“Infliction Point” features dual perspectives between the main protagonist, Zach Axton, and the antagonist, Charlie Moore. The characters were complex, intriguing, and well-developed, providing a thrilling read. However, there were instances where certain scenes felt drawn out or repetitive, lessening their overall impact.
The pace of the book started off slowly, but once all the essential information was presented to the reader, it noticeably accelerated around one-third into the novel. From then on, the pace became fast-paced and full of action. While it wasn’t flawless, the book provided an engaging and exciting experience that has serious potential for adaptation into a film.
While the book was engrossing and dynamic, there were instances where certain scenes or chapters felt excessively prolonged or redundant, leading them to seem forced. Particularly, there were times when the author excessively emphasized Charlie More’s fixation on eyeballs and his internal self-praised, resulting in multiple chapters dedicated to these themes. The repetitive nature of these elements diminished their effectiveness, suggesting they would have been better served with less frequent repetition.
The most challenging aspect of the book for me was the frequency of grammatical errors. It is important to note that the rating of the book was not impacted by this, as grammatical and spelling errors can be a source of frustration for all writers and can be challenging for writers to identify their own mistakes in the work they have created. I have encountered this issue in my own writings as well.
However, the absence of quotation marks at the beginning or ending of conversations made it difficult for me to follow, leading to the need to re-read conversations multiple times. There was also an instance where the author attributed dialogue to the wrong person, but I was able to infer the correct speaker based on context clues. The book would have greatly benefited from additional editing to catch these mistakes.
Overall, this novel was thrilling and mostly captivating. I particularly appreciated the intriguing cliffhanger in the epilogue, leaving me curious about the potential direction of the sequel. The book's premise was unique, sophisticated, and thought-provoking, presenting complex themes that were engaging for readers. While the execution was strong in certain aspects, there were other areas that could benefit from further refinement, such as reducing redundancies that make the book feel overly drawn out.
Thank you, NetGalley and Willis St. Bloom Books for my free copy of this book. I am leaving this review voluntarily. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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🗪 Dual perspectives
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🧬 Thought-provoking plots
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👥 Well-developed characters