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The Vorelian Saga #3
The Dance of Destiny
Welcome to the Vore World, where Destiny courts Death in a dance centuries in the making.
The award-winning saga is back in this third epic installment . . .
“Tell me again what it’s like to die.”
Morei Geral is a traitor, murderer, and spiraling deeper into the clutches of his curse. But he has one goal: to make Geral pay for turning their backs on him. Driven by revenge, the treasonous king will stake his claim on not just the city, but the country. But an unexpected bond will serve as the grounds to a destiny-altering decision that will redefine the man Morei has become.
The realms have fractured. In a damning revelation, Syra knows she is the only one capable of saving the living realm from being devoured. But she has found herself at the mercy to the one God she blames: Sekar. A promise, a deal, and a bloodline destined to rule the dead, Syra must embrace her destiny or risk condemning the very order of the realms to Chaos.
Cyrus has spent a lifetime searching for answers about his heritage. With a promise of a new purpose, he flies across the Vore World to the ancient country, Creitón, but this takes a disastrous turn. Separated from his dragon, Sozar, Cyrus finds himself at the mercy of a ruthless king who will stop at nothing to gain his fealty.
War is coming.
“This is masterful world-building at its best.” ~ AJ Webster, Author of One Good Heart
“Will undoubtedly garner legions of fans.” ~ Readers’ Favorite
“This is fantasy done right.” ~ Anatolian Press
The Vorelian Saga is an award-winning and highly acclaimed saga. Readers will identify themes of self-discovery, purpose, and revenge, along with classic and unique fantasy elements that make this world distinctly Vorelian. This is not a story about doing what's right but about what happens when Destiny has her way.
The award-winning saga is back in this third epic installment . . .
“Tell me again what it’s like to die.”
Morei Geral is a traitor, murderer, and spiraling deeper into the clutches of his curse. But he has one goal: to make Geral pay for turning their backs on him. Driven by revenge, the treasonous king will stake his claim on not just the city, but the country. But an unexpected bond will serve as the grounds to a destiny-altering decision that will redefine the man Morei has become.
The realms have fractured. In a damning revelation, Syra knows she is the only one capable of saving the living realm from being devoured. But she has found herself at the mercy to the one God she blames: Sekar. A promise, a deal, and a bloodline destined to rule the dead, Syra must embrace her destiny or risk condemning the very order of the realms to Chaos.
Cyrus has spent a lifetime searching for answers about his heritage. With a promise of a new purpose, he flies across the Vore World to the ancient country, Creitón, but this takes a disastrous turn. Separated from his dragon, Sozar, Cyrus finds himself at the mercy of a ruthless king who will stop at nothing to gain his fealty.
War is coming.
“This is masterful world-building at its best.” ~ AJ Webster, Author of One Good Heart
“Will undoubtedly garner legions of fans.” ~ Readers’ Favorite
“This is fantasy done right.” ~ Anatolian Press
The Vorelian Saga is an award-winning and highly acclaimed saga. Readers will identify themes of self-discovery, purpose, and revenge, along with classic and unique fantasy elements that make this world distinctly Vorelian. This is not a story about doing what's right but about what happens when Destiny has her way.
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520 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 13, 2024
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May 9, 2024
This is an intense installment in the Vorelian Saga! I had been looking forward to the stories of Morei, Cyrus, and Syra converging and book 3 does not disappoint!
McKenna’s writing style is strong and well suited to her dark fantasy world. The cast is greatly expanded here, but the author does a good job of reminding the reader who everyone is and what their (perceived) motives are.
I struggled with some of the descriptive violence in this series because in my heart of hearts I’m more Disney than dark. I had to skim over those scenes, but I still found the story compelling.
At this point in the series, I find I have no allegiances, no guesses at the outcome. It could go so many ways.
If you love epic dark fantasy with dragons, lots of morally gray gods, and fractured realms, this series is a must read!
McKenna’s writing style is strong and well suited to her dark fantasy world. The cast is greatly expanded here, but the author does a good job of reminding the reader who everyone is and what their (perceived) motives are.
I struggled with some of the descriptive violence in this series because in my heart of hearts I’m more Disney than dark. I had to skim over those scenes, but I still found the story compelling.
At this point in the series, I find I have no allegiances, no guesses at the outcome. It could go so many ways.
If you love epic dark fantasy with dragons, lots of morally gray gods, and fractured realms, this series is a must read!
May 13, 2024
The Dance of Destiny is the third installment in the Vorelian Saga and it might just be my favorite so far! I've loved this series from the beginning and one of the things I've looked forward to the most is seeing all the different storyline come together. This did not disappoint! I love the author's dark and ruthless fantasy world. I absolutely loved the adventures all of the characters went on and I'm so excited for what happen next.
Check out this series if you like epic dark fantasy, dragons, morally grey characters, demons, multiple povs, and unique magic!
Check out this series if you like epic dark fantasy, dragons, morally grey characters, demons, multiple povs, and unique magic!
June 27, 2024
"Maybe this was what death felt like—an endless path that took him nowhere and never changed."
Omg where do I even begin? I'm broken. I can't believe I finished reading this book. Yes it's massive and it took me weeks, but I never wanted it to end!!!
I had waited months for this book to be out and it did not disappoint 😍
This book has to be McKenna's darkest so far. There were scenes in which I wanted to yell at the character and at the book for what was happening. Other times I wished I didn't need to be doing my responsibilities 😂
Syra finally discovers her gift and wow!!! What a gift!! And can we please talk about that *shocker news that I won't reveal*. If you've read it you might have an idea of what I mean. I DID NOT EXPECT THAT!!!
And well, I love Sekar and I'm so glad he's more present in this book. I never stopped loving him since the very first book despite everything.
Cyrus... Omg he has so much going on!!! But I absolutely love his transformation. The end scene is just *chef kiss* I'm so eager to see what happens to him in the next book.
As for Morei, he had some of my favorite scenes. The way he handles everything is just well calculated and he perfectly embodies the demon king he is. Just perfect!!!
Overall I would read it all again for the first time if I could.
If you haven't checked McKenna's work yet, do it now! You will get addicted.
Omg where do I even begin? I'm broken. I can't believe I finished reading this book. Yes it's massive and it took me weeks, but I never wanted it to end!!!
I had waited months for this book to be out and it did not disappoint 😍
This book has to be McKenna's darkest so far. There were scenes in which I wanted to yell at the character and at the book for what was happening. Other times I wished I didn't need to be doing my responsibilities 😂
Syra finally discovers her gift and wow!!! What a gift!! And can we please talk about that *shocker news that I won't reveal*. If you've read it you might have an idea of what I mean. I DID NOT EXPECT THAT!!!
And well, I love Sekar and I'm so glad he's more present in this book. I never stopped loving him since the very first book despite everything.
Cyrus... Omg he has so much going on!!! But I absolutely love his transformation. The end scene is just *chef kiss* I'm so eager to see what happens to him in the next book.
As for Morei, he had some of my favorite scenes. The way he handles everything is just well calculated and he perfectly embodies the demon king he is. Just perfect!!!
Overall I would read it all again for the first time if I could.
If you haven't checked McKenna's work yet, do it now! You will get addicted.
May 14, 2024
“𝐼 𝒶𝓂 𝓌𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝓁𝒹 𝒽𝒶𝓈 𝓂𝒶𝒹𝑒 𝓂𝑒 𝓉𝑜 𝒷𝑒.”
The end of the first trilogy is just the beginning of a grand adventure I cannot even imagine. C.D. McKenna is spinning a story full of such detail and so many secrets I can’t wait to discover. Also that title! The Dance of Destiny contains hardships, cunning kings (Morei, I’m looking at you), plot twists and so much more. Cyrus was my favorite in book 2, so it was so difficult to read his povs in this one. The pain he faced was devastating. C.D. McKenna’s dedication to her craft is clear in the heartfelt words making up the Vorelian Saga. I cannot wait until our main characters all meet up and band together or against each other depending on what route the journey goes. They will surely be a force to be reckoned with.
The end of the first trilogy is just the beginning of a grand adventure I cannot even imagine. C.D. McKenna is spinning a story full of such detail and so many secrets I can’t wait to discover. Also that title! The Dance of Destiny contains hardships, cunning kings (Morei, I’m looking at you), plot twists and so much more. Cyrus was my favorite in book 2, so it was so difficult to read his povs in this one. The pain he faced was devastating. C.D. McKenna’s dedication to her craft is clear in the heartfelt words making up the Vorelian Saga. I cannot wait until our main characters all meet up and band together or against each other depending on what route the journey goes. They will surely be a force to be reckoned with.
May 26, 2024
I was so excited to read this after reading the first two books, let me tell you! This book is everything I hoped it'd be and more! Congrats on knocking it out of the park with this final installment of the first trilogy of the series C. D. McKenna 👏🏻😍
I'm not usually an epic dark fantasy reader but I guess I am now!
You're definitely missing out if you're not reading this. And come on, who doesn't love dragons and morally grey gods??
I'm not usually an epic dark fantasy reader but I guess I am now!
You're definitely missing out if you're not reading this. And come on, who doesn't love dragons and morally grey gods??
May 5, 2024
I love this series ! It felt like coming home to the characters I’ve come to love so much. I love the wild adventure we take through book three. I can’t wait to see where everyone ends up ❤️
May 8, 2024
“The Dance of Destiny” is the third book in C.D. McKenna’s award-winning high fantasy epic, “The Vorelian Saga”, and the last in the first trilogy of what looks to be nine books. Having read the previous two books in the series, I can absolutely say that you must be caught up with the “Vorelian Saga” to fully appreciate the plot and characters at work here, though McKenna does a good job of peppering exposition into the narrative and dialogue concerning the hardships her characters have endured previously. As is to be expected from McKenna, “The Dance of Destiny” is not only a tome but an impressive one at that; beyond the spectacular artwork, the book includes maps of McKenna’s fantasy lands and a terminology in the back to help with pronunciation, which all adds to the immersiveness and world-building of this epic saga. I should also say that, while I am a fan of fantasy films and videogames, I don’t read much of the genre; the “Vorelian Saga” is not only an exception but also a fantastic way to venture into the genre. While “The Dance of Destiny” is naturally building upon events and lore already established in the previous books, McKenna’s writing and composition never overwhelm or bombard the reader, as I find some fantasy does. She deals with concepts like magic (or “Energy”, which can be harvested and used to manipulate objects and event people), fantastical beasts (one character has a dragon companion and there’s a prominent sub-plot about an interdimensional rift), and Gods (Sekar, the Dark God of Dreams, comes to the forefront here) but they’re handled in a very digestible way. Because this is a world that has “moved on” (to steal a phrase from Stephen King) from the days of Gods and beasts, many characters are as in the dark about these fantastical elements, meaning there’s plenty of easy to digest exposition laced throughout the book, as well as some dangling threads to invite speculation and entice my thirst for the next entry.
“The Dance of Destiny” continues the journeys of three very different characters who are only mildly aware of each other, but whose fates are seemingly intertwined. Morei Geral, the “Demon King”, cast from his land and afflicted with a demonic curse that threatens to consume him, heads out on a mission of revenge, forcibly claiming a rival kingdom to rebuild his forces. The last Dragon Rider, Cyrus heads across the sea with his faithful (if snarky) dragon companion, Sozar, in search of his mother and answers to his origins only to once again be met with fear and hostility. Syra finds herself in the frigid mountains, sheltered by an untrustworthy band of rebels and courted by the Dark God, Sekar, who offers to train her in the dark arts and make her into a weapon, perhaps the only weapon of standing against the chaos and destruction that threatens this world. Each chapter jumps to a different character to follow their story, and “The Dance of Destiny” finally brings them together in a tangential way: Morei and Syra share dreams of each other that paint them as potential threats and Morei actively hunts for Cyrus, as all do considering his unique position as a Dragon Rider. Each are surrounded by allies and enemies, but only Syra is accompanied by familiar companions, “Guardians of Death”, whose motives are as complex and obscure as Sekar’s, driving her to question who she can really trust in her life. Conversely, Morei expects betrayal; even when he forcibly takes a kingdom and enforces his charismatic will, treachery is to be expected and the part of him that craves violence relishes it. Finally, there’s poor Cyrus, a man who simply wants peace and who is constantly stabbed in the back, feared, tortured, and met with maniacal despots seeking to weaponise Sozar.
A new aspect of “The Dance of Destiny” is seen right at the beginning and that’s of the sea. Morei and Cyrus both find themselves near the sea and awestruck by its vastness and danger, which comes to a dramatic forefront at the end. It seemed as though McKenna was going to tell a sea-faring story here, one involving pirates and cutthroat adventures, but instead the story pivots towards, fittingly, a mediation on these character’s destinies. While Morei hurtles towards his, almost desperate for his dark power to consume him, Syra struggles with the expectations placed upon her. All three characters are feared and revered, conflicted about their identities and the motivations of others, and forced to rely on unlikely allies to see them through. For Syra, it’s the enigmatic Sekar, a being previously thought to be this devious and destructive God but who showcases more compassion than some of her allies. Cyrus is forced to rely on Prince Alaric, a man forced to stand against his father’s tyrannical ways, and to accept the responsibilities that come with being a Dragon Rider. Morei wins over many of his new kingdom’s soldiers with his reputation and charisma, and takes pleasure in mentoring Caster’s oppressed princess, Isla, but faces an uphill battle not just proving himself to his new kingdom but suppressing the violent urges that threaten to consume him. Of the three, Morei stood out the most for me; it was fun seeing him seething, plotting, and asserting himself. Like everyone in these stories, he’s increasingly seen as a pawn to a higher power (“Destiny”, as the book states) but he constantly rallies to forge his own path, even if it means wiping out his former people. Cyrus really goes through the wringer – this guy has the worst luck in the world, it seems! – and is sadly separated from Sozar for much of the story, though the dragon always makes an impression when he appears. Syra’s path is one of conflict, rumination, preparation, and seduction, specifically towards the darkness. There’s still clearly a lot more for all these characters to do as the saga continues, but Syra may eventually become the most prominent of them all if she truly embraces her destiny…even if it means pledging herself to the Dark God!
As ever, McKenna is teasing us with “The Dance of Destiny”. Though the finale of the first trilogy, this book is ultimately another step towards her greater, loftier goals of a nine-part saga and you can see that in the text. There are so many plot threads left dangling here that I can’t help but be excited to see what happens next, especially as her three characters seem set for a collision course with each other that will decide the fate of this world! As for this book, it definitely stands alongside its predecessors. McKenna takes us to new lands and new locations, offers a deeper dive into this world and its lore, and fleshes out obscure characters and concepts in such a way that turns previously malicious figures into sympathetic characters and makes one wonder for the safety of this world when demonic and mythological beasts are becoming more prominent. Themes of persecution, distrust, identity, and betrayal permeate “The Dance of Destiny”, with even Syra’s closest allies and would-be saviours taking on shades of disturbing grey as she develops her potentially destructive abilities. While I expected a little more from Cryus’ quest to find his mother and the presence of pirates and sirens, McKenna delivers an unexpected and devastating finale while also ending on a cliffhanger. This is especially true of Morei, who is actively preparing for all-out war and conquest, and Syra, whose rag-tag allies are preparing to defend this world. While “The Dance of Destiny” could be said to be intimidating in its length and scope, it’s the exact opposite when reading it. McKenna has a very affable narrative style, her characters and locations are always beautifully described and build up throughout the story, and the lore and text is far from impenetrable, holding your hand through this fantasy world just as allies both unexpected and questioned guide her characters towards their ultimate destinies!
“The Dance of Destiny” continues the journeys of three very different characters who are only mildly aware of each other, but whose fates are seemingly intertwined. Morei Geral, the “Demon King”, cast from his land and afflicted with a demonic curse that threatens to consume him, heads out on a mission of revenge, forcibly claiming a rival kingdom to rebuild his forces. The last Dragon Rider, Cyrus heads across the sea with his faithful (if snarky) dragon companion, Sozar, in search of his mother and answers to his origins only to once again be met with fear and hostility. Syra finds herself in the frigid mountains, sheltered by an untrustworthy band of rebels and courted by the Dark God, Sekar, who offers to train her in the dark arts and make her into a weapon, perhaps the only weapon of standing against the chaos and destruction that threatens this world. Each chapter jumps to a different character to follow their story, and “The Dance of Destiny” finally brings them together in a tangential way: Morei and Syra share dreams of each other that paint them as potential threats and Morei actively hunts for Cyrus, as all do considering his unique position as a Dragon Rider. Each are surrounded by allies and enemies, but only Syra is accompanied by familiar companions, “Guardians of Death”, whose motives are as complex and obscure as Sekar’s, driving her to question who she can really trust in her life. Conversely, Morei expects betrayal; even when he forcibly takes a kingdom and enforces his charismatic will, treachery is to be expected and the part of him that craves violence relishes it. Finally, there’s poor Cyrus, a man who simply wants peace and who is constantly stabbed in the back, feared, tortured, and met with maniacal despots seeking to weaponise Sozar.
A new aspect of “The Dance of Destiny” is seen right at the beginning and that’s of the sea. Morei and Cyrus both find themselves near the sea and awestruck by its vastness and danger, which comes to a dramatic forefront at the end. It seemed as though McKenna was going to tell a sea-faring story here, one involving pirates and cutthroat adventures, but instead the story pivots towards, fittingly, a mediation on these character’s destinies. While Morei hurtles towards his, almost desperate for his dark power to consume him, Syra struggles with the expectations placed upon her. All three characters are feared and revered, conflicted about their identities and the motivations of others, and forced to rely on unlikely allies to see them through. For Syra, it’s the enigmatic Sekar, a being previously thought to be this devious and destructive God but who showcases more compassion than some of her allies. Cyrus is forced to rely on Prince Alaric, a man forced to stand against his father’s tyrannical ways, and to accept the responsibilities that come with being a Dragon Rider. Morei wins over many of his new kingdom’s soldiers with his reputation and charisma, and takes pleasure in mentoring Caster’s oppressed princess, Isla, but faces an uphill battle not just proving himself to his new kingdom but suppressing the violent urges that threaten to consume him. Of the three, Morei stood out the most for me; it was fun seeing him seething, plotting, and asserting himself. Like everyone in these stories, he’s increasingly seen as a pawn to a higher power (“Destiny”, as the book states) but he constantly rallies to forge his own path, even if it means wiping out his former people. Cyrus really goes through the wringer – this guy has the worst luck in the world, it seems! – and is sadly separated from Sozar for much of the story, though the dragon always makes an impression when he appears. Syra’s path is one of conflict, rumination, preparation, and seduction, specifically towards the darkness. There’s still clearly a lot more for all these characters to do as the saga continues, but Syra may eventually become the most prominent of them all if she truly embraces her destiny…even if it means pledging herself to the Dark God!
As ever, McKenna is teasing us with “The Dance of Destiny”. Though the finale of the first trilogy, this book is ultimately another step towards her greater, loftier goals of a nine-part saga and you can see that in the text. There are so many plot threads left dangling here that I can’t help but be excited to see what happens next, especially as her three characters seem set for a collision course with each other that will decide the fate of this world! As for this book, it definitely stands alongside its predecessors. McKenna takes us to new lands and new locations, offers a deeper dive into this world and its lore, and fleshes out obscure characters and concepts in such a way that turns previously malicious figures into sympathetic characters and makes one wonder for the safety of this world when demonic and mythological beasts are becoming more prominent. Themes of persecution, distrust, identity, and betrayal permeate “The Dance of Destiny”, with even Syra’s closest allies and would-be saviours taking on shades of disturbing grey as she develops her potentially destructive abilities. While I expected a little more from Cryus’ quest to find his mother and the presence of pirates and sirens, McKenna delivers an unexpected and devastating finale while also ending on a cliffhanger. This is especially true of Morei, who is actively preparing for all-out war and conquest, and Syra, whose rag-tag allies are preparing to defend this world. While “The Dance of Destiny” could be said to be intimidating in its length and scope, it’s the exact opposite when reading it. McKenna has a very affable narrative style, her characters and locations are always beautifully described and build up throughout the story, and the lore and text is far from impenetrable, holding your hand through this fantasy world just as allies both unexpected and questioned guide her characters towards their ultimate destinies!
October 10, 2024
This is book 3 in the Vorelian Saga.
It’s an Epic Fantasy filled with: Lore, New Enemies, Prophecies, Magic, Converging Realms, Political Intrigue, Morally Grey MCs, a Vengeful King, multiple POVs, Pirates, gods, and Dragons.
This series is perfect for fans of: Lord of the Rings, Game of Thrones, The Witcher, and Eragon.
💀
Overview:
Morei has fled and is determined to get his revenge on Geral no matter the cost, or the effects of his curse.
Syra has accepted her destiny and her new position, but she must learn to work with the one being she blames, who she is not sure she can trust. And someone from her past returns.
Cyrus (poor Cyrus) falls on hard times. But maybe his fate is not so bleak…if he can rise above the ashes and accept his role as Dragon Rider.
Reams and destinies will collide.
💀
Review: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⚡️
The story immediately picks up after the ending of The Mark of the Damned.
We start to see the different worlds colliding.
But, poor Cyrus!! He goes through some sheet 🫣.
💀
I can’t wait for the next release.
It’s an Epic Fantasy filled with: Lore, New Enemies, Prophecies, Magic, Converging Realms, Political Intrigue, Morally Grey MCs, a Vengeful King, multiple POVs, Pirates, gods, and Dragons.
This series is perfect for fans of: Lord of the Rings, Game of Thrones, The Witcher, and Eragon.
💀
Overview:
Morei has fled and is determined to get his revenge on Geral no matter the cost, or the effects of his curse.
Syra has accepted her destiny and her new position, but she must learn to work with the one being she blames, who she is not sure she can trust. And someone from her past returns.
Cyrus (poor Cyrus) falls on hard times. But maybe his fate is not so bleak…if he can rise above the ashes and accept his role as Dragon Rider.
Reams and destinies will collide.
💀
Review: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⚡️
The story immediately picks up after the ending of The Mark of the Damned.
We start to see the different worlds colliding.
But, poor Cyrus!! He goes through some sheet 🫣.
💀
I can’t wait for the next release.
May 29, 2024
This is my third time hanging out in the world of The Vorelian Saga, and I'm already looking forward to my next visit.
The writing is wonderful as always, the author's voice and attention to detail are so engaging. The different narratives feel varied and carry the story forward and each of the characters faces complex obstacles and high stakes.
After the ride that was book two, I was certain this one would be the one to get 5 stars from me but sadly there were 3 issues that I couldn't ignore and that kept taking me out of the story from time to time.
Setting: ★★★★★
Worldbuilding:★★★★★
Magic system: ★★★★
High Stakes: ★★★
Writing: ★★★★
Repetition: ★★
Antagonistic Force: ★★★
Characters: ★★★
Romance: ★★
Pacing: ★
Concept: ★★★★
Ending: ★★★
Length: ★★
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Setting/Worldbuilding:
The world-building, the lore, and the setting keep expanding and getting richer, and I love all the small details the author weaves into the narrative through the characters and their environments. Hints of ancient history, of faraway places I hope we get to explore in later books. It fills my mind with thoughts and possibilities which to me makes me feel like I'm exploring the world alongside the characters, just like I love doing when I'm playing video games.
Magic system:
In earlier books, I thought it was more of a soft system, but it has proven to be the opposite. Complex, with interesting rules, and as of now more depth and possibilities to be explored in future books. I like how it is introduced in each book instead of right in your face from the get-go, it makes it feel more mysterious and magical.
+ and -
The Characters:
Morei is still my favorite in this series, and in this book, his story developed very nicely and at a nice pace. I looked forward to his chapters the most and I love how grey his character is, and how complex the curse makes his personality to be. He started out kind, but becomes more ruthless with each book, but still retains that tiny bit of caring and kind streak that shows itself from time to time. I hope he gets to keep it and even though I usually end up liking the character that dies/loses in stories I consume, I hope he'll have a happy ending despite the odds against him. If he ends up being the ultimate villain, then I'll probably root for him to succeed anyway ^^
Cyrus' story took a bit of a dark turn in this one, and I think it will be for the better. He was too naive in previous books and needed to grow a thicker and tougher skin, I was only frustrated that Sozar (the wonderful second-best character in the series) had to pay the price for Cyrus's stupidity. Some of the things that happened to him in this book could have been avoided had he used his brain and not acted on his impulses.
I hope he's learned his lesson now and will become smarter and make better choices. I am looking forward to seeing what's in store for him in the next book.
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Syra's story although interesting is my least favorite part due to her personality. For the kind of life she's led, she acts too much like a spoiled brat, never knowing when to hold her tongue and depends far too much on others to keep her going. Her story felt stagnant and dragged out.
All she did was feel sorry for herself, lashing out, regretting it, and complaining about the lack of information. Girl, with that mouth of yours, you should be thankful they haven't left you to fend for yourself. Be grateful and start listening to those around you, and earn their respect by actually improving on the things you can do. Like training and laying low, not sticking out like a sore thumb, and focusing on what's important.
Sekar's nickname for her suits her and I understand why Zarek is so frustrated at her at times, I pity him for having to babysit her.
I hope she'll become more mature in the next book and begin to work on herself and her gifts, or she won't be fit to rule, let alone save anyone from anything.
The Pacing:
I understand that with a series as long as this (as of now 10 books planned) that there will be slower books. Certain books will be the build-up between big events in the overarching story, but the pacing of the story was simply too slow. Which I blame on my next point.
Repetition:
Something that has been an ongoing problem with this series. Yes, reminders of important events, feelings the characters are experiencing, and the like are to be expected with a story this complex, but there has to be a balance. It shows up in the character's inner monologues and thoughts, things getting repeated in different ways, but are still the same issues over and over again. This adds unnecessary length to the book and slows down the pacing.
There are several scenes in the book that could have been shortened to increase the pacing, without hurting the story at all.
To conclude:
Had this book not been as well written as it is, and the highlights of the story been so damn good that I sat at the edge of my seat, I would have given this 3 stars. But despite these issues, I would not hesitate to recommend this series to anyone who loves dark adult fantasy.
The writing is wonderful as always, the author's voice and attention to detail are so engaging. The different narratives feel varied and carry the story forward and each of the characters faces complex obstacles and high stakes.
After the ride that was book two, I was certain this one would be the one to get 5 stars from me but sadly there were 3 issues that I couldn't ignore and that kept taking me out of the story from time to time.
Setting: ★★★★★
Worldbuilding:★★★★★
Magic system: ★★★★
High Stakes: ★★★
Writing: ★★★★
Repetition: ★★
Antagonistic Force: ★★★
Characters: ★★★
Romance: ★★
Pacing: ★
Concept: ★★★★
Ending: ★★★
Length: ★★
+
Setting/Worldbuilding:
The world-building, the lore, and the setting keep expanding and getting richer, and I love all the small details the author weaves into the narrative through the characters and their environments. Hints of ancient history, of faraway places I hope we get to explore in later books. It fills my mind with thoughts and possibilities which to me makes me feel like I'm exploring the world alongside the characters, just like I love doing when I'm playing video games.
Magic system:
In earlier books, I thought it was more of a soft system, but it has proven to be the opposite. Complex, with interesting rules, and as of now more depth and possibilities to be explored in future books. I like how it is introduced in each book instead of right in your face from the get-go, it makes it feel more mysterious and magical.
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The Characters:
Morei is still my favorite in this series, and in this book, his story developed very nicely and at a nice pace. I looked forward to his chapters the most and I love how grey his character is, and how complex the curse makes his personality to be. He started out kind, but becomes more ruthless with each book, but still retains that tiny bit of caring and kind streak that shows itself from time to time. I hope he gets to keep it and even though I usually end up liking the character that dies/loses in stories I consume, I hope he'll have a happy ending despite the odds against him. If he ends up being the ultimate villain, then I'll probably root for him to succeed anyway ^^
Cyrus' story took a bit of a dark turn in this one, and I think it will be for the better. He was too naive in previous books and needed to grow a thicker and tougher skin, I was only frustrated that Sozar (the wonderful second-best character in the series) had to pay the price for Cyrus's stupidity. Some of the things that happened to him in this book could have been avoided had he used his brain and not acted on his impulses.
I hope he's learned his lesson now and will become smarter and make better choices. I am looking forward to seeing what's in store for him in the next book.
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Syra's story although interesting is my least favorite part due to her personality. For the kind of life she's led, she acts too much like a spoiled brat, never knowing when to hold her tongue and depends far too much on others to keep her going. Her story felt stagnant and dragged out.
All she did was feel sorry for herself, lashing out, regretting it, and complaining about the lack of information. Girl, with that mouth of yours, you should be thankful they haven't left you to fend for yourself. Be grateful and start listening to those around you, and earn their respect by actually improving on the things you can do. Like training and laying low, not sticking out like a sore thumb, and focusing on what's important.
Sekar's nickname for her suits her and I understand why Zarek is so frustrated at her at times, I pity him for having to babysit her.
I hope she'll become more mature in the next book and begin to work on herself and her gifts, or she won't be fit to rule, let alone save anyone from anything.
The Pacing:
I understand that with a series as long as this (as of now 10 books planned) that there will be slower books. Certain books will be the build-up between big events in the overarching story, but the pacing of the story was simply too slow. Which I blame on my next point.
Repetition:
Something that has been an ongoing problem with this series. Yes, reminders of important events, feelings the characters are experiencing, and the like are to be expected with a story this complex, but there has to be a balance. It shows up in the character's inner monologues and thoughts, things getting repeated in different ways, but are still the same issues over and over again. This adds unnecessary length to the book and slows down the pacing.
There are several scenes in the book that could have been shortened to increase the pacing, without hurting the story at all.
To conclude:
Had this book not been as well written as it is, and the highlights of the story been so damn good that I sat at the edge of my seat, I would have given this 3 stars. But despite these issues, I would not hesitate to recommend this series to anyone who loves dark adult fantasy.
January 2, 2025
“Behind, memories grew duller with distance, and ahead a new purpose. He would find his mother, break the curse that kept him from harvesting energy, and fulfill his duty as a Dragon Rider by returning to Leonzo to raise the two female dragons.”
The first trilogy of The Vorelian Saga is complete, yet there is still so much more that is to come!
This book was an emotion ride from start to finish. CD McKenna has raised the bar, yet again with her EPIC storytelling! She combines large world building with well developed characters, that continue to surprise you with every chapter. While this book, like the previous two books follow three POV’s: Morei, Syra and Cyrus, I feel this is the book I have been waiting for since reading The Blood of the Lion and meeting Cyrus. Within these pages, the bond between Cyrus and Sozar become so strong, that not even the finest sword forged by the Gods could break it. We also see Cyrus start to become the Dragon Rider we all knew he is destine to become!
I’m not going to lie. There were a couple of times I thought Cyrus’ life was going to end by the hand of King Raj of Delion. Whose warped beliefs of the old world made him think Cyrus was no good and decided torture was the correct course of action. But Destiny has other plans for Cyrus and Sozar and we see the path brought to light. With the bond between Rider and Dragon growing exponentially in this book, I know we are only going to see even more extraordinary things from these two as the Saga continues.
There is a lot of backstabbing, destruction and carnage within this book. But there is also a great deal of growth, discovery and bonds between characters, that you wouldn’t have expected. But now that these friendships have been created, you can see great things on on the horizon.
If you are a fan of Dark Fantasy, you won’t want to cheat yourself by missing out on this Saga.
You MUST read the first two books, The Blood of the Lion and The Mark of the Damned, before reading The Dance of Destiny.
Join The Empire Today!!!
The first trilogy of The Vorelian Saga is complete, yet there is still so much more that is to come!
This book was an emotion ride from start to finish. CD McKenna has raised the bar, yet again with her EPIC storytelling! She combines large world building with well developed characters, that continue to surprise you with every chapter. While this book, like the previous two books follow three POV’s: Morei, Syra and Cyrus, I feel this is the book I have been waiting for since reading The Blood of the Lion and meeting Cyrus. Within these pages, the bond between Cyrus and Sozar become so strong, that not even the finest sword forged by the Gods could break it. We also see Cyrus start to become the Dragon Rider we all knew he is destine to become!
I’m not going to lie. There were a couple of times I thought Cyrus’ life was going to end by the hand of King Raj of Delion. Whose warped beliefs of the old world made him think Cyrus was no good and decided torture was the correct course of action. But Destiny has other plans for Cyrus and Sozar and we see the path brought to light. With the bond between Rider and Dragon growing exponentially in this book, I know we are only going to see even more extraordinary things from these two as the Saga continues.
There is a lot of backstabbing, destruction and carnage within this book. But there is also a great deal of growth, discovery and bonds between characters, that you wouldn’t have expected. But now that these friendships have been created, you can see great things on on the horizon.
If you are a fan of Dark Fantasy, you won’t want to cheat yourself by missing out on this Saga.
You MUST read the first two books, The Blood of the Lion and The Mark of the Damned, before reading The Dance of Destiny.
Join The Empire Today!!!
May 17, 2024
For Game of Thrones fans 😍 (are you one?)
The Dance of Destiny is book 3 and completes the first trilogy of the series. If you've been waiting on this book, now it's the time to jump on this series!
I've said it from book 1, The Blood of the Lion, and our introduction to the complex politics and gods of the Vorelians. I've said it after book 2, The Mark of the Damned, when the world became more violent and much wider. And here I am after book 3 brings new characters and revelations to the mix: this is the only series I've read comparable to GoT, in terms of grey characters, expansive world, dark and violent turns and deep history and mysteries.
After book 1, Syra was my favourite. After book 2, it was Cyrus and Sozar (we got a dragon! and then... but I won't spoil you). Now after speeding through book 3 with clenched fists and open mouth,... I don't know. Morei is still fascinating to watch as he descends into his curse, I can't look away. Syra faces her own twists and turns, and Cyrus explores my favourite part of the story so far. And then we meet new characters and old... friends? I guess I don't have favourites anymore. I love every thread of this story and I promise it will leave you wishing there were a few hundreds pages more!
Aaaall the stars, I love this series!
The Dance of Destiny is book 3 and completes the first trilogy of the series. If you've been waiting on this book, now it's the time to jump on this series!
I've said it from book 1, The Blood of the Lion, and our introduction to the complex politics and gods of the Vorelians. I've said it after book 2, The Mark of the Damned, when the world became more violent and much wider. And here I am after book 3 brings new characters and revelations to the mix: this is the only series I've read comparable to GoT, in terms of grey characters, expansive world, dark and violent turns and deep history and mysteries.
After book 1, Syra was my favourite. After book 2, it was Cyrus and Sozar (we got a dragon! and then... but I won't spoil you). Now after speeding through book 3 with clenched fists and open mouth,... I don't know. Morei is still fascinating to watch as he descends into his curse, I can't look away. Syra faces her own twists and turns, and Cyrus explores my favourite part of the story so far. And then we meet new characters and old... friends? I guess I don't have favourites anymore. I love every thread of this story and I promise it will leave you wishing there were a few hundreds pages more!
Aaaall the stars, I love this series!
May 14, 2024
The empire continues!!!
C.D McKenna’s third installment of her Vorelian saga continues in The Dance of Destiny.
Morei, Cyrus and Syra— three separate but equally complex characters are challenged with the age old themes…is there good amongst evil, and can you follow your destiny despite the chaos.
Each character’s story is separate but hints of entanglement are obvious and become clear as the story evolves. C.D Mckenna has a way of unpacking a story that makes your equally love and hate each protagonist.
While I openly admit I am not a huge fantasy reader, this trilogy which I believe will be part of a larger series, held my attention from the onset. McKenna is able to make her story dance off the page. Even though there is mention of dragons, dragon hunters and fictitious lands, the underlying themes of love, loss, abandonment and power resonated loudly throughout.
If you haven't read McKenna’s first two books The Blood of the Lion and The Mark of the Damned, you'll need to catch up before diving into The Dance of Destiny. This is definitely not a stand alone. If you choose to dive in, be prepared to hunker down, because this series is not a casual read but an investment in Vore lore.
Join the Empire. I did and I haven't looked back!
C.D McKenna’s third installment of her Vorelian saga continues in The Dance of Destiny.
Morei, Cyrus and Syra— three separate but equally complex characters are challenged with the age old themes…is there good amongst evil, and can you follow your destiny despite the chaos.
Each character’s story is separate but hints of entanglement are obvious and become clear as the story evolves. C.D Mckenna has a way of unpacking a story that makes your equally love and hate each protagonist.
While I openly admit I am not a huge fantasy reader, this trilogy which I believe will be part of a larger series, held my attention from the onset. McKenna is able to make her story dance off the page. Even though there is mention of dragons, dragon hunters and fictitious lands, the underlying themes of love, loss, abandonment and power resonated loudly throughout.
If you haven't read McKenna’s first two books The Blood of the Lion and The Mark of the Damned, you'll need to catch up before diving into The Dance of Destiny. This is definitely not a stand alone. If you choose to dive in, be prepared to hunker down, because this series is not a casual read but an investment in Vore lore.
Join the Empire. I did and I haven't looked back!
May 21, 2024
An Entertaining Fantasy
I read "The Dance of Destiny: The Vorelian Saga" by C.D. McKenna and was positively surprised by the intricate world-building and intense plot. This third installment in the series brings together the stories of Morei, Syra, and Cyrus in a masterful way. I liked how the author deepened the character development and expanded the cast, making each character's features and journey compelling and relatable. I also liked the moral complexity of the characters, especially Morei's struggle with revenge and Syra's battle with destiny; these two were fair enough to keep me hooked.
I enjoyed the book raising high stakes and offering unexpected plot twists that made the story a true thriller. The descriptive writing, although sometimes graphic, added a gritty realism to the dark fantasy setting. I thought the interplay between the gods and mortals was particularly interesting, adding layers of depth to the narrative. Overall, this book is a nice read for fans of epic fantasy who appreciate complex characters and richly woven plots. McKenna has truly raised the bar with this engaging and thought-provoking saga.
I read "The Dance of Destiny: The Vorelian Saga" by C.D. McKenna and was positively surprised by the intricate world-building and intense plot. This third installment in the series brings together the stories of Morei, Syra, and Cyrus in a masterful way. I liked how the author deepened the character development and expanded the cast, making each character's features and journey compelling and relatable. I also liked the moral complexity of the characters, especially Morei's struggle with revenge and Syra's battle with destiny; these two were fair enough to keep me hooked.
I enjoyed the book raising high stakes and offering unexpected plot twists that made the story a true thriller. The descriptive writing, although sometimes graphic, added a gritty realism to the dark fantasy setting. I thought the interplay between the gods and mortals was particularly interesting, adding layers of depth to the narrative. Overall, this book is a nice read for fans of epic fantasy who appreciate complex characters and richly woven plots. McKenna has truly raised the bar with this engaging and thought-provoking saga.
May 13, 2024
This book is something special. This book has got it all: magic, mystery, and characters you'll be thinking about long after you've turned the last page.
Let's talk about Morei Geral. He's the kind of character who gets under your skin in the best way possible. Sure, he's got his flaws (don't we all?), but there's something about him that makes you want to root for him, even when he's making all the wrong choices.
And then there's Syra, our fearless heroine with a heart of gold. She's facing down gods and monsters with nothing but her wits and a whole lot of determination, and let me tell you, she's the kind of character you can't help but admire.
But it's not just the characters that make this book great. McKenna has created a world that's so vivid and immersive, you'll feel like you're right there alongside them, every step of the way. And the plot? Let's just say there are twists and turns aplenty that'll keep you guessing until the very end.
Wanna know more?? Guess you'll just have to read it then...
Let's talk about Morei Geral. He's the kind of character who gets under your skin in the best way possible. Sure, he's got his flaws (don't we all?), but there's something about him that makes you want to root for him, even when he's making all the wrong choices.
And then there's Syra, our fearless heroine with a heart of gold. She's facing down gods and monsters with nothing but her wits and a whole lot of determination, and let me tell you, she's the kind of character you can't help but admire.
But it's not just the characters that make this book great. McKenna has created a world that's so vivid and immersive, you'll feel like you're right there alongside them, every step of the way. And the plot? Let's just say there are twists and turns aplenty that'll keep you guessing until the very end.
Wanna know more?? Guess you'll just have to read it then...
December 19, 2024
Help. That's what we need. Help! How do we last until the next great read like The Vorelian Saga?
When you start from the very book 1's catchy cover, and then see how amazing the series are unfolding on a bookshelf with sheer design, you'd wonder if you need more than that. But yes, you do. The content.
The author has done an amazing job at building a world where high stakes are at matter and characters are often left hanging in the balance between the moral thing to do and the right thing to do.
Villains are designed to be relatable, and that makes my heart throb as ultimately the world has no villains or we are all the villains. Building up on that idea that there is no ultimate good, we are plunged into the front seat of an extreme rollercoaster and watchout because there won't be any safety belts.
You open page one and you keep swiping/turning the pages until you're left with a disappointing feeling that it's soon going to come to an end.
Looking forward to McKenna's next work!
When you start from the very book 1's catchy cover, and then see how amazing the series are unfolding on a bookshelf with sheer design, you'd wonder if you need more than that. But yes, you do. The content.
The author has done an amazing job at building a world where high stakes are at matter and characters are often left hanging in the balance between the moral thing to do and the right thing to do.
Villains are designed to be relatable, and that makes my heart throb as ultimately the world has no villains or we are all the villains. Building up on that idea that there is no ultimate good, we are plunged into the front seat of an extreme rollercoaster and watchout because there won't be any safety belts.
You open page one and you keep swiping/turning the pages until you're left with a disappointing feeling that it's soon going to come to an end.
Looking forward to McKenna's next work!
May 15, 2024
Dragons. Gods. Magic. Beasts.
Honestly, this book felt like the most intense game of chess! The characters the pieces moving slowly throughout the story, the gods the players moving them to play against each other in their dark affairs.
Betrayals, new friendships, new characters, new enemies.
I couldn't tell you who will win, who will lose, as I know twists are coming. We have set up so much in the first three to lead us to one big battle. Part of me is hoping Morei, Cyrus and Syra all band together against the meddlesome Gods but only time will tell.
I hope we see more of Zorya, she was one of my faves!
Honestly if you are looking for a fantasy series to sink your teeth in check The Vorelean Saga out.
This is very much a middle book of a series, twisting the paths and journeys, changing things up, reveals, not too much action but a lot of building.
Miss Mckenna get writing book 4... NOW!
Honestly, this book felt like the most intense game of chess! The characters the pieces moving slowly throughout the story, the gods the players moving them to play against each other in their dark affairs.
Betrayals, new friendships, new characters, new enemies.
I couldn't tell you who will win, who will lose, as I know twists are coming. We have set up so much in the first three to lead us to one big battle. Part of me is hoping Morei, Cyrus and Syra all band together against the meddlesome Gods but only time will tell.
I hope we see more of Zorya, she was one of my faves!
Honestly if you are looking for a fantasy series to sink your teeth in check The Vorelean Saga out.
This is very much a middle book of a series, twisting the paths and journeys, changing things up, reveals, not too much action but a lot of building.
Miss Mckenna get writing book 4... NOW!
May 22, 2024
Let me preface by saying that I am not your typical fantasy reader. It’s not a genre I seek out.
But this series - oh goodness, this series! I have been hooked since book one. McKenna knows how to tell a story. The imagery dances off the page, and every page - every paragraph is just as compelling as the last.
This is not a standalone novel - you have to read the first two books in the saga to read this one. The characters and tension have been building since The Blood of the Lion and the stories intersect here. Speaking of characters: get ready to love these characters and get ready to shake them at the same time. They define the words “morally gray” - especially the gods.
So much to unpack in such a short review, but you will not regret becoming a member of the Vorelian Empire. This is only the first trilogy in a larger series. This story is far from over.
C.D. McKenna - you have a fan for life. I am recommending these books to everyone.
But this series - oh goodness, this series! I have been hooked since book one. McKenna knows how to tell a story. The imagery dances off the page, and every page - every paragraph is just as compelling as the last.
This is not a standalone novel - you have to read the first two books in the saga to read this one. The characters and tension have been building since The Blood of the Lion and the stories intersect here. Speaking of characters: get ready to love these characters and get ready to shake them at the same time. They define the words “morally gray” - especially the gods.
So much to unpack in such a short review, but you will not regret becoming a member of the Vorelian Empire. This is only the first trilogy in a larger series. This story is far from over.
C.D. McKenna - you have a fan for life. I am recommending these books to everyone.
July 2, 2024
Best One in the Series Yet
The Dance of Destiny is the third instalment in the Vorelian Saga, and it’s the best one yet.
Soaked in dread and ever building tension, this book like the previous two, is dark and enthralling. The world feels more lived in than ever before, the cast of characters carrying a great deal of depth and history, which can be felt without having to explain those histories.
This instalment marks a turning point for the three main characters. In the previous two books, their actions were mostly reactionary, in response to the things happening to and around them. The Dance with Destiny finds each of them discovering a purpose in the chaos and impending war. They each make decisions that will have no doubt have large ramifications for themselves and the rest of their world as the series continues.
I, for one, can’t wait to continue through this dark saga.
The Dance of Destiny is the third instalment in the Vorelian Saga, and it’s the best one yet.
Soaked in dread and ever building tension, this book like the previous two, is dark and enthralling. The world feels more lived in than ever before, the cast of characters carrying a great deal of depth and history, which can be felt without having to explain those histories.
This instalment marks a turning point for the three main characters. In the previous two books, their actions were mostly reactionary, in response to the things happening to and around them. The Dance with Destiny finds each of them discovering a purpose in the chaos and impending war. They each make decisions that will have no doubt have large ramifications for themselves and the rest of their world as the series continues.
I, for one, can’t wait to continue through this dark saga.
May 18, 2024
The ups and downs, twists and turns, just everything in this book was wonderful!! Seeing the appearance of the gods is something I really enjoyed reading. The world building is also still one of my favorite aspects of this series. Everything feels real and fleshed out. I got chills whenever things connected throughout the book.
This is dark fantasy done right. I love the journey we're taken on with three different characters. Their destinies are so different but overlap in so many different ways. A lot of questions were answered, but so many more have popped up.
I feel like Cyrus grew the most in this book. While his journey wasn't easy, seeing him grow into himself and his destiny was really rewarding. I can't wait for the next book!!!! I'm a Vorelian for life!!
Come dance with destiny!
This is dark fantasy done right. I love the journey we're taken on with three different characters. Their destinies are so different but overlap in so many different ways. A lot of questions were answered, but so many more have popped up.
I feel like Cyrus grew the most in this book. While his journey wasn't easy, seeing him grow into himself and his destiny was really rewarding. I can't wait for the next book!!!! I'm a Vorelian for life!!
Come dance with destiny!
May 8, 2024
An epic installment to the first trilogy of this dark epic and high fantasy saga. The stakes are higher, the betrayal richer, and there are plenty of plot twists to keep you turning the pages. One of my favorites thus far.
This is fine dining at its best - a true fantasy saga that gets bigger and bigger with each new release. Looking forward to the next book of this series!
This is fine dining at its best - a true fantasy saga that gets bigger and bigger with each new release. Looking forward to the next book of this series!
May 25, 2024
This is the final book in an awesome trilogy I have enjoyed following the journey of all the characters. This is a must read for fans of dragon's and fantasy in general.
June 24, 2025
The gods play cruel games. I'm not sure where McKenna is taking her readers on this adventure, the final outcome cannot yet be foretold, but I am enjoying every second of the journey. Onward!
January 14, 2026
Feels like like a first draft
As per the previous books, the lack of proper editing lets a beautiful story down. A real shame, detracting credibility from indie authors
As per the previous books, the lack of proper editing lets a beautiful story down. A real shame, detracting credibility from indie authors
May 13, 2024
I mean . . . what do I say? It's my pride and joy and the finale of the first trilogy of this 9-book saga. You don't want to miss this one :)
August 16, 2024
Full review on Amazon...
OMGosh! If you love politics, inner struggles, magic, and gods choosing sides for what will likely be an epic battle to save the realms, then you have to pick up this book!
OMGosh! If you love politics, inner struggles, magic, and gods choosing sides for what will likely be an epic battle to save the realms, then you have to pick up this book!
June 28, 2024
This has been such an epic adventure. Book 3 in The Vorelian Saga continues following the three POV of Morei, Syra, and Cyrus. It ends the first trilogy of The Vorelian Saga. The gods are setting things into motion and there are so many twists and turns that our characters are questioning if they can follow their destinies. C.D. McKenna has created a fantastic world where dragons soars, gods plot, and a few strangers can change the course of everything.
Fans of dark fantasy, who appreciate wonderfully descriptive stories and morally gray characters should check out The Vorelian Saga and start with The Blood of the Lion
Fans of dark fantasy, who appreciate wonderfully descriptive stories and morally gray characters should check out The Vorelian Saga and start with The Blood of the Lion
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