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Without Vanity or Pride
Without Vanity or Pride is a collection of two short story variations of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice.
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
All I have ever desired — what I long for and crave with every fibre of my being — is that one day you would love me as fiercely and constantly as I love you. When an unfortunate accident results in a prolonged, and somewhat torturous, visit by the recently wedded Wickhams at Longbourn, Elizabeth Bennet is miserable. Despite knowing all that Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy has done to save her family’s reputation, Elizabeth cannot believe that the gentleman could ever bring himself to renew his offer of marriage to her, not when she is now sister to Mr George Wickham. When Mr Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, the romantic hopes of Darcy and Elizabeth are rekindled – but hope can be a very fickle thing indeed. Will it be enough to afford them a second chance at love?
No Improper Pride by Amy D’Orazio
Indeed he has no improper pride. He is perfectly amiable. Following his disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Fitzwilliam Darcy is resolved to giving up on his hope of winning Elizabeth Bennet’s heart and hand. His cousin, Viscount Saye has a different view of the matter; he believes that in handing her a letter and disappearing from her life, Darcy has done no more than assure himself of the last word in their argument. A chance meeting of Darcy, Saye and Elizabeth in Hyde Park in London proves a second chance for Darcy to prove he has been humbled. He offers her a chance for her own last word in the argument, to say to him whatever truth is within her heart. It turns out that the truth is a surprise to them both, but where will their candour lead them?
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
All I have ever desired — what I long for and crave with every fibre of my being — is that one day you would love me as fiercely and constantly as I love you. When an unfortunate accident results in a prolonged, and somewhat torturous, visit by the recently wedded Wickhams at Longbourn, Elizabeth Bennet is miserable. Despite knowing all that Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy has done to save her family’s reputation, Elizabeth cannot believe that the gentleman could ever bring himself to renew his offer of marriage to her, not when she is now sister to Mr George Wickham. When Mr Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, the romantic hopes of Darcy and Elizabeth are rekindled – but hope can be a very fickle thing indeed. Will it be enough to afford them a second chance at love?
No Improper Pride by Amy D’Orazio
Indeed he has no improper pride. He is perfectly amiable. Following his disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Fitzwilliam Darcy is resolved to giving up on his hope of winning Elizabeth Bennet’s heart and hand. His cousin, Viscount Saye has a different view of the matter; he believes that in handing her a letter and disappearing from her life, Darcy has done no more than assure himself of the last word in their argument. A chance meeting of Darcy, Saye and Elizabeth in Hyde Park in London proves a second chance for Darcy to prove he has been humbled. He offers her a chance for her own last word in the argument, to say to him whatever truth is within her heart. It turns out that the truth is a surprise to them both, but where will their candour lead them?
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December 28, 2024
A double feature that delights.
In Amy D'Orazio's - No Improper Pride, I found myself laughing hysterically (Saye), infuriatingly angry (Mr. Bennet) and crying emotive tears (Darcy, when he gets going is goooood).
All in the above order.
In a compilation of 10 books, or all on it's own, this novella is a show stopper.
5*+++++
I was so pleased to see a new offering from L.M. Romano. I love her first JAFF story.
Her Insufficient Vanity had me on the edge of my seat. I kept waiting for Wickham, Caroline or even Lady C to jump out and pull a devious well thought out plot.
In the end, it come from a surprising source, but it only helps nudge our loving couple faster.
It's a sweet offering and a wonderful read. I felt myself right along with Elizabeth through all her turmoil.
I was left wondering how this would have been told, if it had been full length and all the usual villains did pull something nefarious.
An entertaining read - double the trouble, double the love.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
In Amy D'Orazio's - No Improper Pride, I found myself laughing hysterically (Saye), infuriatingly angry (Mr. Bennet) and crying emotive tears (Darcy, when he gets going is goooood).
All in the above order.
In a compilation of 10 books, or all on it's own, this novella is a show stopper.
5*+++++
I was so pleased to see a new offering from L.M. Romano. I love her first JAFF story.
Her Insufficient Vanity had me on the edge of my seat. I kept waiting for Wickham, Caroline or even Lady C to jump out and pull a devious well thought out plot.
In the end, it come from a surprising source, but it only helps nudge our loving couple faster.
It's a sweet offering and a wonderful read. I felt myself right along with Elizabeth through all her turmoil.
I was left wondering how this would have been told, if it had been full length and all the usual villains did pull something nefarious.
An entertaining read - double the trouble, double the love.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 13, 2024
Delightful Duology
This is the second duology recently presented by Quills and Quartos Publishing—‘No Improper Pride’ and ‘Insufficient Vanity’, by Amy D’Orazio and L.M. Romano, respectively.
In No Improper Pride, Lord Saye goads Darcy until he has his way, maneuvering him into a conversation with Elizabeth in Hyde Park that ultimately leads to a second chance, despite Mr. Bennet’s wishes to the contrary. Saye entertains his fans—we all know who we are—with his humour and antics, assisted by his beloved Florizel. I love this author’s witty and lively writing style; when Saye is near, stirring the pot, a fun read is guaranteed.
In Insufficient Vanity, Darcy believes he has waited long enough for the newly-married Wickhams to leave Longbourn and make their way to Newcastle following their London wedding. However, they haven’t, and Wickham is doing all he can to find time alone with Elizabeth. L.M. Romano’s debut novel, Forgotten Betrothal, is a favourite of mine, and I eagerly anticipated another release from her. This short story, with its clever twist, certainly did not disappoint, and I am ‘ardently’ hoping for even more from this talented author.
Don’t miss these short-story duologies; they are perfect quick reads for busy schedules, or when seeking a relaxing and pleasurable reading session.
Highly recommended.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
This is the second duology recently presented by Quills and Quartos Publishing—‘No Improper Pride’ and ‘Insufficient Vanity’, by Amy D’Orazio and L.M. Romano, respectively.
In No Improper Pride, Lord Saye goads Darcy until he has his way, maneuvering him into a conversation with Elizabeth in Hyde Park that ultimately leads to a second chance, despite Mr. Bennet’s wishes to the contrary. Saye entertains his fans—we all know who we are—with his humour and antics, assisted by his beloved Florizel. I love this author’s witty and lively writing style; when Saye is near, stirring the pot, a fun read is guaranteed.
In Insufficient Vanity, Darcy believes he has waited long enough for the newly-married Wickhams to leave Longbourn and make their way to Newcastle following their London wedding. However, they haven’t, and Wickham is doing all he can to find time alone with Elizabeth. L.M. Romano’s debut novel, Forgotten Betrothal, is a favourite of mine, and I eagerly anticipated another release from her. This short story, with its clever twist, certainly did not disappoint, and I am ‘ardently’ hoping for even more from this talented author.
Don’t miss these short-story duologies; they are perfect quick reads for busy schedules, or when seeking a relaxing and pleasurable reading session.
Highly recommended.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
May 18, 2024
Both of these short stories were enjoyable.
The first, No Improper Pride, has a fan favorite, Viscount Saye, (the colonel's older brother) harassing Darcy as they walk in Hyde Park concerning his love life when lo, and behold, they come upon Elizabeth Bennet walking and eventually gain an invite to the Gardiner's residence. Elizabeth and Darcy soon are both offering apologies for offenses, especially as to do with the proposal at Hunsford and the subsequent letter he gave her.
In the second, Insufficient Vanity, we have Darcy secretly arranging Wickham's marriage to Lydia. Knowing the Wickhams are at Longbourn he delays visiting there until he believes they are north in Newcastle (Lydia has her part in that delay.) and so is surprised when he finds them still at Longbourn. Wickham has not changed and keeps trying to get Elizabeth alone, sometimes as Lydia watches on from her bedroom window.
Sweet stories!
The first, No Improper Pride, has a fan favorite, Viscount Saye, (the colonel's older brother) harassing Darcy as they walk in Hyde Park concerning his love life when lo, and behold, they come upon Elizabeth Bennet walking and eventually gain an invite to the Gardiner's residence. Elizabeth and Darcy soon are both offering apologies for offenses, especially as to do with the proposal at Hunsford and the subsequent letter he gave her.
In the second, Insufficient Vanity, we have Darcy secretly arranging Wickham's marriage to Lydia. Knowing the Wickhams are at Longbourn he delays visiting there until he believes they are north in Newcastle (Lydia has her part in that delay.) and so is surprised when he finds them still at Longbourn. Wickham has not changed and keeps trying to get Elizabeth alone, sometimes as Lydia watches on from her bedroom window.
Sweet stories!
May 16, 2024
Two Favorite Authors
Two Absorbing Stories
Is it any wonder that I read it twice?
Loved it!
Two Absorbing Stories
Is it any wonder that I read it twice?
Loved it!
April 20, 2024
No Improper Pride – Amy D’Orazio
“You must have the last word in any argument, and that is exactly what you have done to Miss Elizabeth Bennet – hand her a packet full of insults and then run off before she can reply.” (quote from the book)
This short story was a delightful mix of comedy (Lord Saye) and romance (Mr. Darcy). What more could one ask for!
Insufficient Vanity – LM Romano
“I could travel the world and never find her equal. She is worth anything and everything…But will she want me?” (quote from the book)
Be still my heart! This is one swoon-worthy Mr. Darcy.
When Mr. Darcy returns with Mr. Bingley to Netherfield Park, he was not expecting to see Mr. & Mrs. Wickham still there.
“Does he long for me as I long for him?” (quote from the book)
Poor Elizabeth Bennet is being hounded by her brother-in-law and pining for Mr. Darcy.
Oh, how I loved this story and her debut novel “Forgotten Betrothal” and can’t wait for another full-length book from the ever talented Ms. Romano!
I received a copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
March 28, 2024
No Improper Pride by Amy D’Orazio
While I am certain that Darcy would think that Saye is a pain in the backside, he is a delight and a good friend, to whom Darcy is rightly grateful. I'm not sure what to make of Mr Bennet and his motivations in this tale - is he too smart by half or is he just obstinate, disdainful and closed minded? Jury is out in my mind. Bingley I think is closer in character to the one first painted by JA; to which he admits to during the Netherfield stay. I won't say anymore than that. This was a satisfying, but sadly short read (only sadly because I would happily have read more).
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
Imagine if you will, a delayed departure of the newly married Wickhams from Longbourn, with a spitefully jealous Lydia and an overly confident and smarmy Wickham. Throw in an anxious Bingley, an uncertain Darcy, an anxious and uncertain Elizabeth and a spitefully jealous Miss Bingley (she would be appalled at sharing anything with Lydia)to the mix. Let the games begin. In this tale Elizabeth's quip 'my courage rises with every attempt to intimidate me' serves her well in the end.
I received a free copy of this book from Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
While I am certain that Darcy would think that Saye is a pain in the backside, he is a delight and a good friend, to whom Darcy is rightly grateful. I'm not sure what to make of Mr Bennet and his motivations in this tale - is he too smart by half or is he just obstinate, disdainful and closed minded? Jury is out in my mind. Bingley I think is closer in character to the one first painted by JA; to which he admits to during the Netherfield stay. I won't say anymore than that. This was a satisfying, but sadly short read (only sadly because I would happily have read more).
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
Imagine if you will, a delayed departure of the newly married Wickhams from Longbourn, with a spitefully jealous Lydia and an overly confident and smarmy Wickham. Throw in an anxious Bingley, an uncertain Darcy, an anxious and uncertain Elizabeth and a spitefully jealous Miss Bingley (she would be appalled at sharing anything with Lydia)to the mix. Let the games begin. In this tale Elizabeth's quip 'my courage rises with every attempt to intimidate me' serves her well in the end.
I received a free copy of this book from Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 20, 2024
Only read the D'Orazio half- she's one of my favorite JAFF authors. Though shorter than I would have liked, the shenanigans of Lord Saye charmed me yet again. D'Orazio has created a family that's a perfect avenue to show Darcy's better side in company, and this was no exception. He and Elizabeth are definitely still in character and it was interesting to see Lady's Catherine's ultimatum issued by someone else.
April 16, 2024
Review also posted on my blog
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No Improper Pride by Amy D’Orazio
The story is set in London after the Hunsford proposal. Darcy has got over his anger at being refused by Elizabeth Bennet. However, he has become bereft and regretful.
His cousin, the inimitable Viscount Saye, has no patience and little sympathy with Darcy. He correctly points out that in leaving Kent, after handing his letter to Elizabeth, Darcy denied her the right of reply.
He drags Darcy out for a walk in Hyde Park.
By coincidence, Elizabeth and her sister Jane are walking with their aunt Gardner and cousins.
After introductions, Darcy is floundering, so Saye takes charge, charming the ladies.
Could this be another chance for Darcy? Will Saye be unbearably outrageous and what will Florizel do?
Darcy, Elizabeth and Saye in the hands of Amy D’Orazio! How could it be anything but glorious?
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
When Elizabeth Bennet shared the news of her sister's elopement, she was sure that it put an end to her burgeoning romance with Fitzwilliam Darcy.
A sister not only ruined, but by Darcy's worst enemy, George Wickham!
By some miracle (called Fitzwilliam Darcy!) a patched up marriage, replaces ruin.
The Wickhams visit Longbourn, to "celebrate" their nuptials.
Unfortunately, a brief visit becomes prolonged due to a sprained ankle.
George Wickham seems to think he can rekindle a relationship with his sister in law, Elizabeth. He takes exception to being rebuffed.
To add to Elizabeth's misery, although she knows of Darcy's intervention, she is convinced he will not return for her.
Oh, how she loves him, now all hope is gone!
When Mr Bingley returns for Jane Bennet, Mr Darcy accompanies him to Longbourn.
But has he returned for Elizabeth?
A great novella, thoroughly enjoyable.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
No Improper Pride by Amy D’Orazio
The story is set in London after the Hunsford proposal. Darcy has got over his anger at being refused by Elizabeth Bennet. However, he has become bereft and regretful.
His cousin, the inimitable Viscount Saye, has no patience and little sympathy with Darcy. He correctly points out that in leaving Kent, after handing his letter to Elizabeth, Darcy denied her the right of reply.
He drags Darcy out for a walk in Hyde Park.
By coincidence, Elizabeth and her sister Jane are walking with their aunt Gardner and cousins.
After introductions, Darcy is floundering, so Saye takes charge, charming the ladies.
Could this be another chance for Darcy? Will Saye be unbearably outrageous and what will Florizel do?
Darcy, Elizabeth and Saye in the hands of Amy D’Orazio! How could it be anything but glorious?
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
When Elizabeth Bennet shared the news of her sister's elopement, she was sure that it put an end to her burgeoning romance with Fitzwilliam Darcy.
A sister not only ruined, but by Darcy's worst enemy, George Wickham!
By some miracle (called Fitzwilliam Darcy!) a patched up marriage, replaces ruin.
The Wickhams visit Longbourn, to "celebrate" their nuptials.
Unfortunately, a brief visit becomes prolonged due to a sprained ankle.
George Wickham seems to think he can rekindle a relationship with his sister in law, Elizabeth. He takes exception to being rebuffed.
To add to Elizabeth's misery, although she knows of Darcy's intervention, she is convinced he will not return for her.
Oh, how she loves him, now all hope is gone!
When Mr Bingley returns for Jane Bennet, Mr Darcy accompanies him to Longbourn.
But has he returned for Elizabeth?
A great novella, thoroughly enjoyable.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 7, 2024
RATING: 4.5
I always enjoy when amidst some of the heavier and angst-filled reading I do, I can fit in some lovely Austen inspired novellas that give me just enough of that lovely Darcy and Elizabeth sweetness to keep my heart happy! So, I was so excited to jump into this pair of Pride and Prejudice stories, one from one of my all time favs in the Austenesque space, Amy D'Orazio, and one from an author, L. M. Romano who is new to me but whose writing was a lot of fun to read.
This is a lovely duo of short stories that take the reader into small slices of Darcy and Elizabeth's story and imagine some of the 'what ifs' that as a big P&P fan, I have always loved exploring when it comes to my favorite literary couple!
Novella #1: No Improper Pride
In D'Orazio's story, No Improper Pride, Darcy is still reeling after his disastrous Kent proposal and hastily written letter. He is so sure that he will never get the chance to make things right but fate it seems has other plans for him as chance meeting with Elizabeth in a park, give him the opportunity to hear her out and maybe mend things enough that Elizabeth will give him a second chance.
Of course, being the brooding hero that we love, Darcy does need a little push and it comes in the form of his fantastically outspoken, irreverent and well meaning elder Fitzwilliam cousin, Viscount Saye. If you've some of D'Orazio's other work, Saye has made many an appearance and the injection of humor and honesty that he brings is always so fantastic and often just what Darcy needs to get out of his own head and go after what he truly wants.
D'Orazio is a master at writing well crafted dialogue that feels true to Austen's original characters and it was lovely to watch as Darcy and Elizabeth come to a truer understanding of each other and of the possibility of what love between them can bring.
Novella #2:
Romano's novella brings us to Longbourn as the newly married Wickhams visit the Bennets, much to the frustration of Elizabeth, who has come to realize just what she has lost in being separated from Darcy. Of course, Darcy is not far away also thinking about Elizabeth and wondering if he could have done more to keep Lydia from marrying Wickham. He is resigned to think this will likely mean Elizabeth will never be able to forgive him.
I loved the way that Romano brings Elizabeth's fire to life as she has many a choice word for Wickham, making it clear she knows exactly who he is and who is the better man between him and Darcy. Ultimately, Darcy decides to come back to Netherfield with Bingley and soon enough truths about Darcy's role in Lydia's marriage come to light. However, to Darcy's pleasant surprise, Elizabeth looks at him not with contempt but with respect and adoration.
All in all, this pair of novellas was delightful and one that you can read in an afternoon for some much needed Darcy and Elizabeth time.
I always enjoy when amidst some of the heavier and angst-filled reading I do, I can fit in some lovely Austen inspired novellas that give me just enough of that lovely Darcy and Elizabeth sweetness to keep my heart happy! So, I was so excited to jump into this pair of Pride and Prejudice stories, one from one of my all time favs in the Austenesque space, Amy D'Orazio, and one from an author, L. M. Romano who is new to me but whose writing was a lot of fun to read.
This is a lovely duo of short stories that take the reader into small slices of Darcy and Elizabeth's story and imagine some of the 'what ifs' that as a big P&P fan, I have always loved exploring when it comes to my favorite literary couple!
Novella #1: No Improper Pride
In D'Orazio's story, No Improper Pride, Darcy is still reeling after his disastrous Kent proposal and hastily written letter. He is so sure that he will never get the chance to make things right but fate it seems has other plans for him as chance meeting with Elizabeth in a park, give him the opportunity to hear her out and maybe mend things enough that Elizabeth will give him a second chance.
Of course, being the brooding hero that we love, Darcy does need a little push and it comes in the form of his fantastically outspoken, irreverent and well meaning elder Fitzwilliam cousin, Viscount Saye. If you've some of D'Orazio's other work, Saye has made many an appearance and the injection of humor and honesty that he brings is always so fantastic and often just what Darcy needs to get out of his own head and go after what he truly wants.
D'Orazio is a master at writing well crafted dialogue that feels true to Austen's original characters and it was lovely to watch as Darcy and Elizabeth come to a truer understanding of each other and of the possibility of what love between them can bring.
Novella #2:
Romano's novella brings us to Longbourn as the newly married Wickhams visit the Bennets, much to the frustration of Elizabeth, who has come to realize just what she has lost in being separated from Darcy. Of course, Darcy is not far away also thinking about Elizabeth and wondering if he could have done more to keep Lydia from marrying Wickham. He is resigned to think this will likely mean Elizabeth will never be able to forgive him.
I loved the way that Romano brings Elizabeth's fire to life as she has many a choice word for Wickham, making it clear she knows exactly who he is and who is the better man between him and Darcy. Ultimately, Darcy decides to come back to Netherfield with Bingley and soon enough truths about Darcy's role in Lydia's marriage come to light. However, to Darcy's pleasant surprise, Elizabeth looks at him not with contempt but with respect and adoration.
All in all, this pair of novellas was delightful and one that you can read in an afternoon for some much needed Darcy and Elizabeth time.
May 20, 2024
Too short!
4.5* rounded down
With this book's darling duo of authors, the only disappointment for me was the brevity of the stories. There's running in these tales. In the first, Darcy runs after Elizabeth. As usual, Lord Saye adds his oar into the proceedings to spark a HEA a month after Hunsford in Ms D'Orazio's No Improper Pride.
In the second story, Insufficient Vanity, Elizabeth ends up running after Darcy. Or perhaps, running away from her frustrating family. Ever since her book, A Forgotten Betrothal, I've kept my eye out for more of Ms Romano's work.
There's excellent writing throughout the whole book. This is a good book for a lunch break or a work commute. Each story left me with a smile on my face.
4.5* rounded down
With this book's darling duo of authors, the only disappointment for me was the brevity of the stories. There's running in these tales. In the first, Darcy runs after Elizabeth. As usual, Lord Saye adds his oar into the proceedings to spark a HEA a month after Hunsford in Ms D'Orazio's No Improper Pride.
In the second story, Insufficient Vanity, Elizabeth ends up running after Darcy. Or perhaps, running away from her frustrating family. Ever since her book, A Forgotten Betrothal, I've kept my eye out for more of Ms Romano's work.
There's excellent writing throughout the whole book. This is a good book for a lunch break or a work commute. Each story left me with a smile on my face.
May 9, 2024
I've never finished a story by Amy D'Orazio that I didn't love, especially when it has Saye in it. And I've come to enjoy L.M. Romano's work just as much. This lovely duology was perfect for an afternoon carpool and late night read, respectively. The only thing I can complain about is that they weren't longer, but I always feel that way about a good story from authors like these ladies.
I was lucky enough to receive a free copy of this book through a giveaway and am voluntarily leaving this review.
I was lucky enough to receive a free copy of this book through a giveaway and am voluntarily leaving this review.
May 19, 2024
4.5-stars rounded up. I enjoyed both stories.
May 17, 2024
Loved the novella by Amy d’Orazio, but couldn’t get into the other one.
May 9, 2024
This book contains two stories, No improper pride by Amy D'Orazio and No insufficient vanity by LM Romano.
NO IMPROPER PRIDE
After his disastrous proposal Fitzwilliam Darcy hides in London and gives in to his grief of losing the woman he loves. One day his cousin Viscount Saye finally persuades him out to Hide Park for a walk. There the two unexpectedly encounter Elizabeth and the Gardiners. Saye, who knows about Elizabeth's refusal of Darcy's proposal, now pushes his cousin to let the lady have her say. With his letter to Elizabeth Darcy had, as always, had the last word in the argument without giving his counterpart a chance to reply. Pushed by his cousin Darcy offers Elizabeth the chance of the last word and the opportunity to speak what is in her heart. Will she further berate him? Or has his letter already softened her feelings? Will the truth about Elisabeth's state of heart astonish them both and lead to a second chance?
This story is very well written by the author Amy D'Orazio. Viscount Saye, Colonel Fitzwilliam's elder brother, is always a prominent character in her stories. He has a main role here as well because he is the one who initiates a chance for Darcy and Elizabeth to speak after Elizabeth receives Darcy's letter in Hunsford. Or, better said, he wants Elizabeth to have a chance to have the final word because he thinks Darcy has robbed her of her chance to have her say by giving her the letter and then leaving. I like Saye's way of guiding Darcy in the direction he thinks Darcy should take and with this he acts as the elder brother Darcy does not have. And he does in a charming but yet very unique and a little eccentric way. Very sympathetic 😉.
I like the idea that Darcy and Elizabeth, due to the interference of Darcy's cousin, are finally forced to talk to each other and due to this try to gain a better understanding of one another after their last parting. And this talk is definitely different than both might have assumed before. As they talk they both already "benefit" from the refusal of Darcy's proposal and their argument thereafter that forced both to thoroughly prove their own attitudes and actions towards each other in the past. Therefore both are able to see each other in a new light and gain a better understanding.
Because of their better understanding Darcy is able to see, that he has not treated Elizabeth the way she deserves and is now determined to do it the right way. I like that he is not swayed from his course, not even with a family member putting obstacles in his path.
Elizabeth's feelings have greatly changed and I like that she is not willing to give up her love for Darcy, even if she needs to fight for it.
NO INSUFFICIENT VANITY
After their wedding the newly wed Wickhams are to stay for a few days at Longbourn. But then an unfortunate accident prolongs their stay and Elizabeth gets desperate. Not only is she in constant company of the villain and her silly sister, she is also sure that now, after saving her family's reputation, Darcy cannot desire her company any longer, not with Wickham as her new brother.
When Darcy returns to Longbourn he hopes to continue with Elizabeth on the same terms as they were in Pemberley. He hopes to continue to improve her opinion of him and in the end make her love him in return. But with the Wickhams still present will he be able to overlook her connection to his enemy? Will they be able to continue the improved understanding of one another they formed at Pemberley? And is this improvement enough to finally form an everlasting bond?
The other story in this book is the story by LM Romano. This story is also written very well and really enjoyable.
In it Elizabeth is exposed to a sort of "torture", the Wickhams need to prolong their stay due to an accident. With this Elizabeth's frail hope of seeing Mr Darcy is shattered because she can't imagine him coming to Longbourn with his nemesis being there.
I really hate Wickham in this story. He is a slimy snake, the scoundrel in person. I hate him for all the time approaching Elizabeth for his own purposes and with this arousing the alarm of Lydia. Poor Lizzy always tries to escape but has little chance. Due to the situation she draws the anger of everyone, especially her mother and Lydia (for stealing the attention of her husband), on herself and in addition grows more and more desperate because of the unrepeated love she feels for Darcy.
When Darcy finally arrives in Hertfordshire Wickham tries also to interfere in Darcy's relationship with Elizabeth but fortunately he is not as successful as he hopes, with the final result that everyone sees his real personality. Due to this actions are finally taken.
With the Wickhams-dilemma finally solved it's unfortunately not the end of the "torture" for ODC. I really pitied them in this story because one problem solved means there presents itself another to be solved. At least between Darcy and Elizabeth things are settled easily once they FINALLY have the opportunity to talk uninterrupted 😉
If you like to know what Elizabeth will say when she has the last word and how things between ODC enfold when the Wickhams need to stay longer at Longbourn, you should definitely read this book with these two wonderful stories.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
NO IMPROPER PRIDE
After his disastrous proposal Fitzwilliam Darcy hides in London and gives in to his grief of losing the woman he loves. One day his cousin Viscount Saye finally persuades him out to Hide Park for a walk. There the two unexpectedly encounter Elizabeth and the Gardiners. Saye, who knows about Elizabeth's refusal of Darcy's proposal, now pushes his cousin to let the lady have her say. With his letter to Elizabeth Darcy had, as always, had the last word in the argument without giving his counterpart a chance to reply. Pushed by his cousin Darcy offers Elizabeth the chance of the last word and the opportunity to speak what is in her heart. Will she further berate him? Or has his letter already softened her feelings? Will the truth about Elisabeth's state of heart astonish them both and lead to a second chance?
This story is very well written by the author Amy D'Orazio. Viscount Saye, Colonel Fitzwilliam's elder brother, is always a prominent character in her stories. He has a main role here as well because he is the one who initiates a chance for Darcy and Elizabeth to speak after Elizabeth receives Darcy's letter in Hunsford. Or, better said, he wants Elizabeth to have a chance to have the final word because he thinks Darcy has robbed her of her chance to have her say by giving her the letter and then leaving. I like Saye's way of guiding Darcy in the direction he thinks Darcy should take and with this he acts as the elder brother Darcy does not have. And he does in a charming but yet very unique and a little eccentric way. Very sympathetic 😉.
I like the idea that Darcy and Elizabeth, due to the interference of Darcy's cousin, are finally forced to talk to each other and due to this try to gain a better understanding of one another after their last parting. And this talk is definitely different than both might have assumed before. As they talk they both already "benefit" from the refusal of Darcy's proposal and their argument thereafter that forced both to thoroughly prove their own attitudes and actions towards each other in the past. Therefore both are able to see each other in a new light and gain a better understanding.
Because of their better understanding Darcy is able to see, that he has not treated Elizabeth the way she deserves and is now determined to do it the right way. I like that he is not swayed from his course, not even with a family member putting obstacles in his path.
Elizabeth's feelings have greatly changed and I like that she is not willing to give up her love for Darcy, even if she needs to fight for it.
NO INSUFFICIENT VANITY
After their wedding the newly wed Wickhams are to stay for a few days at Longbourn. But then an unfortunate accident prolongs their stay and Elizabeth gets desperate. Not only is she in constant company of the villain and her silly sister, she is also sure that now, after saving her family's reputation, Darcy cannot desire her company any longer, not with Wickham as her new brother.
When Darcy returns to Longbourn he hopes to continue with Elizabeth on the same terms as they were in Pemberley. He hopes to continue to improve her opinion of him and in the end make her love him in return. But with the Wickhams still present will he be able to overlook her connection to his enemy? Will they be able to continue the improved understanding of one another they formed at Pemberley? And is this improvement enough to finally form an everlasting bond?
The other story in this book is the story by LM Romano. This story is also written very well and really enjoyable.
In it Elizabeth is exposed to a sort of "torture", the Wickhams need to prolong their stay due to an accident. With this Elizabeth's frail hope of seeing Mr Darcy is shattered because she can't imagine him coming to Longbourn with his nemesis being there.
I really hate Wickham in this story. He is a slimy snake, the scoundrel in person. I hate him for all the time approaching Elizabeth for his own purposes and with this arousing the alarm of Lydia. Poor Lizzy always tries to escape but has little chance. Due to the situation she draws the anger of everyone, especially her mother and Lydia (for stealing the attention of her husband), on herself and in addition grows more and more desperate because of the unrepeated love she feels for Darcy.
When Darcy finally arrives in Hertfordshire Wickham tries also to interfere in Darcy's relationship with Elizabeth but fortunately he is not as successful as he hopes, with the final result that everyone sees his real personality. Due to this actions are finally taken.
With the Wickhams-dilemma finally solved it's unfortunately not the end of the "torture" for ODC. I really pitied them in this story because one problem solved means there presents itself another to be solved. At least between Darcy and Elizabeth things are settled easily once they FINALLY have the opportunity to talk uninterrupted 😉
If you like to know what Elizabeth will say when she has the last word and how things between ODC enfold when the Wickhams need to stay longer at Longbourn, you should definitely read this book with these two wonderful stories.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 27, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. These stories are well written with very good storylines. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a collection of two short story variations of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
No Improper Pride
Indeed he has no improper pride. He is perfectly amiable. Following his disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Fitzwilliam Darcy is resolved to giving up on his hope of winning Elizabeth Bennet’s heart and hand. His cousin, Viscount Saye has a different view of the matter; he believes that in handing her a letter and disappearing from her life, Darcy has done no more than assure himself of the last word in their argument. A chance meeting of Darcy, Saye and Elizabeth in Hyde Park in London proves a second chance for Darcy to prove he has been humbled. He offers her a chance for her own last word in the argument, to say to him whatever truth is within her heart. It turns out that the truth is a surprise to them both, but where will their candour lead them?
Insufficient Vanity
All Darcy has ever desired, and what he longed for and crave with every fibre of his being, is that one day Elizabeth would love him as fiercely and constantly as he loves her. When an unfortunate accident results in a prolonged, and somewhat torturous, visit by the recently wedded Wickhams at Longbourn, Elizabeth Bennet is miserable. Despite knowing all that Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy has done to save her family’s reputation, Elizabeth cannot believe that the gentleman could ever bring himself to renew his offer of marriage to her, not when she is now sister to Mr George Wickham. When Mr Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, the romantic hopes of Darcy and Elizabeth are rekindled, but hope can be a very fickle thing indeed. Will it be enough to afford them a second chance at love?
So with all that and more these two short stories will pull you in and hold you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. These stories are well written with very good storylines. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a collection of two short story variations of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
No Improper Pride
Indeed he has no improper pride. He is perfectly amiable. Following his disastrous proposal at Hunsford, Fitzwilliam Darcy is resolved to giving up on his hope of winning Elizabeth Bennet’s heart and hand. His cousin, Viscount Saye has a different view of the matter; he believes that in handing her a letter and disappearing from her life, Darcy has done no more than assure himself of the last word in their argument. A chance meeting of Darcy, Saye and Elizabeth in Hyde Park in London proves a second chance for Darcy to prove he has been humbled. He offers her a chance for her own last word in the argument, to say to him whatever truth is within her heart. It turns out that the truth is a surprise to them both, but where will their candour lead them?
Insufficient Vanity
All Darcy has ever desired, and what he longed for and crave with every fibre of his being, is that one day Elizabeth would love him as fiercely and constantly as he loves her. When an unfortunate accident results in a prolonged, and somewhat torturous, visit by the recently wedded Wickhams at Longbourn, Elizabeth Bennet is miserable. Despite knowing all that Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy has done to save her family’s reputation, Elizabeth cannot believe that the gentleman could ever bring himself to renew his offer of marriage to her, not when she is now sister to Mr George Wickham. When Mr Darcy returns to Hertfordshire, the romantic hopes of Darcy and Elizabeth are rekindled, but hope can be a very fickle thing indeed. Will it be enough to afford them a second chance at love?
So with all that and more these two short stories will pull you in and hold you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
May 13, 2024
A very interesting and well balanced blend.
A delightful blend of two short novellas by two trusted authors which delivers all the reader might expect. Each individual story is excellent in its own right but the editing decision to pair these two stories together was well considered giving the reader a rich blend of humour and angst.
The first story, No Improper Pride, by Amy D'Orazio is satisfyingly humorous with a balancing depth created by a father who doesn't want to acknowledge that anyone is good enough for his favourite daughter. This author has created a wonderfully eccentric original character, Lord Saye, who makes an appearance in many of her books and is the perfect vehicle for lifting a story and keeping it moving forwards. Mr Bennet switches himself into parent-mode in this story but as is so often the way, the more he pushes his child in one direction the further she moves in the opposite one. Parenthood is complex indeed.
The second story, Insufficient Vanity, by LM Romano is a deeper reflection on the impact which the Wickhams have on Elizabeth's sense of wellbeing and personal worth. It is this which Darcy has to fight against when he finds the Wickhams still in residence when he arrives at Longbourn. The author gives her readers a little glimpse into the married life which the Wickhams are likely to lead and it is not edifying. The readers see Darcy wrestling with his decision to bring about the marriage as he sees the negative impact it is having on his beloved Elizabeth.
For two short stories there is much to enjoy and both are highly recommended.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A delightful blend of two short novellas by two trusted authors which delivers all the reader might expect. Each individual story is excellent in its own right but the editing decision to pair these two stories together was well considered giving the reader a rich blend of humour and angst.
The first story, No Improper Pride, by Amy D'Orazio is satisfyingly humorous with a balancing depth created by a father who doesn't want to acknowledge that anyone is good enough for his favourite daughter. This author has created a wonderfully eccentric original character, Lord Saye, who makes an appearance in many of her books and is the perfect vehicle for lifting a story and keeping it moving forwards. Mr Bennet switches himself into parent-mode in this story but as is so often the way, the more he pushes his child in one direction the further she moves in the opposite one. Parenthood is complex indeed.
The second story, Insufficient Vanity, by LM Romano is a deeper reflection on the impact which the Wickhams have on Elizabeth's sense of wellbeing and personal worth. It is this which Darcy has to fight against when he finds the Wickhams still in residence when he arrives at Longbourn. The author gives her readers a little glimpse into the married life which the Wickhams are likely to lead and it is not edifying. The readers see Darcy wrestling with his decision to bring about the marriage as he sees the negative impact it is having on his beloved Elizabeth.
For two short stories there is much to enjoy and both are highly recommended.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 13, 2024
This book is comprised of two short stories that were fun and romantic. Anytime there is anything new by Amy D'Orazio it is an automatic purchase for me. I love her writing, wit and characters. This one did not disappoint. Lord Saye, a fan favorite, made his colorful appearance in this story and helped ODC find their way and entertained us along the way. L.M. Romano's story was also original and enjoyable. I read both stories back to back in one day and found them delightful and satisfying.
The first story, No Improper Pride, found Darcy and Elizabeth crossing paths after Hunsford much sooner than in canon. They have a second chance to get to know and understand each other with a little help from others. There was some fun and witty dialogue. Even Georgiana got in on the teasing as she roasted her elder cousin, Saye. That was unexpected in the best possible way and it had me laughing out loud. There was relatively little angst and it came from an unexpected source, but it was short lived and all worked out well. The second chance given to ODC was beautiful.
The second story, Insufficient Vanity, was original and enjoyable. The Wickhams take a big role in this story, but it is after their marriage and during their stay at Longbourn. I felt like the author did a great job painting an accurate picture of the character of both of the newly married Wickhams. There was great chemistry in this one between Darcy and Elizabeth and it was very satisfying. For a short story there was a great balance of substance angst and romance and I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from this author.
The first story, No Improper Pride, found Darcy and Elizabeth crossing paths after Hunsford much sooner than in canon. They have a second chance to get to know and understand each other with a little help from others. There was some fun and witty dialogue. Even Georgiana got in on the teasing as she roasted her elder cousin, Saye. That was unexpected in the best possible way and it had me laughing out loud. There was relatively little angst and it came from an unexpected source, but it was short lived and all worked out well. The second chance given to ODC was beautiful.
The second story, Insufficient Vanity, was original and enjoyable. The Wickhams take a big role in this story, but it is after their marriage and during their stay at Longbourn. I felt like the author did a great job painting an accurate picture of the character of both of the newly married Wickhams. There was great chemistry in this one between Darcy and Elizabeth and it was very satisfying. For a short story there was a great balance of substance angst and romance and I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from this author.
May 14, 2024
Kick back and relax
D'Orazio's story was enjoyable and lighthearted.
- Darcy and Elizabeth go through the normal progression of realizing their feelings were reciprocated. I liked the chemistry between the two.
- I would imagine there would be pressure to make D'Orazio's character, Saye, entertaining constantly, but she pulled it off again. Kudos.
I wasn't in the mood for a Lydia & Wickham story with Mrs. Bennet hovering in the background. However, I pressed on, and I'm glad I didn't cheat myself out of a good read. Those three did not dominate the story like I had imagined (phew!)
- It did start slow because there was more narration and inner thoughts than I would prefer in short stories. However, it picked up, and I was all in.
- Darcy and Elizabeth were nicely done. And their confession was everything I like to see in a HEA.
D'Orazio's story was enjoyable and lighthearted.
- Darcy and Elizabeth go through the normal progression of realizing their feelings were reciprocated. I liked the chemistry between the two.
- I would imagine there would be pressure to make D'Orazio's character, Saye, entertaining constantly, but she pulled it off again. Kudos.
I wasn't in the mood for a Lydia & Wickham story with Mrs. Bennet hovering in the background. However, I pressed on, and I'm glad I didn't cheat myself out of a good read. Those three did not dominate the story like I had imagined (phew!)
- It did start slow because there was more narration and inner thoughts than I would prefer in short stories. However, it picked up, and I was all in.
- Darcy and Elizabeth were nicely done. And their confession was everything I like to see in a HEA.
May 21, 2024
This duology has two short stories depicting our favorite couple and the means of uniting them. In the story by LM Romano, the Wickhams have a hand in uniting our couple. In the story by Amy D'Orazio, Viscount Saye is the helper.
I did enjoy watching Wickham squirm while his wife spoke to her family on how they came together. It was enlightening experience for all and helpful for Elizabeth. Darcy is there to witness it all. Our couple will get their happily ever after.
Viscount Saye "bullies" Darcy into revealing the truth of his heartache. This spurs him on to try to come up with diversions to help his cousin. One such diversion aids our couple in speaking to one another to achieve their happily ever after.
These stories can quickly be read in an afternoon with a cup of hot tea.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I did enjoy watching Wickham squirm while his wife spoke to her family on how they came together. It was enlightening experience for all and helpful for Elizabeth. Darcy is there to witness it all. Our couple will get their happily ever after.
Viscount Saye "bullies" Darcy into revealing the truth of his heartache. This spurs him on to try to come up with diversions to help his cousin. One such diversion aids our couple in speaking to one another to achieve their happily ever after.
These stories can quickly be read in an afternoon with a cup of hot tea.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 6, 2024
This book contains two very different but equally satisfying novellas.
After appearing in so many of Ms. D'Orazio's books, Colonel Fitzwilliam's older brother, Lord Saye, has now become a fan favorite. Once again, he's a scene-stealer in No Improper Pride, the first of the two tales. Once back in London after leaving Kent, Darcy made the mistake of confiding the story of his marriage proposal and Miss Elizabeth Bennet's vehement refusal to Saye. When the two men take a walk in Hyde Park, the irrepressible Saye orchestrates his own introduction to Elizabeth, Jane, their aunt Gardiner, and Mrs Gardiner's two children, dragging along a reluctant Darcy, who is certain he's the last person Miss Elizabeth wants to see. Things progress from there with a light, low-angst storyline. Fun read.
Ms. Romano's Insufficient Vanity is of a more serious nature. As it begins, Lizzy is at Longbourn trying to avoid her insufferable new brother-in-law. Mr. Wickham seems determined to renew their chummy rapport, and Lydia has noticed his preoccupation with her sister. Naturally, she blames Elizabeth rather than her worthless husband. Then Mrs. Wickham sprains her ankle, preventing the two from leaving for Newcastle as originally scheduled. The dynamics change as soon as Darcy and Bingley arrive, delighting Elizabeth and Jane...and their mother. Lydia becomes unhappy at the attention diverted from her, so she and Wickham plan some mischief directed toward Elizabeth and Darcy.
Both stories are beautifully written and edited, and both create lovely chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
After appearing in so many of Ms. D'Orazio's books, Colonel Fitzwilliam's older brother, Lord Saye, has now become a fan favorite. Once again, he's a scene-stealer in No Improper Pride, the first of the two tales. Once back in London after leaving Kent, Darcy made the mistake of confiding the story of his marriage proposal and Miss Elizabeth Bennet's vehement refusal to Saye. When the two men take a walk in Hyde Park, the irrepressible Saye orchestrates his own introduction to Elizabeth, Jane, their aunt Gardiner, and Mrs Gardiner's two children, dragging along a reluctant Darcy, who is certain he's the last person Miss Elizabeth wants to see. Things progress from there with a light, low-angst storyline. Fun read.
Ms. Romano's Insufficient Vanity is of a more serious nature. As it begins, Lizzy is at Longbourn trying to avoid her insufferable new brother-in-law. Mr. Wickham seems determined to renew their chummy rapport, and Lydia has noticed his preoccupation with her sister. Naturally, she blames Elizabeth rather than her worthless husband. Then Mrs. Wickham sprains her ankle, preventing the two from leaving for Newcastle as originally scheduled. The dynamics change as soon as Darcy and Bingley arrive, delighting Elizabeth and Jane...and their mother. Lydia becomes unhappy at the attention diverted from her, so she and Wickham plan some mischief directed toward Elizabeth and Darcy.
Both stories are beautifully written and edited, and both create lovely chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book via BookSprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 14, 2024
A mixed blessing with two stories.
Five stars for the first story, which combined elements of farce, wit, humor, and romance in a very funny tale. Laughed out loud several times and thoroughly enjoyed it. Darcy's cousin Saye is featured and stirs the plot beautifully.
Four stars for the second story, a more sedate description of Darcy pursuing Lizzy again after he has managed to get the Wickhams married. Of course, the Wickhams themselves manage to create plenty of chaos. All is well in the end!
Five stars for the first story, which combined elements of farce, wit, humor, and romance in a very funny tale. Laughed out loud several times and thoroughly enjoyed it. Darcy's cousin Saye is featured and stirs the plot beautifully.
Four stars for the second story, a more sedate description of Darcy pursuing Lizzy again after he has managed to get the Wickhams married. Of course, the Wickhams themselves manage to create plenty of chaos. All is well in the end!
May 14, 2024
Two delightful short stories. The first, by Amy D'Orazio, with Viscount Saye gifting us yet again with his presence. The second by LM Romano, in which Wickham continues to be a pain in the arse even after his marriage to Lydia, causing Darcy no end of mortification.
The cover, though. Who is the blond, and why is the guy looking at her boobs?
The cover, though. Who is the blond, and why is the guy looking at her boobs?
May 20, 2024
Simply the BEST!
Thoroughly enjoyed these two short and sweet stories…full disclosure Amy is one of my top JAFF authors. She just gets me in what I need in a variation. Say is by far my favorite side character…a whole book could be written just on him! Well done ladies! Thanks for the quick fun!
Thoroughly enjoyed these two short and sweet stories…full disclosure Amy is one of my top JAFF authors. She just gets me in what I need in a variation. Say is by far my favorite side character…a whole book could be written just on him! Well done ladies! Thanks for the quick fun!
May 23, 2024
Delightful!
Any D'Orazio D and E tale including Saye and his pampered pooch is a delight! Wickham finally has his story told and a most satisfied reader I am. It was accomplished to perfection by Romano. I was really looking forward to this duology including 2 of my favorite authors and I wasn't disappointed.
Any D'Orazio D and E tale including Saye and his pampered pooch is a delight! Wickham finally has his story told and a most satisfied reader I am. It was accomplished to perfection by Romano. I was really looking forward to this duology including 2 of my favorite authors and I wasn't disappointed.
May 13, 2024
Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano
I liked this story and I think that it was entertaining. I liked the author's interpretation of Jane's characters.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I liked this story and I think that it was entertaining. I liked the author's interpretation of Jane's characters.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 15, 2024
two delightful books from two delightful ladies
Thank you Amy and LM. Both stories moved at a good pace,
there was nothing to dislike, annoy or peeve. Two different approaches, both very enjoyable.
Thank you Amy and LM. Both stories moved at a good pace,
there was nothing to dislike, annoy or peeve. Two different approaches, both very enjoyable.
September 17, 2025
Both of them are amazing and it was so hard to pick which one was my favourite but Insufficient Vanity by LM Romano wins for the amazing chess scene between E & D and how Darcy hinted his feelings to Elizabeth
May 15, 2024
There is something special about a book that has 2 fabulous authors writing together.
Short stories are not my thing, but 2 together gets me in .
Loved both .
Short stories are not my thing, but 2 together gets me in .
Loved both .
May 15, 2024
2 booster shots
I will keep this duology in mind every time I want a quick read to boost my mood. These two lovely stories easily remind readers why they love Darcy and Elizabeth.
I will keep this duology in mind every time I want a quick read to boost my mood. These two lovely stories easily remind readers why they love Darcy and Elizabeth.
May 22, 2024
Excellent
Entertaining variations, both too short. Both were well written with a particular piece of the whole to focus on for their story. Nice job. Enjoy!
Entertaining variations, both too short. Both were well written with a particular piece of the whole to focus on for their story. Nice job. Enjoy!
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