Never thought I'd ever be worried for a fairy to drown in cum but here I am.
The positives:
• my favorite characters were Charlotte (the baddie), Harriett (the sweetie) and Silas (the gentleman)
• the relationships' dynamics:
Jamie x Vance was really cute to see them both trying to act cool even though they were both secretly nervous.
Charlotte x Jackson a bit biased cuz im crushing on Charlotte, however Jackson feels a tad bit like an NPC (underdeveloped).
Harriett x Sophie x Liam was pretty cool, personally, im a big fan of poly relationships/threesomes which are not centered around the one man, so that was refreshing, seeing Sophie take the lead.
River x Silas was hilarious to me, that's all
The neutral:
• the species:
I felt like Charlotte (the vampire) wasnt portrayed as one? Compared to the other species who had better descriptions, there was only one comment about not being allowed to suck blood and that's it
The bad:
• my brain cant get over the asymmetrical chapters, Jamie x Vance got 2 and everyone else got only 1
• the ending was very abrupt, and not satisfying, I really wanted more from River x Silas, and a different ending
• the overall vibe was a bit too awkward, nothing wrong with a bit of awkwardness and nervousness but i think it was too much
The personal:
I need a good balance between character development-plot-sex scenes in order to fully enjoy eroticas/smut and the scale is heavy on the sex scenes side, so there were times when i felt a bit uncomfortable due to that.
TLDR: there were enjoyable parts, fun parts, a bit disappointing parts, and frustrating parts