3.5 stars
The novel starts strong –a bomb explodes and there’s an execution of the informer Farrid. The conflict is maintained throughout the chapters and as Vanessa moves from Germany to Venice to Turkey, the novel has an international feel. The focus of the book is to gain control of a miniature nuclear weapon, a prototype, but then politics and conflicts between other departments intervene. Somehow, the plot line didn’t pull me and by chapter 45, I lost interest.
I had to ignore most of the abbreviations. They might add some accuracy and authenticity. Only a few would have been ok. I got pretty lost among all the PRD, CPD, TDY, EOD suits, RRD, BIGOT, CART, DDRI, DDO. The only ones that I could still remember are FBI and CIA. As they slow the reading, I manage to skip them.
I like the way Vanessa’s emotions are portrayed. She’s shaken by the events, and yet has the strength to go on. Unfortunately, with all her smoking (an addiction, I suppose the author puts in as a flaw), no wonder she could not keep up with chase and runs. A fit CIA with a cigarette doesn’t compute in my mind (I know, I know CIA officers smoke all the time). We even have the psychologist and Vanessa bond over the smoking. If it were Chris smoking, that would have been preferable, because he’s not a field officer, more of an analyst.
By chapter 33, I realise it was the prose that really got me. Too many –‘Vanessa wondered’, ‘She felt’ etc., In 2 paragraphs –she found, she stared, she tightened, she found, she wandered…. Extraneous details that do not pertain to the plot (hey, I really thought Fournier’s watch Vacheron was an important clue!) By the time, I read all the details, I’ve lost track of the plotline -all the names, sellers, Russians etc., Then there’s the shift from True Jihad to the Christians and I was really lost.
I forged on, but alas by ch45, I had no clue who the ‘she’ Jeffreys was referring to. There are suspense chapters from a ‘he’ point-of-view and I had no clue who. At the beginning, not knowing lifted the suspense but by the end, I was too frustrated to read. It felt like navigating a maze. The book should have been focused with the search for the prototype but it wasn’t at all. There’s a fine line how to dole out information little by little, so too much information was withheld. Pacing is a bit of a problem in the read.
The dialogue was ok, the characters –Khoury, Chris, bland. The feral Aisha nearly kills the informant. The conflict and Vanessa’s lovelife, ok. Somehow, it seems we are reading how the plot unravels and Vanessa is not driving the plot (even as Bhoot contacts her and sends her on the right track to look for the prototype). Nothing stood out. I couldn’t find the heroine likeable and the novel could have been 100 pages shorter.
This review is for the ARC version. I won the book on Goodreads Giveaway. Thank you to the publisher for providing me a copy in exchange for a honest review.