I love Becka Mack’s writing and I love “playing for keeps” series but all her MCs except one are such fuckboys. This one might even be the cherry on top. 🤦🏻♀️ But I keep reading and of course there’s a ONS. And that’s the same night he sends away the girl he went on holiday with. Wait this is all jumbled up. Let me explain.
He meets the ow in his gym. He hits on her and asks her if she wants to go on vacation with him to f*ck and whatnot you know (because it’s oh-so-normal to take a stranger as a f*ckbuddy on vacation).
Of course she says yes, he’s a famous and rich hockey player after all. Only he finds her extremely annoying when they arrive to their destination (hmm I wonder why? 🤔) and the only way to shut her up is to f*ck her. Something that they do so loudly that their neighbour (MFC) in the adjacent villa can hear every single sound. After three days he’s sick of her, sends her on her way and that same night he hits on the neighbour and thus their ONS!
So here’s my dilemma, how desperate are you that you drop so low as to sleep with a guy whom you’ve been hearing “loudly” with another woman for the past three days!
Some meet ups in contemporary books are just freakin’ OUTRAGEOUS!!! Sorry Becka Mack but this is waaaaaay too much.
Aaaaaaand the MFC reads a threesome romance book. Why???? 😩😩😩😩 romance authors are stooping sooo lowwwwwww… should I keep reading? 🫣
I’ve forgotten how bad mouthed they all are. 🙄
Snippets of that:
Cara is cheering on her husband who’s about to score. “Go, baby! Do it for the blow job!” She winks at the MFC “I’m gonna blow him even if he misses”
All that in a full stadium.
The MFC is facetiming her parents. They mention her cheating asshole ex, and encourage her to meet someone new on the hockey team. In comes her cousin: “ yeah Len, surely there’s at least one cute player there that’s caught your eye. Why not let him dick you down good?”
In front of her parents!!!! Is there no limits anymore? Is this how people nowadays talk in front of their parents? Am I living on a different planet?
He meets her for the first time after their ONS at the conference room in the arena. He’s shocked, his friends know of his escapade of course, one asks: “so that was the girl you met in Cabo?” To which another friend answers: “that was the girl he F*CKED in Cabo”.
And it goes on and on. Every interaction between the MCs is him reminding her how well she took his c*ck, how her p*ssy is aching for his tongue, fingers and “Magic Mike” because yeah he named his little (not so little) dude.
And the WAGS call themselves “C*ck Suckers” and keep comparing their husbands’/bfs’ d*cks. 😔🥺😫😭
Why did I even like this series?
Ok, consider me confused 🫤
They have a wild ONS in Cabo. Then they shockingly realise they work for the same team now. She’s enraged, she’s rude and absolutely angry with him for being a f*ckboy. Heh I mean, newsflash Lennon, you literally f*cked him the first day he threw out his hookup of a second! What the heck did you expect?!
Never thought I’d dnf a Becka Mack book. I mean I know there’s gonna be an angsty breakup, followed by a heartwarming reconciliation and a very sweet ending but I just can’t get past all that foul language and vulgarity.
EPIC FAIL