This is a review of Peter Macmillan's translation of The Tales of Ise.
Perhaps "tale" is not the most optimal word to describe the narrations contained in this collection, but the original term, monogatari is not that precise either. In general terms, this genre covers narrations derived from the Japanese oral tradition, which in turn derived from Chinese literature during the Heian Period (794–1185 CE), at the height of the Imperial court which led to a boom in poetry and literature. Within the monogatari genre, we find the uta-monogatari, in which waka poetry is interspersed with prose. Ise Monogatari, or The Tales of Ise is part of this tradition, and it contains 125 "tales" mostly about love, life in the court, nature, friendship, beauty and desire, and they loosely capture the life of Ariwara no Narihira, a courtier and poet from the period. Each poem is rich in linguistic features thanks to wordplay, and to additional meanings found when separating the first and last syllables of each verse. Also, given the intertextuality of this collection, which is directly related to imperial poetry collections such as the Kokin Wakashū and the Man'yōshū, and the ambiguity of some sections, interpretations of the meaning behind the text are varied.
If that doesn't sound like a translation nightmare to you, I don't know what else is. While every language pair and genre poses its particular and specific challenges, the complexity posed here for translation from Japanese into any language that doesn't rely on the same resources is particularly complicated. Peter Macmillan opts for using multiple translation spaces beyond the target text itself to manifest the complex beauty of this collection. He translates each tale into English, and tries to recreate whenever possible the puns and other rhetorical devices, but he dedicates a precise yet substantial commentary for every tale that provides the social and cultural context necessary for its understanding and to even acknowledge challenging interpretations (thus showing that the source text is not something as stable as one might assume), and to offer an insight on the grammatical and semantic nuances from Japanese that encourage him to take some creative license whenever possible. Beyond those areas, Macmillan includes a detailed introduction about the text, a general note on his translation, a glossary of expressions, literary traditions, and historical figures present throughout the work, and other supplementary materials (paratexts) such as the transliterations of the original Japanese waka that offer the opportunity to read his translation actively and closely. And while there will never be such a thing as "the most complete reading" possible of this text, this translation certainly aims toward that ideal realm, and Macmillan does it consistently, and with enough humility to admit he doesn't know everything but tries to do know as much as possible, in order to share the text with English-speaking audiences. However, those supplementary materials are just that, supplementary and optional readings, given that the translations alone have plenty to offer thanks to Macmillan's efforts to recreate the flavor and beauty of their Japanese counterparts. To me, this is an outstanding work, for lesser translators and literary critics belonging to the same academic realm would have chosen to translate each poem literally and use notes and other supplementary materials as the sole output of everything contained in the original, without so much as an attempt to recreate those wonders in the target language.
In summary, this is an exemplary translation that doesn't hide the complexities of its source text, and includes enough materials even for demanding readers, but it doesn't shy away from actually creating something worthwhile in the target language for any and all readers interested in this text. In fact, it may even encourage further reading, rather than leaving readers with a false sense of confidence that a translation on its own can capture everything, including the "halo" surrounding the original text.