Rating: ⭑⭑⭑⭐︎⭐︎(3/5)
*⁀➷ review
(mild spoilers!)
Coming in from book one (one of my absolute favorite books), I was super excited. Book one ended in a terrible way and I couldn’t wait to see where all their stories go. Little did I know, my heart will get shattered. Let’s break it down.
The Writing: a disappointment. I’m genuinely shocked that it’s written by the same author. It just seemed so….lazy. As if a lot of effort wasn’t put into it. So many important things were being skipped, particularly for Helen and Olivia’s chapters. There was barely any depth to it all and it was really sad to read tbh, considering how great the first book was.
The Characters/Couples:
Amy Rose and John: Amy Rose and John were the only well and properly written couple in this book. Every other couple’s story was so terribly written but theirs? Ugh amazing. After complaining so much about this book, the reason I’m rating it as high as I am is because of these two gems. After their heartbreak at the end of book one, you see their growth. While they were cute in book one, they were kind of a basic “royalty x commoner” trope but this time, it was different. She worked hard and built her dream for herself. A salon for Black women to properly take care of their hair and embrace their curls without having to have the White people dictate how they do their hair. She didn’t do it for any man and didn’t need any mans help, she worked for herself and it paid off. John grew as a person and learned that in order to deserve her, he needs to prove it and he did just that without pressuring her and helping her do her own thing while helping on the sidelines whenever she needed him. Also, the family time that Amy Rose has been having with his family?? Omg it was so cute, she’s like the third daughter lol it was adorableeeee. John also grew SO MUCH and he really showed his true character and the real man he is underneath everything.
Ruby and Harrison: So I’m honestly shocked. I actually liked Ruby in this book! She grew SO MUCH as a person from book one. But the thing is….after she got a lot better towards the beginning, that was it. Her character stayed in the place she’s in and minus the tiny Carter and his sister Odette drama, her chapters were kinda boring. I still love Harrison as usual, he’s still so cute and sweet.
Olivia: Screw. Her. I tried my HARDEST not to hate her in this book but omgggg she’s such a brat. What happened to the passionate, strong willed Olivia in book 1? Now that Washington’s gone, she starts falling for Everett Stone, who by the way, isn’t a bad guy AT ALL but he’s not Washington! When Washington returns, she’s happy and reconnects with him, but just can’t pick between him and Stone because to her, she “has feelings for them both”. Idk why she changed from willing to travel the world with Washington to “noo I wanna stay comfortable”. What happened to all her growth?? I’m sorry to use this word, but I have to say it. Olivia is a ho€. And the ending GRRRR. This author freaking has Olivia break Washington's heart and not even show us how. It’s just from Olivia’s memory! After the epic love story in book two, don’t you think we deserve to at least witness her breaking our man's heart? Ughhh I was so mad.
Helen: okay so her story was….okay. I love Helen sm and nothing changed at all, she's still as amazing as ever, but they did her dirty. Like the way everything was rushed, but the ending was cute. I think since all the focus was put John and Amy Rose, they didn’t have any space left for Helen (or anyone for that matter). But I really love her and I lowk wanted her to end up with Ransom Swift bc I do NOT like Jacob Lawrence anymore, he’s just…no. Although I am glad she’s happy, it was way too rushed. I did like her relationship with Swift though, like siblings by the end.
To Conclude…
The ending really pissed me off and I still can’t get over it, but the four star rating is for Amy-Rose, John, Helen, Ruby, and Harrison. My love Washington has been let down and I do NOT stand for it. Olivia can freak off somewhere smh. Butttt I didn’t like this as much as book one and the ending broke my heart! The best part of this was buddy reading this with Sarah the Amazing, it was sm fun to discuss/rant/laugh all this with her and ilhsm. <33
*⁀➷ post read: I’m so angry. I’m so so so angry and I’m about to cry idk what to do with myself. I’m literally gonna break down crying. The review will most likely come in the morning but my stomach literally hurts from how mad I am.
*⁀➷ pre read: HKGHSDUGHIATOGOE;EIAG I'M SO EXCITEDDDD
buddy reading this w one of my absolute favorite people, @sarah! words can't even describe how excited i am for this you guys i feel like jumping up and down for joy (OLIVA AND WASHINGTON BETTER HAVE THE ENDING I'M HOPING FOR 😭😭)