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Torsere #1
Capture
Book One Over two hundred years ago, when dragons were hunted for their blood, the King of Torsere offered them sanctuary. In return, the dragons bestowed a magical gift on the King’s people, allowing those born with the mark to become dragon riders and forge a mental connection between dragon and rider. King Ryneq of Torsere is undeniably attracted to Nykin, a young dragon rider. Ryneq’s sister, Cerylea, encourages him to pursue the relationship. But with the stresses of ruling Torsere, a romantic attachment is low on Ryneq’s list of priorities. Nykin admires the king from afar, but wants more than to warm his bed for a night or two. Torsere remains under threat from the lowland armies of Rodeth and Athisi. To protect their kingdom, Ryneq and Cerylea intend to form an alliance with the elves through Cerylea’s marriage to elf prince Morkryn. On the road to the wedding, the lowland army attacks the party. Cerylea escapes, but Ryneq is captured and taken to the impenetrable Risvery Castle. In the aftermath, Nykin volunteers for a perilous mission, endangering the lives of him and his dragon. The odds are against him, but Nykin will risk everything for his duty and his king.
200 pages, Paperback
First published January 23, 2014
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Annabelle Jacobs
52 books402 followersAnnabelle Jacobs lives in the South West of England with her three rowdy children, and two cats.
An avid reader of fantasy herself for many years, Annabelle now spends her days writing her own stories. They're usually either fantasy or paranormal fiction, because she loves building worlds filled with magical creatures, and creating stories full of action and adventure. Her characters may have a tough time of it—fighting enemies and adversity—but they always find love in the end.
An avid reader of fantasy herself for many years, Annabelle now spends her days writing her own stories. They're usually either fantasy or paranormal fiction, because she loves building worlds filled with magical creatures, and creating stories full of action and adventure. Her characters may have a tough time of it—fighting enemies and adversity—but they always find love in the end.
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July 24, 2020
The first book of a fantasy series always takes a bit of bedding in as world building sits alongside the main plot lines.
However, for most of this opener in Annabelle's high fantasy, the two intermingled quite nicely together without needing a lot of exposition.
I loved the dragons in this, the idea of bonded riders isn't new but the restriction on time served together was a cool twist to the trope.
Both main characters had interesting personalities, I also loved the Princess and the brief glimpses of the elves.
There's clearly a series long story arc going to run through all three books but this particular plotline wrapped up suitably for me.
There's a sort of cliff hanger for the overall story but I'd expected that and it didn't feel like things were being pushed over to drag it out.
However, for most of this opener in Annabelle's high fantasy, the two intermingled quite nicely together without needing a lot of exposition.
I loved the dragons in this, the idea of bonded riders isn't new but the restriction on time served together was a cool twist to the trope.
Both main characters had interesting personalities, I also loved the Princess and the brief glimpses of the elves.
There's clearly a series long story arc going to run through all three books but this particular plotline wrapped up suitably for me.
There's a sort of cliff hanger for the overall story but I'd expected that and it didn't feel like things were being pushed over to drag it out.
November 7, 2020
There's no question Jacobs delivers clever and captivating fantasy stories. I believe she's a wolf wizard and was looking forward to diving into her world of dragons. I don't know about you, but right about now any sort of magic calls me to...kindle, take me away! This is the first of her 'Torsere' trilogy and it's clearly setting the stage while simultaneously sparking a fire between King Ryneq and his dragon rider, Nykin. I was easily caught and knew from experience the hooks would only dig deeper as the series continues. Add in a fake relationship and my mouth was watering. And just as expected, as soon as I finished the final page I was queuing up the second story. But before I get ahead of myself, let's start at the beginning...
What's to like: This unique world has magical elements but it's not strictly supernatural. Torsere is a place full of humans, both royal and common. A limited number are born enchanted with the ability to bond with dragons. Sounds cool, right? Many moons ago the dragons took refuge in the kingdom negotiating a deal to benefit both the people and the dragons. Nykin was blessed with the ability and only recently bonded with his dragon, Fimor. Nykin is young, brave, and eager to prove his loyalty. As the story unfolds we are introduced to more mystical creatures, such as elves and witches. Of course, there are good and bad. A fragile peace has kept things quiet but when Ryneq is kidnapped a burst of turbulence takes everyone under. War ignites and an action-packed rescue mission kept me on the edge of my seat. Good stuff my friends!
What's to love: Even with a hefty plot, the guys soar to the top. I fell victim to the king's charm and was rooting for our dragon rider from the first moment of his mission. Save a life and steal a heart...what more can you ask for? Well, how about faithful friends, a delightful sibling, and sharp-witted dragons...oh, and I can't forget steamy sexual tension and daring battles! I enjoyed the unexpected moments as much as the anticipated ones. I loved the banter and the danger. I loved the passion and the excitement. Romance wasn't the heartbeat of this tale but it was a steady pulse. I have no doubt it's only going to get hotter and grip even tighter with the next book. Can't wait to find out!
Beware of: This introduction is an entertaining keystone...sure to whet your appetite. Dragon bonds are intimate...yet limited. And the king may be captured...but so is his heart.
This book is for: If you need an escape this magical ride is guaranteed to take you away!
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What's to like: This unique world has magical elements but it's not strictly supernatural. Torsere is a place full of humans, both royal and common. A limited number are born enchanted with the ability to bond with dragons. Sounds cool, right? Many moons ago the dragons took refuge in the kingdom negotiating a deal to benefit both the people and the dragons. Nykin was blessed with the ability and only recently bonded with his dragon, Fimor. Nykin is young, brave, and eager to prove his loyalty. As the story unfolds we are introduced to more mystical creatures, such as elves and witches. Of course, there are good and bad. A fragile peace has kept things quiet but when Ryneq is kidnapped a burst of turbulence takes everyone under. War ignites and an action-packed rescue mission kept me on the edge of my seat. Good stuff my friends!
What's to love: Even with a hefty plot, the guys soar to the top. I fell victim to the king's charm and was rooting for our dragon rider from the first moment of his mission. Save a life and steal a heart...what more can you ask for? Well, how about faithful friends, a delightful sibling, and sharp-witted dragons...oh, and I can't forget steamy sexual tension and daring battles! I enjoyed the unexpected moments as much as the anticipated ones. I loved the banter and the danger. I loved the passion and the excitement. Romance wasn't the heartbeat of this tale but it was a steady pulse. I have no doubt it's only going to get hotter and grip even tighter with the next book. Can't wait to find out!
Beware of: This introduction is an entertaining keystone...sure to whet your appetite. Dragon bonds are intimate...yet limited. And the king may be captured...but so is his heart.
This book is for: If you need an escape this magical ride is guaranteed to take you away!
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August 31, 2016DNF at 33%
This is where my commitment to review everything (except big trad sellers with 4 gazillion reviews) is really hard. I always feel so darned mean. But I couldn't take anymore of Capture. In order to explain why I chose to give up on it, I'm going to cut & paste my somewhat free-flowing, grammatically questionable, definitely not pristine notes below. (At least I tend to write my notes in complete thoughts.)
Writing really stiff. It uses names and pronouns constantly. There were whole lengthy passages in which almost every sentence either started with a name or 'he.' And that doesn't even account for the use of 'he' within the sentence itself. It made for very staccato reading. It got to the point that I was literally nodding my head as if jostled everytime I had to read the word 'he.' You know, like, there's one, there's another, and another and another and another. Even if I'm not doing it on purpose, if I'm that distracted by the repetition of a word you can guarantee I'm not sunk into the story at all.
I also have to use my least favorite literary critiscim here. I hate it because it's so common that it's almost become would-be reviewers' automatic critique phrase, but here it's use is also appropriate. There is a lot of telling in this story. Had the story used more show then it wouldn't have allowed for all of the HEs in the first place. I hate to say it felt amateurish, but it kind of did.
OMG, the names! For one, there are far, far too many named characters. Many seem to play no significant role in the story so the flood of names was merely a distraction. Plus, all the names were the crazy fantasy type names that are all but unpronounceable in real life. They may look good on paper, with all the Ys and Rs but are still ridiculous.
instant and unexplained lust for one another on meeting. Nykin is at least supposed to have had a crush on the king from afar, so I understand him. But Ryneq lays eyes on Nykin, doesn't even know him and instantly starts getting proprietary and jealous of any man coming near Nykin. He's instantly smitten, thinking of Nykin, etc. There was no build up, no getting to know eachother, no anything really.
The cursing seemed out of place. I generally have no problem with characters cussing up a storm. But here 'fuck' was just randomly thrown in on occasion. It didn't fit the tone of the book at all. Thus, it felt out of place each and every time it was used.
OK, so there it is. I'm cringing for my own honesty, but I didn't see a lot of likelihood that this book would improve for me. So, I'm letting it go. Such a shame too, I LOVE dragons and hot dragon riders and sexually open kings (Plus, it wasn't even a freebie. I paid for it.), but this was not going to be a winner for me. I'm sure others might love it. I encourage you to give it a go and see what you think.
This is where my commitment to review everything (except big trad sellers with 4 gazillion reviews) is really hard. I always feel so darned mean. But I couldn't take anymore of Capture. In order to explain why I chose to give up on it, I'm going to cut & paste my somewhat free-flowing, grammatically questionable, definitely not pristine notes below. (At least I tend to write my notes in complete thoughts.)
Writing really stiff. It uses names and pronouns constantly. There were whole lengthy passages in which almost every sentence either started with a name or 'he.' And that doesn't even account for the use of 'he' within the sentence itself. It made for very staccato reading. It got to the point that I was literally nodding my head as if jostled everytime I had to read the word 'he.' You know, like, there's one, there's another, and another and another and another. Even if I'm not doing it on purpose, if I'm that distracted by the repetition of a word you can guarantee I'm not sunk into the story at all.
I also have to use my least favorite literary critiscim here. I hate it because it's so common that it's almost become would-be reviewers' automatic critique phrase, but here it's use is also appropriate. There is a lot of telling in this story. Had the story used more show then it wouldn't have allowed for all of the HEs in the first place. I hate to say it felt amateurish, but it kind of did.
OMG, the names! For one, there are far, far too many named characters. Many seem to play no significant role in the story so the flood of names was merely a distraction. Plus, all the names were the crazy fantasy type names that are all but unpronounceable in real life. They may look good on paper, with all the Ys and Rs but are still ridiculous.
instant and unexplained lust for one another on meeting. Nykin is at least supposed to have had a crush on the king from afar, so I understand him. But Ryneq lays eyes on Nykin, doesn't even know him and instantly starts getting proprietary and jealous of any man coming near Nykin. He's instantly smitten, thinking of Nykin, etc. There was no build up, no getting to know eachother, no anything really.
The cursing seemed out of place. I generally have no problem with characters cussing up a storm. But here 'fuck' was just randomly thrown in on occasion. It didn't fit the tone of the book at all. Thus, it felt out of place each and every time it was used.
OK, so there it is. I'm cringing for my own honesty, but I didn't see a lot of likelihood that this book would improve for me. So, I'm letting it go. Such a shame too, I LOVE dragons and hot dragon riders and sexually open kings (Plus, it wasn't even a freebie. I paid for it.), but this was not going to be a winner for me. I'm sure others might love it. I encourage you to give it a go and see what you think.
March 8, 2018
Although I am always pleased when an author tackles the fantasy genre, this one didn't work for me. I felt like the characters were very flat.
September 18, 2014
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4.5 stars
As the King of Torsere, Ryneq can have anyone he wanted but not for more than a night or two. He has responsibilities towards his people and no where in that includes having a lover, even if he does harbor some intense feelings for a certain dragon rider because nothing could ever come of it. Nykin is one of the King’s elite dragon riders that has a special bond with the dragon, Fimor, but his desire to have Ryneq is almost as strong. When the time comes for Ryneq to escort his sister safely to the city of Alel, he’s expecting an ambush but with his dragons, he hopes he can still get his sister to her betrothed. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned when his enemies end up injuring and kidnapping Ryneq during the ambush. Desperate to rescue his King, Nykin volunteers to breach the fortress Ryneq’s being held at even if it means sacrifice himself to save the man he’s starting to love.
I LOVED this book. It hit more than just a few of my buttons. It’s a fantasy, there’s dragons, there’s royalty, there’s kidnapping, there’s not a lot of sex (sorry, guys!) and most of all, there’s sexual tension (enough for me at least :P). The world pulled me in from the beginning and I loved being able to explore the dragons and their bonds with their riders. I also loved that the world had human enemies and elven allies because it made for some interesting discoveries all around.
The characters are a real treat, though. Nykin is the young brash dragon rider, who’s quick to offer his help without really thinking about how it’ll affect others (like his dragon). Ryneq is calmer, more serious but he’s drawn to Nykin and his constant blushing. It’s adorable, to be honest. One thing that I loved was Ryneq’s jealousy when a few elves were flirting with Nykin. While Nykin and Ryneq weren’t lovers, the attraction between them is obvious to everyone (except each other) so Ryneq’s reactions to others’ attentions on Nykin were amusing to say the least. When they finally get together, it was worth the wait. I just wished we were able to see more of them getting to know each other passed what was on the surface, so to speak.
While I loved this story, I did feel like at the end, we missed out on a few more scenes and instead were just told about them. For example, when Nykin woke up and Ryneq tells him how much he’s had to do at the castle, the discussion about appointing Nykin King’s Consort, etc. I would have liked to see some of that happening.
In the end, I really enjoyed this story. It’s intense at times and has some good tension between Nykin and Ryneq, especially with Ryneq’s jealousy. I also loved that it had some good suspense and action not to mention the world was very intriguing. I can’t wait to read the sequel, Union, because I’m really looking forward to exploring more of the bond between Ryneq and Nykin.
4.5 stars
As the King of Torsere, Ryneq can have anyone he wanted but not for more than a night or two. He has responsibilities towards his people and no where in that includes having a lover, even if he does harbor some intense feelings for a certain dragon rider because nothing could ever come of it. Nykin is one of the King’s elite dragon riders that has a special bond with the dragon, Fimor, but his desire to have Ryneq is almost as strong. When the time comes for Ryneq to escort his sister safely to the city of Alel, he’s expecting an ambush but with his dragons, he hopes he can still get his sister to her betrothed. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned when his enemies end up injuring and kidnapping Ryneq during the ambush. Desperate to rescue his King, Nykin volunteers to breach the fortress Ryneq’s being held at even if it means sacrifice himself to save the man he’s starting to love.
I LOVED this book. It hit more than just a few of my buttons. It’s a fantasy, there’s dragons, there’s royalty, there’s kidnapping, there’s not a lot of sex (sorry, guys!) and most of all, there’s sexual tension (enough for me at least :P). The world pulled me in from the beginning and I loved being able to explore the dragons and their bonds with their riders. I also loved that the world had human enemies and elven allies because it made for some interesting discoveries all around.
The characters are a real treat, though. Nykin is the young brash dragon rider, who’s quick to offer his help without really thinking about how it’ll affect others (like his dragon). Ryneq is calmer, more serious but he’s drawn to Nykin and his constant blushing. It’s adorable, to be honest. One thing that I loved was Ryneq’s jealousy when a few elves were flirting with Nykin. While Nykin and Ryneq weren’t lovers, the attraction between them is obvious to everyone (except each other) so Ryneq’s reactions to others’ attentions on Nykin were amusing to say the least. When they finally get together, it was worth the wait. I just wished we were able to see more of them getting to know each other passed what was on the surface, so to speak.
While I loved this story, I did feel like at the end, we missed out on a few more scenes and instead were just told about them. For example, when Nykin woke up and Ryneq tells him how much he’s had to do at the castle, the discussion about appointing Nykin King’s Consort, etc. I would have liked to see some of that happening.
In the end, I really enjoyed this story. It’s intense at times and has some good tension between Nykin and Ryneq, especially with Ryneq’s jealousy. I also loved that it had some good suspense and action not to mention the world was very intriguing. I can’t wait to read the sequel, Union, because I’m really looking forward to exploring more of the bond between Ryneq and Nykin.
October 13, 2014
Dragons! Do you really need more than that to want to read this book? Okay, fine, for those who do here you go.
This a great start to a new series. There are dragons and their riders who are bonded to them. There are some elves, all magical and sexy. Sword fights and some archery action.
Nykin is so young, sweet and very brave. He's got a huge heart that seems to be set on King Ryneq, a man way beyond his reach. When Ryneq is taken captive by their enemies he has to try to save him, no matter the risk to himself. He goes in knowing that their rescue plan hinges on him being tortured and that he will most likely be killed. But this is his King and his dream man, and well, he's young, sweet and brave.
Ryneq came to be king at a young age through the tragic loss of his parents. He rose to the occasion and with the help of his sister, Cerylea, he has led his people bravely and wisely. He knows that they need the alliance with the elves if they are to survive. He knows that makes Cerylea's life precious. He knows that when he is captured he will be tortured and killed. The only thing he hopes for is to keep the secrets of his people safe from their enemies.
Fimor is Nykin's dragon and he is awesome. He is definitely a huge part of this story. He and Nykin's can mind speak and they do so throughout the book. In many ways he is the one in charge in their relationship as he is much older and wiser than Nykin. He's very patient with his young human. The love they have for each other is touching and wonderful.
I enjoyed Annabelle Jacob's other novel The Choosing and I could see the same sense of adventure and brave, young innocence in this story as well. A lot of responsibility has been thrust upon these young men and they rise beautifully to the occasion.
I really enjoyed my time spent in this world and look forward to my next journey into Torsere and the elven city of Alel to attend Cerylea's wedding in the next book.
Recommended for those who enjoy fantasy, romance, adventure and have the good taste to love dragons.
Reviewed by Nina
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This a great start to a new series. There are dragons and their riders who are bonded to them. There are some elves, all magical and sexy. Sword fights and some archery action.
Nykin is so young, sweet and very brave. He's got a huge heart that seems to be set on King Ryneq, a man way beyond his reach. When Ryneq is taken captive by their enemies he has to try to save him, no matter the risk to himself. He goes in knowing that their rescue plan hinges on him being tortured and that he will most likely be killed. But this is his King and his dream man, and well, he's young, sweet and brave.
Ryneq came to be king at a young age through the tragic loss of his parents. He rose to the occasion and with the help of his sister, Cerylea, he has led his people bravely and wisely. He knows that they need the alliance with the elves if they are to survive. He knows that makes Cerylea's life precious. He knows that when he is captured he will be tortured and killed. The only thing he hopes for is to keep the secrets of his people safe from their enemies.
Fimor is Nykin's dragon and he is awesome. He is definitely a huge part of this story. He and Nykin's can mind speak and they do so throughout the book. In many ways he is the one in charge in their relationship as he is much older and wiser than Nykin. He's very patient with his young human. The love they have for each other is touching and wonderful.
I enjoyed Annabelle Jacob's other novel The Choosing and I could see the same sense of adventure and brave, young innocence in this story as well. A lot of responsibility has been thrust upon these young men and they rise beautifully to the occasion.
I really enjoyed my time spent in this world and look forward to my next journey into Torsere and the elven city of Alel to attend Cerylea's wedding in the next book.
Recommended for those who enjoy fantasy, romance, adventure and have the good taste to love dragons.
Reviewed by Nina
To see more of this review and others like it please visit us at Gay List Book Reviews at www.gaylistbookreviews.wordpress.com
August 31, 2014
I really like fantasy and the world building in this story is very good. I don’t like to repeat the synopsis in my reviews but the blurb from the publisher misses out one of my favourite characters in Capture, the Dragon, ‘Fimor’. He was very noble and had a dry humour that really endeared him to me, and I loved his relationship with his rider ‘Nykin’. There is a very good story here but Capture really feels like the first of a series, and the sequel is on its way. There is a lot of information about this world, the inhabitants, their history and battles to impart. Additionally, the introduction of the many characters in this story has to be made. Capture is information heavy, and whilst the story still caught my interest and has me wanting to read the sequel, I felt the central relationship, between The Prince, ‘Ryneq’ and Nykin suffered.
As I mentioned previously, the building of the relationship between Nykin and his dragon is wonderful, and I really felt the worry and bond they have for each other. However, I wish the same could be said for the human bonds. This is the development stage of the MC’s relationship and should be the most intense part where they fall in love, but I was not convinced. Apart from a little hidden underwater ‘frottage’ and a ‘maybe blow job’ there is no real sexual or, more importantly emotional, intimacy. High Fantasy does not usually include a lot of sex, but to make the relationship between a high born Prince and a lower born Rider seem believable that relationship would still need to be very intense and passionate. I felt fondness and caring where I wanted to feel passion, sexual tension and emotional need.
I will definitely read the next novel, and maybe that is where I shall find this missing element. The story itself has all the other elements required for a really good series in an interesting fantasy world. I liked that Annabelle Jacobs included a map of this world near the beginning of the book. However, her descriptive writing was so clear that I really didn’t require a visual aid, but it made me smile as it seemed like a nod to Tolkien whose magnum opus definitely did require a map.
Add in a gorgeous cover and all in all I would recommend this first book in the ‘Torsere’ series to those who like fantasy, sword fighting, evil kings and intellectual dragons.
As I mentioned previously, the building of the relationship between Nykin and his dragon is wonderful, and I really felt the worry and bond they have for each other. However, I wish the same could be said for the human bonds. This is the development stage of the MC’s relationship and should be the most intense part where they fall in love, but I was not convinced. Apart from a little hidden underwater ‘frottage’ and a ‘maybe blow job’ there is no real sexual or, more importantly emotional, intimacy. High Fantasy does not usually include a lot of sex, but to make the relationship between a high born Prince and a lower born Rider seem believable that relationship would still need to be very intense and passionate. I felt fondness and caring where I wanted to feel passion, sexual tension and emotional need.
I will definitely read the next novel, and maybe that is where I shall find this missing element. The story itself has all the other elements required for a really good series in an interesting fantasy world. I liked that Annabelle Jacobs included a map of this world near the beginning of the book. However, her descriptive writing was so clear that I really didn’t require a visual aid, but it made me smile as it seemed like a nod to Tolkien whose magnum opus definitely did require a map.
Add in a gorgeous cover and all in all I would recommend this first book in the ‘Torsere’ series to those who like fantasy, sword fighting, evil kings and intellectual dragons.
February 2, 2014
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Here we have a kingdom under threat. A king and his sister in dire need of assistance and protection from the most unlikely of allies, the elves. The only way to gain this protection is to marry the Princess Cerylea to the elven prince Morkryn. King Ryneq is hesitant for along with the deal comes questions which answers he is unwilling to reveal: of dragons, their riders and their magical bond.
Faced with no choice but to answer the questions, young dragon rider Nykin and his dragon Fimor are tasked by the king to provide the show and tell. Nykin is young and handsome and Ryneq is caught between his growing attraction and his duties as king. With his head firmly set of the politics of the marriage and the threat of war, he sets aside his personal feelings. On their way to the wedding, their party is ambushed and despite dragon protection, he is captured.
Nykin's need to protect his king overrides his own attraction to the man. Knowing he may just be the only one to pull it off, he volunteers to go into enemy territory and attempt to rescue the king. This is when the turn of events turn from a simple story into a gruesome tale of torture, Nykin's selflessness, and his ultimate sacrifice.
Capture may not be high fantasy but it may just likely turn to one should the turn of events in the succeeding books reveal what may have been left out in this first book. It is the first of the Torsere Series.
A fantasy world of elves, dragons, dragon riders, kings and princesses as well as villains and psychotic sadists, it was a fascinating read, quite hard to put down and visually graphic in many of the scenes that set my teeth to grind, my heart to pump and to cringe in horror.
Here we have a kingdom under threat. A king and his sister in dire need of assistance and protection from the most unlikely of allies, the elves. The only way to gain this protection is to marry the Princess Cerylea to the elven prince Morkryn. King Ryneq is hesitant for along with the deal comes questions which answers he is unwilling to reveal: of dragons, their riders and their magical bond.
Faced with no choice but to answer the questions, young dragon rider Nykin and his dragon Fimor are tasked by the king to provide the show and tell. Nykin is young and handsome and Ryneq is caught between his growing attraction and his duties as king. With his head firmly set of the politics of the marriage and the threat of war, he sets aside his personal feelings. On their way to the wedding, their party is ambushed and despite dragon protection, he is captured.
Nykin's need to protect his king overrides his own attraction to the man. Knowing he may just be the only one to pull it off, he volunteers to go into enemy territory and attempt to rescue the king. This is when the turn of events turn from a simple story into a gruesome tale of torture, Nykin's selflessness, and his ultimate sacrifice.
Capture may not be high fantasy but it may just likely turn to one should the turn of events in the succeeding books reveal what may have been left out in this first book. It is the first of the Torsere Series.
A fantasy world of elves, dragons, dragon riders, kings and princesses as well as villains and psychotic sadists, it was a fascinating read, quite hard to put down and visually graphic in many of the scenes that set my teeth to grind, my heart to pump and to cringe in horror.
February 19, 2014
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.75 stars
I love this book. I mean, I love it. It’s such a big story with a big world and big plot. It’s enrapturing from the beginning. I was drawn in and had a hard time finding my way out, not that I really wanted to. This epic fantasy is layered beautifully. First, the world is amazing – one easily pictured in my head with the help of the authors colorful, vivid description.
And of course dragons. I really liked this author’s take on the giant beasts. They’re magical and ferocious. They’re sentient and wise. The connection between rider and dragon is a special bond that is not that of mates, which I enjoyed, but more of a partner bond. One unable to survive fully without the other. These dragons are full dragon and beautifully scripted. They have emotion, connection, and passion. And the bond between rider and dragon is beautiful – the trust and respect that makes them stronger or weaker depending on the level.
Read Crissy's review in its entirety here.
4.75 stars
I love this book. I mean, I love it. It’s such a big story with a big world and big plot. It’s enrapturing from the beginning. I was drawn in and had a hard time finding my way out, not that I really wanted to. This epic fantasy is layered beautifully. First, the world is amazing – one easily pictured in my head with the help of the authors colorful, vivid description.
And of course dragons. I really liked this author’s take on the giant beasts. They’re magical and ferocious. They’re sentient and wise. The connection between rider and dragon is a special bond that is not that of mates, which I enjoyed, but more of a partner bond. One unable to survive fully without the other. These dragons are full dragon and beautifully scripted. They have emotion, connection, and passion. And the bond between rider and dragon is beautiful – the trust and respect that makes them stronger or weaker depending on the level.
Read Crissy's review in its entirety here.
January 30, 2014
I really wanted to get that book in my hands. BUT - When I started to read it I saw really quickly how boring that story plot was. I am really disappointed with that story plot. I was expecting something more but I guess writer Annabelle Jacobs doesn't have a lot of imagination.
BORING, BORING, BORING.
BORING, BORING, BORING.
January 27, 2014
4.5 stars. I can't wait to read more.
October 25, 2015
2.5 stars
It's like the author had an idea for a book but didn't really care about the details that make up a good story.
The premise is that Cerylea (the sister of Torsere's king, Ryneq) is to marry the elven prince Morkryn in order for Torsere to be protected by the elves' magic, as well, so they won't have to fear any more attacks by the countries of Rodeth and Athisi (who want Torsere's dragons). Now that's all fine. It's not the most original concept but all right.
But for the elven magic to work, Cerylea has to go to the elven city Alel to be married, crossing the river between the two countries.
And this is where it gets pretty ridiculous.
(Spoilers)
The title says it all: someone is captured.
During the trek from Torsere to Alel, the Torserians walk into an ambush and king Ryneq is captured by the leaders of Rodeth and Athisi, who want to wring information about the dragons out of him (also not very well thought through, because they believe dragon blood can heal anyone and anything, when in fact it can only heal that dragon's bonded rider--just make that common knowledge and there shouldn't be a problem anymore, since only some Torserians are born with the mark...)
Now the easiest way for Cerylea to get to Alel, and the least dangerous, would be for her to fly on a dragon's back. The author's reason why that's not an option is because Cerylea is afraid of heights. Dumbest reason ever for Ryneq to sacrifice troops and endanger the life of a sister he so dearly loves. And if she really is so scared they should just sedate her before they strap her to the dragon; let someone fly with her to ensure she doesn't fall off et voilà!
Now let's say there's another, better reason why she can't fly (maybe a dragon will only let his bonded rider touch him, which isn't actually the case--Ryneq and Cerylea share a special bond with all the dragons; but just for argument's sake let's assume that is indeed the case--Cerylea could have just traveled with the 4 elves who came to study the dragons (plus, they have magic that could probably hide her; or just disguise her as another elf). That would have been a lot less conspicuous than traveling with half of Torsere's soldiers and dragon riders. And maybe next time don't announce her departure to everyone. There's such a thing called "secrecy." That way not even the spy would have known...
And if Ryneq really has to be there for the ceremony, then he could just fly on a dragon once Cerylea is in Alel (since we've already established that they could fly if they wanted to...).
So this is where I had trouble. The whole story could have been avoided if all the characters weren't so incredibly dumb, and the excuses as to why something doesn't work so incredibly feeble.
And while I'm really not a fan of insta-love, this book had much bigger, more immediate issues...
It's like the author had an idea for a book but didn't really care about the details that make up a good story.
The premise is that Cerylea (the sister of Torsere's king, Ryneq) is to marry the elven prince Morkryn in order for Torsere to be protected by the elves' magic, as well, so they won't have to fear any more attacks by the countries of Rodeth and Athisi (who want Torsere's dragons). Now that's all fine. It's not the most original concept but all right.
But for the elven magic to work, Cerylea has to go to the elven city Alel to be married, crossing the river between the two countries.
And this is where it gets pretty ridiculous.
(Spoilers)
The title says it all: someone is captured.
During the trek from Torsere to Alel, the Torserians walk into an ambush and king Ryneq is captured by the leaders of Rodeth and Athisi, who want to wring information about the dragons out of him (also not very well thought through, because they believe dragon blood can heal anyone and anything, when in fact it can only heal that dragon's bonded rider--just make that common knowledge and there shouldn't be a problem anymore, since only some Torserians are born with the mark...)
Now the easiest way for Cerylea to get to Alel, and the least dangerous, would be for her to fly on a dragon's back. The author's reason why that's not an option is because Cerylea is afraid of heights. Dumbest reason ever for Ryneq to sacrifice troops and endanger the life of a sister he so dearly loves. And if she really is so scared they should just sedate her before they strap her to the dragon; let someone fly with her to ensure she doesn't fall off et voilà!
Now let's say there's another, better reason why she can't fly (maybe a dragon will only let his bonded rider touch him, which isn't actually the case--Ryneq and Cerylea share a special bond with all the dragons; but just for argument's sake let's assume that is indeed the case--Cerylea could have just traveled with the 4 elves who came to study the dragons (plus, they have magic that could probably hide her; or just disguise her as another elf). That would have been a lot less conspicuous than traveling with half of Torsere's soldiers and dragon riders. And maybe next time don't announce her departure to everyone. There's such a thing called "secrecy." That way not even the spy would have known...
And if Ryneq really has to be there for the ceremony, then he could just fly on a dragon once Cerylea is in Alel (since we've already established that they could fly if they wanted to...).
So this is where I had trouble. The whole story could have been avoided if all the characters weren't so incredibly dumb, and the excuses as to why something doesn't work so incredibly feeble.
And while I'm really not a fan of insta-love, this book had much bigger, more immediate issues...
November 8, 2024
November 2021
An MM fantasy novel filled with magic, dragons, and elves, this story starts off at a slower pace but gradually builds tension as the plot unfolds. The book delivers plenty of action, suspense, intrigue, and, of course, romance—all of which kept me completely hooked. (I typically juggle two or more books at once, but I couldn't put this one down!) The central romance develops between a king and a dragon rider in his army. While there's no mention of love yet, this is only the first part of a trilogy. The characters are very likable, with Fimor, the dragon, standing out as a particular favorite.
After finishing the author's Regent's Park Pack series, I looked for other books. Finding a fantasy trilogy was a nice surprise (fantasy being one of my favorite genres).
It has a favorite trope - "I'd suffer and die for you."
One of the MCs does come very close to dying.
With plenty of
and a very good ending
I look forward to reading book 2!
Edited to Add: The trilogy was a disappointment as a romance. I'd recommend it primarily for fantasy readers, due to the plot containing 90% fantasy and 10% romance (most of it in book 1). The few, brief sex scenes are low to mid-steam.
Book 2 was mostly filler and unnecessary.
Book 3 focuses on the war between Ryneq, King of Torsere, and Seran, King of Rodeth. It's much darker and grimmer, filled with bloodshed and graphic killing. The war itself was of little interest, leading me to skim much of it. I also disliked the way the witch brutally tortured and killed good characters at the end.
An MM fantasy novel filled with magic, dragons, and elves, this story starts off at a slower pace but gradually builds tension as the plot unfolds. The book delivers plenty of action, suspense, intrigue, and, of course, romance—all of which kept me completely hooked. (I typically juggle two or more books at once, but I couldn't put this one down!) The central romance develops between a king and a dragon rider in his army. While there's no mention of love yet, this is only the first part of a trilogy. The characters are very likable, with Fimor, the dragon, standing out as a particular favorite.
After finishing the author's Regent's Park Pack series, I looked for other books. Finding a fantasy trilogy was a nice surprise (fantasy being one of my favorite genres).
It has a favorite trope - "I'd suffer and die for you."
One of the MCs does come very close to dying.
With plenty of
and a very good ending
I look forward to reading book 2!
Edited to Add: The trilogy was a disappointment as a romance. I'd recommend it primarily for fantasy readers, due to the plot containing 90% fantasy and 10% romance (most of it in book 1). The few, brief sex scenes are low to mid-steam.
Book 2 was mostly filler and unnecessary.
Book 3 focuses on the war between Ryneq, King of Torsere, and Seran, King of Rodeth. It's much darker and grimmer, filled with bloodshed and graphic killing. The war itself was of little interest, leading me to skim much of it. I also disliked the way the witch brutally tortured and killed good characters at the end.
February 22, 2015
Every once in a while a book is picked for me to read that is wonderful. Capture was imaginative in its world building. How the bond between dragon and rider was formed and deepen as they learned to trust as they fly through the air.. I love this book. King Ryneq of Torsere is a young ruler who came to the throne after the murder of his parents. Nykin is just 22 years old and is a dragon rider. The story is about how they came to care for each other. It is not instant love by any means. When Ryneq is captured it is up to Nykin to save him. It was a thrilling book and I have already bought the rest of the trilogy.
May 31, 2015
I'm always up for a good fantasy, and Capture is definitely that. Political intrigue, dangerous enemies, and just a hint of a cinderfella story, I couldn't stop reading until I knew that Nykin and Ryneq were going to finally get some happiness. Plus, dragons. Of course, this does end on a strong HFN, so now I must read the rest of the series!
January 21, 2015
If you like dragons, kings elfs and hot steamy love this series is for you. Once you start these books just suck you in and dont let go. The writing is so vivid it sucks you in and makes you feel as if you are actually there experiencimg the trial of the king and Nykin you wont be able to put it down and the best part is this is only the beginning of their adventure
January 25, 2015
OMG, this is great.
July 22, 2020
Awesom
Kindle, Text of speech
Loved it. A king, a dragon and his bonded rider. A Princess and a Elvian Prince. It has it all and a happy ending. Loved it ☺️
Kindle, Text of speech
Loved it. A king, a dragon and his bonded rider. A Princess and a Elvian Prince. It has it all and a happy ending. Loved it ☺️
January 31, 2014
3.5 stars.
August 19, 2016
3.5 I'm definitely interested in the next in the series.
October 13, 2020
If you are looking for a book that has a slow-burn romance, fantasy, dragons, elves, and magic... this is the book for you because it has all that and so much more! I completely fell in love with the three main characters of this story.
Now to explain how I believe there are three main characters instead of two. Ryneq is the king of Torsere. He became king when his parents died at the hands of enemies of their kingdom. Though he is still fairly young for this role, he takes it and the threats to the kingdom very seriously.
Nykin is one of Ryneq’s dragon riders. All dragon riders are born with an emboldened on their arms. This signifies what kind of dragon is to come for them when they turn twenty-one. Once that happens, they are bonded with their personal dragon to ride and help to protect the kingdom. Which leads me to the third main character of this story, Fimor. Fimor is Nykin’s bonded dragon. This bond starts out slowly but with trust between rider and dragon, it becomes so much more and can lead to death for the rider if the dragon is killed, or can lead to healing for an injured rider if the dragon uses not only their bond to keep them alive but also their blood can save the rider’s life.
With the increasing danger surrounding Torsere, Ryneq’s sister has decided to marry an elf king to bring protection to their kingdom. This will not be an easy feat though, because in order to get to the elven kingdom, the entourage has to travel across enemy territory. Ryneq is truly concerned about an attack. So a plan is set into motion to try to protect not only the princess but all of those who will accompany her to the elven kingdom.
Everything seems to be going as planned until just before of the trip when the entourage is attacked and Ryneq is captured. When his people realize what has happened, one of the first to step forward to try to help is Nykin. He knows that the risk for his life is going to be great, but if the plan to rescue their king goes according to plan, then they may be able to kill two birds with one stone. Eliminate the enemy and get their beloved king home safely again.
But like with all great plans, nothing goes as it is supposed to and Nykin may be the one who is in the greatest danger if Fimor cannot reach him in time. Another development is the unexpected feelings that have started to grow between Nykin and Ryneq. Can these two safely escape their captors? And if so are these feelings just fleeting or is it the beginning of something real between them?
This was an incredible beginning to this series! I could not put this book down once I started it. I am truly looking forward to the next volume to find out what is going to happen next. Especially with the development of feelings between Nykin and Ryneq. Amazing read and highly recommended!
NOTE: This book was provided by the author via Signal Boost for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
Now to explain how I believe there are three main characters instead of two. Ryneq is the king of Torsere. He became king when his parents died at the hands of enemies of their kingdom. Though he is still fairly young for this role, he takes it and the threats to the kingdom very seriously.
Nykin is one of Ryneq’s dragon riders. All dragon riders are born with an emboldened on their arms. This signifies what kind of dragon is to come for them when they turn twenty-one. Once that happens, they are bonded with their personal dragon to ride and help to protect the kingdom. Which leads me to the third main character of this story, Fimor. Fimor is Nykin’s bonded dragon. This bond starts out slowly but with trust between rider and dragon, it becomes so much more and can lead to death for the rider if the dragon is killed, or can lead to healing for an injured rider if the dragon uses not only their bond to keep them alive but also their blood can save the rider’s life.
With the increasing danger surrounding Torsere, Ryneq’s sister has decided to marry an elf king to bring protection to their kingdom. This will not be an easy feat though, because in order to get to the elven kingdom, the entourage has to travel across enemy territory. Ryneq is truly concerned about an attack. So a plan is set into motion to try to protect not only the princess but all of those who will accompany her to the elven kingdom.
Everything seems to be going as planned until just before of the trip when the entourage is attacked and Ryneq is captured. When his people realize what has happened, one of the first to step forward to try to help is Nykin. He knows that the risk for his life is going to be great, but if the plan to rescue their king goes according to plan, then they may be able to kill two birds with one stone. Eliminate the enemy and get their beloved king home safely again.
But like with all great plans, nothing goes as it is supposed to and Nykin may be the one who is in the greatest danger if Fimor cannot reach him in time. Another development is the unexpected feelings that have started to grow between Nykin and Ryneq. Can these two safely escape their captors? And if so are these feelings just fleeting or is it the beginning of something real between them?
This was an incredible beginning to this series! I could not put this book down once I started it. I am truly looking forward to the next volume to find out what is going to happen next. Especially with the development of feelings between Nykin and Ryneq. Amazing read and highly recommended!
NOTE: This book was provided by the author via Signal Boost for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
October 15, 2023
This is a pretty dark story about a kingdom besieged by greedy neighbors intent on destroying their dragon allies. Nykin is a dragon rider with a massive crush on his charming king, and the attraction is entirely mutual, though Ryneq is no longer a playboy prince and has no time for a frivolous dalliance when his country is fighting a war on two fronts. The story really gets going when Ryneq is captured and Nykin has to risk it all to save him. I enjoyed the world building, especially the layered relationships between dragons and riders, and the mysterious elven allies. The characters are easy to cheer for, even as they are put through the wringer by the bad guys. All the content warnings for violence and torture. Highly recommend for fantasy romance fans who don't mind a little grit to go with the feels.
September 4, 2017
The writer put a lot more thought into the world building of this story than in the sentences which described it, which was a bit off putting at first. Still, though some of the phrasing made me roll my eyes, I enjoyed the lore and plot and characters enough to keep reading.
I'm glad I did. I became quite invested in the story of the dragon rider and his king (although I wish the author knew the difference between a highness and a majesty because I winced every time), and I enjoyed the whole caboodle enough that I plan on picking up the next one.
I'm glad I did. I became quite invested in the story of the dragon rider and his king (although I wish the author knew the difference between a highness and a majesty because I winced every time), and I enjoyed the whole caboodle enough that I plan on picking up the next one.
January 26, 2021
This was a fun MM fantasy book. Not the most sophisticated, though I appreciated the twist on the reasoning for the fake/pretend relationship and I enjoyed the characters and worldbuilding. I did feel like the development of the relationship didn't quite feel organic or well-paced, particularly for the King, but overall I enjoyed enough to get the next in the series.
May 13, 2015
**Grammar**
The legend says that over two hundred years ago one of the King of Torsere had helped the dragons to become free, and as reward they had given to him a gift. Since then, each year are born dragons raiders, men and women with the ability to ride dragons and link their mind to them, when they become 21. Nykin loves being a dragon raider, and loves his dragon Fimor, their bond is deep, also if he is only still 22.Nykin was born with the mark,the sign of the Dragon rider and since he was a boy he was trained to be a raider, the boy knows that his attraction to the handsome King Ryneq, only 3 years older than him, is wrong, bcs their ranks are different and Nykin doesnt want to be one of the many, he is not interested only in warming the King's bed, but fate has other ideas, and puts them together.
Cerylea and his borther the king, have lost their parents only 2 years ago, and they werent ready to rule a kingdom, but they are smart and with each other help they are doing what is best for their ppl. His sister wants only to see him happy and tells him she knows how he stares at the dragon raider, the one with the blond hair and the beautiful blue eyes, but Ryneq denies all the time, he doesnt have time to think about any kind of relationship and he doesnt want, all the time his sister tries to talk with him about this he gets irritated. They have more important things to think about, like the wedding btw his sister and the prince of the elves. This alliance will help their city, since after the wedding Torsere will be under elven magic. Ryneq, doesnt want to be separated from his sister, the only family he has left, after their parents were murdered, and the only thing that makes this decision less painful if the fact that his sister and the prince are in love.
When a delegation of elves and their prince arrives at Torsere to meet them and learn something about the famous dragons and their raiders, Ryneq doesnt expect his sister to call Nykin as their guest. The boy is attracted to him, a thing that was made clear when he goes to fetch the king and finds him in his personal bathroom naked and blushes like a maid without being able to move the eyes up, but staring at his naked body.
Ryneq was amused and had liked that expression, but he doesnt like how now, he is blushing also under one of the elves touch on his raider's mark. Ryneq is jealous and doesnt want anyone to touch the younger man, but at the same time he knows Nykin isnt his. His possessiveness is something new, and annoys him, but he cant avoid this new feeling, and he will be on guard for all the time the elves stay in Torsere. His feelings are so clear to them, that before leaving one of the elves will say to him he is sorry for how he touched Nykin, and that he didnt know he was his. Ryneq will answer that Nykin isnt his, and the elf will smirk....that elf is smart... XDDDDD
A lot of things will happen, and is clear that the attraction btw Nykin and Ryneq is much more than lust, but nothing happens btw them, there are only furtive glances, and is damn hot.
A huge part of the book is about Ryneq being kidnapped while escorting his sister to her wedding and Nykin risking his life to go and save him.
They both get tortured, nothing that cant be healed luckly, but is a sad part and is there in a cell, that we see their first kiss. Ryneq understands that he cant leave Nykin, that if they go out of there alive he will need to talk to the other man about his feelings, he still doesnt speak about love, but we understand he is falling in love. Nykin is brave, smart and strong, and Ryneq is the same. They could be a perfect couple if only Nykin's plan works and they get out of there. They need to make their captors belive they will guide them to his siter. Luckly the plan works. In the woods they have their first real kiss, and Nykin starts to belive that maybe Ryneq doesnt want him only to warm his bed.
Is only after Nykin almost dies and they kill their enemies, that they can finally go back home, and think about their new relationship.
Ryneq knows one thing, he doesnt want to be apart from Nykin and he wants him to be his consort. His sister tells him, that he doesnt need to have an heir, since she will, and that she wants him to be happy and she tells him she sees how he stares at Nykin.
Nykin will need weeks to heal and in that time, the only thing they can do is kiss. When they finally can have sex,the scene is hot and we understand that both of them have had past experiences, also if we dont know in which role, since nothing is clear. We see they are not shy, they know what they want and how they wanna do it. Their love making starts as gentle, but their passion soon changes the situation.
Is when Ryneq thinks that Nykin is sleeping and tells him that he loves him, that finally Nykin is sure of what he already was thinking, that his King feels the same.
The book ends with them in bed, talking and hugging and probably falling asleep soon after.
I already started to read the 2nd book, and i really hope to see more of Renyq and Nykin. I liked the background, the story of the dragons and all rest, but i really think the book needs more feelings.
The legend says that over two hundred years ago one of the King of Torsere had helped the dragons to become free, and as reward they had given to him a gift. Since then, each year are born dragons raiders, men and women with the ability to ride dragons and link their mind to them, when they become 21. Nykin loves being a dragon raider, and loves his dragon Fimor, their bond is deep, also if he is only still 22.Nykin was born with the mark,the sign of the Dragon rider and since he was a boy he was trained to be a raider, the boy knows that his attraction to the handsome King Ryneq, only 3 years older than him, is wrong, bcs their ranks are different and Nykin doesnt want to be one of the many, he is not interested only in warming the King's bed, but fate has other ideas, and puts them together.
Cerylea and his borther the king, have lost their parents only 2 years ago, and they werent ready to rule a kingdom, but they are smart and with each other help they are doing what is best for their ppl. His sister wants only to see him happy and tells him she knows how he stares at the dragon raider, the one with the blond hair and the beautiful blue eyes, but Ryneq denies all the time, he doesnt have time to think about any kind of relationship and he doesnt want, all the time his sister tries to talk with him about this he gets irritated. They have more important things to think about, like the wedding btw his sister and the prince of the elves. This alliance will help their city, since after the wedding Torsere will be under elven magic. Ryneq, doesnt want to be separated from his sister, the only family he has left, after their parents were murdered, and the only thing that makes this decision less painful if the fact that his sister and the prince are in love.
When a delegation of elves and their prince arrives at Torsere to meet them and learn something about the famous dragons and their raiders, Ryneq doesnt expect his sister to call Nykin as their guest. The boy is attracted to him, a thing that was made clear when he goes to fetch the king and finds him in his personal bathroom naked and blushes like a maid without being able to move the eyes up, but staring at his naked body.
Ryneq was amused and had liked that expression, but he doesnt like how now, he is blushing also under one of the elves touch on his raider's mark. Ryneq is jealous and doesnt want anyone to touch the younger man, but at the same time he knows Nykin isnt his. His possessiveness is something new, and annoys him, but he cant avoid this new feeling, and he will be on guard for all the time the elves stay in Torsere. His feelings are so clear to them, that before leaving one of the elves will say to him he is sorry for how he touched Nykin, and that he didnt know he was his. Ryneq will answer that Nykin isnt his, and the elf will smirk....that elf is smart... XDDDDD
A lot of things will happen, and is clear that the attraction btw Nykin and Ryneq is much more than lust, but nothing happens btw them, there are only furtive glances, and is damn hot.
A huge part of the book is about Ryneq being kidnapped while escorting his sister to her wedding and Nykin risking his life to go and save him.
They both get tortured, nothing that cant be healed luckly, but is a sad part and is there in a cell, that we see their first kiss. Ryneq understands that he cant leave Nykin, that if they go out of there alive he will need to talk to the other man about his feelings, he still doesnt speak about love, but we understand he is falling in love. Nykin is brave, smart and strong, and Ryneq is the same. They could be a perfect couple if only Nykin's plan works and they get out of there. They need to make their captors belive they will guide them to his siter. Luckly the plan works. In the woods they have their first real kiss, and Nykin starts to belive that maybe Ryneq doesnt want him only to warm his bed.
Is only after Nykin almost dies and they kill their enemies, that they can finally go back home, and think about their new relationship.
Ryneq knows one thing, he doesnt want to be apart from Nykin and he wants him to be his consort. His sister tells him, that he doesnt need to have an heir, since she will, and that she wants him to be happy and she tells him she sees how he stares at Nykin.
Nykin will need weeks to heal and in that time, the only thing they can do is kiss. When they finally can have sex,the scene is hot and we understand that both of them have had past experiences, also if we dont know in which role, since nothing is clear. We see they are not shy, they know what they want and how they wanna do it. Their love making starts as gentle, but their passion soon changes the situation.
Is when Ryneq thinks that Nykin is sleeping and tells him that he loves him, that finally Nykin is sure of what he already was thinking, that his King feels the same.
The book ends with them in bed, talking and hugging and probably falling asleep soon after.
I already started to read the 2nd book, and i really hope to see more of Renyq and Nykin. I liked the background, the story of the dragons and all rest, but i really think the book needs more feelings.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 31, 2016
*This review will be identical to the review included in The Torsere Trilogy*
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Book – Capture (Torsere #1)
Author – Annabelle Jacobs
Star rating - ★★★★★
No. of Pages - 200
Movie Potential – ★★★★★
Ease of reading – very easy to read and follow.
Would I read it again – YES!
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK, BY THE AUTHOR, IN RETURN FOR AN HONEST REVIEW **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine
Right off the bat, this story was fantastic! We entered into it, right in the middle of the action and yet, I never felt as if I'd been dropped into a story I didn't understand or couldn't follow. As the story began to build, from a problem that Ryneq and his sister Cerylea faced with the safety of their kingdom, we're gradually given all the information we need. History, characters and the location are all explained in appropriate dips of information that are placed in the perfect place, so that we learn everything as and when we need to know it.
The idea of the dragons and their riders being linked to each other through a tattoo granted to them at birth is really unique. I've read a lot of dragon stories, but none that have taken such a unique and intriguing direction before.
The characters of the story – Nykin and Ryneq – are brilliant. They both have their flaws and their strengths, but they're both brave and strong in their own ways. Their chemistry is so obvious, right from the start, but in an understated way. The way they interact with each other and look at each other, even Ryneq's jealousy over Fealon is wonderful. It all builds so well, until you begin to wonder how they haven't noticed each other and their chemistry before. But, in another way, you're glad they didn't, because this is a much better way for them to bond and grow with each other.
What's really wonderful is that it isn't just the humans who have a bond. Nykin's bond with his dragon Fimor is beautiful. The dragon is almost like a father-figure to him, guiding and teaching him, even correcting him when his young head gets too many bright ideas. The love and care they have for each other never feels wrong or misplaced or ridiculous. Fimor is as much of a main character as Nykin and Ryneq.
Even the Elves and Ryneq's sister Cerylea are great characters. As small as they are, in terms of the overall story, they have a lot of influence, even when not in the scene. The same can be said for the torturers Hatak and Seran. Every character has their place and appropriate recognition – from Selene, to Eldin and the dragon riders, Morkryn, the Athisi and the Rodethians. Faelon and Avelor, for not having a big part, were actually my favourite of the side-characters.
The world building itself it incredible. From the dragons, the Eyrie, the feud with the Athisi and Rodethians and the incredible talents of Elven magic, there was nothing that felt out of place, odd or uncomfortable. With the modern speech and concepts, there was enough familiarity that the fantasy world itself began to weave into place over time and offer a sense of having been there before. In terms of other books that it may be similar to, I can only say it's not like anything else, but that the concepts are as familiar and fantasy-like as Game of Thrones, R. Cooper's The Winter Prince and even a little like C.N. Faust's Age of Waking Death series.
I don't want to say too much, to ruin the story or give spoilers, so all I'll say is that I laughed, I cringed, I cried and the torture scenes got to me. I almost couldn't believe that Nykin would do what he did, to save Ryneq and to get him back, but on the other hand, it was believable because their chemistry was palpable right from the start.
On the downside – there's not much to say. There were a few small errors in editing (missing full stops, missing quotation marks etc) but the issues are so small that they're not really important. The only time it jarred the reading was when quotation marks were missing or in the wrong place. There were also a few instances of the dragon conversations, which were normally in italics, not being in italics. That may it a little confusing as to whether it was Nykin or Fimor who was talking.
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Overall, I have to say that Capture was a great introduction to the Torsere world. It had enough drama, romance and storyline to make me lose track of time and stay desperate for more. There was never a time when I got to the end of a chapter or scene that I felt comfortable putting it down for any reason. I always knew something bad was coming, something good would happen in the midst of the chaos, and that I'd regret putting it down for one second. Right until the last page, there was something important happening.
I can't wait to see what else is in store for Ryneq and Nykin.
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FAVOURITE QUOTE
“Nykin finally looked back at Ryneq again, with everything else he wasn't saying written all over his face. I need you to do this. Ryneq's heart stuttered. “I've done what I came here to do. Please don't make it all for nothing.”
“He'd just survived an interrogation with one of the most ruthless soldiers he'd ever met, and yet he couldn't handle a little gentle teasing from his own King.”
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Book – Capture (Torsere #1)
Author – Annabelle Jacobs
Star rating - ★★★★★
No. of Pages - 200
Movie Potential – ★★★★★
Ease of reading – very easy to read and follow.
Would I read it again – YES!
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK, BY THE AUTHOR, IN RETURN FOR AN HONEST REVIEW **
Reviewed for Divine Magazine
Right off the bat, this story was fantastic! We entered into it, right in the middle of the action and yet, I never felt as if I'd been dropped into a story I didn't understand or couldn't follow. As the story began to build, from a problem that Ryneq and his sister Cerylea faced with the safety of their kingdom, we're gradually given all the information we need. History, characters and the location are all explained in appropriate dips of information that are placed in the perfect place, so that we learn everything as and when we need to know it.
The idea of the dragons and their riders being linked to each other through a tattoo granted to them at birth is really unique. I've read a lot of dragon stories, but none that have taken such a unique and intriguing direction before.
The characters of the story – Nykin and Ryneq – are brilliant. They both have their flaws and their strengths, but they're both brave and strong in their own ways. Their chemistry is so obvious, right from the start, but in an understated way. The way they interact with each other and look at each other, even Ryneq's jealousy over Fealon is wonderful. It all builds so well, until you begin to wonder how they haven't noticed each other and their chemistry before. But, in another way, you're glad they didn't, because this is a much better way for them to bond and grow with each other.
What's really wonderful is that it isn't just the humans who have a bond. Nykin's bond with his dragon Fimor is beautiful. The dragon is almost like a father-figure to him, guiding and teaching him, even correcting him when his young head gets too many bright ideas. The love and care they have for each other never feels wrong or misplaced or ridiculous. Fimor is as much of a main character as Nykin and Ryneq.
Even the Elves and Ryneq's sister Cerylea are great characters. As small as they are, in terms of the overall story, they have a lot of influence, even when not in the scene. The same can be said for the torturers Hatak and Seran. Every character has their place and appropriate recognition – from Selene, to Eldin and the dragon riders, Morkryn, the Athisi and the Rodethians. Faelon and Avelor, for not having a big part, were actually my favourite of the side-characters.
The world building itself it incredible. From the dragons, the Eyrie, the feud with the Athisi and Rodethians and the incredible talents of Elven magic, there was nothing that felt out of place, odd or uncomfortable. With the modern speech and concepts, there was enough familiarity that the fantasy world itself began to weave into place over time and offer a sense of having been there before. In terms of other books that it may be similar to, I can only say it's not like anything else, but that the concepts are as familiar and fantasy-like as Game of Thrones, R. Cooper's The Winter Prince and even a little like C.N. Faust's Age of Waking Death series.
I don't want to say too much, to ruin the story or give spoilers, so all I'll say is that I laughed, I cringed, I cried and the torture scenes got to me. I almost couldn't believe that Nykin would do what he did, to save Ryneq and to get him back, but on the other hand, it was believable because their chemistry was palpable right from the start.
On the downside – there's not much to say. There were a few small errors in editing (missing full stops, missing quotation marks etc) but the issues are so small that they're not really important. The only time it jarred the reading was when quotation marks were missing or in the wrong place. There were also a few instances of the dragon conversations, which were normally in italics, not being in italics. That may it a little confusing as to whether it was Nykin or Fimor who was talking.
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Overall, I have to say that Capture was a great introduction to the Torsere world. It had enough drama, romance and storyline to make me lose track of time and stay desperate for more. There was never a time when I got to the end of a chapter or scene that I felt comfortable putting it down for any reason. I always knew something bad was coming, something good would happen in the midst of the chaos, and that I'd regret putting it down for one second. Right until the last page, there was something important happening.
I can't wait to see what else is in store for Ryneq and Nykin.
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FAVOURITE QUOTE
“Nykin finally looked back at Ryneq again, with everything else he wasn't saying written all over his face. I need you to do this. Ryneq's heart stuttered. “I've done what I came here to do. Please don't make it all for nothing.”
“He'd just survived an interrogation with one of the most ruthless soldiers he'd ever met, and yet he couldn't handle a little gentle teasing from his own King.”
November 1, 2020
The writing is not very good - flat, unimaginative and a bit rudimentary - and the romance is lukewarm at best. But considering it’s one of the author’s earlier works, I will give her a pass. Luckily her subsequent writing has improved.
September 7, 2020
Fluffy with dragons and elves. The romance is pretty insta. Since this goes on for a few books, I hope there will be more depth in the romantic arc.
September 25, 2023
Bonded hearts
Amazing story that captured my mind and my heart! To be a dragon rider... wow what a remarkable thought, to see dragons and be bonded, oh if there were such a dream!
Amazing story that captured my mind and my heart! To be a dragon rider... wow what a remarkable thought, to see dragons and be bonded, oh if there were such a dream!
October 13, 2023
It was solid -- I really liked the premise and enjoyed the story. I don't think I'll go for #2, but it was a good, quick romance!
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