When I started reading this story, I thought the dialogue was stilted, the characters were stiff, and this was a new author's first draft of a rewrite of Jude Devereaux's Knight in Shining Armor (a five-star book, by the way - if you haven't read it yet, do that NOW). However, as the story progressed the characters relaxed, the plot thickened, and the story developed its own life. In Knight, the hero and heroine both do time travel and live happily ever after. In Always and Forever, not only the hero and heroine time-travel, but there are also evil doers who also travel through time to keep the lovers apart and stop them from getting their happily ever after. The hero and heroine are trying to spend every minute together they can, while still trying to figure out who is trying to harm them and stop them from being together, and why, and how to stop them, before their time runs out and they are returned to their own time periods. Always and Forever is therefore one step beyond Knight in Shining Armor, deeper and more complex, without a guaranteed happy ending for the H&h.
I would have given this five stars for the plot development, the characters, and the complexity of the story. However, the editing on this book is truly dreadful. It is distracting to have page after page, after page, after page, of typos, incorrect verb tenses, wrong pronouns, the wrong person's name used in a scene, bad adjectives, and on and on. People who like to read, instead of listening to books on tape or watching movies, tend to read because we like and respect the written word. An author who publishes a manuscript full of grammatical errors is demonstrating disrespect for his/her audience. It seems to indicate that either we won't recognize the errors, or we've lowered our standards in favor of a good story and we won't care about the errors we recognize. This is not the case. I don't fault the author, because it's the author's job to create the story and characters - and Ms. Fiore does that here very, very well. It is an editor's job to correct and polish the manuscript until it's a finished product worth buying, and that wasn't done here. It's a shame, because the story deserves five-stars, for emotion, pathos, the ability to grip you and make you care about the characters.