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Home World
Centuries of ruinous war have left Earth little more than a dusty tourist world within the star-flung Commonwealth she founded. Now, amid the ruins of a post-apocalyptic Hawaii, Jezekiah Van Buren has found a way to restore Earth – Home World to the other worlds of the Commonwealth – to her lost glory.
The most ingenious prince even the genetically-enhanced, Great Family Van Buren has ever produced, Jezekiah has achieved the impossible: he has arranged a treaty that will convert Earth's ancient enemies, the Lupans, to her most powerful allies. Once he has the treaty sealed, it will not only make Earth rich again, but it will grant him the chance to escape the Ring that marks him as Earth's next ruler. Once the treaty is signed, he will be free: free to create his own future, and free to marry Keiko Yakamoto, the warrior-trained woman he loves. His future and Earth's is assured. Assuming he can convince his xenophobic sister to accept the Lupan's alpha warlord in marriage before the assassin she's put on his tail succeeds in killing him. Assuming he can thwart another deadly uprising by the interstellar criminal organization called Ho Tong. And before his ruling relatives on competing worlds manage to execute him for treason.
Jezekiah manages to stay one step ahead of his foes, until his Lupan warlord-partner reaches Earth. And these two most powerful men suddenly find themselves in love with the same woman. A woman who just may be the most deadly assassin of them all.
The most ingenious prince even the genetically-enhanced, Great Family Van Buren has ever produced, Jezekiah has achieved the impossible: he has arranged a treaty that will convert Earth's ancient enemies, the Lupans, to her most powerful allies. Once he has the treaty sealed, it will not only make Earth rich again, but it will grant him the chance to escape the Ring that marks him as Earth's next ruler. Once the treaty is signed, he will be free: free to create his own future, and free to marry Keiko Yakamoto, the warrior-trained woman he loves. His future and Earth's is assured. Assuming he can convince his xenophobic sister to accept the Lupan's alpha warlord in marriage before the assassin she's put on his tail succeeds in killing him. Assuming he can thwart another deadly uprising by the interstellar criminal organization called Ho Tong. And before his ruling relatives on competing worlds manage to execute him for treason.
Jezekiah manages to stay one step ahead of his foes, until his Lupan warlord-partner reaches Earth. And these two most powerful men suddenly find themselves in love with the same woman. A woman who just may be the most deadly assassin of them all.
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First published May 1, 2013
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March 22, 2015
Just absolutely fantastic. It's pretty hardcore and definitely worth the read. You HAVE to put this SciFi on your to-read list. WOW!
November 23, 2014
Jezekiah Van Buren returns to Earth, where he is designated to become the Lord High Protector, but fears assassination by his plotting sister, Letticia. Earth’s industries are gone, replaced by tourism from her former colonies and addictive Venus Seed drug production. To avert economic collapse and a possible interstellar war, Jezekiah has secured an alliance with the Lupan Dominion, Letticia’s hand in marriage as the price. Lord Strongarm comes to Earth to seal the treaty and claim his bride, but Letticia is less than enamored with the idea of marrying Strongarm, and sets about plotting Jezekiah’s downfall to become the Earth’s Protector. In a captivating climax, not everything turns out as planned – for everybody.
‘Home World’ is a daunting and complex book, not something for the fainthearted. Bonnie Milani weaves an intricate plot sprinkled with interlinking webs that demands patience and perseverance from the reader. The love triangle between Jezekiah, Keiko Yakamoto and Strongarm compels the reader to turn the next page. Letticia’s manipulation of the planetary NetMind is fun to follow, as is her growing paranoia and desire for power. ‘Home World’ will reward the patient reader, but some will find the tangled family politics hard to cope with.
‘Home World’ is a daunting and complex book, not something for the fainthearted. Bonnie Milani weaves an intricate plot sprinkled with interlinking webs that demands patience and perseverance from the reader. The love triangle between Jezekiah, Keiko Yakamoto and Strongarm compels the reader to turn the next page. Letticia’s manipulation of the planetary NetMind is fun to follow, as is her growing paranoia and desire for power. ‘Home World’ will reward the patient reader, but some will find the tangled family politics hard to cope with.
November 25, 2015
I honestly loved this book. The characters were original and stuck in my head and so did their situations. This was a very original sci-fi novel and one that I plan on having people read. But I cannot say enough about the characters. They were truly amazing -- especially with their intricate backstories and crazy family members. Well done, Bonnie Milani!
October 16, 2013
Home World is a wonderful work of scifi. It was one of the best books I've read this year. It grabbed me and pulled me in. I read the bulk of it on two four-hour airplane flights, ignoring the in-flight movie, then put in a late night (early morning) to finish it. I believe this is the author’s first published novel, but it reads as if she is a far more experienced and established author.
I am rather picky about my scifi. Too many authors, in my opinion, use scifi as a carte blanche not to think things through, not to make sure there is a logic and realism to their universe. Scifi or fantasy, I want the same degree of thought and logic as in an historical fiction. In this, the author does not disappoint. Everything worked seamlessly and logically. There were none of the “that doesn’t make sense moments” that abound in other works.
As a wordsmith, the author is skilled. Despite the differences in what has happened to earth, I could still see, feel, and smell the islands as I read. I felt like I was looking at some old photos of cities, but in reverse. Oahu was still there in all its glory, it was just many of the trappings had changed.
Characterization was excellent with one exception, which I will address later. The main three protagonists were pretty clear, but there was more grey with most of the rest of the characters. No one was all good or all bad, which is a better reflection of the human condition.
One aspect that I liked was that the character of Strongarm. Although he has perhaps drifted further from the traditional human biology than most of the characters, he was perhaps the most “human” of anyone.
This was an exciting story with good action and no lulls. Scenes of violence were well written and with reasonable outcomes.
Overall, I really liked this book. The one issue I had was with Letticia, one of the main characters in the book. I realize that the author intended her to be irrational, but even irrational people can act in a rational manner, especially when their very survival depends on it. In my opinion, Letticia was just a little too far off in lala land.
This is not just an extremely good first novel by an author, it is an extremely good novel period. I enjoyed it and give it my highest recommendation.
I am rather picky about my scifi. Too many authors, in my opinion, use scifi as a carte blanche not to think things through, not to make sure there is a logic and realism to their universe. Scifi or fantasy, I want the same degree of thought and logic as in an historical fiction. In this, the author does not disappoint. Everything worked seamlessly and logically. There were none of the “that doesn’t make sense moments” that abound in other works.
As a wordsmith, the author is skilled. Despite the differences in what has happened to earth, I could still see, feel, and smell the islands as I read. I felt like I was looking at some old photos of cities, but in reverse. Oahu was still there in all its glory, it was just many of the trappings had changed.
Characterization was excellent with one exception, which I will address later. The main three protagonists were pretty clear, but there was more grey with most of the rest of the characters. No one was all good or all bad, which is a better reflection of the human condition.
One aspect that I liked was that the character of Strongarm. Although he has perhaps drifted further from the traditional human biology than most of the characters, he was perhaps the most “human” of anyone.
This was an exciting story with good action and no lulls. Scenes of violence were well written and with reasonable outcomes.
Overall, I really liked this book. The one issue I had was with Letticia, one of the main characters in the book. I realize that the author intended her to be irrational, but even irrational people can act in a rational manner, especially when their very survival depends on it. In my opinion, Letticia was just a little too far off in lala land.
This is not just an extremely good first novel by an author, it is an extremely good novel period. I enjoyed it and give it my highest recommendation.
October 28, 2015
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Publisher: Promontory
Publishing Date: October 2015
ISBN: 9781927559239
Genre: SciFi
Rating: 3.6/5
Publisher Description: Centuries of ruinous war have left Earth little more than a dusty tourist world within the star-flung Commonwealth she founded. Now, amid the ruins of a post-apocalyptic Hawaii, Jezekiah Van Buren has found a way to restore Earth – Home World to the other worlds of the Commonwealth – to her lost glory.
Review: This was a long novel, which is a good thing in our serialized culture. Jezekiah is next in line for the protectorship of Earth and machinates an alliance with a race of powerful lycans. He only has to get his crazy, murderous sister to marry the head Lycan in order to seal the deal.
The character development is good as the novel is long, so there is plenty of movement to accommodate even the bit players. Letticia is a wonderfully funny, crazy and scarey character whom is constantly seeking to kill Jezekiah in order to be next in line. Some of the characters didn’t ring true, or fell a little flat due to an exorbitant amount of focus, for little return. For instance, Mote, aka Keiko Yakamoto is super speshul. Grandfather Ho seeks to use her, Jezekiah and the Lycan want to bang her, the Security chief has a daddy complex for her, General Yakamoto lends her grief and Letticia wants to kill her.
The world building is pretty good, considering that the story line is set entirely on Earth. There is no alien planet starhopping or bizarre aliens to contend with, just genetically enhanced humans made for diverse environments.
A very good read that could have used a dose of adventure to limit the emotive interactions.
Publisher: Promontory
Publishing Date: October 2015
ISBN: 9781927559239
Genre: SciFi
Rating: 3.6/5
Publisher Description: Centuries of ruinous war have left Earth little more than a dusty tourist world within the star-flung Commonwealth she founded. Now, amid the ruins of a post-apocalyptic Hawaii, Jezekiah Van Buren has found a way to restore Earth – Home World to the other worlds of the Commonwealth – to her lost glory.
Review: This was a long novel, which is a good thing in our serialized culture. Jezekiah is next in line for the protectorship of Earth and machinates an alliance with a race of powerful lycans. He only has to get his crazy, murderous sister to marry the head Lycan in order to seal the deal.
The character development is good as the novel is long, so there is plenty of movement to accommodate even the bit players. Letticia is a wonderfully funny, crazy and scarey character whom is constantly seeking to kill Jezekiah in order to be next in line. Some of the characters didn’t ring true, or fell a little flat due to an exorbitant amount of focus, for little return. For instance, Mote, aka Keiko Yakamoto is super speshul. Grandfather Ho seeks to use her, Jezekiah and the Lycan want to bang her, the Security chief has a daddy complex for her, General Yakamoto lends her grief and Letticia wants to kill her.
The world building is pretty good, considering that the story line is set entirely on Earth. There is no alien planet starhopping or bizarre aliens to contend with, just genetically enhanced humans made for diverse environments.
A very good read that could have used a dose of adventure to limit the emotive interactions.
May 13, 2019
I had read and reviewed the third installment by Ms. Milani entitled Monkey’s Luck which I had thoroughly enjoyed. I looked forward to reading this Prize-winning book that began right in the middle of an action scene. I was fascinated by a future world in which all humanoid species were genetically engineered and racially segregated. Natural humans were a racial and type minority called “monkeys”. I had a little trouble visualizing Letitia and wanted to understand her type as well as Mother’s type, but no trouble picturing the Lupans, Strongarm and Kaitan. Slowly as I continued reading, the story came together a little more.
We have Jezekiah a reluctant ruler designate who wants to marry Keiko. Keiko wants to prove herself as a Samurai and uncover the truth of her own identity and bloodline which has been kept from her. Meanwhile Strongarm, the head Lupan (genetically altered wolf-man) meets her and decides he would like to marry her instead of going forth with a treaty marriage to Jezekiah’s spidery sister Letticia – who doesn’t want to marry him and wants to kill everyone.
The only problem I encountered early on was that of figuring out who the characters were and what they looked like. Their personalities were well developed and the world of futuristic dystopian Earth with a capital in the Hawaii, was a wonderful touch.
I like stories like this with palace intrigue and romantic conflict. My only concern was a confusing start. It’s a long read, but very rewarding and worthwhile.
We have Jezekiah a reluctant ruler designate who wants to marry Keiko. Keiko wants to prove herself as a Samurai and uncover the truth of her own identity and bloodline which has been kept from her. Meanwhile Strongarm, the head Lupan (genetically altered wolf-man) meets her and decides he would like to marry her instead of going forth with a treaty marriage to Jezekiah’s spidery sister Letticia – who doesn’t want to marry him and wants to kill everyone.
The only problem I encountered early on was that of figuring out who the characters were and what they looked like. Their personalities were well developed and the world of futuristic dystopian Earth with a capital in the Hawaii, was a wonderful touch.
I like stories like this with palace intrigue and romantic conflict. My only concern was a confusing start. It’s a long read, but very rewarding and worthwhile.
January 16, 2018
A sci-fi story filled with treachery, hatred and deceit a most interesting tale, the characters are well written and the storyline is a very interesting one. The intrigue is captivating and interesting, a must-read for the space adventurers.
October 15, 2014
Disclaimer: the author sent me this book in exchange for an honest review
"Home World" is an exotic story filled with futuristic techno-marvels, a little fantasy, and a lot of the age-old human foibles that a hundred thousand years of evolution and a few centuries post-Enlightenment just haven't weeded out of us.
Letticia, daughter and sister, is one of the Van Burens who rule the new earth (which is in a state of dystopia when the story opens) and all the earth's various "satellite" planets which house humanity. The human race has been genetically engineered into various species with differing skills and dialects. Letticia is not the protagonist, but she stands out for the intriguing way she's plugged her mind into a computer grid, some kind of MindScape, MindNet, and she manages to be omniscient, omnipresent and (she's hoping) omnipotent. Trouble is, she can't be be all-powerful when her brother wears the Ring that makes him heir to the kingdom, ruler of Earth.
The story opens with Jezekia flying over the ruins of Hawaii, his former home, but he dreads the landing. He doesn't want The Ring and all the responsibilities that go with it. He doesn't want to face his mother and all her duties for him, nor his sister, who has set an assassin after him. The "Pretty Boy" hired to pose as Jezekiah stepping off that plane might face a hail of bullets. Or not. Jezekiah poses as a commoner. Does it work? Let's just say nothing goes according to plan, in life, or in fiction.
The most intriguing prospect for Letticia is not ruling the world, but hearing out her brother on his insane idea of striking a truce with earth's ruling class, the Lupans, by marrying off Letticia to their leader, Strongarm. The marriage would offer her safety, which could come in handy at a time when Lettitia's own mother is plotting her execution. Jezekiah urges her to consider the Lupan, whom Lettitica sneeringly dismisses as a dog (put Luna, moon, dog, and man together, and what do you get?) -"One of the deadliest warriors for your own personal protection...A man who will belong to you and you alone, heart and soul, always and forever," Jezekiah promise. A man "who'll love you, not for your title or not what you can do for him."
Letticia should listen to her brother.
To avoid plot spoilers, I'll say as little as possible about Mother. Oh, and the Hawaiian assassin girl. She's sure to turn up in a sequel. There has to be a sequel. The final scene is much too poignant otherwise.
In all, this is an engaging story. A little wordy for my liking, with more dialect spelled out than I care to read. At times the dialogue struck me as a little last-century (Letticia's in particular). She came across as a spoiled brat, and didn't impress me as sounding as intelligent as she really is if she could plug into MindNet the way she did.
I believe another round of trimming and tightening would help. Still, a lot happens to a lot of interesting people, and this is a novel fans of several different genres can appreciate.
"Home World" is an exotic story filled with futuristic techno-marvels, a little fantasy, and a lot of the age-old human foibles that a hundred thousand years of evolution and a few centuries post-Enlightenment just haven't weeded out of us.
Letticia, daughter and sister, is one of the Van Burens who rule the new earth (which is in a state of dystopia when the story opens) and all the earth's various "satellite" planets which house humanity. The human race has been genetically engineered into various species with differing skills and dialects. Letticia is not the protagonist, but she stands out for the intriguing way she's plugged her mind into a computer grid, some kind of MindScape, MindNet, and she manages to be omniscient, omnipresent and (she's hoping) omnipotent. Trouble is, she can't be be all-powerful when her brother wears the Ring that makes him heir to the kingdom, ruler of Earth.
The story opens with Jezekia flying over the ruins of Hawaii, his former home, but he dreads the landing. He doesn't want The Ring and all the responsibilities that go with it. He doesn't want to face his mother and all her duties for him, nor his sister, who has set an assassin after him. The "Pretty Boy" hired to pose as Jezekiah stepping off that plane might face a hail of bullets. Or not. Jezekiah poses as a commoner. Does it work? Let's just say nothing goes according to plan, in life, or in fiction.
The most intriguing prospect for Letticia is not ruling the world, but hearing out her brother on his insane idea of striking a truce with earth's ruling class, the Lupans, by marrying off Letticia to their leader, Strongarm. The marriage would offer her safety, which could come in handy at a time when Lettitia's own mother is plotting her execution. Jezekiah urges her to consider the Lupan, whom Lettitica sneeringly dismisses as a dog (put Luna, moon, dog, and man together, and what do you get?) -"One of the deadliest warriors for your own personal protection...A man who will belong to you and you alone, heart and soul, always and forever," Jezekiah promise. A man "who'll love you, not for your title or not what you can do for him."
Letticia should listen to her brother.
To avoid plot spoilers, I'll say as little as possible about Mother. Oh, and the Hawaiian assassin girl. She's sure to turn up in a sequel. There has to be a sequel. The final scene is much too poignant otherwise.
In all, this is an engaging story. A little wordy for my liking, with more dialect spelled out than I care to read. At times the dialogue struck me as a little last-century (Letticia's in particular). She came across as a spoiled brat, and didn't impress me as sounding as intelligent as she really is if she could plug into MindNet the way she did.
I believe another round of trimming and tightening would help. Still, a lot happens to a lot of interesting people, and this is a novel fans of several different genres can appreciate.
November 5, 2013
Book Review: Home World by Bonnie Milani
"Unpredictable Yet Heartwarming"
By Crystal J. Casavant-Otto
Home World is the first novel by up and coming author Bonnie Milani. Home World is set in post-apocalyptic Hawaii and the goal is to restore Earth to her old glory something more than just a tourist stop. The hero of the story must overcome what most of us consider the greatest odds – he must turn an enemy into an ally. This alliance will dually serve Jezekiah by restoring Earth but will also release Jezekiah from his obligation to become Earth’s next ruler.
Jezekiah longs to be free so he can marry as he wishes and make Keiko Yakamoto his wife. Sounds like a simple science fiction love story, right? It might be…if not for Jezekiah’s sister and the assassin she has hired to take her brother’s life. There are many twists and turns in Home World and Milani navigates them expertly with her unique writing style.
One of the great things about this book is how Milani manages to portray each character in such a convincing fashion. Home World sparked my interest from the beginning and was an enjoyable read. I found myself cheering for Jezekiah and I was quite moved by the relationships between the different characters. Milani’s writing is refreshing with an unpredictable plot. This combination heightened the level of enjoyment of the read. Unpredictable yet heartwarming would be a good way to describe the way I feel about the book overall. Truth be told I generally shy away from science fiction but Home World is enough of a love story that I can say I truly enjoyed the read!
I enjoyed the dialogue between characters as much as the description of those characters. For example, Octavian’s was said to be fluttering graceful fingers at the controls – this painted a very clear picture to me. Dialogue such as “She is hurt. Think thee she could survive thy loving now?” Everything about Home World was very well done. I hope this is not the first and last book by Milani. She is a talented writer and I look forward to reading more of her works.
"Unpredictable Yet Heartwarming"
By Crystal J. Casavant-Otto
Home World is the first novel by up and coming author Bonnie Milani. Home World is set in post-apocalyptic Hawaii and the goal is to restore Earth to her old glory something more than just a tourist stop. The hero of the story must overcome what most of us consider the greatest odds – he must turn an enemy into an ally. This alliance will dually serve Jezekiah by restoring Earth but will also release Jezekiah from his obligation to become Earth’s next ruler.
Jezekiah longs to be free so he can marry as he wishes and make Keiko Yakamoto his wife. Sounds like a simple science fiction love story, right? It might be…if not for Jezekiah’s sister and the assassin she has hired to take her brother’s life. There are many twists and turns in Home World and Milani navigates them expertly with her unique writing style.
One of the great things about this book is how Milani manages to portray each character in such a convincing fashion. Home World sparked my interest from the beginning and was an enjoyable read. I found myself cheering for Jezekiah and I was quite moved by the relationships between the different characters. Milani’s writing is refreshing with an unpredictable plot. This combination heightened the level of enjoyment of the read. Unpredictable yet heartwarming would be a good way to describe the way I feel about the book overall. Truth be told I generally shy away from science fiction but Home World is enough of a love story that I can say I truly enjoyed the read!
I enjoyed the dialogue between characters as much as the description of those characters. For example, Octavian’s was said to be fluttering graceful fingers at the controls – this painted a very clear picture to me. Dialogue such as “She is hurt. Think thee she could survive thy loving now?” Everything about Home World was very well done. I hope this is not the first and last book by Milani. She is a talented writer and I look forward to reading more of her works.
March 31, 2014
I received a free ARC to read and review.
This is a rather madcap, zany adventure. There’s a lot of political drama, a little romance, and some of the best realized Hawaiin pidgin-speak that I’ve ever found in writing. Bonnie’s characters are all very distinct and fleshed out, and I think her characters are what makes the book work. You feel for every person in the book, even the bad guy. (one of those “Love to hate ‘em”). Even though I hoped for a somewhat different ending, I think Ms. Milani did a good job in following through with where the story needed to go.
I loved Keiko in particular. This could be a story just about her, and I’d be happy. The book in general is about political machinations to keep the home world–planet Earth–safe from the designs of many other planets and governments. There are illicit drug deals, threats of war, an assassin after Earth’s ruling family heir, and a bratty woman’s designs to control everything that takes place in psyberspace. There’s also a very interesting dog-species, which Ms. Milani takes pains to flesh out and make real.
I had some trouble following the action now and then, particularly when inside the Net. There are terms and descriptions that took me a while to figure out, like the major domos and how the net ‘spiders’ work, creeping around apparently inside people’s heads. But the characters keep things coherent, and move the story along. I found this an enjoyable read. My advice to readers is to just hold on, and set aside your expectations. There’s probably going to be a detour from what you thought was happening.
Just hang on for the ride.
This is a rather madcap, zany adventure. There’s a lot of political drama, a little romance, and some of the best realized Hawaiin pidgin-speak that I’ve ever found in writing. Bonnie’s characters are all very distinct and fleshed out, and I think her characters are what makes the book work. You feel for every person in the book, even the bad guy. (one of those “Love to hate ‘em”). Even though I hoped for a somewhat different ending, I think Ms. Milani did a good job in following through with where the story needed to go.
I loved Keiko in particular. This could be a story just about her, and I’d be happy. The book in general is about political machinations to keep the home world–planet Earth–safe from the designs of many other planets and governments. There are illicit drug deals, threats of war, an assassin after Earth’s ruling family heir, and a bratty woman’s designs to control everything that takes place in psyberspace. There’s also a very interesting dog-species, which Ms. Milani takes pains to flesh out and make real.
I had some trouble following the action now and then, particularly when inside the Net. There are terms and descriptions that took me a while to figure out, like the major domos and how the net ‘spiders’ work, creeping around apparently inside people’s heads. But the characters keep things coherent, and move the story along. I found this an enjoyable read. My advice to readers is to just hold on, and set aside your expectations. There’s probably going to be a detour from what you thought was happening.
Just hang on for the ride.
December 8, 2014
What a great story!
There were multiple storylines in this book, but all were good and totally interesting. The first was Jezekiah and his scheme to get out of his political obligation while still forwarding Earth's interests. He's worked hard and made some major sacrifices to find a way out for himself. It's amazing to see just how wrong things go for him.
Then there is Strongarm. He's risked everything to give his people a chance to see their Home World. I was rooting for this character from the beginning. He, too, is bound by his political obligations and tries to do what's right. The feline character of his brother-in-law is also extremely interesting. I would love to see more about his character in a subsequent book.
It seems that everyone is working against these two as they try to do what's right, and caught in the middle is their love interest. Yes, they're both in love with the same woman. This poor girl is put through the wringer and is still standing when it's all said and done, which makes her worthy of all the attention.
Finally, there's the unlikely villain, who gets more and more vile and demented as the story progresses.
The action and suspense are wonderful in this story, as is the writing style. I do hope the author has a sequel in the works. I, for one, was so sad when I came to the end of the book. I definitely want more!
There were multiple storylines in this book, but all were good and totally interesting. The first was Jezekiah and his scheme to get out of his political obligation while still forwarding Earth's interests. He's worked hard and made some major sacrifices to find a way out for himself. It's amazing to see just how wrong things go for him.
Then there is Strongarm. He's risked everything to give his people a chance to see their Home World. I was rooting for this character from the beginning. He, too, is bound by his political obligations and tries to do what's right. The feline character of his brother-in-law is also extremely interesting. I would love to see more about his character in a subsequent book.
It seems that everyone is working against these two as they try to do what's right, and caught in the middle is their love interest. Yes, they're both in love with the same woman. This poor girl is put through the wringer and is still standing when it's all said and done, which makes her worthy of all the attention.
Finally, there's the unlikely villain, who gets more and more vile and demented as the story progresses.
The action and suspense are wonderful in this story, as is the writing style. I do hope the author has a sequel in the works. I, for one, was so sad when I came to the end of the book. I definitely want more!
December 15, 2014
I love books that include romance in Hawaii, but who knew I'd find this pleasure in a post-apocalyptic sci-fi? And what a tale it is - rich in scope with characters that leap off the page and a story with titanic consequences. Oh, and nasty, family political in-fighting. Intrigue, heroes, love triangles and Waikiki - really, what more could a girl ask for in a book?
June 10, 2016
A beautifully written, epic SF set in post-apocalyptic Hawaii. Ms. Milani expertly weaves high politics with intimate relationships, grand space opera with realistic, complex characters. The book is ambitious, even bold, and I enjoyed every page. Definitely a science fiction author to watch!
June 30, 2019
I first learned about Bonnie Milani through the Sci-Fi Roundtable, an online group frequented by authors who exchange tips and guidance about how to improve their craft. One of the best things about hanging with writer types is that you discover new and interesting books based on how their creators represent themselves. “Buy my book!” Um, no thanks. “Hey, you know what’s super cool? Sharks with laser beams!” Hmm, I’m listening.
Bonnie is definitely the latter. She brings a certain amount of giddiness and excitement to the ideas she writes about. As the old saying goes, “I want to be pulled, not pushed.” Bonnie was a definite pull, so I wanted to delve into her works. Home World was the most logical starting point, and thus my journey began. (The book also won the 2016 International Evvy Award in Science Fiction, so that was a nice launching point.)
Be warned, this story is dense. I agree with one reviewer’s assessment in that it’s like Game of Thrones in space. Lots of characters, lots of interwoven plot lines, lots of genetically modified creatures screwing over other genetically modified creatures. My only critique of the story would be that it took a while to make sense of. That’s not to say that the narrative wasn’t interesting. Far from it. It just took several chapters to start connecting the dots. But after several “ooooh, so that’s why they did that” realizations, I was off to the races.
Home World is the story of Jezekiah Van Buren, a prince who returns to Earth to broker a deal with the Lupans, an enemy faction of polymorphs. A lasting peace would restore the post-apocalyptic planet to its previous glory, but would also thrust Jezekiah into a ruling position, something that he does not covet in the least. His only real desire is to pursue the woman he loves, a seasoned warrior named Keiko. But alas, his xenophobic sister will stop at nothing to throw a flaming wrench into every possible predicament.
And so begins a complex journey full of romance, diplomacy, and unflinching brutality. That last one is something I want to highlight. More often times than not, authors will pull their punches in order to appeal to the widest possible range of readers. In my opinion, this devalues the impact and can cheapen an otherwise good story. I do not enjoy reading books that are padded to be unoffensive. I would much rather experience realism that I can react to with the appropriate emotions. Home World has several jaw-dropping and mouth-covering scenes that make your stomach churn. And much to Milani’s credit, they make sense to the plot without being unduly shocking.
Needless to say, I highly recommend this book. If you are into fluffy ragtag adventures, then this read is probably not for you. But if you appreciate realistic depictions of interpersonal conflicts, complete with the brutality and bigotry that one would expect from warring factions, then you will most certainly enjoy Home World.
Bonnie is definitely the latter. She brings a certain amount of giddiness and excitement to the ideas she writes about. As the old saying goes, “I want to be pulled, not pushed.” Bonnie was a definite pull, so I wanted to delve into her works. Home World was the most logical starting point, and thus my journey began. (The book also won the 2016 International Evvy Award in Science Fiction, so that was a nice launching point.)
Be warned, this story is dense. I agree with one reviewer’s assessment in that it’s like Game of Thrones in space. Lots of characters, lots of interwoven plot lines, lots of genetically modified creatures screwing over other genetically modified creatures. My only critique of the story would be that it took a while to make sense of. That’s not to say that the narrative wasn’t interesting. Far from it. It just took several chapters to start connecting the dots. But after several “ooooh, so that’s why they did that” realizations, I was off to the races.
Home World is the story of Jezekiah Van Buren, a prince who returns to Earth to broker a deal with the Lupans, an enemy faction of polymorphs. A lasting peace would restore the post-apocalyptic planet to its previous glory, but would also thrust Jezekiah into a ruling position, something that he does not covet in the least. His only real desire is to pursue the woman he loves, a seasoned warrior named Keiko. But alas, his xenophobic sister will stop at nothing to throw a flaming wrench into every possible predicament.
And so begins a complex journey full of romance, diplomacy, and unflinching brutality. That last one is something I want to highlight. More often times than not, authors will pull their punches in order to appeal to the widest possible range of readers. In my opinion, this devalues the impact and can cheapen an otherwise good story. I do not enjoy reading books that are padded to be unoffensive. I would much rather experience realism that I can react to with the appropriate emotions. Home World has several jaw-dropping and mouth-covering scenes that make your stomach churn. And much to Milani’s credit, they make sense to the plot without being unduly shocking.
Needless to say, I highly recommend this book. If you are into fluffy ragtag adventures, then this read is probably not for you. But if you appreciate realistic depictions of interpersonal conflicts, complete with the brutality and bigotry that one would expect from warring factions, then you will most certainly enjoy Home World.
February 14, 2019
Which line stood out from all the others in the book?
“Listen, you two.” Beneath Jezekiah’s fingers, Kip’s shoulders tightened. “Mote may be a natural, but that don’t make her a joy toy. That child is not on the make. Not for nobody.”
General Summary for Context:
“Listen, you two.” Beneath Jezekiah’s fingers, Kip’s shoulders tightened. “Mote may be a natural, but that don’t make her a joy toy. That child is not on the make. Not for nobody.”
General Summary for Context:
After reaching out into the stars, man still considers Earth to be home. Jezekiah Van Buren, the heir to the title of ‘Ruler of Earth,’ has a plan to rid himself of the burden and pressure of it and allow him to live out the rest of his life in peace and normality. However, to achieve this ideal, he has to put into place a plan that will rid him and others of this burden, a plan that will bring the humans and the Lupans together in peace.
Concise Review:
Home World, by Bonnie Milani, is a masterfully told tale. It is the story of a man predestined to rule and his fight to break free from a future he has no say in. As the novel begins we meet Jezekiah, his character comes across as selfish, conniving and manipulative, but as the story moved on that image faded and in its place was a man who simply wanted to live his life how he wanted, with whom he wanted, and without the burden of ruling.
The main characters in this book were well developed, each with their little quirks that allowed the reader to connect with them, both the good and the bad. The author had crafted such intricate and personable characters that it was hard not to feel some sort of connection to them, or to relate to them in some way.
Descriptions of the environment and locations were beautifully descriptive, allowing the reader to paint the scenes in their mind’s eye, places that even in the future were little islands of paradise and that even in their beauty, they could be deadly.
The narrative, action, and dialog was well balanced and allowed for the steady paced well-crafted story. All this added together allowed me, as the reader, to feel fully immersed in the story.
General thoughts:
Every other science fiction novel I have read has been set either out in deep space or on some lonely godforsaken planet in some remote corner of some distant universe that no one has heard of. It was refreshing to see an author bring that sort of adventure, danger, exoticness and futuristic reality to our own world and sew it so neatly together.
I really enjoyed this book and would highly recommend it to lovers of science fiction and those who want to step away from reality into a sometimes frightening and dangerous world of the future.
October 2, 2017
This book had so much potential- the world-building was amazing, the female characters were quite formidable (at the start), and the premise seemed like it had promise. However, the execution left much to be desired.
The female characters were simply wasted. Keiko could have had a much better storyline, instead of being reduced to just a love interest. Letticia was so painful to read. I wanted to stop reading so many times because I couldn't take any more of her. She definitely needed help.
As for the male characters, Jezekiah, was, in my opinion, a terribly selfish person. I did like the feline brother-in-law, though.
The plot was a little confusing to follow, at first, but it does get easier. And, as mentioned, the post apocalyptic world was wonderful. I don't think I've read a sci-fi book based in Hawaii before. :)
I received this book from NetGalley for my honest review.
The female characters were simply wasted. Keiko could have had a much better storyline, instead of being reduced to just a love interest. Letticia was so painful to read. I wanted to stop reading so many times because I couldn't take any more of her. She definitely needed help.
As for the male characters, Jezekiah, was, in my opinion, a terribly selfish person. I did like the feline brother-in-law, though.
The plot was a little confusing to follow, at first, but it does get easier. And, as mentioned, the post apocalyptic world was wonderful. I don't think I've read a sci-fi book based in Hawaii before. :)
I received this book from NetGalley for my honest review.
April 22, 2019
I'm writing this review fairly long after the fact, so take it with a pinch of salt. The book is essentially a localized soap opera, complete with a love triangle, sparring siblings, and an empire with multiple factions. It reminds me a little of Kevin J. Anderson's Saga of Seven Suns, though not quite as epic a scale. (Thankfully; sometimes, a self-contained novel is preferable to a seven book series.) The melodrama got to be a bit much for me at points, but once I got into it, it went fairly smoothly. I will say that I have a tendency, when reading a book with multiple POVs, to pick a favorite, and focus on their rise and fall in fortune. And boy, did I pick the wrong horse in this race.
January 4, 2016
Bookworm Speaks!
Home World
by Bonnie Milani
Acquired: Provided for free through Word Slinger Publicity in exchange for an honest review
Series: None
Paperback: 496 pages
Publisher: New Leaf Distributing Co Inc
Language: English
****
The Story: On a shattered Waikiki two princes risk humanity's future for Keiko Yakamoto's love. Who will she choose - or kill?
Centuries of ruinous war have left Earth little more than a dusty tourist world within the star-flung Commonwealth she founded. Now, amid the ruins of a post-apocalyptic Hawaii, Jezekiah Van Buren has found a way to restore Earth - Home World to the other worlds of the Commonwealth - to her lost glory.
The most ingenious prince even the genetically-enhanced, Great Family Van Buren has ever produced, Jezekiah has achieved the impossible: a treaty with the human polymorphs called Lupans, that will convert these ancient enemies to Earth's most powerful allies. The treaty will not only make Earth rich again, but it will enable Jezekiah to escape the Ring that marks him as Earth's next ruler. Then he'll be free: free to create his own future, and free to marry Keiko Yakamoto, the warrior-trained woman he loves.
Assuming he can convince his xenophobic sister to accept the Lupan's alpha warlord in marriage before the assassin she's put on his tail succeeds in killing him.
Assuming he can thwart another deadly uprising by the interstellar criminal organization called Ho Tong. And before his ruling relatives on competing worlds manage to execute him for treason.
Jezekiah manages to stay one step ahead of his foes, until his Lupan warlord-partner reaches Earth. And these two most powerful men suddenly find themselves in love with the same woman. A woman who just may be the most deadly assassin of them all.
The Review: Lets start off with the factor that initially drew Bookworm to this book: the setting. A post apocalyptic Hawaii is extremely fascinating and a wonderfully original setting. It seems like every other story takes place in New York City or Generic Midwest City USA. Hawaii is a great location. Since its such a tourist trap, people tend to forget that Hawaii is home to a rich culture and compelling history.
The history behind the Hawaii in this story is compelling as well. No need to retread the summary but it is a world filled with stories about the distant future of Humanity. No word if alien life exists in this universe yet.
Unfortunately, a cool backstory does not always translate into a good story. Cool ideas are a dime a dozen in this line of work.
If what was wrong with this story was to be summed up in one word, it would be: confusing.
There is a ton of head hopping in this book, with every character of any significance gets their own thoughts put onto the page. This would be okay if every character got a clear definition between passages but those are lacking here. The characters we see are also lacking. They aren’t bad characters but they feel very two dimensional at times.
There are times when their stories become compelling especially near the ending but more on that later, but for most of the book they almost feel interchangeable. If the reader has to constantly remind his or herself which character is which, there is a problem with the text.
It’s like the whole book needs an index in order to keep all of the names and organizations straight…and it needs to be checked constantly. If that is the case, perhaps a less merciful editor was needed.
In fact, Yes. One more rewrite and editing session would have probably made this story great but Bookworm feels like the author had a few too many ideas and tried to put them all into the story.
Honestly, the story about powerful familial dynasties, competing heirs, marriages of political acumen, all with a science fiction bent is good, but it has been done a lot across a wide variety of media. It feels like it is doing the same thing all over again. The author tries to through in a twist behind the motivation near the end but by then Bookworm was so confused that it was lost among all the other plot threads. Not to mention, that it in of itself was not that original. This story has been done and unlike other stories, it is hard to put a new bent on squabbling family members and rival corporations.
The book’s saving grace is ultimately the last third of the text, where all of the plot threads start to come to a head and several new twists are introduced. Bookworm did find himself eagerly turning the pages to see the end of the whole scenario. No spoilers, but it was a very memorable ending that does leave an impression.
Unfortunately, this is a scenario where one part is done so well that it makes the problems with the other parts more apparent. The reason, the final third works so well is that the chaff from the rest of the book has fallen away. The story has boiled down to three or four characters and the politicking has finally borne fruit as the crisis deepens. All of the negatives from the previous chapters have been toned down and a much better plot line emerges.
Final Verdict: Home World is a imaginative and compelling story that ultimately falls short in its execution.
Three out of Five Stars
thecultureworm.blogspot.com
Home World
by Bonnie Milani
Acquired: Provided for free through Word Slinger Publicity in exchange for an honest review
Series: None
Paperback: 496 pages
Publisher: New Leaf Distributing Co Inc
Language: English
****
The Story: On a shattered Waikiki two princes risk humanity's future for Keiko Yakamoto's love. Who will she choose - or kill?
Centuries of ruinous war have left Earth little more than a dusty tourist world within the star-flung Commonwealth she founded. Now, amid the ruins of a post-apocalyptic Hawaii, Jezekiah Van Buren has found a way to restore Earth - Home World to the other worlds of the Commonwealth - to her lost glory.
The most ingenious prince even the genetically-enhanced, Great Family Van Buren has ever produced, Jezekiah has achieved the impossible: a treaty with the human polymorphs called Lupans, that will convert these ancient enemies to Earth's most powerful allies. The treaty will not only make Earth rich again, but it will enable Jezekiah to escape the Ring that marks him as Earth's next ruler. Then he'll be free: free to create his own future, and free to marry Keiko Yakamoto, the warrior-trained woman he loves.
Assuming he can convince his xenophobic sister to accept the Lupan's alpha warlord in marriage before the assassin she's put on his tail succeeds in killing him.
Assuming he can thwart another deadly uprising by the interstellar criminal organization called Ho Tong. And before his ruling relatives on competing worlds manage to execute him for treason.
Jezekiah manages to stay one step ahead of his foes, until his Lupan warlord-partner reaches Earth. And these two most powerful men suddenly find themselves in love with the same woman. A woman who just may be the most deadly assassin of them all.
The Review: Lets start off with the factor that initially drew Bookworm to this book: the setting. A post apocalyptic Hawaii is extremely fascinating and a wonderfully original setting. It seems like every other story takes place in New York City or Generic Midwest City USA. Hawaii is a great location. Since its such a tourist trap, people tend to forget that Hawaii is home to a rich culture and compelling history.
The history behind the Hawaii in this story is compelling as well. No need to retread the summary but it is a world filled with stories about the distant future of Humanity. No word if alien life exists in this universe yet.
Unfortunately, a cool backstory does not always translate into a good story. Cool ideas are a dime a dozen in this line of work.
If what was wrong with this story was to be summed up in one word, it would be: confusing.
There is a ton of head hopping in this book, with every character of any significance gets their own thoughts put onto the page. This would be okay if every character got a clear definition between passages but those are lacking here. The characters we see are also lacking. They aren’t bad characters but they feel very two dimensional at times.
There are times when their stories become compelling especially near the ending but more on that later, but for most of the book they almost feel interchangeable. If the reader has to constantly remind his or herself which character is which, there is a problem with the text.
It’s like the whole book needs an index in order to keep all of the names and organizations straight…and it needs to be checked constantly. If that is the case, perhaps a less merciful editor was needed.
In fact, Yes. One more rewrite and editing session would have probably made this story great but Bookworm feels like the author had a few too many ideas and tried to put them all into the story.
Honestly, the story about powerful familial dynasties, competing heirs, marriages of political acumen, all with a science fiction bent is good, but it has been done a lot across a wide variety of media. It feels like it is doing the same thing all over again. The author tries to through in a twist behind the motivation near the end but by then Bookworm was so confused that it was lost among all the other plot threads. Not to mention, that it in of itself was not that original. This story has been done and unlike other stories, it is hard to put a new bent on squabbling family members and rival corporations.
The book’s saving grace is ultimately the last third of the text, where all of the plot threads start to come to a head and several new twists are introduced. Bookworm did find himself eagerly turning the pages to see the end of the whole scenario. No spoilers, but it was a very memorable ending that does leave an impression.
Unfortunately, this is a scenario where one part is done so well that it makes the problems with the other parts more apparent. The reason, the final third works so well is that the chaff from the rest of the book has fallen away. The story has boiled down to three or four characters and the politicking has finally borne fruit as the crisis deepens. All of the negatives from the previous chapters have been toned down and a much better plot line emerges.
Final Verdict: Home World is a imaginative and compelling story that ultimately falls short in its execution.
Three out of Five Stars
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September 16, 2017
An enjoyable science fiction story. I am glad I picked this one up. Bonnie Milani gives us a book that flows by and entertains. Recommended for the sci-fi and fantasy reader.
August 16, 2018
A wonderful imagining of our future.
I read Monkey’s Luck a couple of months back and one of the things that disappointed me was the lack of world building (I mentioned in that review, it is a short story based in Bonnie Milani’s Home World universe). Home World is the original idea and filled in all the blanks – I will be reading Monkey’s luck again having learnt more of Milani’s universe.
The book suffers from ‘too much of a good thing’, in that by the end I had the feeling that Milani could have written this as two, svelte books instead of one. The story at times slowed to a brisk jog against a beautiful backdrop, and what a beautiful backdrop! Thankfully most of the characters and ideas are fascinating and fantastical all at the same time.
Without an Alien presence Milani’s takes a more scientific approach to how humanity has taken to the stars in the form of gene-splicing, and it is done in such a way that she manages to weave werewolves snuggly into the story. In fact, this universe is so vivid and well thought out it could easily be transferred into a table-top RPG or mined for a series of films/television. It won’t be Star Wars or Star Trek either, because this has some seriously dark themes, including gang rape.
There are several editorial issues, but not enough to bring the enjoyment to a stop. Some of the characters speak in colloquial tongues, but as I love Han and Chewie’s conversations I never had an issue with it, and you do get a fighting chance to understand what they are saying.
Pulling this all together, this book isn’t for anyone looking for an easy read. It’s long, but it is also complicated and thought provoking. This is what makes books stand up above the commuter novels you find in train stations. If you like meaty books, with convoluted political intrigue, then this is definitely worth reading.
LD
I read Monkey’s Luck a couple of months back and one of the things that disappointed me was the lack of world building (I mentioned in that review, it is a short story based in Bonnie Milani’s Home World universe). Home World is the original idea and filled in all the blanks – I will be reading Monkey’s luck again having learnt more of Milani’s universe.
The book suffers from ‘too much of a good thing’, in that by the end I had the feeling that Milani could have written this as two, svelte books instead of one. The story at times slowed to a brisk jog against a beautiful backdrop, and what a beautiful backdrop! Thankfully most of the characters and ideas are fascinating and fantastical all at the same time.
Without an Alien presence Milani’s takes a more scientific approach to how humanity has taken to the stars in the form of gene-splicing, and it is done in such a way that she manages to weave werewolves snuggly into the story. In fact, this universe is so vivid and well thought out it could easily be transferred into a table-top RPG or mined for a series of films/television. It won’t be Star Wars or Star Trek either, because this has some seriously dark themes, including gang rape.
There are several editorial issues, but not enough to bring the enjoyment to a stop. Some of the characters speak in colloquial tongues, but as I love Han and Chewie’s conversations I never had an issue with it, and you do get a fighting chance to understand what they are saying.
Pulling this all together, this book isn’t for anyone looking for an easy read. It’s long, but it is also complicated and thought provoking. This is what makes books stand up above the commuter novels you find in train stations. If you like meaty books, with convoluted political intrigue, then this is definitely worth reading.
LD
February 24, 2016
Once upon a time, there was a roleplaying game named Traveller. It offered science fiction in the classic style, with nobility and military veterans tackling adventures alongside ne'er-do-wells and outcasts. It offered a future brim-full of possibility, full of invention, inspired by the likes of Poul Anderson and Harry Harrison.
The opening of Bonnie Milani's Home World propelled me back to those days of playing Traveller. It oozed class and style, showing a world where technology transforms the everyday experience of the future citizens of Earth.
Class systems remain intact in this future - with the central character of Jezekiah being the future heir of the title of Protector of Home World. Earth itself has transformed in many ways, though, to the point where natural humans are the stuff of legend, most people being sorted into different Types from a scattering of cultures.
If the setting tips its hat towards the likes of Anderson, the plot is far more Machiavellian. Jezekiah is caught in the middle of a series of political shell games, as he tries to secure a treaty that will bring peace and stability to Home World. The heart of this deal is a marriage contract between his sister, the whining, selfish Letticia, whose days are spent burrowing into the cyber world of the Sync, and the human hybrid Strongarm, an honourable, lion-like Lupan warrior who, once bonded, bonds for life.
Woven into the tale are other characters - most notably Keiko, the would-be Samurai with an ancestry that binds her to the underworld of Earth, with whom Jezekiah finds himself falling in love.
The action that surrounds the politics can be brutal - this is a tale for adults, with strong language and horrifying actions on the parts of some of the protagonists. Those who find Game of Thrones too much at times should note that similar ground is trodden here. Also, while noting things that may put people off, there are one or two small editing errors to be found, the occasional an instead of a, for example - but really very minor problems only worth mentioning for the most stringent of eyes.
In the midst of all of this, there's some very clever writing going on. In particular, I was taken with the attention to language. The future world has assimilated all manner of dialects, and a pidgin English is spoken at times between those of separate cultures. This can make for awkward reading at times - but in a good way, because while you puzzle out what this form of broken speech or that idiolect involves, you are immersing yourself in this future landscape, the imperfections crystallising the world around you.
Beyond that, Milani also pays attention to non-verbal communication, with various characters having different means of observing the world around them. Keiko has her battle sense that alerts her to threats in her vicinity, Letticia is immersed in the Netmind of Sync with access to the myriad of options that cyberpunk-influenced world provides, the splendidly-named bodyguard Rudyard Kipling Marsden - Kip for short - is able to observe the moods of others around him through his heightened technology, while Jezekiah himself is often noted to be attuning the mood that he broadcasts as being different from that he feels inside. Meanwhile, the feral ancestry of Strongarm equips him with the ability to sniff out what others are feeling. Communication is key in this future world - more crucially, limiting your communication to avoid broadcasting one's real intentions is a matter of life and death in the world of political games that mark out the life - and possible death - of Home World.
It's a cracking read - and while I might not be totally convinced by the authenticity of some of the romantic connections in the book, that's fully believable in a world where politics, including marriage for advancement, are par for the course.
And by the end? I'll be darned if I'm not wanting to pick up some dice and venture back to my years of playing Traveller - and the dreams it sparked of a universe of infinite possibility.
Rating: 4.5/5 rounded to 5
May 16, 2016
Okay, I like the cover. But it is sci-fi only on Earth. Sure Hawaii is beautiful but we have a whole universe folks!
Other than that. Well. Maybe I should start out with the usual disclaimer: I got this book for free from NetGalley.com for my honest review. Thanks?
I can't tell you how often I nearly stopped reading this book. It is SO not the kind of sci-fi that I like. Not only is it more spy vs. spy it is all about war. And though it seems the author is female her story was male-heavy and misogynistic. One female lead is the lust interest of two males. One is the computer nerd who becomes the evil antagonist. This sci-fi wasn't about the wonders of new inventions or new discoveries, it is about all those things gone wrong. Meanwhile, hate and misunderstandings take over the universe.
Let's throw in werewolves. Yeah, that'll sell.
Oh, if you have been to Hawaii and were there long enough to pick up some of the lingo this might be a thrill. For the contiguous USA (except a too short cruise in Alaska) reader who needs text-to-speech to help them out, this is the worst. I had to stop and go back and see what that meant. Most of the time there were no explanations as to what was said and what it meant, making this an even harder read with not enough rewards for working through it.
It usually doesn't take me this long to read a book but I just couldn't stay interested in it long enough. I even was at the 97% point where one would be drawn to finish but I just put it aside and waited until I had another moment to read. I think part of this was that people died, but didn't stay dead, and fake people running around, it hurt my brain trying to figure out what is real. It seemed the author didn't make it clear enough when the dead come back to life how that happened. It seemed she just wanted to make battles and war and shooting scenes. Ugh!
Now my usual line when I write a review of something I didn't like: Just because I didn't like it, doesn't mean it isn't good. I see a lot of good reviews for this book. There are even some wanting to see it made into a movie. From someone not excited to go see the male-heavy Star Wars movie (WAR is in the name, by the way--no wonder space travel isn't happening as soon as many of us had wanted) this may be right up your alley.
Other than that. Well. Maybe I should start out with the usual disclaimer: I got this book for free from NetGalley.com for my honest review. Thanks?
I can't tell you how often I nearly stopped reading this book. It is SO not the kind of sci-fi that I like. Not only is it more spy vs. spy it is all about war. And though it seems the author is female her story was male-heavy and misogynistic. One female lead is the lust interest of two males. One is the computer nerd who becomes the evil antagonist. This sci-fi wasn't about the wonders of new inventions or new discoveries, it is about all those things gone wrong. Meanwhile, hate and misunderstandings take over the universe.
Let's throw in werewolves. Yeah, that'll sell.
Oh, if you have been to Hawaii and were there long enough to pick up some of the lingo this might be a thrill. For the contiguous USA (except a too short cruise in Alaska) reader who needs text-to-speech to help them out, this is the worst. I had to stop and go back and see what that meant. Most of the time there were no explanations as to what was said and what it meant, making this an even harder read with not enough rewards for working through it.
It usually doesn't take me this long to read a book but I just couldn't stay interested in it long enough. I even was at the 97% point where one would be drawn to finish but I just put it aside and waited until I had another moment to read. I think part of this was that people died, but didn't stay dead, and fake people running around, it hurt my brain trying to figure out what is real. It seemed the author didn't make it clear enough when the dead come back to life how that happened. It seemed she just wanted to make battles and war and shooting scenes. Ugh!
Now my usual line when I write a review of something I didn't like: Just because I didn't like it, doesn't mean it isn't good. I see a lot of good reviews for this book. There are even some wanting to see it made into a movie. From someone not excited to go see the male-heavy Star Wars movie (WAR is in the name, by the way--no wonder space travel isn't happening as soon as many of us had wanted) this may be right up your alley.
January 27, 2016
This turned out to be a very interesting book. The characters were complex and intrepid, leaping from one situation to the next without pause. The descriptions of locations were so vivid you might almost be there. Best of all, really well edited! Except for the pauses to figure out dialect it was a wonderful read from beginning to end. Not quick and not always fun,but you just don't want to put this down.
The setting was future Earth, long years after 2 wars had left much of the original land mass missing, the people genetically adapted to live on other worlds and those left on Earth called "naturals" the only fully humans left. The planet is now a backwater surviving by selling a few luxury items and shipments of Venus Seed, an illicit and sometimes deadly drug. Earth can no longer defend itself .
Jezekiah van Buren, Protector's Heir, travels to the outer rim looking for protection for his homeland and freedom for himself. To the Lupan who nearly destroyed his world he offers a treaty of mutual benefit. His world gets protection and the Lupan gets marriage to a natural, his sister Letticia. Unknown to Jezekiah, during the years of his absence his sister has gone insane, living almost totally in the Net mind. She has learned to manipulate people to further her schemes and he is in her way.
Returning home nearly ends his life by more than one enemy. On arrival he meets and shortly falls in love with Keiko Yamamoto. She is the center of many of the conflicts in the book as each player uses, lies, or betrayes her to further their own ends. You will cry for Keiko.
The book used Hawaii as its setting and the dialect was a little difficult at the beginning but soon became clear. I know it was a good book because after nearly 500 pages I still wanted more.
This book was gifted by the author thru Netgalley.
The setting was future Earth, long years after 2 wars had left much of the original land mass missing, the people genetically adapted to live on other worlds and those left on Earth called "naturals" the only fully humans left. The planet is now a backwater surviving by selling a few luxury items and shipments of Venus Seed, an illicit and sometimes deadly drug. Earth can no longer defend itself .
Jezekiah van Buren, Protector's Heir, travels to the outer rim looking for protection for his homeland and freedom for himself. To the Lupan who nearly destroyed his world he offers a treaty of mutual benefit. His world gets protection and the Lupan gets marriage to a natural, his sister Letticia. Unknown to Jezekiah, during the years of his absence his sister has gone insane, living almost totally in the Net mind. She has learned to manipulate people to further her schemes and he is in her way.
Returning home nearly ends his life by more than one enemy. On arrival he meets and shortly falls in love with Keiko Yamamoto. She is the center of many of the conflicts in the book as each player uses, lies, or betrayes her to further their own ends. You will cry for Keiko.
The book used Hawaii as its setting and the dialect was a little difficult at the beginning but soon became clear. I know it was a good book because after nearly 500 pages I still wanted more.
This book was gifted by the author thru Netgalley.
May 16, 2016
A futuristic Hawaii is the home of the Protector, or leader, of Earth. Jezekiah is the unwilling heir to his mother’s throne. He wants nothing more than to marry Keiko Yakamoto, secure a treaty with the Lupans of Den Lupus, leave Home World, and relinquish the responsibilities of running the Commonwealth to his mother and sister. Unfortunately, one of the stipulations of the treaty requires that the Protector’s daughter or a genetically untouched natural human marry the Lupan warlord named Strongarm. From the moment that they meet, Strongarm and Letticia share an intense dislike of one another. The only other option for Strongarm and the success of the treaty is Keiko Kaahumana Yakamoto Ho, the natural daughter of Admiral Yakamoto and Liliuokelani Ho.
Letticia is Jezekiah’s conniving younger sister who wants power and wealth more than anything or anyone. She will do anything to achieve her goal of becoming the next Protector. That includes hacking into the NetMind system, making unsavory alliances with the Commonwealth’s enemies, secretly profiting from Venus seed sales, framing her mother and brother for treason, and ultimately committing murder.
Time is running out for the Commonwealth. Jezekiah is about to be tried for treason, Letticia is moments away from taking over as Protector, and the Lupan forces are about to invade and destroy the Commonwealth if the treaty is not signed.
Young adult fans will enjoy this science fiction tale of a futuristic Earth where humans are completely dependent on technology and genetic manipulation. There is also a mix of politics and old-fashioned romance.
Letticia is Jezekiah’s conniving younger sister who wants power and wealth more than anything or anyone. She will do anything to achieve her goal of becoming the next Protector. That includes hacking into the NetMind system, making unsavory alliances with the Commonwealth’s enemies, secretly profiting from Venus seed sales, framing her mother and brother for treason, and ultimately committing murder.
Time is running out for the Commonwealth. Jezekiah is about to be tried for treason, Letticia is moments away from taking over as Protector, and the Lupan forces are about to invade and destroy the Commonwealth if the treaty is not signed.
Young adult fans will enjoy this science fiction tale of a futuristic Earth where humans are completely dependent on technology and genetic manipulation. There is also a mix of politics and old-fashioned romance.
April 17, 2016
Jezekiah Van Buren has returned home to an impoverished post war "earth". Heir to his world's Protector position, he was sent into space to seek out alliances and trade agreements. He has a treaty in the works with a genetically modified species of Lupan who originated on Home World. The strongest Lupan clan chief, Strongarm, has agreed to a political marriage of convenience with Jezekiah's younger sister, Letticia, to seal the treaty. But when Strongarm arrives, Letticia freaks and a charming natural native, Kieko Yakamoto, greets him instead. He is captivated, but senses Jezekiah already has an informal claim on Kieko. This sets up a rivalry between the two men for Keiko, even though Strongarm is already promised to Letticia. Add in a powerful drug Lord, self serving relatives, Samari assassins, skinheads, a Bengal brother-in-law, lots of secrets, betrayals, sacrifice, addiction, friendship, loyalty and love and you have a great read.
Home World is a standalone with an HEA, but it is dark and violent, as well, with some of the most graphic gang rape and death scenes I've read. The author does a great job of world building and character development, yet the story is very involved, has a large cast and is often confusing. At the same time, it is suspense filled, thought-provoking, and captivating. I couldn't put it down. It's one I will reread and recommend.
Copy received in return for an honest review.
Home World is a standalone with an HEA, but it is dark and violent, as well, with some of the most graphic gang rape and death scenes I've read. The author does a great job of world building and character development, yet the story is very involved, has a large cast and is often confusing. At the same time, it is suspense filled, thought-provoking, and captivating. I couldn't put it down. It's one I will reread and recommend.
Copy received in return for an honest review.
April 21, 2016
This sci-fi book is absolutely awesome! I would never have known that this was Ms. Bonnie Milani's first book! The characters are so well developed and thought out. I loved getting to know them throughout the book. It made the book even more intriguing! I couldn't believe how much Letticia wanted to kill her own brother. Usually, we all say we want to kill our siblings at least once growing up, but she actually means it.
There is a lot taking place from the very first page when Jezekiah returns to earth (home world) from his mission of many years on the outer rim all the way to the end. It is a very long book, but it is so full of various goings on, you get through the book in absolutely no time, and want to start the next one. I am not a sci-fi fan. However, this book is so much more than just outer space, galactic wars, etc. The characters are believable, all the way down to the precise Hawaiian slang, that made me grin at times. This is definitely a book anyone would be interested in reading. It has it all and then some. The action and intrigue never end.
Thank you Promontory Press and Netgalley for giving me a copy of this book to read and give my honest review.
There is a lot taking place from the very first page when Jezekiah returns to earth (home world) from his mission of many years on the outer rim all the way to the end. It is a very long book, but it is so full of various goings on, you get through the book in absolutely no time, and want to start the next one. I am not a sci-fi fan. However, this book is so much more than just outer space, galactic wars, etc. The characters are believable, all the way down to the precise Hawaiian slang, that made me grin at times. This is definitely a book anyone would be interested in reading. It has it all and then some. The action and intrigue never end.
Thank you Promontory Press and Netgalley for giving me a copy of this book to read and give my honest review.
September 15, 2016
Home World was, for me, a most surprising read.
'On a shattered Waikiki two princes risk humanity's future for Keiko Yakamoto's love. Who will she choose - or kill? '
By page two I was completely hooked. The book was well written and contained beautiful imagery. The description of the different races and their customs was woven seamlessly into the story, with realistic characters that touched my heart to its core.
The main character, Jezekiah, was a constant among a sea of characters with changing motivations.
While he was a striking character, my favourite by far was Keiko Yakamoto, a fearless Earth- Native. There was a refreshing innocence about her, that I find contrasted well with her deadly ability as a samurai.
This book was fast paced, with plenty of action and drama to keep the reader intrigued. There were a lot of surprises, not to mention some tense moments, as Jezekiah tries to seal a treaty to keep his Home World safe from another war. We are made to guess at each character's loyalties until the very end, where all is revealed. I was on the edge of my seat until the very last page. All in all, an incredible read.
Easily 5 stars!
'On a shattered Waikiki two princes risk humanity's future for Keiko Yakamoto's love. Who will she choose - or kill? '
By page two I was completely hooked. The book was well written and contained beautiful imagery. The description of the different races and their customs was woven seamlessly into the story, with realistic characters that touched my heart to its core.
The main character, Jezekiah, was a constant among a sea of characters with changing motivations.
While he was a striking character, my favourite by far was Keiko Yakamoto, a fearless Earth- Native. There was a refreshing innocence about her, that I find contrasted well with her deadly ability as a samurai.
This book was fast paced, with plenty of action and drama to keep the reader intrigued. There were a lot of surprises, not to mention some tense moments, as Jezekiah tries to seal a treaty to keep his Home World safe from another war. We are made to guess at each character's loyalties until the very end, where all is revealed. I was on the edge of my seat until the very last page. All in all, an incredible read.
Easily 5 stars!
January 13, 2016
I was not expecting great things from this book, in retrospect I was influenced by the cover which I thought looked a bit travelogue...it is growing on me tho! I am so glad I read it, which I did in one serious reading session overnight. It 'grabbed,' me,pulled me in and absorbed me. I wanted to know what happened next to the characters, it has been some time since that has happened ex. I have been easing science fiction now for 40+ years and I do not normally pull all nighter anymore! this one was worth the red eyes.
I do not share story lines in my reviews but suffice to say this was a complex storyline with no punches pulled. Some violence but not gratuitous and unexpected twists and turns. Throughly recommend, any negatives? Well nothing is perfect, but only niggles, I personally find colloquial language a nuisance but it wasn't too distracting.
I do not share story lines in my reviews but suffice to say this was a complex storyline with no punches pulled. Some violence but not gratuitous and unexpected twists and turns. Throughly recommend, any negatives? Well nothing is perfect, but only niggles, I personally find colloquial language a nuisance but it wasn't too distracting.
May 6, 2016
The first thing I look for in any good sci fi is to be transported to a world or setting unique in its own rite. Home world does this rather well.
In Home world we are introduced to an alternate futuristic Earth Hawaii saturated with off world culture and influence. Home world is a full and well envisaged experience for any sci fi fan. It is written in a generally easy style with a steady and ever deepening story arc from the outset. For those looking for a full sci fi adventure instead of “hard Science fiction” Home world more than adequately presents that opportunity. Its core plot is introduced seamlessly and leading characters have individual voice un-cloned from other works I have read. Elements of intrigue are introduce nicely as the plot thickens and the reader is exposed to each new turn. There is a lot going on in Home World, an adventure I regard as well worth taking.
In Home world we are introduced to an alternate futuristic Earth Hawaii saturated with off world culture and influence. Home world is a full and well envisaged experience for any sci fi fan. It is written in a generally easy style with a steady and ever deepening story arc from the outset. For those looking for a full sci fi adventure instead of “hard Science fiction” Home world more than adequately presents that opportunity. Its core plot is introduced seamlessly and leading characters have individual voice un-cloned from other works I have read. Elements of intrigue are introduce nicely as the plot thickens and the reader is exposed to each new turn. There is a lot going on in Home World, an adventure I regard as well worth taking.
September 17, 2016
Milani's story draws you right in to her worlds. While I struggled at first because there was no introduction or explanation of what was going on, the author just dumped me in the middle of things. This is not a bad thing though it took a bit to figure out the Net and who was on whose side - and even that wasn't completely clear until the end - making for a wild ride. I kept trying to figure out how much worse things could get and Milani kept throwing in more twists and turns. The language or rather languages were at first a bit confusing but made it so I enjoyed being present in every scene listening to the characters as if I was there - a fly on the wall (pardon the cliche). The depth of research and planning shows through. Well done! I wonder if Melani has another book up her sleeve in this world. I am ready to read it whenever it comes out.
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