The Dragon Girl’s Ascension

The Dragon Girl’s Ascension #2

by invayne _, Marina _ (illustrator)

Desaray, a normal 14 year old girl, living a normal life.

Her everyday life suddenly changed when the world as she knew it ceased to exist.

Her world, but not her world.

Monsters appearing out of nowhere.

90% of the population disappeared.

An apocalypse like none other.

A system gained from killing a single monster.

Once human, now a dragon...

All of these things happening all at the same time, turning Desaray's world upside down.

How will she cope in this new world, not as a human but as a dragon?

Genres: Fantasy, Science Fiction

169 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 8, 2024

Reviews

[Alarna · Rating 2 out of 5]

it was ok. it had mostly the same issues as the first one but one thing i cant understand is something that happens later in the book, near the end she runs into this 11 year old girl who's from the other world and after finding out she has no family almost imdeatly says says she's the MC's daughter now? the MC herself is just 14 (she does techenly age to 18 after evolving for some reason but mentally she hasn't changed, i think the author just made her 18 she they could add a mysterious romance stuff in and not feel bad its between a 14yr old and possibly an god i felt like it was hinted at that the parts that was taking anyway) thats just 3 years older and yet she's calling her a little girl and her daughter? there practically the same age, if they wanted a daughter charaters they could have made her younger because she acts younger anyway. i thought that when she invited her to her family she would say little sister but no. i hate everything about this dynamic. it makes me wonder tho if they made them practically the same age so when she meets her dad again she can give him the girl to look after while she goes and does something else so people wont feel bad for the dad like sure the MCs a grown up now out of nowhere and going to go off and have a big adenvture im guessing somewhere he cant go and he lost that time with her but its ok because here's another girl thats practical the same age that he can raise instead. even if it ends up nothing like that i still cant stand they made them mother and daughter when there practically the same age.

i was going to give this 3 stars but after thinking about it, solely for the thing in the spoilers im dropping it to 2. :(

[Dave W · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good read, bad formatting

The first two books were decent reads for a teen litrpg series, however the status screens in both should be on separate lines (1.0 - 1.25 line separation) so that is readable. This second book also has a page background color that makes it off-putting, especially in dark mode.

[Jim · Rating 4 out of 5]

Decent so far

The story line is not too bad. My biggest problem is that everything is in proper English, with very few contractions. Few people talk that way in the real world. That hasn't stopped me from reading the books. Waiting for the next one.

[Robert Dill · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very enjoyable

I like your view on this popular genre. The 'evolution' feature is especially satisfying. It also gives the author a wonderful avenue for your imagination. I recommend this series as I move to No. 3!

[DeWayne · Rating 4 out of 5]

I like it

A few grammatical errors, but, overall I think it’s a great story. If you’re looking for a nice short story this is a good choice.

[Cordyn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Desaray is really coming into her own as a leader as well as adjusting to her dragon instincts. This second volume contains more leveling up as well as adventure. Thankfully, the third volume came out on kindle so that I can continue following Desaray and the crew on their continuing shinanigans.

[David Collins · Rating 5 out of 5]

A good read

I look forward to seeing how the cast evolves, and finding out if/when they manage to get back together with those they are separated from. This was a fun read.