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First published March 1, 2024
Let’s set the scene: small town, a girl disappears, secrets bubble just beneath the surface. You’re thinking ooh, juicy! Maybe this’ll be a tight, suspenseful mystery with compelling twists, layered characters, and psychological depth. You dive in; get comfortable. You prepare for thrills.
And then—BAM. The main character arrives and steamrolls every ounce of potential like a drama queen on a mission.
Look, I enjoy a flawed protagonist. I really do. But what we’ve got here isn’t a flaw. It’s a full-blown character malfunction. This girl isn’t just immature—she’s emotionally stunted. You’d think with someone literally missing and presumed in danger, the story might focus on, I don’t know, that? But no. Our heroine has far more pressing concerns, like whether her boyfriend really likes likes her, how every sideways glance might affect their epic love story, and how the entire town’s trauma is clearly just background noise in the Great Saga of Her Relationship.
Honestly, it’s kind of impressive. I’ve never seen someone so monumentally self-absorbed. Entire scenes go by where the mystery of the missing girl is barely an afterthought—because heaven forbid anything distract from the protagonist’s inner monologue about text messages and possible emotional distance.
Don’t expect clever sleuthing. Don’t expect character growth. Nope. We’re trapped in an endless loop of “Why doesn’t everyone understand how hard this is for me?” followed by the bold investigative tactic of... sulking. Maybe an eye roll here and there. Occasionally, she’ll remember there’s a missing person, but only if it relates to something her boyfriend said. Or didn’t say; or might be thinking; or possibly dreamt.
As the pages go on, the plot doesn’t so much twist as nosedive. It starts promising, then rapidly dissolves into teen drama quicksand. I held out hope for a redemptive turn. A surprise revelation. Anything. But all I got was an increasingly shallow narrative orbiting a character who thinks the entire world is a stage for her to pine, pout, and pretend she’s in danger too.
And let’s talk about the missing girl—remember her? The one in the title? The one who should’ve been the emotional anchor of this whole thing? Yeah, I was wondering about her too. She’s treated less like a person and more like a plot coupon. Her disappearance is nothing more than a convenient excuse for the protagonist to spiral into her own romantic melodrama.
By the end, I didn’t care who was missing. I just wanted to go missing from this book.
If you’re looking for a sharp, emotional mystery with actual tension and depth, keep looking. If, however, you’d like to read 300+ pages about how hard it is to have a boyfriend while someone else’s life is in literal peril, then hey—this one’s for you.
Me? I’m off to read something with actual stakes and a lead who can form a complete thought that isn’t about her crush.