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The Fulfillment Series #1
Faery Marked
When Callie Rycroft wakes to find purple flames flickering on the ceiling, she believes she’s still dreaming. But soon she’s forced to accept that she has magic―a special magic that grants her entrance into the Faery Realm.
For centuries humans have been banned from Faery, but dangerous times call for dangerous measures. Declared Champion by the Faery Queen, Callie is assigned a Guardian, and tasked with finding the Cordial―a magical elixir needed to keep the portal to the Faery realm a secret from humans.
The upside? Reece Michaels, the boy she's been crushing on for years, is her Guardian. Callie hopes that, by spending time with Reece, he'll start to see her as more than just his best friend's sister.
The downside? She's in a race not only against time, but against another Champion, and a rogue Guardian―a Guardian who stands to threaten her developing relationship with Reece.
Magic, mistaken identities, and hidden agendas are the least of Callie's worries when she learns that the Cordial requires a sacrifice. Will Callie be willing to risk everything―even Reece―to complete her task as Champion? Or will she let the portal open, and doom both realms?
For centuries humans have been banned from Faery, but dangerous times call for dangerous measures. Declared Champion by the Faery Queen, Callie is assigned a Guardian, and tasked with finding the Cordial―a magical elixir needed to keep the portal to the Faery realm a secret from humans.
The upside? Reece Michaels, the boy she's been crushing on for years, is her Guardian. Callie hopes that, by spending time with Reece, he'll start to see her as more than just his best friend's sister.
The downside? She's in a race not only against time, but against another Champion, and a rogue Guardian―a Guardian who stands to threaten her developing relationship with Reece.
Magic, mistaken identities, and hidden agendas are the least of Callie's worries when she learns that the Cordial requires a sacrifice. Will Callie be willing to risk everything―even Reece―to complete her task as Champion? Or will she let the portal open, and doom both realms?
227 pages, Paperback
First published November 1, 2013
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Mary Waibel
11 books52 followersMulti-published YA Author Mary Waibel is a romantic at heart. Her love of fairy tales, fantasy, and happy-ever-after fill the pages of her stories.
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When not twisting her own tales, she can be found with her nose buried in any book she can get her hands on.
Mary lives in upstate New York with her wonderful husband, hockey player son, and two cats. In the fall and winter she can be found at the ice rink, cheering on her son and his team, and in the summer, she enjoys escaping with her family on camping trips all over the states.
Interacting with her readers is one of Mary's favorite parts of being an author. You can find her at these sites:
Website: http://marywaibel.blogspot.com
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/authormarywa...
Twitter: https://twitter.com/mewtweety14
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show...
Blog: http://waibelworld.blogspot.com
Be sure to stop by Mary's author site, http://marywaibel.blogspot.com, and sign up for her newsletter to keep informed about her latest news, as well as special offers, sneak peeks, and spotlights of other authors or join her street team, Waibel’s Legionaires, for more specials.
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December 13, 2013
Erin is a good friend on twitter, so I admit I was worried. I always worry about reading friends' books because you want to be honest, but let's face it, it always sucks reading a book you don't like that was written by a friend. Thank goodness, this wasn't an issue because The Prophecy ROCKS! :-)
The Prophecy by Erin Albert is the first book of a YA fantasy trilogy that whisks us away to the nations of the Vanguard and the Ethereals. Layla is our main protagonist, although the perspective of the book shifts from character to character effortlessly, and she is one of the Vanguards. Her adoptive family is worried that she may be the Fulfillment because of her black hair and purple eyes. It's been foretold that the Fulfillment will bring the two kingdoms together in peace.
All Layla wants to do is go to the Vanguard celebration and get some sweet bread. She doesn't feel like the Fulfillment, but she's quickly found by a zealot and taken off to become Wil's bride. Wilhelm is the heir to the Ethereal throne. As Layla meets both Wil and a mysterious boy named Nash, she will be forced to decide between her mind and heart on every level, and make a choice that may save or destroy the kingdoms and the hope for piece.
I loved this book. It was fast paced, and the world building was seamless. I've seen books that completely fail on that level, but The Prophecy had a wonderful balance between world building, character building, and plot. Each of the characters were well described, and I found myself rooting for each of them. I loved the plot twists, and I found a new book boyfriend in Wil, who is one of the sweetest characters I've met in a long time.
Layla was hard to like initially, but she quickly won me over, which is critical in a book like this. I also loved how the older generation of kings and queens played a large role in this book as well.
I wasn't a huge fan of Nash, and I felt like some of those scenes were forced. However, this is my only slightly negative comment about the whole thing, and I know this is just a personal preference. There are several people out there who are glad I don't like Nash so they can have him for themselves!
Overall, a really wonderful YA debut by a wonderful person. I'm beyond relieved that this book is terrific, because it makes my job as an honest reviewer that much easier! I'm dying to get my hands on the next installment!
The Prophecy by Erin Albert is the first book of a YA fantasy trilogy that whisks us away to the nations of the Vanguard and the Ethereals. Layla is our main protagonist, although the perspective of the book shifts from character to character effortlessly, and she is one of the Vanguards. Her adoptive family is worried that she may be the Fulfillment because of her black hair and purple eyes. It's been foretold that the Fulfillment will bring the two kingdoms together in peace.
All Layla wants to do is go to the Vanguard celebration and get some sweet bread. She doesn't feel like the Fulfillment, but she's quickly found by a zealot and taken off to become Wil's bride. Wilhelm is the heir to the Ethereal throne. As Layla meets both Wil and a mysterious boy named Nash, she will be forced to decide between her mind and heart on every level, and make a choice that may save or destroy the kingdoms and the hope for piece.
I loved this book. It was fast paced, and the world building was seamless. I've seen books that completely fail on that level, but The Prophecy had a wonderful balance between world building, character building, and plot. Each of the characters were well described, and I found myself rooting for each of them. I loved the plot twists, and I found a new book boyfriend in Wil, who is one of the sweetest characters I've met in a long time.
Layla was hard to like initially, but she quickly won me over, which is critical in a book like this. I also loved how the older generation of kings and queens played a large role in this book as well.
I wasn't a huge fan of Nash, and I felt like some of those scenes were forced. However, this is my only slightly negative comment about the whole thing, and I know this is just a personal preference. There are several people out there who are glad I don't like Nash so they can have him for themselves!
Overall, a really wonderful YA debut by a wonderful person. I'm beyond relieved that this book is terrific, because it makes my job as an honest reviewer that much easier! I'm dying to get my hands on the next installment!
January 15, 2016
Note: I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Blog Rating: 4.5/5
Plot/Story:
I absolutely loved the plot line of The Prophecy. It's entertaining as well as really emotionally involving. I really enjoyed the story and it pulled me into the world of Vanguards, Ethereal and Outlanders right from the very beginning.
The world-building is superb and the author has really done a commendable job in detailing. The book is written in multiple POVs and takes us through the lives of all the three main characters in detail. The pace of the story is great and being an absorbing read and all it proved to be quite a fast read.
I'm really excited to read the next book in the series as I honestly want to explore the amazing world of this book.
Characters:
The characterization in this book is really impressive. I loved the main characters, Layla, Will and Nash and even the supporting characters of Vespa, Grant and Volton Holt (there were more but I'm just mentioning my favorites.) I was able to connect with them all and was able to feel all the emotions the characters were experiencing. I really wanted to cry when they cried and literally grin when something good happened (especially when Nash came in the picture.)
Romance:
This book is a romantic YA Fantasy, so what else do you expect!? It has tons and tons of romance and the author managed to pull off the love-triangle thing gracefully. Though at first I thought it to be a little weird, considering Layla's nature, but it was all explained beautifully in the second half of the book. And yes, it all did make sense (which is really rare these days!)
Writing:
The writing is really powerful which I was expecting and which doesn't come as a shock because the author is an editor and I've read quite a few books edited by there and they were really awesome! T
Begining:
The Prophecy pulled me in right from the start. I loved the Day Of Dawning was intrigued about all the cryptic thoughts Layla had about the First Ones and the Ecclesiastics. I mean that really, really made me curious and that was the point where I realized that I was in for a brilliant read.
Ending:
The ending surprised me, but I must say I did expect a little more (just a teeny bit.) I mean the ending was haw-inspiring but I kind of made my peace with it thinking that at least now Layla won't have to choose between the two princes. Maybe it'll be different in the second part but I really needed something more that would have made it a cliff-hanger of an ending.
Blurb:
The blurb is perfect and it totally managed to get me to read this book. So yeah, it's as good as it can be.
Cover Art:
I absolutely cover the cover art of this book and it really makes me want to pick up a hardcover copy of the book.
You can also read this review at The Reading Bud .
Blog Rating: 4.5/5
Plot/Story:
I absolutely loved the plot line of The Prophecy. It's entertaining as well as really emotionally involving. I really enjoyed the story and it pulled me into the world of Vanguards, Ethereal and Outlanders right from the very beginning.
The world-building is superb and the author has really done a commendable job in detailing. The book is written in multiple POVs and takes us through the lives of all the three main characters in detail. The pace of the story is great and being an absorbing read and all it proved to be quite a fast read.
I'm really excited to read the next book in the series as I honestly want to explore the amazing world of this book.
Characters:
The characterization in this book is really impressive. I loved the main characters, Layla, Will and Nash and even the supporting characters of Vespa, Grant and Volton Holt (there were more but I'm just mentioning my favorites.) I was able to connect with them all and was able to feel all the emotions the characters were experiencing. I really wanted to cry when they cried and literally grin when something good happened (especially when Nash came in the picture.)
Romance:
This book is a romantic YA Fantasy, so what else do you expect!? It has tons and tons of romance and the author managed to pull off the love-triangle thing gracefully. Though at first I thought it to be a little weird, considering Layla's nature, but it was all explained beautifully in the second half of the book. And yes, it all did make sense (which is really rare these days!)
Writing:
The writing is really powerful which I was expecting and which doesn't come as a shock because the author is an editor and I've read quite a few books edited by there and they were really awesome! T
Begining:
The Prophecy pulled me in right from the start. I loved the Day Of Dawning was intrigued about all the cryptic thoughts Layla had about the First Ones and the Ecclesiastics. I mean that really, really made me curious and that was the point where I realized that I was in for a brilliant read.
Ending:
The ending surprised me, but I must say I did expect a little more (just a teeny bit.) I mean the ending was haw-inspiring but I kind of made my peace with it thinking that at least now Layla won't have to choose between the two princes. Maybe it'll be different in the second part but I really needed something more that would have made it a cliff-hanger of an ending.
Blurb:
The blurb is perfect and it totally managed to get me to read this book. So yeah, it's as good as it can be.
Cover Art:
I absolutely cover the cover art of this book and it really makes me want to pick up a hardcover copy of the book.
You can also read this review at The Reading Bud .
December 4, 2013
I love getting lost in a story. I can happily let hours slip by as I experience the lives of new friends and foes in exotic, unfamiliar worlds. I journey with them, experiencing their struggles and their triumphs, as they progress on epic adventures. A great storyteller will seize and hold my attention, make me happy or sad, excited or angry, all with the press of a key on their laptop.
Erin Albert wields such super powers. From the first word in the first chapter, her book captured my attention. Her debut novel, The Prophecy, enveloped me in a new and unique universe created by a very powerful imagination. Through its pages I lived and experienced the adventures of Layla, Samson, Grant, Nash, Wil, and a host of other relatable, complex characters. Chapter by chapter time sailed by and I found myself excited for my favorites’ victories and angry at their treatment in the hands of their enemies.
The only problem? The book ends in a cliffhanger and I, along with the rest of the world, am frustratingly forced to wait until the next segment, The Outlanders, is released to know what happens. Sigh.
That, my friends, is fantastic storytelling.
The tale starts up with 17 year old Layla Givens on her way to her town’s annual celebration. Her people observe The Day of Dawning, a festive holiday that honors the First Ones--the founders of their religion. The city of Medlin is brightly decorated and a myriad of fun activities are in progress when the religious sect, the Ecclesiastics, arrive. Every year they perform the religious part of the ceremony, only this time things are different.
The leader of the group, Elder Werrick, orders all the town decorations removed and the activities canceled, claiming these things are not a “proper honoring” of the First Ones. As the town decor is disassembled he meets Layla. Almost instantly he declares her the Fulfillment, the young woman foretold in their sacred scripts that would bring about peace between the different kingdoms.
Layla is a Vanguard, a kingdom of fierce warriors that possess supernatural physical strength, and betrothed to Samson, another Vanguard. She is told by Werrick she will marry the Prince of the Ethereals, a kingdom of people that have the power to alter minds: the ability to both project images and remove memories. These two countries are sworn enemies of one another and have been warring for centuries. She tries to fight this declaration and her capture. Only the Ecclesiastics have imprisoned Samson and other members of her family and are threatening them to ensure her cooperation. Thus setting the scene that creates unlikely allies, hidden dangers, romance, anguish, and many epic battles.
The tale is told in a strong, formal voice, like nothing I’ve ever read before, and have come to think of as the Erin Albert Style. Filled with noble princes and princesses; deep and complex characters; manipulative, merciless antagonists; and plot twist after plot twist, The Prophecy will keep you guessing.
Then of course there is the cliffhanger ending. But I digress.
Come on book two!!!
Erin Albert wields such super powers. From the first word in the first chapter, her book captured my attention. Her debut novel, The Prophecy, enveloped me in a new and unique universe created by a very powerful imagination. Through its pages I lived and experienced the adventures of Layla, Samson, Grant, Nash, Wil, and a host of other relatable, complex characters. Chapter by chapter time sailed by and I found myself excited for my favorites’ victories and angry at their treatment in the hands of their enemies.
The only problem? The book ends in a cliffhanger and I, along with the rest of the world, am frustratingly forced to wait until the next segment, The Outlanders, is released to know what happens. Sigh.
That, my friends, is fantastic storytelling.
The tale starts up with 17 year old Layla Givens on her way to her town’s annual celebration. Her people observe The Day of Dawning, a festive holiday that honors the First Ones--the founders of their religion. The city of Medlin is brightly decorated and a myriad of fun activities are in progress when the religious sect, the Ecclesiastics, arrive. Every year they perform the religious part of the ceremony, only this time things are different.
The leader of the group, Elder Werrick, orders all the town decorations removed and the activities canceled, claiming these things are not a “proper honoring” of the First Ones. As the town decor is disassembled he meets Layla. Almost instantly he declares her the Fulfillment, the young woman foretold in their sacred scripts that would bring about peace between the different kingdoms.
Layla is a Vanguard, a kingdom of fierce warriors that possess supernatural physical strength, and betrothed to Samson, another Vanguard. She is told by Werrick she will marry the Prince of the Ethereals, a kingdom of people that have the power to alter minds: the ability to both project images and remove memories. These two countries are sworn enemies of one another and have been warring for centuries. She tries to fight this declaration and her capture. Only the Ecclesiastics have imprisoned Samson and other members of her family and are threatening them to ensure her cooperation. Thus setting the scene that creates unlikely allies, hidden dangers, romance, anguish, and many epic battles.
The tale is told in a strong, formal voice, like nothing I’ve ever read before, and have come to think of as the Erin Albert Style. Filled with noble princes and princesses; deep and complex characters; manipulative, merciless antagonists; and plot twist after plot twist, The Prophecy will keep you guessing.
Then of course there is the cliffhanger ending. But I digress.
Come on book two!!!
December 4, 2013
Follow Layla as her world falls apart when she's proclaimed The Fulfilment. In love with one man, duty bound to another, or is she? Not all is as it seems and darker powers are at play in this epic fantasy.
I really enjoyed this debut novel from Erin Albert. She weaves a fantastic tale and leaves you on the edge of your seat for the next in the series.
I really enjoyed this debut novel from Erin Albert. She weaves a fantastic tale and leaves you on the edge of your seat for the next in the series.
December 4, 2013
This book has to be on everyone's MUST READ list! Erin has woven a story that draws you in from page one. The characters have depth, and their relationships are complex. You will definitely be clamoring for Book 2 when finishing The Prophecy.
December 4, 2013
IT'S FINALLY HERE!!! THE PROPHECY'S RELEASE DAY IS HERE!!!!! I have been waiting to read this book since April and it did NOT disappoint. THE PROPHECY met every expectation I had and more. From the first sentence I was captivated and I devoured this book quickly. It is definitely a "one sitting read".
For ALL the love I have for this book this has got to be one of the hardest reviews that I have had to write. I have gone back and forth writing it for a week and nothing ever seems to be good enough, or explain well enough why I think you should read it, or why I loved it. But I will give it a try. I feel that the description about does a pretty good job telling you about the plot so I'm just going to dive right in to what I loved about the book.
The characters were some of the best written ones I have come across in a debut novel. Erin really seemed to truly know her characters. They all had very distinct personalities to back each of them up. Layla was a fierce female lead. Even though she was thrown into a really messed up situation as being claimed as the fulfillment, she did what she had to do to keep her family and friends safe.
Along the way she meets Nash; mysterious, sweet Nash. (I love him by the way, I stake claim on him....just wanted all you ladies to know ♥) There is a wonderful attraction between these two that feels very real. I was very happy not to have a sudden "I love you" type relationship between them. Even though there are so many things that come up that make their relationship pretty much impossible I can't help but root for them.
One complication is Wil. WAIT WAIT WAIT....no I'm not leading you into a love triangle. While on the surface and without giving spoilers it may come across that this book will take you into a love triangle, but it really doesn’t. As part of being the fulfillment Layla is betrothed to Wil, it is practically her duty to marry him. I can't really say more than that because I don't want to spoil anything, but seriously it didn't get all “typical love triangle” on me. BUT I will tell you that you will want it to....yes you will. While I LOVE Nash, Wil is....ahhhh he's wonderful. Both guys are equally swoony and my guess is that ladies will be fighting over who they think Layla should be with no matter where her heart lays.
Some other characters that I really adored were Vespa, Grant, and Samson. While we don't get to see Samson a lot in this book I know he will be a big player later on in the series. Grant is just another amazing guy living in THE PROPHECY world, and Vespa is someone I would want to have as a best friend.
Of course with all the wonderful characters, there must be some evil ones. I'm not going to go through who those are, mainly because I feel like it will take away from the story some for you when reading. But just know that there are some REAL evil people and you will want them to die a brutal death when it is all said and done.
The world building is also beautiful and executed well. While the book is set mainly in the Ethereal kingdom, I felt like I was really there with Layla. My favorite part was the maze that kept the kingdom guarded. I also was intrigued by the Vanguards super strength, and the Ethereal’s powers to mess with others minds.
If you follow me on twitter you might have seen that I pretty much live tweeted the entire time I read this book. It gave me SO many feels it was unreal. I was happy, conflicted, sad, MAD, devastated, swoony, flailing, you name it....I was doing it. Anytime my emotions are tapped into that way it's a sign of an amazing book. As if the book as a whole wasn't wonderful and emotion provoking enough, Erin left us with a MAJOR cliffhanger. I have a love/hate relationship with those things. I love them because they make me want more NOW, I hate them....well because they make me want more NOW and I can't have it now. Erin leaves two MAJOR things happening at the very end that I'm still thinking about what it means for everyone, especially Layla. I definitely can't wait to get my hands on the next book.
I definitely recommend any fans of YA Fantasy, fast reads, and swoony guys read this book. I really don't think you will be disappointed. This is without a doubt one of my favorite reads of 2013.
For ALL the love I have for this book this has got to be one of the hardest reviews that I have had to write. I have gone back and forth writing it for a week and nothing ever seems to be good enough, or explain well enough why I think you should read it, or why I loved it. But I will give it a try. I feel that the description about does a pretty good job telling you about the plot so I'm just going to dive right in to what I loved about the book.
The characters were some of the best written ones I have come across in a debut novel. Erin really seemed to truly know her characters. They all had very distinct personalities to back each of them up. Layla was a fierce female lead. Even though she was thrown into a really messed up situation as being claimed as the fulfillment, she did what she had to do to keep her family and friends safe.
Along the way she meets Nash; mysterious, sweet Nash. (I love him by the way, I stake claim on him....just wanted all you ladies to know ♥) There is a wonderful attraction between these two that feels very real. I was very happy not to have a sudden "I love you" type relationship between them. Even though there are so many things that come up that make their relationship pretty much impossible I can't help but root for them.
One complication is Wil. WAIT WAIT WAIT....no I'm not leading you into a love triangle. While on the surface and without giving spoilers it may come across that this book will take you into a love triangle, but it really doesn’t. As part of being the fulfillment Layla is betrothed to Wil, it is practically her duty to marry him. I can't really say more than that because I don't want to spoil anything, but seriously it didn't get all “typical love triangle” on me. BUT I will tell you that you will want it to....yes you will. While I LOVE Nash, Wil is....ahhhh he's wonderful. Both guys are equally swoony and my guess is that ladies will be fighting over who they think Layla should be with no matter where her heart lays.
Some other characters that I really adored were Vespa, Grant, and Samson. While we don't get to see Samson a lot in this book I know he will be a big player later on in the series. Grant is just another amazing guy living in THE PROPHECY world, and Vespa is someone I would want to have as a best friend.
Of course with all the wonderful characters, there must be some evil ones. I'm not going to go through who those are, mainly because I feel like it will take away from the story some for you when reading. But just know that there are some REAL evil people and you will want them to die a brutal death when it is all said and done.
The world building is also beautiful and executed well. While the book is set mainly in the Ethereal kingdom, I felt like I was really there with Layla. My favorite part was the maze that kept the kingdom guarded. I also was intrigued by the Vanguards super strength, and the Ethereal’s powers to mess with others minds.
If you follow me on twitter you might have seen that I pretty much live tweeted the entire time I read this book. It gave me SO many feels it was unreal. I was happy, conflicted, sad, MAD, devastated, swoony, flailing, you name it....I was doing it. Anytime my emotions are tapped into that way it's a sign of an amazing book. As if the book as a whole wasn't wonderful and emotion provoking enough, Erin left us with a MAJOR cliffhanger. I have a love/hate relationship with those things. I love them because they make me want more NOW, I hate them....well because they make me want more NOW and I can't have it now. Erin leaves two MAJOR things happening at the very end that I'm still thinking about what it means for everyone, especially Layla. I definitely can't wait to get my hands on the next book.
I definitely recommend any fans of YA Fantasy, fast reads, and swoony guys read this book. I really don't think you will be disappointed. This is without a doubt one of my favorite reads of 2013.
December 6, 2013
The Prophecy is an amazing debut novel for Erin Albert. The author gives life to a world rich in tradition, with warring kingdoms, deeply hidden secrets and incredible loyalty and valor. The characters have such tremendous depth and strong male and female leads, making it difficult to select a favorite.
The story begins with Layla Givens and her brother Samson Mantar at the Day of Dawning Festival in town near her family's farm in Vanguard. The festival is the event of the year in which there are colorful ribbon decorations, delicious cinnamon bread (which the description alone will make your mouth water), games and hair braiding for the children, and of course, the reading of the ancient peace prophecy. This year, Layla's town has been selected to have the ceremonial reading done by the reverential Ecclesiastics, the religious group that lives in the Borderlands and sole purpose is to dedicate their lives to The First Ones and the pursuit of the fulfillment of the ancient peace prophecy. This prophecy is believed to end the centuries long war between the Vanguards and the Ethereals. Excitement and curiosity drive Layla and Samson to attend the festival, against their parents wishes and despite their years of hiding Layla's secret. Before the reading of the Prophecy, Elder Werrick, leader of the Ecclesiastics, notices Layla and is immediately convinced she is the long-awaited Fulfillment.
Layla is now whisked away from her family, her home, and her life to become this Fulfillment of a prophecy she's not even sure she believes. By being the fulfillment, she will be forced to marry the Prince the Ethereals, her sworn enemy. Terrified, Samson tries and fails to stop the abduction and is captured, to be taken to the Ecclesiastical compound. Their older brother and Vanguard soldier Grant tries and also fails to stop Elder Werrick. Even the King Rex of Vanguard allows Layla to be taken to Etherea despite heated opposition from his son, Prince Vance and Queen Montessa.
On the way to Etherea, the Ecclesiastic carriage is attacked and Layla is taken from the Elder's clutches. Fighting her way out, Layla frees herself only to accidentally run into Nash, a stranger with no apparent allegiances. Nash also carries a big secret which has pushed him to the shadows his whole life. Now that he has met Layla, he no longer wants to live in those shadows. When it is discovered that the Elder's proclaimed her the Fulfillment, he must resist his growing attraction for her safety and the promise of peace.
Word has gotten out to the Ethereals that the Fulfillment has been found. Prince Wilhelm is reluctant to meet this Vanguard girl who is to become his wife. He has been brought up to believe that Vanguards are ruthless and evil and desire to slaughter his people. How can he grow to love his enemy? He wonders how it is possible that he is a part in this ancient prophecy and how can he protect his kingdom with a Vanguard at his side, despite his desire for this promised peace.
In a twist of fate, Layla awakens in a beautiful room with intricately braided, colorful ribbons and a younger girl sitting across the room from her. She is now in the palace of her enemy...
For more, you will need to read “The Prophecy”. If you like well-written, well developed YA books, this is a must read and will not disappoint!
The story begins with Layla Givens and her brother Samson Mantar at the Day of Dawning Festival in town near her family's farm in Vanguard. The festival is the event of the year in which there are colorful ribbon decorations, delicious cinnamon bread (which the description alone will make your mouth water), games and hair braiding for the children, and of course, the reading of the ancient peace prophecy. This year, Layla's town has been selected to have the ceremonial reading done by the reverential Ecclesiastics, the religious group that lives in the Borderlands and sole purpose is to dedicate their lives to The First Ones and the pursuit of the fulfillment of the ancient peace prophecy. This prophecy is believed to end the centuries long war between the Vanguards and the Ethereals. Excitement and curiosity drive Layla and Samson to attend the festival, against their parents wishes and despite their years of hiding Layla's secret. Before the reading of the Prophecy, Elder Werrick, leader of the Ecclesiastics, notices Layla and is immediately convinced she is the long-awaited Fulfillment.
Layla is now whisked away from her family, her home, and her life to become this Fulfillment of a prophecy she's not even sure she believes. By being the fulfillment, she will be forced to marry the Prince the Ethereals, her sworn enemy. Terrified, Samson tries and fails to stop the abduction and is captured, to be taken to the Ecclesiastical compound. Their older brother and Vanguard soldier Grant tries and also fails to stop Elder Werrick. Even the King Rex of Vanguard allows Layla to be taken to Etherea despite heated opposition from his son, Prince Vance and Queen Montessa.
On the way to Etherea, the Ecclesiastic carriage is attacked and Layla is taken from the Elder's clutches. Fighting her way out, Layla frees herself only to accidentally run into Nash, a stranger with no apparent allegiances. Nash also carries a big secret which has pushed him to the shadows his whole life. Now that he has met Layla, he no longer wants to live in those shadows. When it is discovered that the Elder's proclaimed her the Fulfillment, he must resist his growing attraction for her safety and the promise of peace.
Word has gotten out to the Ethereals that the Fulfillment has been found. Prince Wilhelm is reluctant to meet this Vanguard girl who is to become his wife. He has been brought up to believe that Vanguards are ruthless and evil and desire to slaughter his people. How can he grow to love his enemy? He wonders how it is possible that he is a part in this ancient prophecy and how can he protect his kingdom with a Vanguard at his side, despite his desire for this promised peace.
In a twist of fate, Layla awakens in a beautiful room with intricately braided, colorful ribbons and a younger girl sitting across the room from her. She is now in the palace of her enemy...
For more, you will need to read “The Prophecy”. If you like well-written, well developed YA books, this is a must read and will not disappoint!
September 30, 2015
I know I'm late to the game reading The Prophecy (The Fulfillment Series #1 by Erin Rhew), but with The Fulfillment (Book 3 of the series) on its way to release in a couple of weeks, I wanted to catch up!
I loved reading this book, imagining the world Ms. Rhew created, and falling in love with the characters. I thought I'd have a hard time keeping up, since fantasy isn't my usual genre, but I had no problem. Ms. Rhew does a great job of keeping the voice of each character separate and adding enough description that a clear picture was created in my head from first introduction. I read this book and it played through my mind like a movie-- the castles, the dungeon, the maze, the woods, it's all in my head.
I enjoyed how Layla's strength and femininity, Wil's noble gentleness and cuteness, and Nash's internal struggles and hotness, made for a love triangle that I'm not entirely sure who I'm rooting for! (TeamWho??? Help!). Usually I can figure out who's going to get the girl from page one, but the love triangle in The Prophecy reminds me of that in the early seasons of The Vampire Diaries--you end up rooting for two guys and fall in love with them both.
Don't even get me started on the last chapter. I couldn't believe the scene Ms. Rhew left us in at the end of Book 1! Honestly, I was almost angry at her :) However, I'm thankful that I can order Book 2 TODAY so I can continue the story. Heck, I may as well preorder Book 3 now, since I'm completely hooked.
I loved reading this book, imagining the world Ms. Rhew created, and falling in love with the characters. I thought I'd have a hard time keeping up, since fantasy isn't my usual genre, but I had no problem. Ms. Rhew does a great job of keeping the voice of each character separate and adding enough description that a clear picture was created in my head from first introduction. I read this book and it played through my mind like a movie-- the castles, the dungeon, the maze, the woods, it's all in my head.
I enjoyed how Layla's strength and femininity, Wil's noble gentleness and cuteness, and Nash's internal struggles and hotness, made for a love triangle that I'm not entirely sure who I'm rooting for! (TeamWho??? Help!). Usually I can figure out who's going to get the girl from page one, but the love triangle in The Prophecy reminds me of that in the early seasons of The Vampire Diaries--you end up rooting for two guys and fall in love with them both.
Don't even get me started on the last chapter. I couldn't believe the scene Ms. Rhew left us in at the end of Book 1! Honestly, I was almost angry at her :) However, I'm thankful that I can order Book 2 TODAY so I can continue the story. Heck, I may as well preorder Book 3 now, since I'm completely hooked.
December 4, 2013
Erin Albert's The Prophecy is the first book in what promises to be an action-packed fantasy series. Layla Givens goes to great lengths to hide her purple eyes, a color that marks her as a one who may be The Fulfillment to a prophecy that will unite the Ethereals, Vanguards, and Outlanders. When she is discovered by the religious sect the Ecclesiastics, she is forced to go on a journey that will test her Vanguard strength, her beliefs, and her heart.
The Prophecy is a sweeping epic fantasy full of adventure and romance. I fell in love with the world and the characters. Mysterious Nash and chivalrous Prince Wil are both swoonworthy in their unique ways, though I have to admit I lean to the Nash side...dark, handsome, and strong. Oh my! And the ending leaves you breathless waiting for the next installment.
The Prophecy is a sweeping epic fantasy full of adventure and romance. I fell in love with the world and the characters. Mysterious Nash and chivalrous Prince Wil are both swoonworthy in their unique ways, though I have to admit I lean to the Nash side...dark, handsome, and strong. Oh my! And the ending leaves you breathless waiting for the next installment.
February 16, 2014
Oh, First Ones! I had to pry myself away torturously each time I started reading! This fast paced, high fantasy story is sure to grab your attention from the first page! Honestly, I'm not a big fantasy fan, but Mrs. Albert proved otherwise! Well played, Erin, WELL PLAYED! The only downside is I have to wait TOO long until the next one is released!
November 28, 2013
The Prophecy was a GREAT book! Like about every book you have to read a couple pages to get into it, but once you get started you can't put it down! I fell in love with all the characters, I don't think I can choose a favorite character. I HIGHLY recommend this book!!!
January 27, 2015
THAT WAS AMAZING, I LOVED IT, GIVE ME THE SEQUEL NOW. WHERE WAS THIS BOOK? READ IT NOW.
I will admit, I got the push to read this book as a result of Crystal in Bookland's huge giveaway but it was already on my Nook beforehand. And I am so regretting not getting to it sooner!
I fell so in love with Layla's character! She is such a real character.
There was a moment where she was almost facing her own death however unlike the general routine of either cowering in fear or showcasing random amounts of bravery, Layla uses a different approach. More realistic I believe.
"[...] I have to kill you."
She wanted to scream or argue, to beg for her life, yet only one word slipped from her mouth. "Why?"
She has such human characteristics. In the YA world where you can literally be whoever you want and in a fantasy novel the characters can sometimes lost the humane qualities. Girly-ness that comes from most teenagers especially around a cute boy mixed with the Vanguard strength and toughness blended perfectly. And she also refreshingly made mistakes! But they also weren't the type that resulted in death because it was that serious of a situation. She just had some down-right simple screw ups. And it was cute...
He turned and caught her staring at his lips no less. Her face grew warm.
I loved all the other characters as well. Vespa was the best friend kind of character. Amidst all the craziness, jealousy, misunderstandings and unjust hatred she is loyal. unbiased and honest. Even if you stake a claim against her own family, she would feel some type of way but would still listen.
I loved her specific relationships with Layla so much. They were both little sisters to two big brothers and were closer than they thought were more of family than either knew to be honest... And they broke the barrier of helpless little sister/female character, and just because you are in love with a boy does not mean you suddenly become unable to defend yourself.
Her brothers were also amazing. Grant showed up early and later on, but the boy brought his A-Game with him! And Samson, boy where the hell were you? I really hope he shows up more in the sequel and Grant cause I love sibling scenes! Also whether or not her mom and dad are going to show up.
THE BOYS THOUGH. I love Will and Nash so much <3 Layla was in the worst kind of love triangle, herself vs. brothers. There isn't too much that can be said because most of their relationships weren't real and delving further could spoil severely but another reason I REALLY NEED THE SEQUEL!
This book had some really cool parts to it. The POV wasn't a set of characters, it was more of an as needed basis. If the story switched and the previous storyteller wasn't there, the POV would simply change and sometimes never be spoken of again.
There were some "OH SHIT!" moments, but it wasn't huge in the moment, more like "Okay, this has happened, we've processed it, now what the hell is going to happen now??"
Shit also hits the fan on an astronomical level near the end of the book. You will know when you get there, so just be sure you have the hours in the day to finish it cause you're not going to want to put it down.
By the end of this book I felt every single "nice" or on the good guy side characters felt the same about each other. They all would lay down their lives for each other without a second thought. Grant, Samson, Nash, Will, Layla, Vespa (and Samson too :) are a family on their own. The Volton was also a nice little character. He was the single looming father figure who seemed to genuinely care about each younger characters best interest and whether they lived or died.
Opposing, there have been few times when I have hated a character so much. Most of the times when I want to enter a book world I want to make out with the hot love interest, (and I did) but on the same level I wanted to strangle the life out of Elder Werrick.
October 13, 2014
I love getting lost in a story. I can happily let hours slip by as I experience the lives of new friends and foes in exotic, unfamiliar worlds. I journey with them, experiencing their struggles and their triumphs, as they progress on epic adventures. A great storyteller will seize and hold my attention, make me happy or sad, excited or angry, all with the press of a key on their laptop.
Erin Rhew wields such super powers. From the first word in the first chapter, her book captured my attention. Her debut novel, The Prophecy, enveloped me in a new and unique universe created by a very powerful imagination. Through its pages I lived and experienced the adventures of Layla, Samson, Grant, Nash, Wil, and a host of other relatable, complex characters. Chapter by chapter time sailed by and I found myself excited for my favorites' victories and angry at their treatment in the hands of their enemies.
The only problem? The book ends in a cliffhanger and I, along with the rest of the world, am frustratingly forced to wait until the next segment, The Outlanders, is released to know what happens. Sigh.
That, my friends, is fantastic storytelling.
The tale starts up with 17 year old Layla Givens on her way to her town's annual celebration. Her people observe The Day of Dawning, a festive holiday that honors the First Ones--the founders of their religion. The city of Medlin is brightly decorated and a myriad of fun activities are in progress when the religious sect, the Ecclesiastics, arrive. Every year they perform the religious part of the ceremony, only this time things are different.
The leader of the group, Elder Werrick, orders all the town decorations removed and the activities canceled, claiming these things are not a "proper honoring" of the First Ones. As the town decor is disassembled he meets Layla. Almost instantly he declares her the Fulfillment, the young woman foretold in their sacred scripts that would bring about peace between the different kingdoms.
Layla is a Vanguard, a kingdom of fierce warriors that possess supernatural physical strength, and betrothed to Samson, another Vanguard. She is told by Werrick she will marry the Prince of the Ethereals, a kingdom of people that have the power to alter minds: the ability to both project images and remove memories. These two countries are sworn enemies of one another and have been warring for centuries. She tries to fight this declaration and her capture. Only the Ecclesiastics have imprisoned Samson and other members of her family and are threatening them to ensure her cooperation. Thus setting the scene that creates unlikely allies, hidden dangers, romance, anguish, and many epic battles.
The tale is told in a strong, formal voice, like nothing I've ever read before, and have come to think of as the Erin Rhew Style. Filled with noble princes and princesses; deep and complex characters; manipulative, merciless antagonists; and plot twist after plot twist, The Prophecy will keep you guessing.
Then of course there is the cliffhanger ending. But I digress.
Come on book two!!!!
Erin Rhew wields such super powers. From the first word in the first chapter, her book captured my attention. Her debut novel, The Prophecy, enveloped me in a new and unique universe created by a very powerful imagination. Through its pages I lived and experienced the adventures of Layla, Samson, Grant, Nash, Wil, and a host of other relatable, complex characters. Chapter by chapter time sailed by and I found myself excited for my favorites' victories and angry at their treatment in the hands of their enemies.
The only problem? The book ends in a cliffhanger and I, along with the rest of the world, am frustratingly forced to wait until the next segment, The Outlanders, is released to know what happens. Sigh.
That, my friends, is fantastic storytelling.
The tale starts up with 17 year old Layla Givens on her way to her town's annual celebration. Her people observe The Day of Dawning, a festive holiday that honors the First Ones--the founders of their religion. The city of Medlin is brightly decorated and a myriad of fun activities are in progress when the religious sect, the Ecclesiastics, arrive. Every year they perform the religious part of the ceremony, only this time things are different.
The leader of the group, Elder Werrick, orders all the town decorations removed and the activities canceled, claiming these things are not a "proper honoring" of the First Ones. As the town decor is disassembled he meets Layla. Almost instantly he declares her the Fulfillment, the young woman foretold in their sacred scripts that would bring about peace between the different kingdoms.
Layla is a Vanguard, a kingdom of fierce warriors that possess supernatural physical strength, and betrothed to Samson, another Vanguard. She is told by Werrick she will marry the Prince of the Ethereals, a kingdom of people that have the power to alter minds: the ability to both project images and remove memories. These two countries are sworn enemies of one another and have been warring for centuries. She tries to fight this declaration and her capture. Only the Ecclesiastics have imprisoned Samson and other members of her family and are threatening them to ensure her cooperation. Thus setting the scene that creates unlikely allies, hidden dangers, romance, anguish, and many epic battles.
The tale is told in a strong, formal voice, like nothing I've ever read before, and have come to think of as the Erin Rhew Style. Filled with noble princes and princesses; deep and complex characters; manipulative, merciless antagonists; and plot twist after plot twist, The Prophecy will keep you guessing.
Then of course there is the cliffhanger ending. But I digress.
Come on book two!!!!
November 26, 2013
I've been excited to read this book ever since getting to know Erin on Twitter!
When Layla goes to the market with her friend Samson, the last thing she expects is to be kidnapped by the Ecclesiastics, who see her purple eyes as a sign that she may be able to fulfil their prophecy. Sent away to marry the son of an enemy to bring peace between the Vanguards and the Ethereals as her duty to the First Ones, she falls in love with her betrothed’s brother, Nash. Layla and her betrothed, Wilhelm, have to put aside their feelings and prejudices for the sake of peace, before war erupts between the two kingdoms.
I love the idea of the Vanguards having unnatural strength whilst the Ethereals have the ability to influence thoughts and memories, and the role these abilities play in the plot. The fantasy world is well-thought-out with a Game of Thrones-esque vibe to the scheming groups and arranged marriages. I’m really interested in the other groups, the Ecclesiastics and the Outlanders, and am looking forward to finding out more about them in the coming sequels.
A must-read for fans of action-packed fantasy with romance and great characters, The Prophecy is a fantastic start to a new trilogy and I’m eagerly awaiting the next book!
When Layla goes to the market with her friend Samson, the last thing she expects is to be kidnapped by the Ecclesiastics, who see her purple eyes as a sign that she may be able to fulfil their prophecy. Sent away to marry the son of an enemy to bring peace between the Vanguards and the Ethereals as her duty to the First Ones, she falls in love with her betrothed’s brother, Nash. Layla and her betrothed, Wilhelm, have to put aside their feelings and prejudices for the sake of peace, before war erupts between the two kingdoms.
I love the idea of the Vanguards having unnatural strength whilst the Ethereals have the ability to influence thoughts and memories, and the role these abilities play in the plot. The fantasy world is well-thought-out with a Game of Thrones-esque vibe to the scheming groups and arranged marriages. I’m really interested in the other groups, the Ecclesiastics and the Outlanders, and am looking forward to finding out more about them in the coming sequels.
A must-read for fans of action-packed fantasy with romance and great characters, The Prophecy is a fantastic start to a new trilogy and I’m eagerly awaiting the next book!
May 20, 2015
Did I enjoy this book: I loved it. I spent an entire Saturday morning (and a bit of the afternoon) neglecting my family for this book. I didn’t make breakfast (I assume my son helped himself to a block of cheese or a half dozen dinner rolls or something). I didn’t make anyone (including myself) get dressed, and I didn’t even do last night’s dinner dishes. (Um, no. I didn’t do them last night either. Don’t judge.)
Mary Waibel’s written a winner. Her characters are fun, her writing is compelling, and her creativity will keep you from putting this book down once you’ve started it. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Would I recommend it: Absolutely.
As reviewed by Melissa at Every Free Chance Books.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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Mary Waibel’s written a winner. Her characters are fun, her writing is compelling, and her creativity will keep you from putting this book down once you’ve started it. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Would I recommend it: Absolutely.
As reviewed by Melissa at Every Free Chance Books.
Disclosure: I received a complimentary copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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December 4, 2013
Looking for a really fun read with a great world, a strong heroine, yummy guys, and an edge-of-your-seat story? Then you're totally going to love THE PROPHESY. Plenty of intrigue keeps this fast-paced story moving, especially a crazy enemy with the power to influence the hearts and minds of the characters. I loved reading about the world Albert created, and especially how Layla is faced with impossible choices--and two distinctly amazing guys :) I'm definitely on team Wil! If you love high fantasy with a setting that makes you feel like you're right in the room with the characters, this is going to be a book you'll love!
August 25, 2016
Wow, this story is awesome. It was great from the beginning when they were running up the hill to get cinnamon bread and it kept getting better and better. I really like all the characters. Layla, who is one of the main characters in strong and can actually fight and defend herself. I love both Nash and Wil, can't wait to learn more about them in book 2. Who is she going to pick?!?! I don't know if I would be able to choose, why not both? The ending was a bit of a shock for me and it left on a cliffhanger. I ABSOLUTELY NEED to read book 2, now!!!!
September 13, 2016
This story has a perfect balance between the human and the supernatural realms. Callie, a high school student, discovers her life is not what it really seemed to be, including her friends ... A good read with some really great twists and turns. Your tween and teen will love it! ... but I also LOVED it!
December 4, 2013
I really enjoyed The Prophecy. The characters drew me in right away- which is always a good sign. The story is interesting and kept me reading. The ending definitely left me wanting more and I can't wait to see what happens next!
January 7, 2014
This is an incredible story. I am very impressed. The storyline is overwhelmingly original. I appreciate the tone used during the adventure, the love triangle, the love for family, and the like. I have stumbled upon this novel after winning it via giveaway; indeed I was deeply entertained.
February 8, 2014
I wasn't sure in the first few chapters what I thought.... Then I was hooked!! Can't wait for book two!! When will it be out?
November 29, 2014
I've read this title twice now, and I still love it! Normally, I'm not a fantasy fan, but Rhew totally pulled me into her world and then blew me away! I'll definitely be starting #2 shortly!
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November 20, 2014A perfect urban fantasy for fans of Aprilynne Pike's WINGS series. If you loved those books, you'll adore this one too!
January 7, 2014
LOVED IT ENOUGH SAID GO READ IT
April 24, 2015
MEL'S POINT OF REVIEW: FAERY MARKED BY MARY WAIBEL
(original review, expanded with fun gifs, etc is posted on my website's blog)
Quite a long time back, Mary Waibel requested that I read and review her latest book FAERY MARKED. When I say, 'quite a long time back,' I mean like, a while before it was released, she came to Jen and I with the request that we participate in her blog tour.
Of course, Jen reads and reviews a TON of books with Psychocat Reads Reviews, and we host a lot of book tours here on the Dragon Blog. Jen is a great book reviewer, fair, honest, yet not overly harsh and critical. She is the ideal reviewer for an author's book and the ideal reviewer whose reviews a reader should check out when looking for their next book. Her reviews are thorough, insightful, and never reveal spoilers.
To be honest, I'm brutal, nitpicky, cringe at editing flaws as if they're claws on a chalkboard, won't let go of anything that irritates me, and will hold grudges against failed character development and plot holes. I am the person who gave THE FAULT IN OUR STARS a 4-star review because of one significant failing that bothered me to no end.
However, even with that warning, Mary was resilient, and agreed she was up for such a review. I also warned her that I had no idea when I'd have a chance to actually read it and post a review, but Jen put her own review on the schedule with a solid date, so mine would come when it came. Just ask my husband, I'm not the most reliable for getting things done that aren't on hard and fast NECESSARY deadlines. (Read that as: I am ALWAYS late for EVERYTHING.)
I did manage to read FAERY MARKED sometime back in January though. Since then, I've been plagued with the problem of how to review it, what to say, and how many stars I actually wanted to rate it. I don't take my reviewing of a book lightly. A lot of thought goes into my reaction to a book and where it falls in the grand scheme of my opinions.
1) I really like Mary as a person and held great hopes that the first book I read of hers would live up to my expectations of her as an author as well, but my personal thoughts of a person should not and will not have any effect on how I rate their work. Book reviews should always be objective.
2) I actually loved the overall story, plot arc, main character developments, and world-building within the pages of FAERY MARKED. These elements did not fail to keep me entertained a great deal, and because of them, I finished the book in a relatively short period of time, despite many other things going on when I was trying to read it.
3) There were three major issues I had with the book that nagged at me during reading and long after, which impacted my ability to come to a clear decision on how to go about reviewing the book and actually left me avoiding writing the review.
After much consideration, discussion with Jen and even with my husband, I finally concluded I simply HAD to write this review and came to a decision on the rating I would give FAERY MARKED.
First of all, I will say this, I like FAERY MARKED. That being said, I wasn't kidding that I had three major issues that just bugged the ever-loving shit out of me, so let's talk about those...
1) The Best Friend.
If we weren't TOLD Callie had a best friend, I'm not sure I ever would have figured out or believed she had such a thing, at least not anyone outside the realm of maybe her brother or her brother's best friend. Even though we're introduced to said BFF early on, she then basically goes MIA for no apparent reason, and despite the fact that I rather liked her immediately and thought she had excellent potential as a secondary character, she essentially stayed SO FAR IN THE BACKGROUND that she was kind of like that BFF you had in high school who you haven't seen in so long you'd have to Google directions to her house to make sure you didn't miss a turn if you decided to go over there, but hey, you guys ALWAYS like each other's statuses on Facebook, and sometimes you even comment, so like you MUST still be BFFs, right?
Um, sure.
I spent the majority of the book wondering where she'd gone off to and waiting for her to come back...
Which she EVENTUALLY did, and with a COOL BACKSTORY, BRO, but I still wanted more and felt disappointed with the overall usage of this character, though finding out who she was in the end let me think there was maybe some reason she wasn't around as much as I wanted her to be. Maybe.
2) The Riddle.
Okay. So the entire premise of the book revolves around the importance of Callie finding 'the Cordial' for the Fae, which can only be found by figuring out this super-duper, so-difficult-it's-nearly-impossible, OMG-this-human-will-never-figure-it-out riddle. When the queen finally opens the scroll and reveals the riddle, I read it, figured out the answer immediately, and wondered what the trick was. What was I missing? Was there another piece to this puzzle? Would the queen whip out some secondary part to the riddle, making the whole thing suddenly next to impossible?
Nope.
Then I thought, well, maybe these faeries are incredibly literal as a species, and this riddle is just not easy for them because they're not wired to think that way. But Callie didn't get it either.
I spent a lot of time yelling at my Kindle Fire, telling the characters the answer, which clearly didn't help. Unfortunately, at no time did anything happen to give me any relief that this seeming inability to figure out a simple problem was either reasonable or warranted. When I mentioned this issue to Jen, she reminded me that FAERY MARKED is a YA book, so I asked my 13yo about it. She read the riddle and figured out the answer as quickly as I did.
This did not bode well for changing my mind about this being a seriously weak spot. This remains a problem that irks me when thinking back on my reading experience.
3) The Trauma.
From the beginning of the book Callie suffers from a serious fear, as in, terrifying phobia-type fear that I'd say is rather PTSD-induced. It makes a ton of sense given the origins of her fear, and I had no qualms about its existence whatsoever. It was a logical and sound fear/anxiety/phobia as far as those things go. This showed up in various ways throughout the book, mentioned in rational and plot-apppropriate ways.
Then suddenly, her fear vanished. And I don't mean that the mentions of it stopped. I mean that she stopped having the fear, and it was clearly noticed by the character that she did so, but without a single explanation in sight, and no explanation to follow later on either.
After such a superb character development regarding this particular element of her personality, I was left slightly frustrated and disappointed for the remainder of the book, knowing Mary could have done something better with that.
I can only hope that this is something addressed in the next book, because I truly feel it was an excellent piece of Callie's personality and one which was resolved far too quickly.
That wraps up my major three issues with the book.
What were my final thoughts on FAERY MARKED?
Mary Waibel's writing is solid and beautiful. It flowed in a way that kept me reading from page to page, easily losing track of how far I'd gone, despite any agitation with the aforementioned issues. The well-developed characters and world helped a lot in leading me to forgive the story's shortcomings, and let me enjoy the fantasy of it all.
For me, it takes a hell of a writer to gloss over any amount of annoyances with the distraction of fantastic prose. In FAERY MARKED, Mary pulled that off, and because of that ability, I finished the book rather than DNFing it out of sheer frustration over issue #2.
With the combination of the issues and Mary's strong writing, FAERY MARKED landed firmly at a 3-star rating for me. The problems pulled it down from 4*, and the writing lifted it from a 2*, so here it is in the middle. I'll definitely be watching for the next book, but it's going to need a better showing on its own merits to keep me as interested through to the end.
Of course, once Mary sees this review, she may not request that I read and review book two...
Still, I'd recommend FAERY MARKED (Book One of the Faery Series) to other readers, with the understanding that most readers aren't as harshly critical as me, and if you read this review and Jen's Psychocat Reads Review you'll know most everything you need to know to be an educated reader before purchasing FAERY MARKED, meaning you're likely going into it knowing you'll like it.
(original review, expanded with fun gifs, etc is posted on my website's blog)
Quite a long time back, Mary Waibel requested that I read and review her latest book FAERY MARKED. When I say, 'quite a long time back,' I mean like, a while before it was released, she came to Jen and I with the request that we participate in her blog tour.
Of course, Jen reads and reviews a TON of books with Psychocat Reads Reviews, and we host a lot of book tours here on the Dragon Blog. Jen is a great book reviewer, fair, honest, yet not overly harsh and critical. She is the ideal reviewer for an author's book and the ideal reviewer whose reviews a reader should check out when looking for their next book. Her reviews are thorough, insightful, and never reveal spoilers.
To be honest, I'm brutal, nitpicky, cringe at editing flaws as if they're claws on a chalkboard, won't let go of anything that irritates me, and will hold grudges against failed character development and plot holes. I am the person who gave THE FAULT IN OUR STARS a 4-star review because of one significant failing that bothered me to no end.
However, even with that warning, Mary was resilient, and agreed she was up for such a review. I also warned her that I had no idea when I'd have a chance to actually read it and post a review, but Jen put her own review on the schedule with a solid date, so mine would come when it came. Just ask my husband, I'm not the most reliable for getting things done that aren't on hard and fast NECESSARY deadlines. (Read that as: I am ALWAYS late for EVERYTHING.)
I did manage to read FAERY MARKED sometime back in January though. Since then, I've been plagued with the problem of how to review it, what to say, and how many stars I actually wanted to rate it. I don't take my reviewing of a book lightly. A lot of thought goes into my reaction to a book and where it falls in the grand scheme of my opinions.
1) I really like Mary as a person and held great hopes that the first book I read of hers would live up to my expectations of her as an author as well, but my personal thoughts of a person should not and will not have any effect on how I rate their work. Book reviews should always be objective.
2) I actually loved the overall story, plot arc, main character developments, and world-building within the pages of FAERY MARKED. These elements did not fail to keep me entertained a great deal, and because of them, I finished the book in a relatively short period of time, despite many other things going on when I was trying to read it.
3) There were three major issues I had with the book that nagged at me during reading and long after, which impacted my ability to come to a clear decision on how to go about reviewing the book and actually left me avoiding writing the review.
After much consideration, discussion with Jen and even with my husband, I finally concluded I simply HAD to write this review and came to a decision on the rating I would give FAERY MARKED.
First of all, I will say this, I like FAERY MARKED. That being said, I wasn't kidding that I had three major issues that just bugged the ever-loving shit out of me, so let's talk about those...
1) The Best Friend.
If we weren't TOLD Callie had a best friend, I'm not sure I ever would have figured out or believed she had such a thing, at least not anyone outside the realm of maybe her brother or her brother's best friend. Even though we're introduced to said BFF early on, she then basically goes MIA for no apparent reason, and despite the fact that I rather liked her immediately and thought she had excellent potential as a secondary character, she essentially stayed SO FAR IN THE BACKGROUND that she was kind of like that BFF you had in high school who you haven't seen in so long you'd have to Google directions to her house to make sure you didn't miss a turn if you decided to go over there, but hey, you guys ALWAYS like each other's statuses on Facebook, and sometimes you even comment, so like you MUST still be BFFs, right?
Um, sure.
I spent the majority of the book wondering where she'd gone off to and waiting for her to come back...
Which she EVENTUALLY did, and with a COOL BACKSTORY, BRO, but I still wanted more and felt disappointed with the overall usage of this character, though finding out who she was in the end let me think there was maybe some reason she wasn't around as much as I wanted her to be. Maybe.
2) The Riddle.
Okay. So the entire premise of the book revolves around the importance of Callie finding 'the Cordial' for the Fae, which can only be found by figuring out this super-duper, so-difficult-it's-nearly-impossible, OMG-this-human-will-never-figure-it-out riddle. When the queen finally opens the scroll and reveals the riddle, I read it, figured out the answer immediately, and wondered what the trick was. What was I missing? Was there another piece to this puzzle? Would the queen whip out some secondary part to the riddle, making the whole thing suddenly next to impossible?
Nope.
Then I thought, well, maybe these faeries are incredibly literal as a species, and this riddle is just not easy for them because they're not wired to think that way. But Callie didn't get it either.
I spent a lot of time yelling at my Kindle Fire, telling the characters the answer, which clearly didn't help. Unfortunately, at no time did anything happen to give me any relief that this seeming inability to figure out a simple problem was either reasonable or warranted. When I mentioned this issue to Jen, she reminded me that FAERY MARKED is a YA book, so I asked my 13yo about it. She read the riddle and figured out the answer as quickly as I did.
This did not bode well for changing my mind about this being a seriously weak spot. This remains a problem that irks me when thinking back on my reading experience.
3) The Trauma.
From the beginning of the book Callie suffers from a serious fear, as in, terrifying phobia-type fear that I'd say is rather PTSD-induced. It makes a ton of sense given the origins of her fear, and I had no qualms about its existence whatsoever. It was a logical and sound fear/anxiety/phobia as far as those things go. This showed up in various ways throughout the book, mentioned in rational and plot-apppropriate ways.
Then suddenly, her fear vanished. And I don't mean that the mentions of it stopped. I mean that she stopped having the fear, and it was clearly noticed by the character that she did so, but without a single explanation in sight, and no explanation to follow later on either.
After such a superb character development regarding this particular element of her personality, I was left slightly frustrated and disappointed for the remainder of the book, knowing Mary could have done something better with that.
I can only hope that this is something addressed in the next book, because I truly feel it was an excellent piece of Callie's personality and one which was resolved far too quickly.
That wraps up my major three issues with the book.
What were my final thoughts on FAERY MARKED?
Mary Waibel's writing is solid and beautiful. It flowed in a way that kept me reading from page to page, easily losing track of how far I'd gone, despite any agitation with the aforementioned issues. The well-developed characters and world helped a lot in leading me to forgive the story's shortcomings, and let me enjoy the fantasy of it all.
For me, it takes a hell of a writer to gloss over any amount of annoyances with the distraction of fantastic prose. In FAERY MARKED, Mary pulled that off, and because of that ability, I finished the book rather than DNFing it out of sheer frustration over issue #2.
With the combination of the issues and Mary's strong writing, FAERY MARKED landed firmly at a 3-star rating for me. The problems pulled it down from 4*, and the writing lifted it from a 2*, so here it is in the middle. I'll definitely be watching for the next book, but it's going to need a better showing on its own merits to keep me as interested through to the end.
Of course, once Mary sees this review, she may not request that I read and review book two...
Still, I'd recommend FAERY MARKED (Book One of the Faery Series) to other readers, with the understanding that most readers aren't as harshly critical as me, and if you read this review and Jen's Psychocat Reads Review you'll know most everything you need to know to be an educated reader before purchasing FAERY MARKED, meaning you're likely going into it knowing you'll like it.
January 1, 2014
This review and many others can be found on my blog - Feed Your Fiction Addiction
The Prophecy is an exciting new YA fantasy novel. It's a great hidden gem that I'm hoping lots of people will find - because it definitely deserves an audience!
Layla has lived her life hiding her eyes - purple eyes that mean she could be The Fulfillment, the girl who is prophesied to bring peace to the warring Ethereals and Vanguards. Between the Vanguards' incredible strength and the Ethereals' uncanny ability to control minds, trust has never been possible between the two races and peace seems unattainable. But the prophecy says that The Fulfillment will marry the Ethereal Prince and bring peace. When a religious leader declares that Layla is The Fulfillment, she has no choice but to go to the Ethereal palace and play along - whether she believes in the prophecy or not. But she finds herself conflicted between the man she is supposed to marry and the man who she believes has stolen her heart - if she can trust it, which she discovers may not be such a simple question after all.
The negatives:
The title and cover.
Neither the title nor the cover of this book is very exciting. Every fantasy novel ever has a prophecy in it (okay, slight exaggeration, but not by much), so the name The Prophecy just doesn't seem all that special or interesting. I wish Erin would have called it The Fulfillment (though maybe she's reserving that for a future book?), Similarly, the cover just doesn't draw me in and doesn't say a ton about the story. I'm one of those horrible people who totally judges a book by its cover, so I'm really glad that I got past the cover (and title) and agreed to review this book anyway. I would have missed out on an amazing read!
What I LOVED:
Layla.
Layla was a fantastic main character. I totally felt for her as she was pulled from everything she knew, sent off to marry some enemy prince. I loved that she had to move past a lot of her preconceived notions and prejudices about the Ethereals and eventually came to love them (or at least some of them). Layla was smart and strong and she didn't just roll over and accept her fate - she fought for her freedom and for the right to choose the type of life she wanted to live. I loved her!
The romance(s).
Okay, if I look at past reading experience, I should not have loved this book. Here's the thing, there's a love triangle and insta-love! It seems like a horrible combination, and usually insta-love alone is enough to make me cringe and ruin my enjoyment of a book. So, why did I LOVE this book anyway? Well, I think it mostly comes down to the characters. I loved them all! First off, I was completely in love with both of the men in Layla's life and I honestly couldn't decide between them, so I could understand how Layla couldn't either. Wil was sweet and loving and loyal, but still strong and Nash was the misunderstood type - the guy who just needs someone to love him the way he deserves to be loved. I LOVED Nash... no, Wil... no, Nash... um, yep, that pretty much sums it up. And then, when certain facts about Layla's feelings for both of them came to light, I found myself feeling even more confused (just as she did) - I can't WAIT to see what Albert has in store for these three in book 2! So, what about that insta-love? If you read my reviews, you know that I am not a fan of insta-love and Layla falls for both Wil and Nash pretty quickly. But, somehow Albert managed to form a real connection between the characters in a short amount of time - the high stakes and high emotion (not to mention possible supernatural causes of their feelings) made it all feel believable. I didn't find myself frustrated over why Layla fell for these boys so quickly - instead I found myself pulling out my hair, crying "How will she ever choose!!??" (Okay, so that was a little dramatic, but only a slight exaggeration!)
No super-evil villains.
I love it when a book blurs the lines between good and evil. In this book, there are some characters who definitely fall into that gray area. The bad guys might not be all bad - and some of them might have good intentions (or not - hard to say). Even one of the major villains is deeply loved by many of the other characters. This makes for a complex and interesting conflict!
The ending.
Yep, it's a cliffhanger (on a few different levels) and it left me waiting desperately for the next book!!!
I highly recommend The Prophecy to fans of YA fantasy. I absolutely cannot wait to find out what Albert has in store for us in the second installment! 5/5 stars.
***Disclosure: This book was provided to me by the author in exchange for an honest review. No other compensation was given. All opinions are my own***
The Prophecy is an exciting new YA fantasy novel. It's a great hidden gem that I'm hoping lots of people will find - because it definitely deserves an audience!
Layla has lived her life hiding her eyes - purple eyes that mean she could be The Fulfillment, the girl who is prophesied to bring peace to the warring Ethereals and Vanguards. Between the Vanguards' incredible strength and the Ethereals' uncanny ability to control minds, trust has never been possible between the two races and peace seems unattainable. But the prophecy says that The Fulfillment will marry the Ethereal Prince and bring peace. When a religious leader declares that Layla is The Fulfillment, she has no choice but to go to the Ethereal palace and play along - whether she believes in the prophecy or not. But she finds herself conflicted between the man she is supposed to marry and the man who she believes has stolen her heart - if she can trust it, which she discovers may not be such a simple question after all.
The negatives:
The title and cover.
Neither the title nor the cover of this book is very exciting. Every fantasy novel ever has a prophecy in it (okay, slight exaggeration, but not by much), so the name The Prophecy just doesn't seem all that special or interesting. I wish Erin would have called it The Fulfillment (though maybe she's reserving that for a future book?), Similarly, the cover just doesn't draw me in and doesn't say a ton about the story. I'm one of those horrible people who totally judges a book by its cover, so I'm really glad that I got past the cover (and title) and agreed to review this book anyway. I would have missed out on an amazing read!
What I LOVED:
Layla.
Layla was a fantastic main character. I totally felt for her as she was pulled from everything she knew, sent off to marry some enemy prince. I loved that she had to move past a lot of her preconceived notions and prejudices about the Ethereals and eventually came to love them (or at least some of them). Layla was smart and strong and she didn't just roll over and accept her fate - she fought for her freedom and for the right to choose the type of life she wanted to live. I loved her!
The romance(s).
Okay, if I look at past reading experience, I should not have loved this book. Here's the thing, there's a love triangle and insta-love! It seems like a horrible combination, and usually insta-love alone is enough to make me cringe and ruin my enjoyment of a book. So, why did I LOVE this book anyway? Well, I think it mostly comes down to the characters. I loved them all! First off, I was completely in love with both of the men in Layla's life and I honestly couldn't decide between them, so I could understand how Layla couldn't either. Wil was sweet and loving and loyal, but still strong and Nash was the misunderstood type - the guy who just needs someone to love him the way he deserves to be loved. I LOVED Nash... no, Wil... no, Nash... um, yep, that pretty much sums it up. And then, when certain facts about Layla's feelings for both of them came to light, I found myself feeling even more confused (just as she did) - I can't WAIT to see what Albert has in store for these three in book 2! So, what about that insta-love? If you read my reviews, you know that I am not a fan of insta-love and Layla falls for both Wil and Nash pretty quickly. But, somehow Albert managed to form a real connection between the characters in a short amount of time - the high stakes and high emotion (not to mention possible supernatural causes of their feelings) made it all feel believable. I didn't find myself frustrated over why Layla fell for these boys so quickly - instead I found myself pulling out my hair, crying "How will she ever choose!!??" (Okay, so that was a little dramatic, but only a slight exaggeration!)
No super-evil villains.
I love it when a book blurs the lines between good and evil. In this book, there are some characters who definitely fall into that gray area. The bad guys might not be all bad - and some of them might have good intentions (or not - hard to say). Even one of the major villains is deeply loved by many of the other characters. This makes for a complex and interesting conflict!
The ending.
Yep, it's a cliffhanger (on a few different levels) and it left me waiting desperately for the next book!!!
I highly recommend The Prophecy to fans of YA fantasy. I absolutely cannot wait to find out what Albert has in store for us in the second installment! 5/5 stars.
***Disclosure: This book was provided to me by the author in exchange for an honest review. No other compensation was given. All opinions are my own***
May 29, 2015
I received this book for free from the author or publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
Review:
I love when I can completely immerse myself in a new world and with The Prophecy I did so effortlessly. I was so captivated by the adventures of Layla, Will, and Nash and their various friends and enemies that I read almost the entire book in one sitting! This is going to be a hard book to review without giving anything away so I will do my best.
The Vanguards are a race of soldiers graced with supernatural strength. Layla possess all the attributes of a Vaguard but there’s something different about her with her raven hair and purple eyes. Her adopted family suspects that she is “The Fullfilment” of an ancient prophecy that will bring peace among the kingdoms. In the beginning of the story, Layla sneaks off with Samson, to partake in the Day of Dawning, a yearly festival celebrating the First Ones. Generally, the Ecclesiastics, a religious sect, perform the religious portion of the celebration. However, when Layla and Samson arrive, the decorations are being stripped down and the town is informed by Elder Werrick that they are dishonoring the First Ones with their celebration.
Despite the precautions Layla took to mask her appearance, Elder Werrick notices her almost immediately and proclaims she is The Fullfilment. He orders his men to capture her but she evades them. In order to gain her cooperation, he has Samson detained and her mother attacked. When Layla finally surrenders, she is informed by Elder Werrick that she will be taken to Ethereal, Vanguards sworn enemy, and forced to marry their prince in order to bring peace to the kingdoms.
On their way to Ethereal, Layla meets King Rex (Vanguard) and his son Vance. It is clear that King Rex desires peace with Ethereal, but his wife and son do not. Vance overthrows Rex and orders Layla’s execution. Layla flees an ambush by Vance’s men and runs into Nash, a handsome Vanguard who helps her escape Vance’s men. Layla and Nash are instantly drawn to one another and almost share a kiss in the forest when they are both knocked unconscious by the Ethereal’s security alarms.
Eventually Layla ends up exactly where she doesn’t want to be, in Ethereal. She is introduced to the royal family, including the prince to which she is bound, Will. She also sees another familiar face among the royal family, Will’s brother.
This story was really well done, I never felt bored and each element was carefully placed to keep the story flowing. I’ve realized over the years I’ve become really picky about how romance is handled in fantasy books, sometimes it really overshadows the world building which did not happen in The Prophecy. I think Rhew could have easily let the romance become a burden to the story but instead it developed the plot line.
I really liked all the characters in this book, including the ones I wasn’t supposed to. It would take me hours to go into each character but I really liked Layla, Vespa, Will, Nash, and Grant a lot. Each of these characters brought their own personalities to the table. Rhew is really able to make her characters three-dimensional, with their own distinct voice.
The world-building in this story is wonderful! I love when an author gives rich descriptions and explanations without bogging the reader down. With all the uncommon names it could have been very easy to get lost in The Prophecy’s world-building but I never felt overwhelmed or confused.
There are a lot of surprising moments in this story leaving me sitting on the edge of my seat with white knuckles trying to figure out what else could possibly be revealed. My heart raced, it fluttered, and on numerous occasions it felt like it stopped in its tracks! Generally it can take me a bit to get my footing in a high fantasy story but with The Prophecy is I was furiously flipping through the pages from the very beginning!
Overall, I loved this book. It’s one of my favorites so far in 2015. There is just enough romance, suspense, and action to keep readers engaged from beginning to end. The characters are well written and fleshed out, and the world-building is some of the best I’ve seen in a YA fantasy novel. I would highly recommend this book and I cannot wait to start book 2! Seriously, go read it.
Read this and other reviews at Teacups and Bookends Blog.
Review:
I love when I can completely immerse myself in a new world and with The Prophecy I did so effortlessly. I was so captivated by the adventures of Layla, Will, and Nash and their various friends and enemies that I read almost the entire book in one sitting! This is going to be a hard book to review without giving anything away so I will do my best.
The Vanguards are a race of soldiers graced with supernatural strength. Layla possess all the attributes of a Vaguard but there’s something different about her with her raven hair and purple eyes. Her adopted family suspects that she is “The Fullfilment” of an ancient prophecy that will bring peace among the kingdoms. In the beginning of the story, Layla sneaks off with Samson, to partake in the Day of Dawning, a yearly festival celebrating the First Ones. Generally, the Ecclesiastics, a religious sect, perform the religious portion of the celebration. However, when Layla and Samson arrive, the decorations are being stripped down and the town is informed by Elder Werrick that they are dishonoring the First Ones with their celebration.
Despite the precautions Layla took to mask her appearance, Elder Werrick notices her almost immediately and proclaims she is The Fullfilment. He orders his men to capture her but she evades them. In order to gain her cooperation, he has Samson detained and her mother attacked. When Layla finally surrenders, she is informed by Elder Werrick that she will be taken to Ethereal, Vanguards sworn enemy, and forced to marry their prince in order to bring peace to the kingdoms.
On their way to Ethereal, Layla meets King Rex (Vanguard) and his son Vance. It is clear that King Rex desires peace with Ethereal, but his wife and son do not. Vance overthrows Rex and orders Layla’s execution. Layla flees an ambush by Vance’s men and runs into Nash, a handsome Vanguard who helps her escape Vance’s men. Layla and Nash are instantly drawn to one another and almost share a kiss in the forest when they are both knocked unconscious by the Ethereal’s security alarms.
Eventually Layla ends up exactly where she doesn’t want to be, in Ethereal. She is introduced to the royal family, including the prince to which she is bound, Will. She also sees another familiar face among the royal family, Will’s brother.
This story was really well done, I never felt bored and each element was carefully placed to keep the story flowing. I’ve realized over the years I’ve become really picky about how romance is handled in fantasy books, sometimes it really overshadows the world building which did not happen in The Prophecy. I think Rhew could have easily let the romance become a burden to the story but instead it developed the plot line.
I really liked all the characters in this book, including the ones I wasn’t supposed to. It would take me hours to go into each character but I really liked Layla, Vespa, Will, Nash, and Grant a lot. Each of these characters brought their own personalities to the table. Rhew is really able to make her characters three-dimensional, with their own distinct voice.
The world-building in this story is wonderful! I love when an author gives rich descriptions and explanations without bogging the reader down. With all the uncommon names it could have been very easy to get lost in The Prophecy’s world-building but I never felt overwhelmed or confused.
There are a lot of surprising moments in this story leaving me sitting on the edge of my seat with white knuckles trying to figure out what else could possibly be revealed. My heart raced, it fluttered, and on numerous occasions it felt like it stopped in its tracks! Generally it can take me a bit to get my footing in a high fantasy story but with The Prophecy is I was furiously flipping through the pages from the very beginning!
Overall, I loved this book. It’s one of my favorites so far in 2015. There is just enough romance, suspense, and action to keep readers engaged from beginning to end. The characters are well written and fleshed out, and the world-building is some of the best I’ve seen in a YA fantasy novel. I would highly recommend this book and I cannot wait to start book 2! Seriously, go read it.
Read this and other reviews at Teacups and Bookends Blog.
February 3, 2015
Psychocat Reads Review of FAERY MARKED by Mary Waibel
(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.)
This is Mary's third run in with Psychocat's claws. THE MYSTERY PRINCE and QUEST OF THE HART both survived. Now it's time to see if the first book in her new Faery Series can make it through unscathed.
The Characters: Calllie is just trying to get through her senior year of high school when strange things start happening. While she may be young, she is also a strong character. She handles the revelation of her role in protecting the portal with both surprise and grace, all while seriously crushing on her Guardian. In a story that could have made Callie very difficult to relate to, the author managed to create a character that I could really cheer for.
There there is Reece, Ryan, and Alex. The three of them have very different roles in relation to Callie, and possess three very different personalities. You're bound to find at least one to enjoy, and the dynamic between the ones that mix is fun to read
One of my favorite characters, even though she doesn't necessarily have a great deal of time devoted to her in the book is Alyssa. She is the perfect "I'll call you on any bullshit you try to feed me" best friend that every girl needs.
The Relationships: Callie and Reese have a complicated relationship. He lives with her and Alex (her brother). She has a huge crush on him, and unbeknownst to her, he's been assigned to protect her until the champion is determined.
Seems straightforward, right?
Um ... NO!
Because there's Alex, determined to protect his sister, and on high alert for anything going on between Callie and Reece.
And there's Ryan. You'll see what I mean when you read the book.
Just trust me, the author will keep you on your toes.
Too Perfect or Perfectly Flawed: Whether referring to Callie's cursh or the race to keep the portal closed, everything is deliciously complicated. Just when you think it might be simple, it isn't.
World Buildiing: The majority of the story takes place in the human realm, though there is a bit of time spent in the Faery Realm. The magical elements are explained as we go, and I had no issue keeping up.
The Book as Part of a Series: FAERY MARKED kicks off what promises to be another strong series from Ms. Waibel. The foundation of the world has been set, coming drama has been teased, and at the same time she delivered a conclusion to the key plot promised for this book. That being said, she still managed to throw in a major cliffie to keep readers anxious for book two.
Why?!?! Why must authors torture us so?
Jen's Final Rating: 5 STARS!! I loved the book. The characters and plot were both engaging. It was fast-paced and often left me with a nervous feeling because I just knew something was going to hit the fan.
Psychocat's Final Rating: Another contest of good vs evil, and I think she's coming down on the wrong side again. Does anyone want a cat that is determined to join the dark side?
(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.)
This is Mary's third run in with Psychocat's claws. THE MYSTERY PRINCE and QUEST OF THE HART both survived. Now it's time to see if the first book in her new Faery Series can make it through unscathed.
The Characters: Calllie is just trying to get through her senior year of high school when strange things start happening. While she may be young, she is also a strong character. She handles the revelation of her role in protecting the portal with both surprise and grace, all while seriously crushing on her Guardian. In a story that could have made Callie very difficult to relate to, the author managed to create a character that I could really cheer for.
There there is Reece, Ryan, and Alex. The three of them have very different roles in relation to Callie, and possess three very different personalities. You're bound to find at least one to enjoy, and the dynamic between the ones that mix is fun to read
One of my favorite characters, even though she doesn't necessarily have a great deal of time devoted to her in the book is Alyssa. She is the perfect "I'll call you on any bullshit you try to feed me" best friend that every girl needs.
The Relationships: Callie and Reese have a complicated relationship. He lives with her and Alex (her brother). She has a huge crush on him, and unbeknownst to her, he's been assigned to protect her until the champion is determined.
Seems straightforward, right?
Um ... NO!
Because there's Alex, determined to protect his sister, and on high alert for anything going on between Callie and Reece.
And there's Ryan. You'll see what I mean when you read the book.
Just trust me, the author will keep you on your toes.
Too Perfect or Perfectly Flawed: Whether referring to Callie's cursh or the race to keep the portal closed, everything is deliciously complicated. Just when you think it might be simple, it isn't.
World Buildiing: The majority of the story takes place in the human realm, though there is a bit of time spent in the Faery Realm. The magical elements are explained as we go, and I had no issue keeping up.
The Book as Part of a Series: FAERY MARKED kicks off what promises to be another strong series from Ms. Waibel. The foundation of the world has been set, coming drama has been teased, and at the same time she delivered a conclusion to the key plot promised for this book. That being said, she still managed to throw in a major cliffie to keep readers anxious for book two.
Why?!?! Why must authors torture us so?
Jen's Final Rating: 5 STARS!! I loved the book. The characters and plot were both engaging. It was fast-paced and often left me with a nervous feeling because I just knew something was going to hit the fan.
Psychocat's Final Rating: Another contest of good vs evil, and I think she's coming down on the wrong side again. Does anyone want a cat that is determined to join the dark side?
April 8, 2015
The Prophecy is an engaging, enticing debut novel by Erin Rhew who gives life to a magical yet traditional world of fantasy. With it’s warring kingdoms, bound to fight until the Fulfilment is complete and it’s array of enigmatic beings, this is a novel that is hard to put down.
Layla Givens refuses to believe her odd appearance is anything but coincidence - she certainly has nothing to do with any ancient prophecy… Or so she argues. Her reluctance to meet and marry the Prince of Ethereal is matched only by his own hesitations, while her unmistaken attraction to the ever-so-wild and charming Nash, the eldest, however neglected Prince of Ethereal is magical in its own right. I really loved Layla’s character, her fierce independence and strength is everything I want in my fictional female protagonists, while the naivety in her misunderstandings of the world are only to be expected by a girl who has been protected her whole life.
I was enthralled by every twist and turn in this exciting novel, the pace is steady-enough that you are constantly itching to turn the page to read what happens next, but it’s not so fast that you don’t get a moment to savour the characters thoughts and processes. I thoroughly sympathised with Layla’s conflicting emotions over the two Princes; Where Wil was kind, gentle and empathetic, Nash was powerful and full of life and despite her instant and unwavering connection to the latter man, it was easy to appreciate the magnitude of appreciation she felt for sweet, caring Wil.
I particularly favoured the dynamics of the Vanguard’s and the Ethereals in this actioned packed novel; at war over ancient theories and bound together by the promise of peace, each Kingdom is strong in their own way and yet I found myself marvelling at Rhew’s parrallell's between masculinity and femininity. As anyone who know’s me is well aware, I love a strong, fearless female character and this is exactly what was provided. If anything, in physicality Layla is the more superior character, as a Vanguard she is born with natural strength and having honed her ability throughout her life she is absolutely stunning in her ferocious ability to protect and fight for what and who she loves. This doesn’t go unnoticed at all either, even Nash, who’s identity becomes all too clear in the end - even to him - is enthralled by her abilities while Prince Wil is considered inferior in some respects with regard to battlefield skills and all the while, this is celebrated by all characters. Hooray for feminism being acknowledged by men and women throughout the novel.
I thoroughly enjoyed The Prophecy and would recommend to any fantasy lovers with a penchant for YA plot twists!
Layla Givens refuses to believe her odd appearance is anything but coincidence - she certainly has nothing to do with any ancient prophecy… Or so she argues. Her reluctance to meet and marry the Prince of Ethereal is matched only by his own hesitations, while her unmistaken attraction to the ever-so-wild and charming Nash, the eldest, however neglected Prince of Ethereal is magical in its own right. I really loved Layla’s character, her fierce independence and strength is everything I want in my fictional female protagonists, while the naivety in her misunderstandings of the world are only to be expected by a girl who has been protected her whole life.
I was enthralled by every twist and turn in this exciting novel, the pace is steady-enough that you are constantly itching to turn the page to read what happens next, but it’s not so fast that you don’t get a moment to savour the characters thoughts and processes. I thoroughly sympathised with Layla’s conflicting emotions over the two Princes; Where Wil was kind, gentle and empathetic, Nash was powerful and full of life and despite her instant and unwavering connection to the latter man, it was easy to appreciate the magnitude of appreciation she felt for sweet, caring Wil.
I particularly favoured the dynamics of the Vanguard’s and the Ethereals in this actioned packed novel; at war over ancient theories and bound together by the promise of peace, each Kingdom is strong in their own way and yet I found myself marvelling at Rhew’s parrallell's between masculinity and femininity. As anyone who know’s me is well aware, I love a strong, fearless female character and this is exactly what was provided. If anything, in physicality Layla is the more superior character, as a Vanguard she is born with natural strength and having honed her ability throughout her life she is absolutely stunning in her ferocious ability to protect and fight for what and who she loves. This doesn’t go unnoticed at all either, even Nash, who’s identity becomes all too clear in the end - even to him - is enthralled by her abilities while Prince Wil is considered inferior in some respects with regard to battlefield skills and all the while, this is celebrated by all characters. Hooray for feminism being acknowledged by men and women throughout the novel.
I thoroughly enjoyed The Prophecy and would recommend to any fantasy lovers with a penchant for YA plot twists!
August 14, 2014
This book had my mind going ALL OVER THE PLACE (in a good way). You know how some stories spend a good chunk of the beginning slowly breaking you into the book? Yeah, not here. It didn’t leave me wondering when the real plot was going to pop up because even in the first pages, action burst forth and I was HOOKED. There were some instances where I felt like the characters came to terms with some information too easily, that there wasn’t appropriate opposition. BUT this story-line and this world? FANTASTIC. It kind of brings to mind the sort of kingdom-like realms of Graceling, Throne of Glass and His Fair Assassin; it has that same sort of flavor without being anywhere near the same as any of those stories. So I couldn’t help but love it, of course.
Now, those boys–OH those boys. See, this is what had my mind all over the place–I started off wanting Layla to be with one, but then I changed my mind in favor of the other, and this process happened at least three more times throughout the book. And typically in a series I pick a guy and root for him through the entirety of said series, but not here. Nash’s fierce, strong, and wittily charming personality had me hooked from his and Layla’s first encounter. And initially Wil’s quiet, sure, calm nature didn’t strike a chord with me like Nash’s character did, but the more the story progressed and the more I got to know him, the more I loved him. And all this binding business served to throw my thoughts into even more disarray. Even now, I’m not 100% positive who I would choose if it were me (this is really puzzling me).
As for Layla . . . *sigh* Okay, so I understand why she is so, so wishy-washy about choosing between the two guys, especially with all the sneaky bonding business going on, but it was still kind of bothersome that she was so back and forth, you know? Come on, choose one for more than two seconds! (Says the one who wasn’t able to choose for the whole book . . . ah, hypocrisy.) But other than that, I really like her–she has real fight in her and I love when a heroine can hold her own.
All in all, this was a captivating story-line with memorable characters that I honestly NEED to hear from again, soon. Because that ending? Whaaaa–? WHY, ERIN, WHY?! I didn’t even realize that was the end of the book until I turned the page and SURPRISE! no more story! I suppose I’ll just have to wait for the next installment, but there are some pretty important questions that need to be answered. So I guess I’ll just sit here, waiting, rapt in AGONY AND SUSPENSE, because authors hold all the cards and they love to torture us (don’t worry, I still love you). The final tally: 4.78/5 stars ;)
Now, those boys–OH those boys. See, this is what had my mind all over the place–I started off wanting Layla to be with one, but then I changed my mind in favor of the other, and this process happened at least three more times throughout the book. And typically in a series I pick a guy and root for him through the entirety of said series, but not here. Nash’s fierce, strong, and wittily charming personality had me hooked from his and Layla’s first encounter. And initially Wil’s quiet, sure, calm nature didn’t strike a chord with me like Nash’s character did, but the more the story progressed and the more I got to know him, the more I loved him. And all this binding business served to throw my thoughts into even more disarray. Even now, I’m not 100% positive who I would choose if it were me (this is really puzzling me).
As for Layla . . . *sigh* Okay, so I understand why she is so, so wishy-washy about choosing between the two guys, especially with all the sneaky bonding business going on, but it was still kind of bothersome that she was so back and forth, you know? Come on, choose one for more than two seconds! (Says the one who wasn’t able to choose for the whole book . . . ah, hypocrisy.) But other than that, I really like her–she has real fight in her and I love when a heroine can hold her own.
All in all, this was a captivating story-line with memorable characters that I honestly NEED to hear from again, soon. Because that ending? Whaaaa–? WHY, ERIN, WHY?! I didn’t even realize that was the end of the book until I turned the page and SURPRISE! no more story! I suppose I’ll just have to wait for the next installment, but there are some pretty important questions that need to be answered. So I guess I’ll just sit here, waiting, rapt in AGONY AND SUSPENSE, because authors hold all the cards and they love to torture us (don’t worry, I still love you). The final tally: 4.78/5 stars ;)
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