Very strong start, but it went downhill from there. The romance felt very forced and rushed, especially after everything we were told about Rory's late fiancée. Multiple antagonists were introduced, but none of them was interesting enough to leave much of an impression. Considering Roroy's Tragique Backstory™, you'd expect he might have some consideration for consent. The ending didn't make much sense either.
The style was easy to read, but the pacing leaves much to be desired.