Nothing in this world is more dangerous than a witch. The epitome of fear and terror, they can summon floods on a whim, conjure balls of fire out of the air, or even destroy entire countries overnight. Incur their wrath, and no one is safe. At least, that's what everyone thinks, and it's the very reason they all want Siasha dead. After yet another violent battle for her life, she teams up with Zig, a mercenary, and they depart for unknown lands to find somewhere she can live in peace. But is the pair any match for the lost magic and vicious monstrosities that lie ahead?
Hm... I'm unsure where to begin. The beginning had an amazing hook and I loved that there was a strong connection between Zig and Siasha right away, but afterwards I felt as if the plot began to move in favor of the two rather than build a genuine storyline.
A lot of events in the book feels like it randomly happens just so a relationship can be created between Zig and Siasha. Zig is basically void of empathy and Siasha has been isolated for so long that it seems like she doesn't have the ability to converse with other people nor read body language. Instead of making this the driving point of them getting to know each other, the power-play between Zig and other men is used instead to create the relationship between the two. So far, the only time they have truly conversed is for world-building dump which is Siasha explaining to Zig about magic and the continent they're on. The magic system in this book is important and there is a lot of emphasis there. I like how it was explained that mana is a very important aspect and that it can affect a person's physique. This is good enough and could be explained further, so why add in the romantic aspect?
I don't think this book needed a romantic subplot (not at this point) just because they're both a man and woman traveling together. It's not even romantic either. It's implied heavily that Siashia is seen sexually, and apparently every man in the guild wants to pipe her. This was mentioned once or twice and I brushed it off; after 5-6 times, I wanted to chuck the book. We get it, Siasha is a very beautiful woman, but it gets to the extent where it starts to lean into the stereotype of the big and strong lone wolf who fights for the pretty lady. The book makes sure we know. I can't count how many times I've rolled my eyes when Zig mentions that Siasha is a pretty woman. He knows that she has strong powers and that she loves reading, but all of these traits are under-emphasized because the "actual" thing that really matters is she's hot.
I also want to mention that the flow of this book is extremely awkward. The POV is mainly Zig and it does switch over to Siasha here and there, and then to side characters....? And the only point to the side characters POV is to emphasize again, how hot Siasha is or how strong Zig is... and these POVs are as long as a paragraph to a page. Skipping those POV wouldn't have changed how the storyline progressed, although the only other POV that really mattered was Isana's.
In addition to the storyline, somehow Zig and Siasha knew how to coordinate their fights perfectly, which makes them rise to attention really fast. That's impressive, but it doesn't make sense as Zig barely knows anything about magic than what Siasha tells him. I feel like being told what magic is is completely different to knowing how it is to deal with and work around it. There is no struggle we can see between them when it comes to fights, and even more so when they begin to pick up "difficult" quests. The guild is extremely forgiving as well. Guild groups are brought up later in the book to make sure that Zig can be a pocket keychain to Siasha. No struggle whatsoever. That makes things very convenient for the two but too boring to read about, at least to me. It would've been interesting to see Zig try to find a way to fight beside Siasha as the guild rules separate the two. Unfortunately this isn't the case.
Something I want to emphasize as well is that the relationship between Zig and Siasha isn't strong enough for there to be a romantic tension. We know so far that Siasha is a bookworm and is always wanting to learn new perspectives. This could've been focused on rather than her physique. While she's off educating herself and doing side quests, Zig is typically AFK on a bench waiting for her... A quick note as well, Siasha seems to have read every single book in the library; every book is 150,000 dren to rent which is about 6 quests based on how much the pouch wolf quest gave them [25k]. So if Siasha read 10 books, then they did 60 quests! Why wasn't this time in questing used to emphasize their relationship but rather time skipped so much? Zig could've been given more character depth during their outings. His origins (as well as Siasha's) could've been explained through conversations the two may have. This would've made great grounds for romance as Zig and Siasha genuinely get to know each other. I am pretty fraustrated that that wasn't the case, and rather his origins are brought up towards the last seven pages of the book in a petty fight... Oh, and we still know nothing about Siasha.
The beginning did a great job hooking me but the rest of the book... not so much. It would've been great to see Zig and Siasha's struggles of understanding each other due to different personality types and fighting styles. Instead I was met with a forced romantic/sexual relationship between a Mary Sue and Gary Stu. What's the point of reading this book if everything is already perfect? I absolutely loved the artstyle but I will not be picking up the series.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Written by Chohokiteki Kaeru and illustrated by Kanase Bench, one of Seven Seas Entertainment’s latest licenses, Witch and Mercenary, is a tale of persecution and belonging.
The series’ premise follows the adventures of Siasha, a witch, and Zig, a mercenary she hired. No longer wanting to be hunted and persecuted on home soil, Siasha asks for Zig’s help to create a new life for herself on a land known as the Unknown Continent. In a world very different from their own, the two will face difficult challenges and adjustments to capture the peaceful life they seek.
After meeting on the battlefield, the story of Siasha and Zig’s adventures begins as they land on the Unknown Continent in search of a new life. Unlike the land of war that they’ve come from, the Unknown Continent is relatively peaceful and is characterised by aspects that light novel enthusiasts will be intimately familiar with. In this new land, monster battles and adventurers rule the roost.
In order to streamline their quest for a peaceful existence, the two decide to blend in and become adventurers. From this point, the first volume takes a tried and true route where the deuteragonists take on different adventuring quests, hoping to climb up the ranks.
For the eagle-eyed amongst my readers, you might have noticed by now that there are clear differences between the official synopsis and my description of the story, and you are right to notice. The synopsis of this story would suggest a series filled with danger, as Siasha’s status as a witch and the persecution that comes along with it would constantly bring obstacles to her aspirations of peace. While this might have made for a better story, there’s still plenty of interesting depth to be found as this story focuses on how societal outcasts can adjust to more amenable environments.
The strength of this story, then, falls on the shoulders of the interactions between the two protagonists. Essentially strangers at the start of the story, their journey together opens a dialogue between them, allowing them to share their vulnerabilities and reflect on the lives they’ve lived up until now. Moreover, these interactions offer the author some great opportunities to impart some world-building wisdom. Conversations about world hierarchy and the inner workings of mana come naturally, given their previous roles.
This does not mean that these segments are free from fault. One of the major issues with this volume comes about due to a lack of POV from Siasha’s perspective. Of the two characters, Siasha is the driving force behind the journey to the Unknown Continent, and she’s the one who wants to start life afresh. A missed opportunity, her storied past and isolated upbringing would’ve brought a level of manoeuvrability and depth that can’t be captured through Zig’s perspective alone.
Overall, Witch and Mercenary’s first instalment makes for a fine foundation for the series. Despite the misleading synopsis, the author’s knack for character interactions and world-building manages to bring the series back onto solid ground. Hopefully, as the series continues, there’ll be more of a push to provide Siasha with her own unique POV.
This is one of the best light novels i have ever read, might not say much because i haven't read that many light novels. but even among fantasy books this one is truly one that is unique. the characters are set up pretty quickly, but that doesn't mean that they are set up sloppy, quite the opposite, the author really used the method refered to "show, don't tell" meaning actions speak volumes, while words can't quite do the same.
there is enough action so it doesn't feel boring, but also a nice change between that and character/world building. it's truly magnificent, i am keeping an eye on this series for sure!
it does truly brake tropes, it's not a typical advanture with goblins. i has it own unique monsters.
still noithing is truly perfect, the setting is that like of middle ages or just before that. they use some synonyms which don't fit the trope. can't say it has to do with the writter or the translater, it does convey the message but it kinds of breaks the fantasy setting from time to time.
C'est sympa, les personnages sont très cool à suivre, surtout Zig qui a son propre code sur la manière de faire les choses. J'ai également beaucoup aimé Isana, que j'ai hâte de voir plus dans la suite ainsi que l'intrigue autour du traitement de son peuple. Ce tome m'a un peu laissé sur ma faim niveau intrigue mais c'était bourré d'action et c'était très vivant !
Started out well enough but then it dropped my interest and turned into something I personally am not so interested in continuing. It's not horrible, but it's just middle of the road and it's not the middle of the road I want to continue tier.
I really loved, how this story developed and how out of the feared witch and the merciless mercenary became a team that can beat the odds. Loved the independence and inter-dependence of the two main protagonists. I thought the story perspective was very well done.
This has a good opening. A local Prince hires a bunch of mercenaries to kill a witch. The witch destroys the group. Only the titular mercenary is alive, but the knights, the other mercenary bands (and of course prince) are killed. Together the two decide that killing people is tiring work, the witch hires the mercenary to be her bodyguard. Together they sneak on board a ship to new lands. Surprise it is full of monsters! They now need to live in a strange land with strange rules.
Really great first book I am curious how the rest of the story goes.