When Mike signs up for sperm donation at an unorthodox fertility clinic, he has no idea what he has gotten himself in to.
The nineteen-year-old college student desperately needs money after his father cuts him off. With only a part-time job at a gym that doesn't pay enough, Mike feels like he has no other options and would rather struggle financially than let his father control his life. Donating sperms has never been appealing to Mike, but he’s willing to give it a try.
However, when he meets the clinic’s owner Dr. Martha Smith, a fiery and sexy brunette passionate about her work, he starts to feel more confident about his decision to become a donor. Martha doesn’t hesitate to teach Mike what he needs to become successful in the job and she can’t wait to turn Mike into her top breeder…
Although excited about his new role as a sperm donor, Mike quickly learns that this clinic has some unique practices. Mike must give the clients his sperm the natural way, and he might need to give them more than his sperm…
Will Mike rise to the challenge and fulfill these unusual requirements? Or does he even have a choice in the matter?
Join Mike on his journey as he embarks on a new, unexpected mission to help women achieve their dreams of motherhood at this one-of-a-kind fertility clinic.
I like this book a lot. Interesting premise. This is really setting the stage for the rest of the story, so it’s a tease (teaser).
The weakness for me is the writing style and the numerous little continuity errors. The writing is simple and straightforward and a bit repetitive - every dress clings to every curve in every womans’ body leaving little to the imagination, etc. The continuity slips are minor - like how did we get from here to there? There are also just too many coincidences, allowing the MC to float along in a sea of beautiful career women. Combined they give a more Harlequin Romance (the PG rated ones) feel rather than really grounded erotica.
I also feel gipped as the story part is only 85 pages, the other 20 pages are advertising for the author’s other series.
I have bought the series after reading all the samples.
I strongly recommend you read this series in order.
4 Stars - the series is going to be light, with much more story than vanilla sex, with the nice guy finishing first with all he ever wanted. 🤞
qué buen libro!!! tiene todo lo necesario en un libro largo pero resumido yendo directamente al asunto sin perder de vista ser un harén. Muy entretenido
I was interested in the book based on a great premise, but for me the execution wasn’t as good. I did like the teenage aspect of idealizing a milf whom you list after and finding out she fancies you, but the story was choppy and outside of Martha, the characters I found unable to connect with.
My 3/5 rating is the fact that it did have a great premise and this is book 1, and I looked at it as a entry “world building” story.
I've read a lot of erotic lit and wrote some stories. One of the things I like a lot about this story is that it reads like a person revealing a real life experience. It's realistic enough that it might have happened. When there is sex it doesn't steal the show, it naturally enhances the story. A great read! Hope there is another book continuing this story with the shy girl and ...
A delicious story, the first book in a series with so much more promised
I really like Kohen King's style of writing. This series first book starts out really well. I enjoyed the progression, the characters, the spice, and the storyline. I'm looking forward to buying book two. I can recommend this book strongly.
There are lots of elements that make up a good story. They are different from person to person. For me, the character of the characters is right at the top of the list, with the story being just behind that. Not just that the characters are filled out enough to make them real, but that I can connect with them in one way or another.
The story is very good (for me), and the people in the story are fleshed out enough to make them real and 'knowable' to me.
I very much appreciated and enjoyed the book. Therefore, I am looking forward to the next part of the story.
I believe that the slow build up in the story is worth it. There is some minor confusion as to who and where but I think it’s worth the effort to read. I am looking forward to the second publication. Looking forward to reading it.
MC is fitness trainer but needs to make money. He finds a job as sperm donor but the job is different from what he expected. For an erotica it has some nice storyline.