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Forging Something Beautiful
Magical Cures, Chance Encounters, and a Poisonous Plot
When her mother’s illness becomes dire, Alana decides to take matters into her own hands. Searching for a cure leads her to the seedier corners of the Imperial Center, but she's sure no one will know–until she bumps into her best friend's brother, Davin. He’s always had the key to her heart, but this is not the time.
Davin is surprised to see Alana on the grittier side of Forest Grove. He’s looking for a metalworking apprenticeship against his parent’s wishes. If word gets out, his parents will be crushed. Confrontation and drama are the last things he wants.
When Alana’s deal with a black market apothecary turns dangerous, Davin steps in to help. They’ll need to work together to stop a treasonous plot before someone gets hurt. Will they be able to act in time to save the king, or will sinister forces destroy both their futures?
When her mother’s illness becomes dire, Alana decides to take matters into her own hands. Searching for a cure leads her to the seedier corners of the Imperial Center, but she's sure no one will know–until she bumps into her best friend's brother, Davin. He’s always had the key to her heart, but this is not the time.
Davin is surprised to see Alana on the grittier side of Forest Grove. He’s looking for a metalworking apprenticeship against his parent’s wishes. If word gets out, his parents will be crushed. Confrontation and drama are the last things he wants.
When Alana’s deal with a black market apothecary turns dangerous, Davin steps in to help. They’ll need to work together to stop a treasonous plot before someone gets hurt. Will they be able to act in time to save the king, or will sinister forces destroy both their futures?
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Published June 7, 2024
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July 28, 2024
✰✰✰✰.5/5 -YES YES! I adore this book so much!
All fluff, no spice
⋆˖⁺‧₊☽ Tropes ☾₊‧⁺˖⋆
☁︎Best Friend's Brother☁︎
☁︎Forbidden Love☁︎
☁︎Childhood Crush☁︎
☁︎Cinnamon roll MMC☁︎
☁︎Forced Proximity☁︎
‧͙⁺˚*･༓☾ Thoughts ☽༓･*˚⁺‧͙
☁︎THE TENSION during the entire book between Alana and Davin was insane! I was literally biting my nails waiting for them to act on it! The author did an amazing job with her alluring writing style and the crazy plot! This book is phenomenal and I have no other words besides I LOVE IT!
˖⁺‧₊˚☁️˚₊‧⁺˖Recommended for ppl who…˖⁺‧₊˚☁️˚₊‧⁺˖
☁︎Cozy romantasy readers☁︎
☁︎Come for the romance, stay for the plot☁︎
☁︎Tension enjoyers☁︎
☁︎Enjoy interconnected standalones☁︎
✩₊˚.⋆☾ Quote(s) ☾⋆⁺₊✧
☁︎❝My heart is his, now more than ever, and if he said one word, I'd make it official.❞☁︎
☁︎❝My whole life is falling apart, but his blush makes my heart sing and at this moment I can't feel anything but happiness.❞☁︎
☁︎❝I think about you every day. I thought you should have something that you can wear to remind you of me, even when we're far apart.❞☁︎
All fluff, no spice
⋆˖⁺‧₊☽ Tropes ☾₊‧⁺˖⋆
☁︎Best Friend's Brother☁︎
☁︎Forbidden Love☁︎
☁︎Childhood Crush☁︎
☁︎Cinnamon roll MMC☁︎
☁︎Forced Proximity☁︎
‧͙⁺˚*･༓☾ Thoughts ☽༓･*˚⁺‧͙
☁︎THE TENSION during the entire book between Alana and Davin was insane! I was literally biting my nails waiting for them to act on it! The author did an amazing job with her alluring writing style and the crazy plot! This book is phenomenal and I have no other words besides I LOVE IT!
˖⁺‧₊˚☁️˚₊‧⁺˖Recommended for ppl who…˖⁺‧₊˚☁️˚₊‧⁺˖
☁︎Cozy romantasy readers☁︎
☁︎Come for the romance, stay for the plot☁︎
☁︎Tension enjoyers☁︎
☁︎Enjoy interconnected standalones☁︎
✩₊˚.⋆☾ Quote(s) ☾⋆⁺₊✧
☁︎❝My heart is his, now more than ever, and if he said one word, I'd make it official.❞☁︎
☁︎❝My whole life is falling apart, but his blush makes my heart sing and at this moment I can't feel anything but happiness.❞☁︎
☁︎❝I think about you every day. I thought you should have something that you can wear to remind you of me, even when we're far apart.❞☁︎
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July 12, 2025DNF. LGBT couple introduced in first chapter.
April 3, 2025
cute
This was a cute story. It was not as innocent as I would have liked (it had a gay couple, and some situations that could have been compromising, but weren’t, but did make me feel uncomfortable and led to me giving it only 3 stars), but the story itself was cute.
This was a cute story. It was not as innocent as I would have liked (it had a gay couple, and some situations that could have been compromising, but weren’t, but did make me feel uncomfortable and led to me giving it only 3 stars), but the story itself was cute.
June 7, 2024
Davin has always loved the feeling he gets working the forge and crafting with his hands. His parents have other ideas and want him to follow in their footsteps doing what they feel will bring him more success. When he moves to the city for an internship that they think he already has... well, what they don't know won't hurt them, right? Alana on the other hand went to the city to visit her best friend. Afraid to leave her sick mother behind, the idea of medicine that she couldn't get at home was too tempting to give up and she reluctantly agreed to go. What happens next when they stumble upon something even more dark and sinister? You'll have to read to find out.
Review to follow.
Forging Something Beautiful: Valley Glen Elves Book Two by Mary Stephenson Su is a cute Teen/Young adult novel following a couple that you can root for. Alana and Davin are long time acquaintances, her being the best friend of his younger sister, but you can tell that they both have liked each other for awhile. There is tension and a lot of good will they/won't they moments, but at times I did feel like there was a bit much of this and you just wanted them to get together.
The book is very easy to read and you don't have to have read the first one to understand the plot of this one. I like how accessible that is, as it means you can pick up anywhere in the series and still feel like you understand what's going on. The characters are likeable, though a bit formulaic at times. This book definitely feels appropriate for the age it was written for. No scenes were too adult themed and overall it was a very fun book. I would recommend the book for those who like fluffier stories.
I received an advanced review copy of this book to read for free. This is my honest review.
Review to follow.
Forging Something Beautiful: Valley Glen Elves Book Two by Mary Stephenson Su is a cute Teen/Young adult novel following a couple that you can root for. Alana and Davin are long time acquaintances, her being the best friend of his younger sister, but you can tell that they both have liked each other for awhile. There is tension and a lot of good will they/won't they moments, but at times I did feel like there was a bit much of this and you just wanted them to get together.
The book is very easy to read and you don't have to have read the first one to understand the plot of this one. I like how accessible that is, as it means you can pick up anywhere in the series and still feel like you understand what's going on. The characters are likeable, though a bit formulaic at times. This book definitely feels appropriate for the age it was written for. No scenes were too adult themed and overall it was a very fun book. I would recommend the book for those who like fluffier stories.
I received an advanced review copy of this book to read for free. This is my honest review.
May 26, 2024
Davin goes against his parent's wishes to be in a trade apprenticeship to become a metalworking apprentice. While returning after visiting a metalsmith shop in the Imperial Center, he runs into Alana (his secret crush). Alana has come to the capital to find a cure for the illness which is debilitating her mom. Then, the pair stumble across a plot to kill the king.
This T&YA Paranormal & Urban Fantasy Romance is fantastic. The uncertainty of youth plays a compelling role in this story. The wickedness with which the corrupt elves entrap the main characters is unmistakable. The resolution of the tale is exquisite.
Easy-to-read. Entertaining. Great world building. Romantic. Scary. Unpredictable. Whimsical. Wonderful characters.
I received a review copy of this book from a third party. This is my honest review.
This T&YA Paranormal & Urban Fantasy Romance is fantastic. The uncertainty of youth plays a compelling role in this story. The wickedness with which the corrupt elves entrap the main characters is unmistakable. The resolution of the tale is exquisite.
Easy-to-read. Entertaining. Great world building. Romantic. Scary. Unpredictable. Whimsical. Wonderful characters.
I received a review copy of this book from a third party. This is my honest review.
June 7, 2024
Enjoyed this book just as much as the first book in the series.
Alana travels to the Imperial City to visit her friend Zaria who works for Princess Everlee, but she is also hoping to find a cure for her Mum who is very, very sick. Whilst there she runs into her friends older brother Davin who she has had a crush on for years. He is in the Imperial City supposedly to start an apprenticeship at the Imperial Trade Office, his parents dream not his. His dream is to work in a forge creating beautiful filigree items. In her search for a cure for her Mum things go wrong for Alana, and Davin is drawn in to help her out of her predicament. But things only get worse for them both.
If you want to know more, please read the book and enjoy it, like I did.
Alana travels to the Imperial City to visit her friend Zaria who works for Princess Everlee, but she is also hoping to find a cure for her Mum who is very, very sick. Whilst there she runs into her friends older brother Davin who she has had a crush on for years. He is in the Imperial City supposedly to start an apprenticeship at the Imperial Trade Office, his parents dream not his. His dream is to work in a forge creating beautiful filigree items. In her search for a cure for her Mum things go wrong for Alana, and Davin is drawn in to help her out of her predicament. But things only get worse for them both.
If you want to know more, please read the book and enjoy it, like I did.
June 5, 2024
A sweet cozy fantasy.
I loved this book. It was well written, swoony with YA romance like I love, and a good story that the whole family will enjoy.
Alana travels to the capital to find a cure for her mother’s illness. Her searching takes her to a black market vendor with a tempting magical cure, which sets her on a course for trouble.
Meanwhile Davin heads to the capital to start an apprenticeship his parents have dreamed of for him for years. But he has a different dream. A dream that takes him to the same black market shop his friend Alana found. He’s soon up to his eyeballs in trouble too.
This dual 1st person POV book was one I really enjoyed and I think you might too.
I loved this book. It was well written, swoony with YA romance like I love, and a good story that the whole family will enjoy.
Alana travels to the capital to find a cure for her mother’s illness. Her searching takes her to a black market vendor with a tempting magical cure, which sets her on a course for trouble.
Meanwhile Davin heads to the capital to start an apprenticeship his parents have dreamed of for him for years. But he has a different dream. A dream that takes him to the same black market shop his friend Alana found. He’s soon up to his eyeballs in trouble too.
This dual 1st person POV book was one I really enjoyed and I think you might too.
June 9, 2024
Received as an ARC, I am leaving my honest review. I love how this story brings you into the world of a young elf determined to find a way to help heal her mother. The delightful story progresses through her preparation and journey, which turns into a daring but very important mission to save the life of a king. Along the way, emotions come into play as plans are formed. Beware deceitful traitors and traps as the suspense intensifies. Gripping and action packed, prepare to be pulled into the story from the first page til the end
July 8, 2025
Cute and sweet. I wasn’t sure how I’d like it since Alana was a pretty minor character in the first book. The author made sure to give her a voice and personal growth conflict different from the first book so that was good. These are fast reads with simple language and plots that are for younger ages (teens). Content is appropriate for that age. I like to read these in between more plot heavy, intense reads to give myself a break. Despite being more simplistic, they are plenty interesting and enjoyable.
June 6, 2024
This book was fun. I didn't read the first book but will definitely go and read it. That being said, I didn't really need to know what happened in the first book to understand what was happening in this book. This story was funny, and had a lot of good moments in it even had some hard moments that were great to see the characters get thrown into. Will definitely be reading more of these books.
June 8, 2024
This is an adorable YA elfy romance.
The FMC has a little trouble finding her way and asking for help when she needs it. The MMC is there to help her without being overbearing.
The story line uncovers a plot against royalty, allows both main characters to find themselves, as well as grow into better people (elves).
Overall, this is a fun read for both young and old adults. 15yo me would have probably loved this even more than 28yo me does.
The FMC has a little trouble finding her way and asking for help when she needs it. The MMC is there to help her without being overbearing.
The story line uncovers a plot against royalty, allows both main characters to find themselves, as well as grow into better people (elves).
Overall, this is a fun read for both young and old adults. 15yo me would have probably loved this even more than 28yo me does.
July 3, 2024
Just a sweet, enjoyable read!
I loved reading this story. At times, I laughed out loud and I will admit I shed a tear or two at the ending. It’s just a fun, sweet read. Oh, there’s danger and the main characters not always making the best decisions, but that’s all part of growing up. I cannot recommend this story highly enough to readers of all ages!
I loved reading this story. At times, I laughed out loud and I will admit I shed a tear or two at the ending. It’s just a fun, sweet read. Oh, there’s danger and the main characters not always making the best decisions, but that’s all part of growing up. I cannot recommend this story highly enough to readers of all ages!
December 16, 2024
Davin and Alana
Another great Valley Glen Elves story by Mary Stephenson Su. I love how her stories just keep moving forward and you just keep turning pages til the end of the book. The characters are so charming and fun. And the world building is so vivid and amazing. I really enjoyed this second book as much as the first one.
Another great Valley Glen Elves story by Mary Stephenson Su. I love how her stories just keep moving forward and you just keep turning pages til the end of the book. The characters are so charming and fun. And the world building is so vivid and amazing. I really enjoyed this second book as much as the first one.
May 21, 2024
A great book. Alanas mother is getting sick and sicker and Alana decides to stop at nothing to find a cure for her no matter the danger. She runs into Davin her best friends older brother whom she has a huge crush on. He wants her to keep his secret he is working at a blacksmith shop. And he doesn't want his family to know. He also has developed feelings for Alana.
May 21, 2024
A fun, flirty YA cozy fantasy romance. Loved Alana and Davin and the development of their relationship. Also the threatening plot in which they become entangled. Each of the characters grew in meaningful ways throughout the book. A fun read!
June 9, 2024
A cute piece with zero spice. I read book 1 in this series and it was nice to see familiar character return. There is a lot of tension between the FMC and the MMC that was so good and funny yo watch them both try to deny their attraction to each other.
May 18, 2024
This book was just plain fun to read. It was not suspenseful, there was no cussing, no spice, just a fun story line laid out that made sense and was a pleasure to read.
May 27, 2024
Great story with great characters. It was easy to read and so enjoyable!
June 2, 2024
I find the plot interesting but the build up was too slow for me.
June 3, 2024
Very cute romance. I enjoyed the main characters.
September 27, 2024
Another sweet addition to the series!
July 4, 2024
before anything thanks for this oportunity to be in the arc.
Review: To be honest I liked the book but it was boring and i had feeling it need a bit of something more to light out the flame of the book.
Review: To be honest I liked the book but it was boring and i had feeling it need a bit of something more to light out the flame of the book.
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