Although I find the third person, present tense, narrative irritating and distracting, I found the makings of a good story in the first book in the series of which this is the 2nd. I had slightly more of a problem with this one, yes, there is once again the framework for a good story but there were things about it which were just too incredible. Why on earth would the Chief Constable tell a DI to investigate an apparent suicide without giving him any information on why she thought it needed investigating and not allowing him to tell anyone he interviewed that he was investigating it so that he needed to invent a reason for asking questions about it. Her actions become even more illogical later in the story but to explain that would give away some of the plot. It just wouldn’t happen.
I am torn over the extensive descriptions of the Cumbrian scenery, they do give a flavour of the area and help to a certain extent but are somewhat overdone, distracting from the action of the story and as for the descriptions of fishing . . definitely too much detail and far too often. It strikes me that the activities which DI Skelgill is passionate about, are the passions of the author and he is, frankly, indulging himself. I found that on occasion, I could skip a couple of pages and miss nothing of the happenings, so therefore, I did.