J.L. Odom’s “By Blood, By Salt” is a highly impressive debut novel, filled with beautiful, evocative prose, a layered and complex world, and some great slow burn relationships. This is also a book that will only appeal to a pretty specific subset of people; if you’re not drawn in by the end of the first chapter, I can’t guarantee that things will ratchet up. I wouldn’t go so far as to call it “love it or hate it, but it’s certainly “enjoy it or meh.”
The positives: Odom writes like a poet. Her prose is gorgeous, lyrical, and evocative. There were whole sentences I savored for their beauty. That said, writing style alone does not make a compelling book for many people, and this kind of thing won’t be to everyone’s taste. The story takes place in a desert setting inspired by Arab cultures (Odom apparently has a background as an Arabic linguist with the military) and, vitally, avoids the tendency of Westerners to exoticize non-Western, non-Christian cultures. As much as the reader learns about the empire of Maurow and its various tribes and vassal states, I was still craving more. The characters, particularly protagonist Azetla (a debt-conscript in a military battalion who, as a member of a pariah tribe, is legally forbidden to lead or carry a weapon, yet has risen in secret to high levels or command) and a mysterious and often alien desert jinn known as “the Sahr,” are intriguing and compelling. I thought maybe I was getting little potential romance-tingles between Azetla and the Sahr, which I definitely trust this author to handle with sensitivity and care, but anything that blossoms is obviously being held for future books.
As I said, this is the author’s first book, and while it is miles better than other debut novels I could name, Odom does have some room to grow as a writer rather than a storyteller. Where I struggled most with the book was the sloooooow pacing and what I can only describe as the overall construction of the book. I don’t expect handholding, but there was something about how the plot unfolded (sloooooowly) that just left me a little disengaged and failed to draw me in as completely as I would have liked. Not everything has to have a standard three-act structure, of course, but for me, the best books are the ones that grab my attention and refuse to let it wander. I just didn’t get that with “By Blood, By Salt”; during the slowest portions of journeying through the desert or internal musing, it took a conscious effort to keep going.
So, in short, incredible prose, fantastic worldbuilding, pretty good characters, plot itself perhaps a bit lacking. To be determined whether I pick up the second book or not, but I’ll definitely be keeping an eye on J.L. Odom’s future endeavors.