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by Simon Graves

Patrick stumbles upon an anonymous love note addressed to him as he's closing up the bar. With every new note, he becomes more and more interested in uncovering the identity of his admirer. Could he be the stranger Patrick just met, a former coworker, or a longtime friend?

He'll get his answer when he meets his secret admirer on Valentine's Day!

Genres: M M Romance

10 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 30, 2014

Reviews

[H Beeyit]

I never feel particularly guilty or whatever about my habit (inherited from my mother) of always checking the ending first, but sometimes I do feel particularly SMART about always checking the ending first. Also, grateful. This would be one of those times.

If you're going to pull a rabbit like that out of the hat, Author, the audience at least needs to know they're at a magic show.

Because 1) some people don't like magic shows and would rather be spending their time and money on something else; and

2) people who DO like magic shows will then know that there is entertainment happening that is relevant to their interests.

That's what you'd call a win-win.

[Riayl · Rating 4 out of 5]

For my friends that would rather know this is NOT a romance.

[jules0623 · Rating 1 out of 5]

What did I just read?

[Cindi · Rating 4 out of 5]

I didn't look at the ratings and/or reviews anywhere before I read this. I found the story on Amazon and downloaded it without reading anything about it first. I don't normally do that, but I'm glad I did this time. I might've passed up an entertaining read.

I'll say this... I enjoyed the hell out of this little story. There's not much to it, really. It's only 10 Kindle pages or so.

A bartender keeps getting notes from a secret admirer. At first, they are flattering, but they quickly turn a bit creepy. Who is sending him the love notes? A former boyfriend? One of the many guys who flirted with him at the bar where he works? A friend?

Granted, this is a bit out there, but come on. It's fiction and I was highly entertained by it. I enjoyed the author's writing and I will definitely be checking out more.


The actual title of this short can be found on Amazon. Even I wouldn't have downloaded something with the title being 5 little dots.

[Adrian Anderson · Rating 1 out of 5]

What the hell kind of stunt is this title? Seriously? What are we supposed to call it? I know eBook piracy is a really big problem...is this title an effort to prevent pirates from searching for this work illegally? When I want to talk to a friend about this book what do I say...dot dot dot dot dot? Ugh.

This book was utter shite. I think that was the original working title but the editor insisted on censoring it.

[Janie · Rating 3 out of 5]

SERIOUSLY!!!! WTF! I was totally fooled into thinking this was something it was not. I have to say I really would have liked this more had it been longer, it would have truly pulled me in. Great writing, just give me more!!!

[Giulio · Rating 3 out of 5]

Ah. I knew flirting can be dangerous.. 5 stars for the title.

[Lois - Who Reads · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well that escalated quickly. This is a very short book, but is quietly brilliant.

[Shirley (Secret Squirrel) · Rating 1 out of 5]

this was awful. I want to scrub it from my memory