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The Keeper Of The Wind
When a trio of high school seniors list three ancient artifacts for sale on eBay, professor and archeologist of native artifacts, Mitch Waters, believes he hit the jackpot. But is he concerned more with historical preservation or his own fame and fortune?
Author Mark A. Shaw brings together an unlikely yet entertaining trio of high school seniors, each of a different race and upbringing, who are separated from their senior class during a high school camping trip. On their own in the wilderness, they come across three authentic artifacts in a hidden cave.
The events that unfold once they return to safety and attempt to sell their newfound treasures on eBay intersect modern with ancient worlds, superstition with truth, and trust with trickery. In the tradition of children’s literature classics, The Keeper of the Wind takes readers on a magical and enthralling journey, along which three best friends learn the true meaning of friendship, teamwork, and perseverance.
This page-turning read introduces Mark A. Shaw as a powerful up-and-coming young adult fiction novelist, leaving readers to Will there be a sequel?
Author Mark A. Shaw brings together an unlikely yet entertaining trio of high school seniors, each of a different race and upbringing, who are separated from their senior class during a high school camping trip. On their own in the wilderness, they come across three authentic artifacts in a hidden cave.
The events that unfold once they return to safety and attempt to sell their newfound treasures on eBay intersect modern with ancient worlds, superstition with truth, and trust with trickery. In the tradition of children’s literature classics, The Keeper of the Wind takes readers on a magical and enthralling journey, along which three best friends learn the true meaning of friendship, teamwork, and perseverance.
This page-turning read introduces Mark A. Shaw as a powerful up-and-coming young adult fiction novelist, leaving readers to Will there be a sequel?
- GenresFantasy
230 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 2, 2014
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Mark Shaw
82 books145 followersFor Mark A. Shaw, growing up in the concrete, urban environment of Baltimore, Maryland only cultivated a stronger appreciation for that which he had little of –wilderness and countryside. It also fostered in him a vibrant imagination and captivating creativity, and he began crafting stories in his mind at an early age. Mark draws his inspiration from a lifetime of adventures – from his childhood play with a whimsical stick and blanket, which became his magical instruments for commanding the wind, to his current life in Vancouver B.C., where he strolls through nearby woods and forests much like those portrayed in his first novel, The Keeper of the Wind. Mark is a U.S. Navy veteran.
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March 10, 2015
A Pot of Honey
After reading The keeper of winds, I had the same feeling, i usually get after watching a Disney movie.
The Keeper of Winds has a very adroit story that is treated in a very sweet and lovable fashion. The book opens with a good pace and maintains it throughout without once dipping in its overall tone or flow.
The narration is simple and systematic and sometimes a bit too systematic and seriatim for my taste but still it keeps the entertainment factors intact.
It was good to see an young adult book with real kids rather than those who act and speak eons away from their actual age and because of this one thing the story had a unique mixture of simplicity and cuteness to it making it a sweet read. Although at times it is too sweet. The book had these amazing "teen banters" that were comic relief as well as a breath of fresh air.
The keeper of wind with a good and simple treatment brings forward a book that will remind you of all those Disney movies that comes with a whole lot of messages but at the same time takes you to different fantasy worlds with moments of grief, laughter and excitement. So for me this is a "feel-good" book that will bring a smile on your face as well as leave you with these short notes on facing troubles with courage
After reading The keeper of winds, I had the same feeling, i usually get after watching a Disney movie.
The Keeper of Winds has a very adroit story that is treated in a very sweet and lovable fashion. The book opens with a good pace and maintains it throughout without once dipping in its overall tone or flow.
The narration is simple and systematic and sometimes a bit too systematic and seriatim for my taste but still it keeps the entertainment factors intact.
It was good to see an young adult book with real kids rather than those who act and speak eons away from their actual age and because of this one thing the story had a unique mixture of simplicity and cuteness to it making it a sweet read. Although at times it is too sweet. The book had these amazing "teen banters" that were comic relief as well as a breath of fresh air.
The keeper of wind with a good and simple treatment brings forward a book that will remind you of all those Disney movies that comes with a whole lot of messages but at the same time takes you to different fantasy worlds with moments of grief, laughter and excitement. So for me this is a "feel-good" book that will bring a smile on your face as well as leave you with these short notes on facing troubles with courage
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November 8, 2017First of all, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story by Mr. Shaw. To be quite honest, I had a hard time starting it because I was stuck on the cover. I was thinking, “The Goonies” - which is never a bad thing, but it’s not something I would read. Well…I’m glad I gave it a chance. As an author, it’s important to read different genres and step outside of your comfort zone now and then, but I truly enjoyed this book from beginning to end. The characters were engaging and they had me laughing a few times. However, because of the ages of the characters, I did not expect some of the language/dialogue that came out of them. Once that initial surprise was out of the way, I was over it and continued to enjoy the story. I love that the characters are from diverse ethnic backgrounds, and the adventure in this story was original and very enjoyable!
July 16, 2015
Mark Shaw is a pioneer in the movement to get indie books noticed. He is the founder of the hashtag (and corresponding promotional group) #indiebooksbeseen. His motto is "making indie trendy." He is also an indie writer himself, and one day I got to thinking that maybe his work needs some recognition. I picked up Keeper of the Wind and got a pleasant treat.
In Keeper of the Wind, three high school seniors wander away from a school camping trip and get lost in a cave, where they discover some Indian artifacts. They post the items for sale on eBay, and are immediately contacted by Professor Waters, an anthropologist, and Justin Sigo, a malevolent shaman. Of particular interest is a staff that has the power to control the winds. A stand-off ensues that will culminate in an epic battle of good vs. evil.
Through his work, Shaw reflects a deep respect for Native American cultures, and for other cultures in general. The teenagers speak using adolescent street slang, which gives the book a humorous element and takes the edge off its more serious themes (respect, tolerance, justice) Readers will also feel nostalgia for their own teenage experiences (first love, prom, going out with friends, graduation, etc.). A highly recommended read.
In Keeper of the Wind, three high school seniors wander away from a school camping trip and get lost in a cave, where they discover some Indian artifacts. They post the items for sale on eBay, and are immediately contacted by Professor Waters, an anthropologist, and Justin Sigo, a malevolent shaman. Of particular interest is a staff that has the power to control the winds. A stand-off ensues that will culminate in an epic battle of good vs. evil.
Through his work, Shaw reflects a deep respect for Native American cultures, and for other cultures in general. The teenagers speak using adolescent street slang, which gives the book a humorous element and takes the edge off its more serious themes (respect, tolerance, justice) Readers will also feel nostalgia for their own teenage experiences (first love, prom, going out with friends, graduation, etc.). A highly recommended read.
February 12, 2015
With all of the youthful and daring curiosity of normal teens, Marcus, Olivia and Tim “sort of” break camp rules and begin an adventure that will take them through caves, danger and a world of Native American spirits, legends and artifacts filled with the power to destroy or rescue the world. Unaware of what lay ahead for them, one fateful fall, will open a cavern with ancient artifacts of power and each will connect with one of these three teens.
So, do they sell them on eBay? Get them appraised and authenticated? Show them to an expert in Native American culture? Approached by a scholar only wishing to help and find more relics, the kids wonder if he can be trusted. When another, darker entity comes forward and offers them hard cash for these finds, the adventure through history, time and realms begins as they must stand up to evil with the help of ancient warriors and their priceless finds.
Directed at a younger teen audience, the fantasy and sense of mystery surrounding The Keeper of the Wind is a fascinating leap out of reality and into a tale that feels magically real and exciting! Mark A. Shaw has unleashed the power of his pen and creates a world that comes alive all around his readers. What better way to create future readers than to build a world a child or young adult can relate to while giving them the tools to enter into a realm of imagination and the ultimate battle between good and evil? Face it, we all have dreamed of being a larger than life hero at one time or another, and The Keeper of the Wind lets us to that from the safety of our imagination. Hopefully there is more coming from the rich well of Mr. Shaw’s mind, because I want to take another ride!
Publication Date: January 31, 2014
Publisher: lillie Publishing
Genre: YA Fantasy/Adventure
Print Length: 196 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Reviewed for: http://tometender.blogspot.com
So, do they sell them on eBay? Get them appraised and authenticated? Show them to an expert in Native American culture? Approached by a scholar only wishing to help and find more relics, the kids wonder if he can be trusted. When another, darker entity comes forward and offers them hard cash for these finds, the adventure through history, time and realms begins as they must stand up to evil with the help of ancient warriors and their priceless finds.
Directed at a younger teen audience, the fantasy and sense of mystery surrounding The Keeper of the Wind is a fascinating leap out of reality and into a tale that feels magically real and exciting! Mark A. Shaw has unleashed the power of his pen and creates a world that comes alive all around his readers. What better way to create future readers than to build a world a child or young adult can relate to while giving them the tools to enter into a realm of imagination and the ultimate battle between good and evil? Face it, we all have dreamed of being a larger than life hero at one time or another, and The Keeper of the Wind lets us to that from the safety of our imagination. Hopefully there is more coming from the rich well of Mr. Shaw’s mind, because I want to take another ride!
Publication Date: January 31, 2014
Publisher: lillie Publishing
Genre: YA Fantasy/Adventure
Print Length: 196 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Reviewed for: http://tometender.blogspot.com
November 24, 2014
I started laughing at the beginning, it was incredible how these three teenagers were portrayed in such a way you could actually see them and think, “That is exactly how a teenager would act and talk.” One of my favorite line in this book was “It ain’t Beyoncé.” I literally laughed out loud.
The three teens, Marcus, Olivia and Tim, stumble upon ancient artifacts that will forever change their lives. It’s incredible how Mark Shaw portrays the teen when they begin dealing with disembodied voices; it was quite amazing the first time these three heard them. Then to add to the mystery they are thrown into a situation of dealing with a mysterious menacing fog. Interesting yes but I cannot say any more about that so not to spoil any part of the story. They teens are compelled to examine their reality and embrace one that is extreme and unique from anything they imagined.
You have to read this one,loved it.
The three teens, Marcus, Olivia and Tim, stumble upon ancient artifacts that will forever change their lives. It’s incredible how Mark Shaw portrays the teen when they begin dealing with disembodied voices; it was quite amazing the first time these three heard them. Then to add to the mystery they are thrown into a situation of dealing with a mysterious menacing fog. Interesting yes but I cannot say any more about that so not to spoil any part of the story. They teens are compelled to examine their reality and embrace one that is extreme and unique from anything they imagined.
You have to read this one,loved it.
February 15, 2014
Great novel for all teenagers!
»The Keeper Of The Wind« is a great young adult fiction novel, that is fun even for adults. It contains many elements of a good and interesting story that really draws you into it and I am sure that any teenager would love it! There is great mixture of themes and symbols that make reading interesting – you will meet everything from adventure to friendship, interweaving of history and present, moral principles and much more.
I would not like to reveal you the whole story, but I can assure that it’s a very interesting, adventures and entertaining. The story focuses on three main characters, three friends Olivia, Marcus and Tim who experience an unexpected adventure that connects them even more.
The story is well written, it is very entertaining, easy to read, exciting and most important - it really draws you in! I would highly recommend it!
»The Keeper Of The Wind« is a great young adult fiction novel, that is fun even for adults. It contains many elements of a good and interesting story that really draws you into it and I am sure that any teenager would love it! There is great mixture of themes and symbols that make reading interesting – you will meet everything from adventure to friendship, interweaving of history and present, moral principles and much more.
I would not like to reveal you the whole story, but I can assure that it’s a very interesting, adventures and entertaining. The story focuses on three main characters, three friends Olivia, Marcus and Tim who experience an unexpected adventure that connects them even more.
The story is well written, it is very entertaining, easy to read, exciting and most important - it really draws you in! I would highly recommend it!
February 12, 2015
When best friends Marcus, Olivia and Tim get separated from the rest of their group on a school trip, they could never have guessed what would come. They follow their adventurous streak and discover powerful Native American artefacts, thought lost long ago.
This is a very sweet book. There's a lot of emphasis on being the person you want to be, regardless of your background and start in life. The mutual respect, whether it is between friends; between family; or between a teen and adult - it is always in a bright and positive light.
Shaw steers clear of many clichés of high school genres. It was refreshing to read about kids that actually get on with school, and look forward to college. There is only one incident of two guys not getting on, but it shows the importance of friendship and rising above such quarrels. There are relationships, but again, there is a feeling of maturity and respect, they grow in a natural way throughout the book.
The story is from multiple points of view, and I don't just mean our main 3! Everyone gets an opinion, family, the wider group of friends, the native chief, the bad guy, his goons... but once you get used to it, it flows smoothly and actually works well to give a well-rounded feel to the book.
There were a couple of points that I struggled with.
To start with, I felt there was a lot of exposition, which left very little to discover with some of the characters. For example, we are told that Josette (Tim's new girlfriend) has trust issues because of an ex-boyfriend. This is done in the same paragraph as we are given a similar bio of Fatima (Marcus' new girlfriend), and is done right before they are given their role in the story.
To be fair, once the back stories had all had their limelight in the first quarter of the book, the rest of it allowed you to start to connect for said characters, and was much smoother.
Have you all seen The Princess Bride? I know, we all have. (Stick with me, there's a reason) You know where the grandad is reading the story, but breaks off to remind the little boy that something was or wasn't going to happen, or that so-and-so isn't really dead... I kinda got that same feeling from the story-telling, that it could have been a grandad surrounded by his grandkids, telling them his favourite story. Which is a good thing, believe me, I only mention it down here because there was one thing that nagged me. There was a section where there's a pause in the storytelling to inform us that one character wasn't as up to speed with us. But repeatedly.
And my final little niggle was that I was surprised that our trio of heroes didn't share with their friends or family, the fact that they'd found something important, or that they were in trouble with some very dangerous people. Ok, it could be for their own safety; but during the scenes at school or with their girlfriends, there was no hint that they were pre-occupied with their adventure. It almost felt like two distinct stories in places.
So... all in all, it was a good read. I enjoyed it, I think it's quite refreshing in many areas. It was a 3.5 out of 5 for me, and I'll definitely be following the rest of the series.
This is a very sweet book. There's a lot of emphasis on being the person you want to be, regardless of your background and start in life. The mutual respect, whether it is between friends; between family; or between a teen and adult - it is always in a bright and positive light.
Shaw steers clear of many clichés of high school genres. It was refreshing to read about kids that actually get on with school, and look forward to college. There is only one incident of two guys not getting on, but it shows the importance of friendship and rising above such quarrels. There are relationships, but again, there is a feeling of maturity and respect, they grow in a natural way throughout the book.
The story is from multiple points of view, and I don't just mean our main 3! Everyone gets an opinion, family, the wider group of friends, the native chief, the bad guy, his goons... but once you get used to it, it flows smoothly and actually works well to give a well-rounded feel to the book.
There were a couple of points that I struggled with.
To start with, I felt there was a lot of exposition, which left very little to discover with some of the characters. For example, we are told that Josette (Tim's new girlfriend) has trust issues because of an ex-boyfriend. This is done in the same paragraph as we are given a similar bio of Fatima (Marcus' new girlfriend), and is done right before they are given their role in the story.
To be fair, once the back stories had all had their limelight in the first quarter of the book, the rest of it allowed you to start to connect for said characters, and was much smoother.
Have you all seen The Princess Bride? I know, we all have. (Stick with me, there's a reason) You know where the grandad is reading the story, but breaks off to remind the little boy that something was or wasn't going to happen, or that so-and-so isn't really dead... I kinda got that same feeling from the story-telling, that it could have been a grandad surrounded by his grandkids, telling them his favourite story. Which is a good thing, believe me, I only mention it down here because there was one thing that nagged me. There was a section where there's a pause in the storytelling to inform us that one character wasn't as up to speed with us. But repeatedly.
And my final little niggle was that I was surprised that our trio of heroes didn't share with their friends or family, the fact that they'd found something important, or that they were in trouble with some very dangerous people. Ok, it could be for their own safety; but during the scenes at school or with their girlfriends, there was no hint that they were pre-occupied with their adventure. It almost felt like two distinct stories in places.
So... all in all, it was a good read. I enjoyed it, I think it's quite refreshing in many areas. It was a 3.5 out of 5 for me, and I'll definitely be following the rest of the series.
November 12, 2014
The Keeper of the Wind is a wonderful magical realism story centering on the amazing adventure shared by three high school seniors. After finding ancient artefacts while on their senior trip, Marcus, Olivia and Tim’s lives change irrevocably. They must contend with disembodied voices, mysterious menacing fog, people who should not be taken at face value and re-thinking their entire worldview to incorporate a reality far different from anything they had ever imagined.
These three teens come from different ethnic and economic backgrounds making it even more difficult for some of them to revamp their ideology of how the world should operate. Tim is Caucasian. Marcus is African-American and Olivia is a Latina. Their backgrounds play heavily into the story’s plotting and structure which adds believability to the overall story which contains fantastical elements that will dazzle your mind’s eye.
The artefacts that each teen finds assists each of them to help one another on their journey while deepening their bonds of trust and connection. Their adventures bring them two new friends — Professor Waters and Peter, a fledgling shaman. While the teens are not sure of either man initially it becomes clear as the story unfolds that all five of their fates are intertwined.
The Keeper of the Wind weaves a compelling story. Each of the main five characters face dangers that put each of their lives in jeopardy more than once! The author, Mark Shaw, does an excellent job of providing great focal characters that readers can fall in love with. I know I did!
These three teens come from different ethnic and economic backgrounds making it even more difficult for some of them to revamp their ideology of how the world should operate. Tim is Caucasian. Marcus is African-American and Olivia is a Latina. Their backgrounds play heavily into the story’s plotting and structure which adds believability to the overall story which contains fantastical elements that will dazzle your mind’s eye.
The artefacts that each teen finds assists each of them to help one another on their journey while deepening their bonds of trust and connection. Their adventures bring them two new friends — Professor Waters and Peter, a fledgling shaman. While the teens are not sure of either man initially it becomes clear as the story unfolds that all five of their fates are intertwined.
The Keeper of the Wind weaves a compelling story. Each of the main five characters face dangers that put each of their lives in jeopardy more than once! The author, Mark Shaw, does an excellent job of providing great focal characters that readers can fall in love with. I know I did!
February 15, 2015
Mark Shaw has produced a wonderful first book. It would have kept my young sons totally engaged from beginning to end. There were enough "bad" words to make them laugh out loud, but not so many I'd have restricted the book. Kids hear these words every day and they would notice if they weren't present.
Mark managed to bring together multiple cultures in a beautiful way that emulates the melting pot of today's world with humor and dignity.
When three teens escape a class trip and discover ancient artifacts in a cave that is most certainly haunted by the spirits of tribal elders, the kids begin a journey to responsibility and adulthood. Their journey touches on the first blush of young love, the wonders of the stories which many times mold our past to our present, and the courage required to enter a world that contains both good and bad adults.
All too soon, Olivia, Marcus and Tim discover the artifacts they intended to sell on Ebay are worth far more than they could even dream. In fact, the direction of the world may be tied up in a simple crown of feathers, club, and animal skin.
Will they be up to the challenge of forces that have taken centuries to develop? Is Professor Waters leading them to their destiny or death? In all fairness, I know my sons at ages 12-14 would have rated this book as a 5-Star effort and they would have begged for the next.
Mark managed to bring together multiple cultures in a beautiful way that emulates the melting pot of today's world with humor and dignity.
When three teens escape a class trip and discover ancient artifacts in a cave that is most certainly haunted by the spirits of tribal elders, the kids begin a journey to responsibility and adulthood. Their journey touches on the first blush of young love, the wonders of the stories which many times mold our past to our present, and the courage required to enter a world that contains both good and bad adults.
All too soon, Olivia, Marcus and Tim discover the artifacts they intended to sell on Ebay are worth far more than they could even dream. In fact, the direction of the world may be tied up in a simple crown of feathers, club, and animal skin.
Will they be up to the challenge of forces that have taken centuries to develop? Is Professor Waters leading them to their destiny or death? In all fairness, I know my sons at ages 12-14 would have rated this book as a 5-Star effort and they would have begged for the next.
July 22, 2015
Genre: YA Fantasy Adventure. Ages: 12-18 and beyond
This was a fun read that really had it all! I like that the many characters were of a diverse cultural mix. The teens in this story were respectful to adults, parents, teachers and others. They were not perfect though! They were normal teens who didn’t always tell their parents everything, but showed excellent morals. They engaged in normal teen activities and heartthrobs. The love of generating music was a strong bond between the three main characters, Marcus, Tim and Olivia. On a school camping trip the three went exploring and got lost in a storm. Seeking shelter in a cave, they discovered some ancient North American Indian artifacts that contain supernatural powers. The teens plan to sell the items on ebay and make some college money, but events occur that give them insight into the historical value of these items beyond the monetary. I like how greed didn’t rule the day for these teens. There are evil greedy persons out to steal the items, and the teens are taken on a wild and wonderful – albeit a bit scary- adventure. A well written and imaginative story, Mark Shaw. There are elements in this book that all ages can identify with. It has an engaging plot line, references to pop culture, likeable well developed characters and historical elements. Highly recommended.
This was a fun read that really had it all! I like that the many characters were of a diverse cultural mix. The teens in this story were respectful to adults, parents, teachers and others. They were not perfect though! They were normal teens who didn’t always tell their parents everything, but showed excellent morals. They engaged in normal teen activities and heartthrobs. The love of generating music was a strong bond between the three main characters, Marcus, Tim and Olivia. On a school camping trip the three went exploring and got lost in a storm. Seeking shelter in a cave, they discovered some ancient North American Indian artifacts that contain supernatural powers. The teens plan to sell the items on ebay and make some college money, but events occur that give them insight into the historical value of these items beyond the monetary. I like how greed didn’t rule the day for these teens. There are evil greedy persons out to steal the items, and the teens are taken on a wild and wonderful – albeit a bit scary- adventure. A well written and imaginative story, Mark Shaw. There are elements in this book that all ages can identify with. It has an engaging plot line, references to pop culture, likeable well developed characters and historical elements. Highly recommended.
October 29, 2014
I found the age range the book is directed at a tad confusing - the characters are high school seniors, but often referred to as 'children' or 'kids' and other than the odd swear word, they are extremely well-behaved and courteously mannered.
However, the characters were engaging and highlighted the real value of friendship. I felt that the story did a good job of describing the bond with your friends, that last summer before you all leave to go away to college and start being independent adults.
I enjoyed the plot and the starring aspect of Native American culture, it was very interesting and the powers of the artefacts were great touches.
The sub-plots, of the character inter-relationships and first loves were nicely done to help move the story along, although for teenagers they were certainly all very eloquent with their feelings. If I had been able to communicate my emotions so fluently as a teen, I would have saved myself a lot of heartbreak!
All in all, a very good read that has made me think a bit more about a culture I don't know too much about. Very enjoyable.
However, the characters were engaging and highlighted the real value of friendship. I felt that the story did a good job of describing the bond with your friends, that last summer before you all leave to go away to college and start being independent adults.
I enjoyed the plot and the starring aspect of Native American culture, it was very interesting and the powers of the artefacts were great touches.
The sub-plots, of the character inter-relationships and first loves were nicely done to help move the story along, although for teenagers they were certainly all very eloquent with their feelings. If I had been able to communicate my emotions so fluently as a teen, I would have saved myself a lot of heartbreak!
All in all, a very good read that has made me think a bit more about a culture I don't know too much about. Very enjoyable.
February 12, 2015
Long ago, shamans on the side of good fought against the shamans on the side of evil. The dark shamans wanted the objects their enemies possessed; they particularly desired a staff called Wytobse, which could control the four winds. Once the boy, Moki, used the staff to defeat the dark shamans, the chief of his tribe swore that they would hide the staff as well as other precious objects so that they could never be used for evil again.
But they would not stay hidden forever.
Three high school students, Tim, Marcus and Olivia, stumbled onto a cave during their camping trip. And in it were a few sacred objects: a crown of feathers, a wolf pelt/cloak, and a wooden staff, later to be revealed as Wytobse. The trio of friends decide that they could make a decent sale via eBay and are later contacted by Professor Mitch Waters, who explains the truth about them.
Tim, Marcus and Olivia are in for more than they bargained for...and there are those descended from the dark shamans who soon know that the items they seek are no longer in hiding.
But they would not stay hidden forever.
Three high school students, Tim, Marcus and Olivia, stumbled onto a cave during their camping trip. And in it were a few sacred objects: a crown of feathers, a wolf pelt/cloak, and a wooden staff, later to be revealed as Wytobse. The trio of friends decide that they could make a decent sale via eBay and are later contacted by Professor Mitch Waters, who explains the truth about them.
Tim, Marcus and Olivia are in for more than they bargained for...and there are those descended from the dark shamans who soon know that the items they seek are no longer in hiding.
February 16, 2014
The Keeper of the Wind holds nothing back in terms of establishing its place in the young adult genre. It seamless delivers an entertaining and unforeseen adventure by three charismatic characters. To a large degree, young adult readers will be fascinated and wonder about the kinds of unexpected surprises are in store for their own lives. It is remarkable how much the author, Mark Shaw, was able to involve so much historical accuracy into the plot - I really think that gets kids excited about learning past events and the record they leave behind.
With a book like this as a reference, it makes a trip to the museum or browsing artifacts online so much more rich. This is a great purchase for a young adult reader especially. It's fun, it's packed with scenes of excitement, and really immerses you into culture and history. Great read, highly encouraged!
With a book like this as a reference, it makes a trip to the museum or browsing artifacts online so much more rich. This is a great purchase for a young adult reader especially. It's fun, it's packed with scenes of excitement, and really immerses you into culture and history. Great read, highly encouraged!
February 16, 2014
I have many book collections. And every time I try to collect something special that would be the power of human inspiration. Finally, I got this book name as "The Keeper Of The Wind" is the great novel specially for teenagers. In this book every character that's designed by the author have created the same footprint at the point of the adventure.
The story focuses on three main characters, three friends Olivia, Marcus and Tim and their unexpected activities defined as adventure. This is great fun and entertaining, though the author passed a message by this that teenagers can do everything and make the world changed if they wish. I want to read more!
The story focuses on three main characters, three friends Olivia, Marcus and Tim and their unexpected activities defined as adventure. This is great fun and entertaining, though the author passed a message by this that teenagers can do everything and make the world changed if they wish. I want to read more!
September 10, 2014
The Keeper of the Wind was a sensational story of three lively teens on the adventure of a lifetime! I had so much fun reading it and once I started could barely put it down. The dialogue and relationship between the characters, especially the three teens was delightful and amusing! The storyline is captivating and very imaginative and includes both historical and current elements. The humorous references to pop culture didn't go unnoticed. I'm not usually one for mystical/magical subject matter, but the scenes depicted throughout the book had me quite intrigued and definitely left me wanting more. A job well done!
February 20, 2014
I am always on the lookout for quality books that my twelve year old will enjoy. She shares her mom's love of reading thank goodness!
When I saw this book's description while browsing for a new read, I couldn't help but download a sample.
Let's just say my daughter got sloppy seconds because I devoured it first!
It has it all. A great story line with some valuable lessons behind it, diverse and complex characters, and dialogue that can't be beat.
I would highly recommend it to any young adult (or not so young). My daughter gives it a solid five stars as well.
When I saw this book's description while browsing for a new read, I couldn't help but download a sample.
Let's just say my daughter got sloppy seconds because I devoured it first!
It has it all. A great story line with some valuable lessons behind it, diverse and complex characters, and dialogue that can't be beat.
I would highly recommend it to any young adult (or not so young). My daughter gives it a solid five stars as well.
February 4, 2015
This book centers around three friends that are from completely different backgrounds and how they come together and are there to support each other no matter what. The story line of this book is one that I would recommend for anyone with a child. The fundamentals of what we all try and teach our children is told in this very interesting and engaging book.
The characters and story were very well developed and easy to follow. This is a book that can be enjoyed by anyone of any age.
The characters and story were very well developed and easy to follow. This is a book that can be enjoyed by anyone of any age.
October 13, 2018
Book 32 of my Goodreads Challenge
This was a prize from an Indie Books Be Seen event, I forgot I had it on my kindle. When I got round to reading it I found it a really enjoyable story. A tale for younger readers/teenagers.
This is a story of friendships across different cultures, a tale of ancient artifacts that have been found by a group of kids who want to flog them on ebay. They realise after a time that maybe they are worth a whole lot more than they are asking.
Before they know it they are caught up in a world they never knew existed and come up against a man with dark evil intentions. Well worth checking out.
This was a prize from an Indie Books Be Seen event, I forgot I had it on my kindle. When I got round to reading it I found it a really enjoyable story. A tale for younger readers/teenagers.
This is a story of friendships across different cultures, a tale of ancient artifacts that have been found by a group of kids who want to flog them on ebay. They realise after a time that maybe they are worth a whole lot more than they are asking.
Before they know it they are caught up in a world they never knew existed and come up against a man with dark evil intentions. Well worth checking out.
February 25, 2015
The Keeper of the Wind is a fun story with three very likable teenagers (Tim, Marcus, and Olivia) leading the charge.
About a third of the book deals with the boys' dating experiences and Olivia's good natured stints being the fifth wheel. I enjoyed the humorous encounters the boys found themselves in with their love interests (especially the awkward-- and totally relatable-- dinners with the girlfriends' parents).
Though I appreciated the comedy, at times I felt the plot development surrounding the artifacts the teens discovered and the grave danger they were in from possessing those artifacts took a back seat to the boys' love life and lost some of its urgency.
That said, when the good guys and bad guys (who have the ability to morph into different animals) do confront each other the battles are vivid and action packed.
This is the twentieth book I've featured on my book's (Atomic Aardvark) blog called "Bobbing for Indie eBooks" . A feature where I promote and give away copies of self-published eBooks by authors I've discovered and whose books I have enjoyed.
About a third of the book deals with the boys' dating experiences and Olivia's good natured stints being the fifth wheel. I enjoyed the humorous encounters the boys found themselves in with their love interests (especially the awkward-- and totally relatable-- dinners with the girlfriends' parents).
Though I appreciated the comedy, at times I felt the plot development surrounding the artifacts the teens discovered and the grave danger they were in from possessing those artifacts took a back seat to the boys' love life and lost some of its urgency.
That said, when the good guys and bad guys (who have the ability to morph into different animals) do confront each other the battles are vivid and action packed.
This is the twentieth book I've featured on my book's (Atomic Aardvark) blog called "Bobbing for Indie eBooks" . A feature where I promote and give away copies of self-published eBooks by authors I've discovered and whose books I have enjoyed.
April 12, 2015
What a joy to read! I absolutely loved reading KEEPER OF THE WIND, from start to finish. From the beginning where 3 best friends stumble upon a secret, to the end where they fend of evil on a mystical island, this book had me ensnared.
The characters were uniquely made, realistic and quite funny despite how scared they were. Each of them had intriguing and believable back-stories that made them all the more lovable, in my eyes.
I adored how Mark Shaw woven bits of Native American culture and history into this story, making it ultimately original.
I definitely recommend this novel to children and adults alike because not only is it entertaining, it is filled with a rich history, morality and multiculturalism! And a great blend of creativity.
Hope there will be a sequel that is just as epic as this one!
The characters were uniquely made, realistic and quite funny despite how scared they were. Each of them had intriguing and believable back-stories that made them all the more lovable, in my eyes.
I adored how Mark Shaw woven bits of Native American culture and history into this story, making it ultimately original.
I definitely recommend this novel to children and adults alike because not only is it entertaining, it is filled with a rich history, morality and multiculturalism! And a great blend of creativity.
Hope there will be a sequel that is just as epic as this one!
September 16, 2015
Mark Shaw has a knack for great storytelling. I would've given this book a 5 star review, but I had my own issues with it. Personally I'm not one for long chapters, and this book has some extremely lengthy chapters. I also had a hard time relating to the characters, but then again I'm a 25 year old girl who rarely leaves the house.
The Keeper of the Wind is a great story to be told. I can see this book on the curriculum in classrooms, and it's definitely something I would have enjoyed to read in school. I would recommend this book to anyone with a knack for culture and adventure. It also has some great values on friendship that I really loved.
Be sure to check this one out for sure! #IndieBooksBeSeen
The Keeper of the Wind is a great story to be told. I can see this book on the curriculum in classrooms, and it's definitely something I would have enjoyed to read in school. I would recommend this book to anyone with a knack for culture and adventure. It also has some great values on friendship that I really loved.
Be sure to check this one out for sure! #IndieBooksBeSeen
February 18, 2015
I really enjoyed this book. Mr. Shaw did some very thorough research and I always appreciate that. The characters were well rounded and likeable. I liked that not all the main characters were paired off with someone in the end.
There were plenty of witty comebacks to be had in this book, which I can never get enough of. I was a bit surprised at some of the language that was used at first, but I got over it.
Overall, it was a good read. I felt sad when I came to the end, having made friends with all the characters, particularly Olivia. I hope Mr. Shaw ends up writing a sequel.
There were plenty of witty comebacks to be had in this book, which I can never get enough of. I was a bit surprised at some of the language that was used at first, but I got over it.
Overall, it was a good read. I felt sad when I came to the end, having made friends with all the characters, particularly Olivia. I hope Mr. Shaw ends up writing a sequel.
June 13, 2015
Keeper of the Wind is a Pretty Good Book From Chapter 10 But Why Read to Get There?
Writers should trust the adage that teen readers appreciate witty adult dialogue but adult readers don't appreciate dialogue dumbed down for teens. This is how Warners Brothers and Hannah Barbara killed cartoons in the sixties. Mark Shaw didn't learn that lesson, one of many he didn't learn when writing Keeper of the Wind. As a consequence, he failed to stumble onto the formula for success until the final four chapters.
With the exception of the teen dialogue, those four chapters were pretty good chapters. By then it was too late to save the book.
Shaw figured out some of his target demographics. He knew to make two of his characters Black and Asian and to throw in a Moslem girlfriend with an intolerant father as a love interest. But he doesn't seem to realize that most YA readers are 18-44 (with a large percentage over 30). The exposition is written more more for the middle school readers than high school. I do mean exposition, because Shaw's prose reads doesn't flow like narrative. In fact it reads as though he learned his craft at the word processor.
Usually I save comments like these until the end of my reviews but these were was my impressions of the book from page one, and they constantly interfered with the flow of the story. Shaw's writing style continued to interfere with the story until Chapter 10 when it finally felt as though he began to feel comfortable with his material and his prose. Even then, just as I was finally beginning to enjoy the flow of the narrative, one of his teen characters would interrupt with a line of dialogue and I wanted to delete the book from my iPad yet again.
To reduce the plot to a skeleton: Three fellow musicians on the verge of graduation—Olivia, Tim and Marcus—stumble across three lost artifacts in a hidden cave. The artifacts have mystical powers: Tim's pole makes the weather shift, Marcus' rown of feathers turns him into an eagle, and Olivia's fur a pelt turns her into a wolf. A shape-shifting shaman and his wendigo cohorts plot to steal the artifacts before the youngsters can restore the artifacts to their source of origin. Only archeology professor Waters and an ancient elder can protect them from the shaman's guild.
I call this a skeleton because, with the exception of two decent chase and suspense scenes, the previous paragraph entails the first nine chapters. The rest of the book consists of cliched teen drama—courtship rituals, proms, movie dates, classes, dating drama, dads lecturing boys on dating their daughters and mothers telling the dads to lighten up. Nor has Shaw learned to edit out the mundane "How's your day, Bob?" "Gee, your turkey is delicious tonight," or "Bobby's dating Sally" dialogue that haunts novice novelists.
Even though Professor Waters warns the teens dozens of times that they are in immediate danger and must meet with the ancient elder chief, author Shaw postpones the meeting for several chapters and months of book time, disappearing Waters without explanation and then reappearing him just before the final quest with a lame excuse that could have easily been fixed with a few paragraphs of editing.
Instead of locking the artifacts safely at the University, Waters allows the kids to hide them in their closets and under their beds. Even more unbelievably, the guild makes only one attempt to steal the artifacts even though an entire school year passes and the teens are almost never at home to protect them.
With the exception of one or two scenes, readers never feel a sense of danger. Nor do the kids. How can you feel a sense of danger when you're dating, planning for the prom and worrying about whether Fatima's dad will see you holding hands at the malt shop? Keeper of the Wind never delivers a sense of urgency until the Chapter 10 when teens, finally on their quest, meet the ghost Farrah. Only then does Shaw show any confidence in his writing, master his sense of narrative and launch the story. Only then does he engage the reader.
Even then Marcus or Tim will open their mouths and ruin the flow of narrative.
Readers who really love Native American magical artifact lore might like Keeper of the Wind if they take my skeleton and jump ahead to "Chapter 10: The Sweet Song of Farrah" (or maybe "Chapter 9: The Quest Begins" just to catch up).
But my serious advice?
Shaw, rewrite the book. Its an eBook. Vendors let you do that. Don't fall in love with your prose. The best writers kill their prose every day and resurrect it with something fresher.
I would like to like this book. Shaw has talent and with practice and effort he could develop into a good writer. But I don't appreciate writers who try to shortcut the publishing process by pushing a book onto the public before it's ready. There will always be readers who appreciate the raw work, but readers deserve the best effort from writers. We shouldn't have to come through a haystack of less-willing writers to find the ones to who do.
Workshop Keeper of the Wind. Get an editor. Then repost the revised edition. Even young adults deserve a book written with fore and afterthought.
Readers, wait for that version. With the right editor it could be worth it.
Phillip T. Stephens is the author of Cigerets, Guns & Beer and Raising Hell. You can follow him @stephens_pt.
Writers should trust the adage that teen readers appreciate witty adult dialogue but adult readers don't appreciate dialogue dumbed down for teens. This is how Warners Brothers and Hannah Barbara killed cartoons in the sixties. Mark Shaw didn't learn that lesson, one of many he didn't learn when writing Keeper of the Wind. As a consequence, he failed to stumble onto the formula for success until the final four chapters.
With the exception of the teen dialogue, those four chapters were pretty good chapters. By then it was too late to save the book.
Shaw figured out some of his target demographics. He knew to make two of his characters Black and Asian and to throw in a Moslem girlfriend with an intolerant father as a love interest. But he doesn't seem to realize that most YA readers are 18-44 (with a large percentage over 30). The exposition is written more more for the middle school readers than high school. I do mean exposition, because Shaw's prose reads doesn't flow like narrative. In fact it reads as though he learned his craft at the word processor.
Usually I save comments like these until the end of my reviews but these were was my impressions of the book from page one, and they constantly interfered with the flow of the story. Shaw's writing style continued to interfere with the story until Chapter 10 when it finally felt as though he began to feel comfortable with his material and his prose. Even then, just as I was finally beginning to enjoy the flow of the narrative, one of his teen characters would interrupt with a line of dialogue and I wanted to delete the book from my iPad yet again.
To reduce the plot to a skeleton: Three fellow musicians on the verge of graduation—Olivia, Tim and Marcus—stumble across three lost artifacts in a hidden cave. The artifacts have mystical powers: Tim's pole makes the weather shift, Marcus' rown of feathers turns him into an eagle, and Olivia's fur a pelt turns her into a wolf. A shape-shifting shaman and his wendigo cohorts plot to steal the artifacts before the youngsters can restore the artifacts to their source of origin. Only archeology professor Waters and an ancient elder can protect them from the shaman's guild.
I call this a skeleton because, with the exception of two decent chase and suspense scenes, the previous paragraph entails the first nine chapters. The rest of the book consists of cliched teen drama—courtship rituals, proms, movie dates, classes, dating drama, dads lecturing boys on dating their daughters and mothers telling the dads to lighten up. Nor has Shaw learned to edit out the mundane "How's your day, Bob?" "Gee, your turkey is delicious tonight," or "Bobby's dating Sally" dialogue that haunts novice novelists.
Even though Professor Waters warns the teens dozens of times that they are in immediate danger and must meet with the ancient elder chief, author Shaw postpones the meeting for several chapters and months of book time, disappearing Waters without explanation and then reappearing him just before the final quest with a lame excuse that could have easily been fixed with a few paragraphs of editing.
Instead of locking the artifacts safely at the University, Waters allows the kids to hide them in their closets and under their beds. Even more unbelievably, the guild makes only one attempt to steal the artifacts even though an entire school year passes and the teens are almost never at home to protect them.
With the exception of one or two scenes, readers never feel a sense of danger. Nor do the kids. How can you feel a sense of danger when you're dating, planning for the prom and worrying about whether Fatima's dad will see you holding hands at the malt shop? Keeper of the Wind never delivers a sense of urgency until the Chapter 10 when teens, finally on their quest, meet the ghost Farrah. Only then does Shaw show any confidence in his writing, master his sense of narrative and launch the story. Only then does he engage the reader.
Even then Marcus or Tim will open their mouths and ruin the flow of narrative.
Readers who really love Native American magical artifact lore might like Keeper of the Wind if they take my skeleton and jump ahead to "Chapter 10: The Sweet Song of Farrah" (or maybe "Chapter 9: The Quest Begins" just to catch up).
But my serious advice?
Shaw, rewrite the book. Its an eBook. Vendors let you do that. Don't fall in love with your prose. The best writers kill their prose every day and resurrect it with something fresher.
I would like to like this book. Shaw has talent and with practice and effort he could develop into a good writer. But I don't appreciate writers who try to shortcut the publishing process by pushing a book onto the public before it's ready. There will always be readers who appreciate the raw work, but readers deserve the best effort from writers. We shouldn't have to come through a haystack of less-willing writers to find the ones to who do.
Workshop Keeper of the Wind. Get an editor. Then repost the revised edition. Even young adults deserve a book written with fore and afterthought.
Readers, wait for that version. With the right editor it could be worth it.
Phillip T. Stephens is the author of Cigerets, Guns & Beer and Raising Hell. You can follow him @stephens_pt.
August 23, 2014
The Keeper of the Wind is a real page turner which will keep you riveted by a strong story line and engaging characters. I stayed up late at night reading this novel - it was very difficult to put down once I was immersed. Shaw captures the teenage voice and behaviour perfectly with his three main protagonists - their friendships, relationship issues and their daring is skilfully portrayed against a rare humour (the dialogue is witty and, at times, endearing). The fact that the teenagers come from different ethnic backgrounds is an affirmation of the multicultural melting pot of American culture. And I must admit I really liked the fact that not everyone in the novel was involved in romantic relationships - the female characters are feisty and independent which provides good role models for young women today.
The mix of native American history and fiction is a great combination. As I love history, I found the plot involving rare artefacts quite compelling. But, I think, my favourite parts were the elements of American culture we often don't get to see - the kids from the hood are portrayed in a realistic but positive light. This honest portrayal shows that Shaw really knows his stuff.
Not only does this book demand a sequel, it would translate well into a film.
Well done to Shaw for a memorable read!
The mix of native American history and fiction is a great combination. As I love history, I found the plot involving rare artefacts quite compelling. But, I think, my favourite parts were the elements of American culture we often don't get to see - the kids from the hood are portrayed in a realistic but positive light. This honest portrayal shows that Shaw really knows his stuff.
Not only does this book demand a sequel, it would translate well into a film.
Well done to Shaw for a memorable read!
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