"Hanging On" is a difficult book to love. It's the most un-Koontz-like book I’ve read, and that’s including “Icebound”.
The main plot is basically okay and even fairly interesting, though perhaps not completely original: during World War II, a group of army engineers is dropped behind enemy lines to make sure a river crossing is kept intact. If the bridge is bombed, they have to rebuild it. Of course, all kinds of things go awry. And that’s exactly where my problem with the book lies.
Most of the incidents, which are supposed to be funny, are actually too silly to believe they’re really happening. The worst example that comes to mind is when the main character is having sex with the only woman in the camp, right under the bridge which is – of course – bombed at that exact moment, and he escapes by crawling away crab-style with the woman still on top.
How to describe the general atmosphere …
Suppose that Monty Python decided to make a movie adaptation of Hemingway’s “For Whom the Bell Tolls”, directed by the Steven Spielberg who did “1941”, the result would come very close to “Hanging On”. The synopsis itself compares the book to the TV show “M*A*S*H”, and indeed the cover itself almost seems like a carbon copy of the 1970’s movie poster.
Luckily, when the story’s conclusion comes nearer, ,the atmosphere becomes more serious. The silliness is still there, sure, but the characters stop being caricatures and cartoony. There’s one scene in which a smaller character dies which is written extremely well – but that also makes it so out of place. To use the same comparison as above, it’s like if you took Giovanni Ribisi’s death scene out of “Saving Private Ryan” and put it in “1941”.
Not everything is that silly, though. There are also good jokes, a sure sign of things to come. Koontz novels have always been good for a laugh here and there. “Hanging On” seems to be more about those laughs than the main storyline, as if we’re reading one of Koontz’s hilarious pieces in the official newsletter or a copy of “Useless News”. The soldier dressing up as a female nurse does get old after a while, but once the characters have found that common goal to pursue, it’s toned down just enough to achieve that sense of urgency and tension needed for the reader to care whether they actually achieve that goal or not.