She never wanted to be a Breeder--but her parents sold her anyway.
The Alpha King is looking for an heir in the most unorthodox way. Whoever can impregnate the Breeder first will get to be king, which means Rose finds herself in a castle where she must submit to four men or disappoint her entire pack. Though she's nervous at first, it's easier than she would've thought once she meets the four Alphas. Mark is intelligent. Eli is sweet. Reece is debonair. And Tristan is a horny goofball. Rose wants to stay with all four Alphas forever, and they seem to love her, too. But things aren't always what they seem, especially when the king's cousin, Emily, announces she will be the next Luna. Will Rose and her men have a chance at true love?
This is a reverse harem romance, and you must read all of the books to get the complete story. Make Pregnant With Four Alphas' Babies your next guilty pleasure!
The story was decent however the alphas attraction towards the fl was rushed like hell. Usually the authors invoke the ,,godlike,, mate thing but this book did not really hint at that. Some spelling errors but nothing too unreadable. At one point Eli is called Issac, I think it happens two or three times. I like the overall plot but it kinda felt rushed because of their sudden love.
At this point I'm not sure I'll continue with the second book, might pick it up if the curiosity gets too big to see if she gets pregnant. Alto I have a good idea she will magically carry babies for all four of the alphas at the same time due to her magical uterus.
Now here is where I really have a problem with the story.
In order for the next king to be choosen he needs to impregnant her. They took a turn one each a night. Now let's go with the fertility circle. That would be unfair if one of them gets the date she is closer to her fertility window. Also sleeping once with one of each is really not enough. Some struggle for months, to get pregnant. They have a doctor. She could have taken a fertility test and suggest to the king: yo old geezer she is now the most fertile, have your guys do her now, one after the other.
I mean that WOULD be fair competition.
Another thing that realllllyyyyyyy did not sit well with me is. So she needs to get pregnant, have the baby and she can GO HOME. WITHOUT THE BABY... 0 ATTACHMENT TO THE IDEEA i am leaving my fucking chilld to some strangers, in a place she herself finds as hostile. Zero concern, nada, niet. Not even once has this subject been addressed. Also, the child would be a heir, that means he will be raised by the future Luna, the king has choosen. Who we know is a total bitch who likes to bully our main fl and those around her. Again, zerroooo cincern.
Look, if you use the ideea of a child as a main plotline, expand on it, bring up concerns, cause right now, in this first book, the Fl has like minus maternal insticts. Her concern is only about them ,,rods,, of those four alphas. Yes I called them rods caused thats how they were called in Eli scene with the lake. Also, cause now my brain is working to wrap around this story, the problem with Mark? Communication, he told her he did not say those things, he comfronted that bitch with her lies, she know she lies and what does she do? She sulks about it.
Another thing, two uterine horns actually does NOT equal more fertile, quite the contrary, means reproduction is harder and chances of misscariage is also higher. I feel like that bit of information should be KNOWN by the doctor and presented as a disavantage not as a fucking positive and fertile thing.
Yes, i know, this is a story, we can expect that some things are bent to favor the plot, but when you place your story in a somehow modern and similar setting to the real world, you kinda need to keep straight facts.
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While this book has the potential to be something, the writing is pretty poor and doesn’t give you much. The first book doesn’t have much to it and the FMC is pretty dumb. I think you have to read the other books to get the picture but it’s not really something I wanted to do.
Chosen as the breeder ⭐️Rating: 3.5/5 🌶️Spice: 4/5 Triggers: reverse harem, breeding, abuse, human trafficking, pregnancy, virgin FMC Writing is not that great, wattpad vibes but I’m invested in the storyline. I can’t with how roses parents are written it’s basically laughable. I wish there was an explanation page in the beginning before the story started of what delta , beta and Luna meant in comparison to alpha. Fast paced. Why are they making the main character so helpless and such a pick me? I hate how they made the antagonist Emily so drastically bitchy. Spice scenes not very detailed. Three open door spice scene so far, vanilla. Scene with Reece made me cry. Story seems cut too short in some places. Hate Emily’s POV and hated the non cliffhanger/cliffanger ending it just cuts off
There were a few typos. About the story. The sex scenes were explicit. The first ones more than they needed to be. The later ones were better. There were details in the book that were glazed over. It would have been better if they has been explored. The large time jump toward the end doesn't make sense because it seems everything was in stasis for that time.
Writing could be better. I have a feeling this was not edited at all but I have seen far worse. It sort of reads like a Wattpad book but it is a good story so far. Emily’s chapters are bit over exaggerated imo. But like I said, I have read and come across far worse pieces of “literature” so I’ll give this 4 stars for what it is.
I'm intrigued by the story line ans the Alphas but why oh why do we need these silly nicknames and whiney characters. Even the Alphas were whining and do not even get me started on Emily. The writing was all over the place but I will give authors one more shot.
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This book has a good storyline and interesting characters. I am enjoying it so far. It does look like a 7 book series to get the whole story. There are a few editing mistakes but not so many that it takes away from the story.
By far the book seemed to dazzle it reader to a halt, with it romance and a mint of curiosity for more and yes the storyline satisfied the curiosity I had inside about the book
While, this does have a strong story line it has many typos. Just as the story gets interesting It's cut off This is a chapter book You must purchase the next installment To finish the story
A beautiful Alphas daughter is chosen by the king to be a breeder for the 4 men that her has chosen to o be his successor. They poor young woman was treated very badly by her parents and is just learning what it’s like to start to live.
I have not read Bella Moondragon before but now I believe I'm hooked.This book was an easy read and was hard to put down. The story was good, the characters were easy to follow. I am so looking forward to the next book on this series.
I'm really enjoying reading this story 😃. Great storyline, no real action, catty female, yummy sexy scenes and wonderful alphas 😊. Thanks so much Bella & Olivia, I truly enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the next book 🤓.
They all learn to love her in their own special way. And they all want her afterwards. Even though the King treats her as something to be used they don't. I would recommend to everyone. Definitely 5 stars would read again.
Rose is so resonating for me! I am such an oblivious person and her finding love innocent with all those Alphas all puts an intriguing dark perception on everything which is... ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!!! All those innocent love moments with all the "first time" stuff... wow... really makes me reflect on all my "first time" stuff that often has dark moonlight ripples of waters going so... Bella you are amazing with the sweetest authors! Please! DON'T STOP WRITING!!!!!