3.5 Magical Stars~
I almost stopped reading because some paragraphs and dialogue threw me off. Let's just say it read a little too contemporary, and it clashed with the world setting that was being described. However, I just decided to go for it and I'm glad I did 🎉
It's a short story with simple main characters but not so simple arcs that kept me engaged and entertained. There's some repetition here and there, and the main characters aren't the most fleshed out of the lot but, once again, it was entertaining.
Continuity error:
On Chapter 5, page 16 Cornelius is described as having blue eyes:
"Tall and lithe, with pale skin, black hair, and deep blue eyes, Cornelius Cromwell..."
Chapter 12, page 163:
"...Cornelius then waved at it while staring at me with a taunting glimmer in his deep blue eyes."
But then on chapter 14, page 192 they're described as green:
"A smug smile settled on his lips while a malicious glimmer sparked in his green eyes."
I wasn't really sure if to point this out because there's a bunch of magical creatures and maybe the color change is part of a major plot point later in the series, but just in case there we go.