This clean romance centres around two characters with a history that are competing in a photography competition. As they travel around Europe, they tackle their pasts and realise their love for each other.
Like many in the genre of clean, wholesome romances on Kindle, I found this an easy but not overly enjoyable read, and maybe I should stop reading these types of books but I can't. If my review seems harsh I apologise, but I will try to be fair and provide constructive feedback.
The book wasn't all bad. The premise was interesting: competitors with a bit of a history coming up against each other and fighting their feelings. The setting was an integral part of the story. The struggles of the main character, Devon, who has autism, added depth to the story and it was refreshing to see her perspective on very daunting events, but also her strength. The chemistry between the main characters was good.
BUT. And there always seem to be buts.
This is a generalisation that applies to a lot of books in the genre. It honestly feels like I'm reading a second draft of the story. A second draft that someone has gone through and carefully line edited (though in this case, quite a few mistakes slipped through). And what I mean is that while the skeleton is there for a good story, there are things that need a lot of developmental work to make it an actual good story.
There is a heavy reliance on hearing the POV character's thoughts and analysis of the situation to drive the story and convey information. This is not fun to read, and while it's fine in early drafts of a book, that information should be conveyed through action in the story. Even if a story is written in first person POV, it shouldn't feel like reading a teenager's diary entries. And it gets repetitive and boring. I'm not against a character spelling out her feelings, but spell it out once and show me through her struggles. I'm not stupid. Don't keep spelling it out for me.
I also think the author underutilised the competitive aspect of the story. It wasn't really rivals to lovers. It was more hurt ex-friend to friends to lovers. They were in competition and that could have added a lot of tension to the story, but it wasn't used as it was very clear Luke (the love interest) was more keen on a relationship than winning anything right from the start.
Maybe I couldn't quite get in Devin's head (the female main character), but I also really struggled to understand why she was so hurt by Luke to start with. He ghosted her. Apparently they were close before this. But it also seemed like they had never met in person? Did I miss something? Like... was what he did that bad? And apparently he adored her back then before he ghosted her, but his grandparents died so that makes him ghosting her okay? I don't know... this whole backstory thing felt weak and confusing.
The big break up scene, typical of a romance, also annoyed me because Luke broke character. Luke is presented as someone who has doted on Devin for years. He absolutely adores her. He is quite understanding of her struggles and apprehensions, and he's willing to take things slow, respect her boundaries, because of this. He's a real lovely guy. Then suddenly, on a day of planned dates, she freaks out (because that's what she is like) and instead of being understanding like he ALWAYS has been, he gets real butt hurt and they break up. It makes no sense.
Devin's grand gesture (her winner's speech) was awful. Girl, you just had a two weeks all-expenses-paid trip around Europe to win a photography competition. You don't thank the competition organisers with a brief "cheers dudes" and then do a monologue about the love of your life. A little bit more gratitude, please. And people don't need to know you spent two weeks messing around with some dude rather than prioritising the competition, only to win anyway. (I'll admit that Luke's exhibit was very sweet though). Devin was quite annoying at times. It felt like I was supposed to believe she's this amazing person who is very unaware of her amazingness, but she was honestly a bit of a drama queen.
Another thing I didnt enjoy. The arc between Devin and her estranged sister was contrived and weird. I'm unsure how their relationship was so awful then suddenly good.
Anyway, that's my review.