I started out liking the premise of the book. We get to know the couple in question on their last day together, before an attack on the library they are protecting takes a turn for the worse. Arthit dies protecting the library, while Kittichat barely escapes that fate by being turned into a vampire.
Kit is distraught when learning that his husband has died, but he is promised that Arthit will be reincarnated at some point.
160 years later, Kit finally makes contact with 20-year old Gunnar, who is his husbands reincarnation. Only recently aware that his husband has reincarnated, Kit joins Guns classes at college, and when Gun feels an instant connection to Kit, in part because he has had dreams of his past life since childhood, and they get to know each other all over again.
I kind of liked this approach to the age gap problem that is most often a thing with vampire romances. While the age gap still exists, Gun gradually remembers at least some of his past life, and I can kind of believe the soulmate aspect of them loving each other in any iteration. Good thing Gun has his dreams though, since it does alleviate Kit creeping on a barely adult college kid.
I also liked Guns family being so unapologetically supportive of him and each other.
And that... was all I really did like. The story from there on gets riddled with a lot of plotholes, editing errors, doubled plot points, inconsistencies...
For one, nothing is ever truly explained. Only Guns relationships to his family and Kit are ever explored deeply. Any lore on the magic system, vampirism, the different factions, any character apart from Kit and Gun, are barely glanced at. I had trouble differentiating the members of Kits found family, as some of them are barely ever mentioned (where did Roman come from?). The magic system for technomages is explained as sigils similar to computer circuits (an epiphany Gun had twice for some reason), and whatever you have in your personal grimoire can be cast by thinking of the page number of the specific spell. That is fine for most of the book, but it does take you out when Gun is creating new sigils, saying things like "oh, only a loop less here and curving it a bit here". Especially since he is praised afterwards on how good his new spells are - it doesn't seem like a big accomplishment when you can't imagine what he's writing.
Another thing that irked me was the PDA. They were literally sitting on top of each other, making out, nibbling on their ear lobes, in front of the entire crew, mid conversation. I wouldn't mind a kiss, hand holding, a whisper... But basically making out in front of your family?
And then, the plotholes...
I had to reread passages so often because I was sure I must have misunderstood the first time, but no. The editing in this book is truly just bad. It seems like the authors either worked independently from each other, only reading the cliff notes on what the other wrote, or they left in several different drafts of the same scene/plot point and just didn't bother editing either one out at the end. Maybe it's both. I was irked enough that I started keeping tabs.
This is the truly spoilery section.
- The library clan and who died
At the first battle back in 1860, there were a lot more people defending the library than just Declan, Arthit, Kit, Ezra, Roman and Ivy. For one, instead of Ivy, there is someone called "Divya" mentioned by name when they first gather after the alarms. They're probably the same person, but why call her Divya for one chapter and then switch to Ivy for the rest of the books?
Apart from that, they are part of an entire clan that is defending the library. Arthit calls them "our clan", he's casting a lot of shields defending said people, and Somchai, his closest friend, is killed in front of him.
All this wouldn't be a plothole, except that Kit tells Gun that he saved the library and he was the only casualty. Huh?? Lots of people died, Arthits best friends died, their entire clan seems to have died, but they are never mentioned again, and there were no casualties. Right.
- Telling Gun about his past life
After Gun gets exposed to magic for the first time, Kit tells him that he is a reincarnation, and that his dreams are actually memories. Gun then talks about his dreams and it is confirmed that they were "close" before, that there was an attack, that Kit didn't die as he seems to in the dreams, and that Gun saved the library as the only (lol) casualty. He also tells him that he was waiting for him and enrolled in his college to get to know him.
Like four chapters later, Gun cannot sleep because of his nightmare memories, drives to the library and... asks them to tell him the truth about his weird dreams? He is suddenly incredibly surprised about his reincarnation, his dreams, that he knows the library, that he died, that he was married to Kit... Every single thing that was already explained to him in a completely different setting a short time before. It truly read like there were two drafts about Gun finding out about his reincarnation, and they just left both of them in. I cannot fathom how such an oversight would happen if even one person would have proofread the books. I don't think the authors even did.
- The boyfriend thing
When Kit meets Guns parents, Gun introduces him as his boyfriend. This was not a slip up, he called him that deliberately. A few chapters later, he is suddenly unsure if they're boyfriends, and asks Kit how or if they should label themselves.
- The vampire transformation timing
Gun thought about becoming a vampire early on, and at some point, he uses the library to research transformations. He acknowledges that some preparation would be appropriate, and says to himself that he can wait for a day to get his iron up. Immediately after he searches for Kit and confronts him about being turned, stating that Thursday would be a good date (we don't know the weekday, but it's fair to say that he doesn't mean the same day). Kit stops arguing after about a second, takes Gun up to his bedroom and immediately turns him. Turning takes anywhere from 4-44 hours ("Twenty-four hours, give or take an hour or twenty") and after an unspecified time, Gun is a vampire, doing strength training, since new vampires apparently destroy anything they touch until they get used to their new body.
Kit says that "When Gun insisted on being turned, I'd bought a few things in preparation for this moment"... But there wasn't any time between those events? Sure, he could have gone after turning Gun, but leaving him alone at that time seems out of character, and it would still have to be worded differently.
After training, they get back to the group... and they are mortified that Gun is now a vampire. They are all in the same room, all still there. So either they all live there now, including Guns siblings, and they didn't care about Gun disappearing for probably around 24 hours, or the transformation took place in like, an hours or two?
Also, not a plothole, but Gun and Kit make a lot less ado about the transformation than the marriage proposal that follows. They are in agreement in seconds about Gun transforming into a vampire, but when Kit says he wants to marry him, he thinks immediately that he might have gone too far too soon.......... You already turned him into a vampire, how is marriage a bigger commitment than that?
Also also, in the end, Gun being a vampire doesn't come into play even once. Not that it necessarily has to, but apart from him running a bit faster one time, the whole thing doesn't seem to have had an influence at all.
- vampire strength
Immediately after a training session where Gun destroyed 36 tennis balls just by touching them, he is able to walk around and hug his sister. A short time later, he never has any issues with his strength again, not even when writing with a pen that would surely be a pain to handle if a tennis ball was disintegrated by a light touch not too long ago...
- top, bot, vers
At some point later in the book, Gun asks Kit whether he was a bottom or a top, or versatile in his past life. Kit answers that they were both vers, and Gun agrees, since that's what he saw in his dreams... but at least when he dreamed of their wedding night, Arthit states explicitely that he has always been a bot ("I never used it [wink wink] on him"). I might have missed a dream, and of course people can change their preferences in twelve years, but why mention that piece of information at all then?
Also, not a plothole, but Gun being immediately a great lover at his first time, and neither of them acknowledging that Gun was a virgin before is really weird.
- concussion percussion
Gun creates a new "percussion shield spell". Later, he calls it a "concussion spell".
And generally a few editing faux pas, like the exact same expression in the same paragraph.