Saving my dental innuendos for later, Yuuki goes to see Iori at the office and meets the would-be rival of her nightmares. She also deals with Seno’s confession, organizes a sleepover, and makes some fireworks both figuratively and literally.
I think my most salient takeaway from this is that I wish it was a manhwa set in Korea and it was called How I Met My Seoulmate. (A shocking number of writers have used that title, so I no longer feel clever.)
Anyway, I think this is a bit of a step up from the first volume, but it’s definitely swimming in the B-tier as far as shojo stories go for me. It survives because I like Iori and Yuuki together rather a bit, plus it does some things smarter than I was expecting it to.
When it was revealed that Yuuki’s one-sided crush might have been a mutual thing this entire time, it sure looks like we’re headed to rival town real fast. Surprisingly, in a good way, Yuuki recognizes her burgeoning feelings for Iori and doesn’t waver - Seno knows where things stand right away.
Yeah, he gives signs that he might not be giving up just yet, but he’s also not kidding himself either. He wants to try, but knows that Yuuki’s not seeing him that way. It also doesn’t seem to be worse than him being totally straightforward with her, which is nice. I’m not crazy, I know this will likely recomplicate itself, but for now it’s good.
First, however, we have to get through another round of ‘isn’t dentistry sexy?’, which, no, it isn’t. This section is entirely too soapy, as a vengeful dentist with eyes on Iori invades Yuuki’s orifices as an example of painful dentistry while lying to her about Iori’s nature due to her own crush on our boy and it’s… a lot.
Some books need to be plotted this hard, but this genuinely isn’t one of them. Yuuki and Iori are at their best when the grand story gets the hell out of their way and lets them just exist. When Yuuki accidentally trips the sleepover flag, it’s actually getting real good before Seno horns in again.
And this is another instance where the manga can’t seem to remember that it’s not set in high school. Yuuki and Iori seem at pains to explain what they’re up to, when the correct response is ‘none of your flipping business, rival boy’.
It’s a heck of a shame that for every great thing in this story - Sanae is the best gal pal ever and I wish she was in this way more - there’s something dumb to counter it. Iori trying to make up for his awful past? Perfect. Yuuki believing somebody every time they suggest that Iori is crushing on a girl without being direct and talking to him about it? Annoying. That fireworks date before the sleepover? With the beers? So good!
But every time it goes big, it goes way too big and veers off into melodrama. Sometimes quiet romance is more effective and if this kept it to dates and flirting and divested itself of unnecessary plot contrivances it would be infinitely better.
3 stars - I might actually like these characters better than the cast of Waiting For Spring, Anashin’s previous work, already. That series’ bigger plot swerves made sense because of high school, however, while this feels like it’s got one toe caught in it still and comes off worse for it.