Hmmm, I guess this was okay. It was way too long; it could've been a few pages shorter, imo. 🤷♀️
They met two months ago because Róise (20/21) was hellbent on losing her V-card to someone else. She agreed to the marriage arrangement, but she didn't want her first time to be with her arranged husband. She went 3000 miles away just to pull that stunt. But call it fate or destiny whatsoever, Micelo (33) was also there in that same place doing some mafia business. They met at a bar, and he was supposed to sleep with someone else; he already had the OW by his side. But when he saw Roise, he got intrigued, dumped the OW, and invited her to his hotel room instead. 🥴
Idk why this premise was introduced at all, because she still ended up giving her V-card to her betrothed. This would've been a little bit better if she had really lost it to someone else. At least that way, I could really buy the notion that she gave it to someone of her own choosing. Don't get me wrong, she did choose Micelo that time because she was unaware of who he was (same case with him). But it would've been better to see some OM that she chose and gave her innocence to. After all, MANY women had Micelo's body, so why couldn't Roise have at least another one beside him? She's tied to his annoying ass for life anyway. 🙄😒
Róise. She may be bratty, combative, and reckless, led by her hormones (in the second half), but her feistiness, sassiness, and steel are so refreshing to read. She's 12 years younger than Micelo, but that didn't stop her from standing her ground and fighting her way to get what she wants. And, idk, probably the bar is so low that I had fun reading about a not so subservient woman in an organized crime romance. Because God forbid, authors mostly write dumb, horny, flat, and pathetic characters (at least those that I've had the unfortunate chance of reading). 🥴
As for Micelo, tbh, he could f*ck off for all I care. His overbearing, controlling, and bulldozing ways didn't make me swoon. In fact, he made me see red most of the time. I'm actually surprised I was able to finish this because, maaan, he was insufferable. It didn't even matter in the last quarter that he changed and softened around Roise, because the annoyance running in my veins was too much to be tamped down by his gestures. Other readers might be placated by his efforts, but I can definitely say that I'm not one of them.
Anyway, I only appreciated two things in this book, and that's Róise and the fact that this adds to my GR challenge. 🤷♀️ This didn't work for me, but I hope that's not the case for other readers.
Book info:
- Organized crime
- Violence
- Death of loved one (past)
- Age gap (12)
- V fmc, Manwh*re mmc 🙄🤮
- No cheating, OPD, separation
- Both celibate after ONS
- Arranged marriage (they're engaged all throughout the book, got married in the epilogue)
- HEA (??? I mean, they're married so I guess... 🤷♀️)