didn’t!!! I guess if she did the story would have ended a lot sooner. But it was a huge plot hole.
I don’t know what it is about the prose, but I just didn’t click with it. I was also very aware this was written in the third person, which has never bothered me, but it did here.
Overall, The Neighbor Favor wasn't really for me, but it comes down to my dislike of Lily and her family, and my inability to connect with either Lily or Nick. I couldn't root for anyone and I didn't really want to. However, the things I had an issue with might not bother you, so maybe give this book a chance if it sounds interesting to you!
Thank you, Berkley, for providing a physical ARC in exchange for an honest review! As always, all opinions are my own.