Okay, so I read this one last night and I'm a little undecided about it.
Yes, there were some really good funnies in it. Yes, it's a great idea and in the process, will teach kids about safe sex. HOWEVER, there were some serious grammar issues, that made reading it very difficult. Punctuation was missing, all over the place, so the tone of the speaker and differentiating between thoughts and speech was hard. I also think that the story could have gone on just a little further, to emphasis the effectiveness of the class.