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Island Love #1
Salt
When was the right time to tell someone that silver flames were shooting from their hair? And that your own tranquil green desired nothing more than to tangle with them, if only it could escape a malevolent orange flare hounding your every move?
Over-stressed businessman Charles Heyer is not like most people. With a rare medical condition that scrambles the senses, he experiences emotions as flashes of colour, giving them the power to disrupt, dismay, or delight. Alone in his over-vivid world, a devastating bereavement leaves him mentally scarred and recuperating on the picturesque French island of Ré where, through a chance encounter and a good deed, he is introduced to Florian, a flirty local salt farmer.
What with trying to protect the island salt cooperative from a corporate takeover and keeping a watchful eye on his errant grandfather, handsome Florian is not as carefree as he appears. Falling in love with this odd Englishman is as unexpected as it is welcome. Both exploring new feelings, the lazy days of summer stretch out for miles until a visitor from Charles’s London life throws their peaceful idyll into a kaleidoscope of chaos. And, all of a sudden, the island’s glorious palette of colour turns several shades darker.
Over-stressed businessman Charles Heyer is not like most people. With a rare medical condition that scrambles the senses, he experiences emotions as flashes of colour, giving them the power to disrupt, dismay, or delight. Alone in his over-vivid world, a devastating bereavement leaves him mentally scarred and recuperating on the picturesque French island of Ré where, through a chance encounter and a good deed, he is introduced to Florian, a flirty local salt farmer.
What with trying to protect the island salt cooperative from a corporate takeover and keeping a watchful eye on his errant grandfather, handsome Florian is not as carefree as he appears. Falling in love with this odd Englishman is as unexpected as it is welcome. Both exploring new feelings, the lazy days of summer stretch out for miles until a visitor from Charles’s London life throws their peaceful idyll into a kaleidoscope of chaos. And, all of a sudden, the island’s glorious palette of colour turns several shades darker.
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First published April 10, 2024
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Fearne Hill
28 books348 followersFearne Hill resides far from the madding crowds in the county of Dorset, deep in the British countryside. She likes it that way.
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Her novel, Oyster, is a 2025 Lambda Literary Award winner. Two Tribes is a 2023 Lambda Literary Award finalist..
Her popular Rossingley series was nominated in nine separate categories of the 2021 Goodreads M/M Romance awards and received an Honourable Mention in the 2021 Rainbow Awards.
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She also writes very brief and not especially insightful book reviews here on GR...
Finally, she also writes straight contemporary romance under the pseudonym Coco Chambers.
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November 6, 2025
Salt is book one in the Island Love series by Fearne Hill. This book takes place on the beautiful French island of Loix. And I learned of a profession I knew nothing about, the salt farmers. It is both a breathtaking tradition of farming the salt, and a back breaking one. But, along with the beauty of this book, it deals with a much darker subject, mental illness. I did read the blurb, but still didn’t realize what exactly I was getting in to. The pace is slow but the words are beautiful. I just wasn’t prepared for the heaviness or darkness involved. But, I feel inclined to add that the ending was sweet and light, so you do walk away with a happy heart.
Charles Heyer is thirty nine years old and is a venture capitalist in London. Numbers are his magic. He can manipulate them to do just about anything and in he and his business partner’s case, it has made them a lot of money. Charles has a very rare condition called synaesthesia. He experiences emotions in vivid colors. He inherited it from his mother. It can be both a blessing and a curse. But when his mother, whom he was close to, unexpectedly dies, Charles throws himself in to work and eventually spirals mentally. Now he is on an extended work leave and spending the summer on the beautiful island of Loix where he meets the very handsome salt farmer and he is smitten.
Florian (I love his name) is about ten years younger than Charles. He is an out gay man and is a salt farmer, as his grandfather was. He is instantly attracted to the Englishman who stumbles with his French and intrigues him. Florian lives with his grandfather, caring for him as he watches him slowly decline into dementia. He and the other salt farmers in the area are in a cooperative, formed by their grandfathers. But a large company is trying to take over their coop and most of the older farmers just see dollar signs where Florian is trying to see the big picture. So he alone is tasked with making them see the truth. On the outside, Florian might give the impression of a carefree, flirty young man, but in reality, he carries the weight of the world on his shoulders.
“Why Silver, Charles? Why, when you look at me, do you see silver?”
Because the stars were the brightest constellations in the sky? How much more did I want to scare him away?
Florian and Charles begin what was supposed to be a fun, summer fling, never imagining that feelings would develop, that they would fall in love, something neither has ever done before. But suddenly, their idyllic time together is turned upside down.
So I knew about the synaesthesia and was intrigued to read about a condition I have never heard of. But as I said, I wasn’t prepared for the rest of it. At times, it was difficult to experience what Charles was going through. But what I loved about this book was Charles and Florian together. And the beautiful way the author described their colors together. And of course, it was sweet Florian, with so much already weighing him down, that fell in love with Charles who has such a complicated situation of his own. Fearne Hill told the story beautifully and respectfully. I even found myself googling salt farmers because I wanted some mental images of what Florian did. The next book will focus on Florian’s friend, Nico, but I will have to wait until I read the blurb to decide if I’m brave enough to continue the series.
Charles Heyer is thirty nine years old and is a venture capitalist in London. Numbers are his magic. He can manipulate them to do just about anything and in he and his business partner’s case, it has made them a lot of money. Charles has a very rare condition called synaesthesia. He experiences emotions in vivid colors. He inherited it from his mother. It can be both a blessing and a curse. But when his mother, whom he was close to, unexpectedly dies, Charles throws himself in to work and eventually spirals mentally. Now he is on an extended work leave and spending the summer on the beautiful island of Loix where he meets the very handsome salt farmer and he is smitten.
Florian (I love his name) is about ten years younger than Charles. He is an out gay man and is a salt farmer, as his grandfather was. He is instantly attracted to the Englishman who stumbles with his French and intrigues him. Florian lives with his grandfather, caring for him as he watches him slowly decline into dementia. He and the other salt farmers in the area are in a cooperative, formed by their grandfathers. But a large company is trying to take over their coop and most of the older farmers just see dollar signs where Florian is trying to see the big picture. So he alone is tasked with making them see the truth. On the outside, Florian might give the impression of a carefree, flirty young man, but in reality, he carries the weight of the world on his shoulders.
“Why Silver, Charles? Why, when you look at me, do you see silver?”
Because the stars were the brightest constellations in the sky? How much more did I want to scare him away?
Florian and Charles begin what was supposed to be a fun, summer fling, never imagining that feelings would develop, that they would fall in love, something neither has ever done before. But suddenly, their idyllic time together is turned upside down.
So I knew about the synaesthesia and was intrigued to read about a condition I have never heard of. But as I said, I wasn’t prepared for the rest of it. At times, it was difficult to experience what Charles was going through. But what I loved about this book was Charles and Florian together. And the beautiful way the author described their colors together. And of course, it was sweet Florian, with so much already weighing him down, that fell in love with Charles who has such a complicated situation of his own. Fearne Hill told the story beautifully and respectfully. I even found myself googling salt farmers because I wanted some mental images of what Florian did. The next book will focus on Florian’s friend, Nico, but I will have to wait until I read the blurb to decide if I’m brave enough to continue the series.
April 14, 2024
✰ 3.25 stars ✰
“What colours do you see now, Charles?”
“I see us, my love. Only us. And we’re beautiful.”
Florian may be a 'salt-obsessed local lad or according to his Papi, the one who has his head in the clouds as usual. That boy is such a dreamer', but for thirty-nine-year-old venture capitalist Charles, who travelled all the way to beautiful Loix to escape the shadowy demons that tormented his soul, he may be the very person to help him in doing so.
Their relationship starts off on the kindest of notes, with the hint of curiosity into Florian's salt farming business that slowly leads into a tentative enjoyment of each other's company - a relaxing ease that resonates well with Charles. For there is an ever-present torturous pain that clings heavily to his heart and soul, making it difficult for him to live normally or even think straight, without feeling that tinge of sadness and overbearing sense of guilt that threatens to consume him. 😟 But, somehow, being around Florian - indulging in his attraction and fascination with him and his sexy French accent - helps him take pleasure in the smallest of things, explore a part of his sexuality buried deep, and maybe, hopefully even heal. He certainly does try. And Florian, bless his country boy at heart, once he learns about his past and pains, he does his best. 🫶🏻🫶🏻
“Thank you,” I whispered. And then choked. A painful sound I could hold back no longer. “For finding me.”
“Shh, mon chéri. You were missing. Of course I would find you.”
Despite their ten year age difference, Florian can't help but want him as he is. Florian had such a breath of fresh air to him that could have rivaled the fresh air the island welcomed the tourists with. His friends were such a treat and despite how much they teased him of his obvious attraction to this sexy stud, they were so very supportive and understanding of how deeply he felt for him. 🥲🫂 I loved how he was so warm and welcoming, and even cautiously flirty with Charles, softly speaking French endearments into his heart, indulging in his romantic side that tentatively came out, knowing that he shouldn't push him too far or too suddenly into something he wasn't prepared for. 🥹🥹
And most of all, this fiercely protective side of him - one that even in the briefest of time that had been spent with Charles - he wanted to banish all the fears that consumed Charles. 'The shadows—the creatures—they don’t know our colours. It was our special secret.' And yet, there was also this simple yet playful charm to him that put Charles at ease and a natural fluidity to him that I really liked. 🥰 It was enriched even further with his very gentle nurturing side to him that shows in how affectionately he cares for his ailing Papi - his grandfather, who serves as one of the links between their relationship. 😥
From hesitant acquaintances to gradual friends to finally following on the headiness of desire that stemmed forth from both of them. It always seems odd to me how suddenly attraction can build up, but I guess, when you truly want someone - you just know in your heart when it feels right.
“I love you, I mouthed against the narrow column of his neck. I wanted a chance to love you even more.”
But, even with the blossoming of their summer fling and the uncertainty of what their future looked like, there is still the prevalent heaviness to Charles' mental health and well-being that plays a pivotal role in their relationship. There is such an overwhelming amount of sadness and loneliness that Charles still has that it hurts to see how viscerally the author channelled it forth. Grief affects everyone differently - there is no right or wrong way to it - nor is there any ever cause to feel guilty about it. What matters is knowing that if you are hurting and in pain - you shouldn't have to face it alone. 😔 'Its okay to not be okay sometimes.' Somehow, by burying himself in work, by trying to forget the grief that had shattered his heart, Charles had forgotten that; and somehow, Florian's love for him - helped him realize that. Even in the darkest of hours, in the toughest of moments, in the most precarious moments that could have been a matter of life and death, Charles remembered that. 🧡🧡
For the author shows that you really have to go to the depths of darkness and despair to finally see the light again. That it takes heartbreak and loneliness, but healing and forgiveness for the two of them to find their way back to each other. 'That’s how love works, Flor. Look at Jerome. It finds you when you’re least expecting it, with the person you’re least expecting.' 🥺 For all the mistakes made that they hurt each other in the process, I never once doubted that a love like theirs - built upon a reaffirming of believing that one is capable of love - that someone who can affect someone so deeply and change their heart and mind the way they did together - then, it makes all the hurt and sadness leading up to it - all the more promising of a future that will forever be theirs to have and to hold. ❤️🩹❤️🩹
And despite the heaviness of the story, there is such a warmth to it - a radiant vibrancy of love that bursts to color in how effectively the author included synesthesia to their story.
“Tell me which colours you’re feeling, Charles.”
The truth spilled from me. “Every colour of the rainbow.”
“Ssshh,” he soothed. “Come to bed, Charles. Let me take you to bed and love you and kiss you and stroke you. Let me love the colours out of you.
Until there’s only us. Until only silver and green remain.”
Synesthesia is so rarely explored by authors in their works, that whenever it is, I am cautiously curious as to how the authors will depict it. And I wasn't disappointed in how it was applied here; colors played such a vital part of the story, as well as Charles' history. There was such a lushness to the vivid imagery that the author sprung to life with the sensory details; she fully committed to not only making the burst of colors explode through Charles' eyes, but made them come alive in my eyes, too. 👍🏻 👍🏻 The way Charles felt the weight of Florian's feelings and compassion and heart with how the gentleness of his silver soothed his soul - a calming balm to the ache that wounded him so deeply - 'Christ, his voice mesmerised me.' It is such a fascinating concept that when authors choose to give it to their characters, I want it explored in kind - I want it touched upon and not just be there. So, I was grateful that I was not disappointed in that aspect. 🙏🏻
I also appreciated with such richness that she described the island lifestyle and its people that it truly made me feel the island love; as someone who has never left her homeland of Pakistan, there is nothing I wanted to do more than to immediately head over to this small coastal French island and indulge myself in the tranquility this beautiful place has to offer. 😎 And even though we have our own salt range in Pakistan that is actually derived from rocks, it was an enlightening experience to learn about salt farming with the same amount of passion and zeal Florian had for it. Like a shy lover, it only comes out to play in the evenings. My harvest is at the mercy of every individual cloud, every single ray of sunlight.' 🌞💛 I admired Florian's determination to preserve his legacy - his heritage - his hard work that belonged to their island. Despite all the teasing he had to endure, his mettle paid off in style.
“His lips were close to my ear and my green hummed with pleasure at his rich silvery tone, “And again. Et voila. We have the coarse salt.
Fool’s gold.”
Perhaps it was not as enjoyable as the previous books of Fearne Hill's that I have enjoyed because of how much of the story centered on heavy topics that allowed the angst and depressive thoughts to overtake the lighter and more pleasant feel to their relationship. It was still an emotional journey, one tinged with heartbreak and loss, which ultimately was a heartwarming victory for all. There is much to appreciate at Charles' personal growth in overcoming his demons, as well as the beauty of Florian's own personal struggles at achieving a more steady footing for himself. 'As his whispered words ghosted across my cheek, the bare blank canvas rippled, as if his breath blew life into it.' 💚🥺🤍 To see their unity blossom into a kaleidoscope of colors of their own making - for them to share in a happiness that was hard-earned and worth the fight, made giving Salt a chance all the more worth my while. And with how much Florian's friends amused me with their comments and antics, I am still very much looking forward and intrigued to what Nico's story will be like when we return to this idyllic island in the summer. 🦪 ☀️
“What colours do you see now, Charles?”
“I see us, my love. Only us. And we’re beautiful.”
Florian may be a 'salt-obsessed local lad or according to his Papi, the one who has his head in the clouds as usual. That boy is such a dreamer', but for thirty-nine-year-old venture capitalist Charles, who travelled all the way to beautiful Loix to escape the shadowy demons that tormented his soul, he may be the very person to help him in doing so.
Their relationship starts off on the kindest of notes, with the hint of curiosity into Florian's salt farming business that slowly leads into a tentative enjoyment of each other's company - a relaxing ease that resonates well with Charles. For there is an ever-present torturous pain that clings heavily to his heart and soul, making it difficult for him to live normally or even think straight, without feeling that tinge of sadness and overbearing sense of guilt that threatens to consume him. 😟 But, somehow, being around Florian - indulging in his attraction and fascination with him and his sexy French accent - helps him take pleasure in the smallest of things, explore a part of his sexuality buried deep, and maybe, hopefully even heal. He certainly does try. And Florian, bless his country boy at heart, once he learns about his past and pains, he does his best. 🫶🏻🫶🏻
“Thank you,” I whispered. And then choked. A painful sound I could hold back no longer. “For finding me.”
“Shh, mon chéri. You were missing. Of course I would find you.”
Despite their ten year age difference, Florian can't help but want him as he is. Florian had such a breath of fresh air to him that could have rivaled the fresh air the island welcomed the tourists with. His friends were such a treat and despite how much they teased him of his obvious attraction to this sexy stud, they were so very supportive and understanding of how deeply he felt for him. 🥲🫂 I loved how he was so warm and welcoming, and even cautiously flirty with Charles, softly speaking French endearments into his heart, indulging in his romantic side that tentatively came out, knowing that he shouldn't push him too far or too suddenly into something he wasn't prepared for. 🥹🥹
And most of all, this fiercely protective side of him - one that even in the briefest of time that had been spent with Charles - he wanted to banish all the fears that consumed Charles. 'The shadows—the creatures—they don’t know our colours. It was our special secret.' And yet, there was also this simple yet playful charm to him that put Charles at ease and a natural fluidity to him that I really liked. 🥰 It was enriched even further with his very gentle nurturing side to him that shows in how affectionately he cares for his ailing Papi - his grandfather, who serves as one of the links between their relationship. 😥
From hesitant acquaintances to gradual friends to finally following on the headiness of desire that stemmed forth from both of them. It always seems odd to me how suddenly attraction can build up, but I guess, when you truly want someone - you just know in your heart when it feels right.
“I love you, I mouthed against the narrow column of his neck. I wanted a chance to love you even more.”
But, even with the blossoming of their summer fling and the uncertainty of what their future looked like, there is still the prevalent heaviness to Charles' mental health and well-being that plays a pivotal role in their relationship. There is such an overwhelming amount of sadness and loneliness that Charles still has that it hurts to see how viscerally the author channelled it forth. Grief affects everyone differently - there is no right or wrong way to it - nor is there any ever cause to feel guilty about it. What matters is knowing that if you are hurting and in pain - you shouldn't have to face it alone. 😔 'Its okay to not be okay sometimes.' Somehow, by burying himself in work, by trying to forget the grief that had shattered his heart, Charles had forgotten that; and somehow, Florian's love for him - helped him realize that. Even in the darkest of hours, in the toughest of moments, in the most precarious moments that could have been a matter of life and death, Charles remembered that. 🧡🧡
For the author shows that you really have to go to the depths of darkness and despair to finally see the light again. That it takes heartbreak and loneliness, but healing and forgiveness for the two of them to find their way back to each other. 'That’s how love works, Flor. Look at Jerome. It finds you when you’re least expecting it, with the person you’re least expecting.' 🥺 For all the mistakes made that they hurt each other in the process, I never once doubted that a love like theirs - built upon a reaffirming of believing that one is capable of love - that someone who can affect someone so deeply and change their heart and mind the way they did together - then, it makes all the hurt and sadness leading up to it - all the more promising of a future that will forever be theirs to have and to hold. ❤️🩹❤️🩹
And despite the heaviness of the story, there is such a warmth to it - a radiant vibrancy of love that bursts to color in how effectively the author included synesthesia to their story.
“Tell me which colours you’re feeling, Charles.”
The truth spilled from me. “Every colour of the rainbow.”
“Ssshh,” he soothed. “Come to bed, Charles. Let me take you to bed and love you and kiss you and stroke you. Let me love the colours out of you.
Until there’s only us. Until only silver and green remain.”
Synesthesia is so rarely explored by authors in their works, that whenever it is, I am cautiously curious as to how the authors will depict it. And I wasn't disappointed in how it was applied here; colors played such a vital part of the story, as well as Charles' history. There was such a lushness to the vivid imagery that the author sprung to life with the sensory details; she fully committed to not only making the burst of colors explode through Charles' eyes, but made them come alive in my eyes, too. 👍🏻 👍🏻 The way Charles felt the weight of Florian's feelings and compassion and heart with how the gentleness of his silver soothed his soul - a calming balm to the ache that wounded him so deeply - 'Christ, his voice mesmerised me.' It is such a fascinating concept that when authors choose to give it to their characters, I want it explored in kind - I want it touched upon and not just be there. So, I was grateful that I was not disappointed in that aspect. 🙏🏻
I also appreciated with such richness that she described the island lifestyle and its people that it truly made me feel the island love; as someone who has never left her homeland of Pakistan, there is nothing I wanted to do more than to immediately head over to this small coastal French island and indulge myself in the tranquility this beautiful place has to offer. 😎 And even though we have our own salt range in Pakistan that is actually derived from rocks, it was an enlightening experience to learn about salt farming with the same amount of passion and zeal Florian had for it. Like a shy lover, it only comes out to play in the evenings. My harvest is at the mercy of every individual cloud, every single ray of sunlight.' 🌞💛 I admired Florian's determination to preserve his legacy - his heritage - his hard work that belonged to their island. Despite all the teasing he had to endure, his mettle paid off in style.
“His lips were close to my ear and my green hummed with pleasure at his rich silvery tone, “And again. Et voila. We have the coarse salt.
Fool’s gold.”
Perhaps it was not as enjoyable as the previous books of Fearne Hill's that I have enjoyed because of how much of the story centered on heavy topics that allowed the angst and depressive thoughts to overtake the lighter and more pleasant feel to their relationship. It was still an emotional journey, one tinged with heartbreak and loss, which ultimately was a heartwarming victory for all. There is much to appreciate at Charles' personal growth in overcoming his demons, as well as the beauty of Florian's own personal struggles at achieving a more steady footing for himself. 'As his whispered words ghosted across my cheek, the bare blank canvas rippled, as if his breath blew life into it.' 💚🥺🤍 To see their unity blossom into a kaleidoscope of colors of their own making - for them to share in a happiness that was hard-earned and worth the fight, made giving Salt a chance all the more worth my while. And with how much Florian's friends amused me with their comments and antics, I am still very much looking forward and intrigued to what Nico's story will be like when we return to this idyllic island in the summer. 🦪 ☀️
April 12, 2024
Fearne Hill is a wonderful writer. Her novels are always deeply rooted in a time and place, and Salt - set in Loix, a small village on a French island - is no different.
Sadly, the story just didn't hold my interest. Not even halfway through, I started skimming because the relationship between Florian, a local who harvests salt, and Charles, a British venture capitalist who's on holiday recuperating from a nervous breakdown, felt heavy and tedious.
I was more interested in the gentle relationship Florian had with his grandfather, who is slowly sinking into dementia.
Charles struggles with deep depression and suicidal ideation. Like his mother, Charles has synesthesia; he associates colors with people and emotions. But colors do not bring him happiness. They are a burden he carries.
Florian is joyful and free; he charms everyone he meets. He falls for Charles almost immediately, but why?
Try as I might, I couldn't feel the connection, and it's nay impossible to get into a book when you're not rooting for the MCs.
The epilogue offers some reassurance. I'm just hoping the next book in the series isn't so glum.
Sadly, the story just didn't hold my interest. Not even halfway through, I started skimming because the relationship between Florian, a local who harvests salt, and Charles, a British venture capitalist who's on holiday recuperating from a nervous breakdown, felt heavy and tedious.
I was more interested in the gentle relationship Florian had with his grandfather, who is slowly sinking into dementia.
Charles struggles with deep depression and suicidal ideation. Like his mother, Charles has synesthesia; he associates colors with people and emotions. But colors do not bring him happiness. They are a burden he carries.
Florian is joyful and free; he charms everyone he meets. He falls for Charles almost immediately, but why?
Try as I might, I couldn't feel the connection, and it's nay impossible to get into a book when you're not rooting for the MCs.
The epilogue offers some reassurance. I'm just hoping the next book in the series isn't so glum.
September 1, 2024
I would like to thank GRR for the opportunity to read and review this ARC.
This was a very sweet story that dealt with some serious subject matter, but unfortunately something about this narrative remained inaccessible to me and I just could not connect to the characters. I found that the writing style at times was quite pretty, but then there were times when the cadence felt short and clipped. I was definitely sensitive to some sort of dissonance in the narrative, which then contributed to my feeling apart from this story.😔
I liked Florian and Papi, and I was fascinated with salt farming! It's just such a unique profession and I really appreciated this refreshing change of scenery in M/M romance. And though not very hard to do lol, I thought Hill conveyed the dichotomy between the venture capitalists and the slow village life in Loix really well! I had a lot of anxiety for poor Charles, but really feeling his and Florian's love story eluded me.😢
As an aside, I wasn't fond of the slurs and the name calling. I understand that the vibe was there for a reason, but it landed weird. For a narrative that had so many challenging elements going on, I just wanted a bit of space to breathe and not feel morally indignant on behalf of the MCs. I found that energy unnecessary and immature, if I'm being honest. And I'm not even going to comment on the last 20% other than to say, for a 3rd act bust up in a story featuring a serious mental health condition, it made me furious that Charles was the one apologizing for shit, and I'll just leave it at that! I'm still mad as all hell on his behalf, and I'm not even IN this story like I wanted to be, so I think that means something.😤
The epilogue was really sweet though, and I'm very happy that Charles and Florian and Papi got their HEAs. So while I did enjoy some aspects of this sweet romance, I think that I'm still searching for a knockout win by Fearne Hill. And for sure the Loix village hotties will continue this series, with Nico up next, and his story seems like it will be an interesting one! That'll feature oyster farming and ngl this is intriguing to me. So even though this was a light, average read for me, the unique professions found in this small French village are calling to me, and I'll most likely continue to Book 2 simply for that!✌🏽
This was a very sweet story that dealt with some serious subject matter, but unfortunately something about this narrative remained inaccessible to me and I just could not connect to the characters. I found that the writing style at times was quite pretty, but then there were times when the cadence felt short and clipped. I was definitely sensitive to some sort of dissonance in the narrative, which then contributed to my feeling apart from this story.😔
I liked Florian and Papi, and I was fascinated with salt farming! It's just such a unique profession and I really appreciated this refreshing change of scenery in M/M romance. And though not very hard to do lol, I thought Hill conveyed the dichotomy between the venture capitalists and the slow village life in Loix really well! I had a lot of anxiety for poor Charles, but really feeling his and Florian's love story eluded me.😢
As an aside, I wasn't fond of the slurs and the name calling. I understand that the vibe was there for a reason, but it landed weird. For a narrative that had so many challenging elements going on, I just wanted a bit of space to breathe and not feel morally indignant on behalf of the MCs. I found that energy unnecessary and immature, if I'm being honest. And I'm not even going to comment on the last 20% other than to say, for a 3rd act bust up in a story featuring a serious mental health condition, it made me furious that Charles was the one apologizing for shit, and I'll just leave it at that! I'm still mad as all hell on his behalf, and I'm not even IN this story like I wanted to be, so I think that means something.😤
The epilogue was really sweet though, and I'm very happy that Charles and Florian and Papi got their HEAs. So while I did enjoy some aspects of this sweet romance, I think that I'm still searching for a knockout win by Fearne Hill. And for sure the Loix village hotties will continue this series, with Nico up next, and his story seems like it will be an interesting one! That'll feature oyster farming and ngl this is intriguing to me. So even though this was a light, average read for me, the unique professions found in this small French village are calling to me, and I'll most likely continue to Book 2 simply for that!✌🏽
April 10, 2024
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I wanted to capture the image and hold onto it forever, so on sad days and bad days, on dark dawn mornings when I wished the sun would never rise and the tides would never turn, I’d be able to picture Florian like this and feel his silver coursing through my veins.
Wow. My first Fearne Hill book, and yeah, wow. The writing is phenomenal. Absolutely beautiful. Consider me a fan. Grateful for the ARC.
This book was angsty, heartbreaking, had non-romanticized mental health representation, and created the most stunning visuals. It was like I was on the island with Charles and Florian, like I could walk around the little town and visit the shops and smell the sea. It was really special.
I’m still not actually sure I *like* Florian, but he is without a doubt a great character. Both MCs are flawed in lots of ways, but they’re also loving and caring. Florian is just a very different kind of character from my usuals. I do love that you can feel the difference in the characters’ cultures as well.
I stilled his hand with mine. “Good things come to boys who wait.” His sea-green eyes lit with mischief. “And in them.”
I was expecting it in some ways, but how everything went down was way heavier and angstier than I anticipated. I skimmed ahead to see how it would all pan out before I continued reading. I’m not sure I could’ve stopped. I very highly recommend this book.
⬇️ Blanket spoiler warning ⬇️
⚠️ Tropes & tags ⚠️
Mental health rep
Synaesthesia
Age gap
Hurt/comfort
Slow burn
French setting
French/british MCs
⚠️ Content warning ⚠️
Explicit sexual content
Psychotic episode (on page)
Grief
Past loss of a parent (suicide, off page)
Homophobia
MC being admitted to psychiatric hospital (past and present)
Suicidal thoughts and ideation
Past electroconvulsive therapy
Family member with (assumed) dementia
⚠️Book safety ⚠️
Cheating: No
Other person drama: Florian is a flirty person, but no drama
Breakup: Yes, a few months apart
POV: 1st person, dual
Genre: Contemporary romance
Pairing: M/M
Strict roles or versatile: Strict roles
Main characters’ age: 39 and late twenties
Series: Interconnected standalone
Kindle Unlimited: Yes
Pages: 271
Any moment now, he was going to conclude I was several sandwiches short of a picnic. This conversation was only a hop, skip, and a jump away from ‘I see dead people’.
Guilt that I’d chosen pleasure over misery clawed at my mind and I pushed it aside.
Florian hadn’t bothered dressing, which was thoughtful of him.
My delicate Charles, with his fragile mind and tender kisses. With his silvers and greens and yes, I was here for all the scary fucking oranges and reds too. And the clinging, soul-sucking dark shadows. I wanted to feel everything with him. The love of course, and the fun sexy times. Putain, I wanted plenty of those. But I wanted the pain, too. The days when his skies clouded over, and his oceans turned grey and choppy. When his canvases were filled with ugly jagged lines or ripped to shreds before the paint had even dried. When he needed someone to hold him in their arms ready to catch his fall.
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I wanted to capture the image and hold onto it forever, so on sad days and bad days, on dark dawn mornings when I wished the sun would never rise and the tides would never turn, I’d be able to picture Florian like this and feel his silver coursing through my veins.
Wow. My first Fearne Hill book, and yeah, wow. The writing is phenomenal. Absolutely beautiful. Consider me a fan. Grateful for the ARC.
This book was angsty, heartbreaking, had non-romanticized mental health representation, and created the most stunning visuals. It was like I was on the island with Charles and Florian, like I could walk around the little town and visit the shops and smell the sea. It was really special.
I’m still not actually sure I *like* Florian, but he is without a doubt a great character. Both MCs are flawed in lots of ways, but they’re also loving and caring. Florian is just a very different kind of character from my usuals. I do love that you can feel the difference in the characters’ cultures as well.
I stilled his hand with mine. “Good things come to boys who wait.” His sea-green eyes lit with mischief. “And in them.”
I was expecting it in some ways, but how everything went down was way heavier and angstier than I anticipated. I skimmed ahead to see how it would all pan out before I continued reading. I’m not sure I could’ve stopped. I very highly recommend this book.
⬇️ Blanket spoiler warning ⬇️
⚠️ Tropes & tags ⚠️
Mental health rep
Synaesthesia
Age gap
Hurt/comfort
Slow burn
French setting
French/british MCs
⚠️ Content warning ⚠️
Explicit sexual content
Psychotic episode (on page)
Grief
Past loss of a parent (suicide, off page)
Homophobia
MC being admitted to psychiatric hospital (past and present)
Suicidal thoughts and ideation
Past electroconvulsive therapy
Family member with (assumed) dementia
⚠️Book safety ⚠️
Cheating: No
Other person drama: Florian is a flirty person, but no drama
Breakup: Yes, a few months apart
POV: 1st person, dual
Genre: Contemporary romance
Pairing: M/M
Strict roles or versatile: Strict roles
Main characters’ age: 39 and late twenties
Series: Interconnected standalone
Kindle Unlimited: Yes
Pages: 271
Any moment now, he was going to conclude I was several sandwiches short of a picnic. This conversation was only a hop, skip, and a jump away from ‘I see dead people’.
Guilt that I’d chosen pleasure over misery clawed at my mind and I pushed it aside.
Florian hadn’t bothered dressing, which was thoughtful of him.
My delicate Charles, with his fragile mind and tender kisses. With his silvers and greens and yes, I was here for all the scary fucking oranges and reds too. And the clinging, soul-sucking dark shadows. I wanted to feel everything with him. The love of course, and the fun sexy times. Putain, I wanted plenty of those. But I wanted the pain, too. The days when his skies clouded over, and his oceans turned grey and choppy. When his canvases were filled with ugly jagged lines or ripped to shreds before the paint had even dried. When he needed someone to hold him in their arms ready to catch his fall.
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July 30, 2024
I really enjoy all of Fearne Hill's books, and Salt was no different. But you have to be in the mood for a more emotional, heavier read.
I think that the author handled the difficult topic of mental illness and depression very well. It was hard, as a reader, to feel when Charles went off the rails, and I think Fearne really brought us into his mental state. I felt the stress, the loneliness, and the desperation of Charles, and I thought Florian's connection to him was quite beautiful. Florian was also pretty great, and the deep love he has for his grandfather and friends shines through. The side plot with his ailing grandfather was also very compelling, and I found myself getting emotional at times while reading.
The book was for sure a moodier read, and I don't know if the romance quite balanced the heavier side of the book, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. I wanted to be in France, tasting the different salts and watching shirtless men rake it in the Mediterranean sun.
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I think that the author handled the difficult topic of mental illness and depression very well. It was hard, as a reader, to feel when Charles went off the rails, and I think Fearne really brought us into his mental state. I felt the stress, the loneliness, and the desperation of Charles, and I thought Florian's connection to him was quite beautiful. Florian was also pretty great, and the deep love he has for his grandfather and friends shines through. The side plot with his ailing grandfather was also very compelling, and I found myself getting emotional at times while reading.
The book was for sure a moodier read, and I don't know if the romance quite balanced the heavier side of the book, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. I wanted to be in France, tasting the different salts and watching shirtless men rake it in the Mediterranean sun.
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April 13, 2024
What a freaking gorgeous book. I'm seriously in awe. Fearne Hill is one of the best MM contemporary romance authors out there, and I've loved many of her books before, and "Salt" is absolutely no exception. I loved it so damned much.
This book is magical: it sucked me right inside its pages from the very first paragraph, and I'm pretty sure it will stay with me for the next few months, at least. This one isn't an easy romance: it's magical for sure, and sweet and lovely and heartfelt and dreamy, but it's also dark and tough and angsty and gut-wrenching. Hill is one of the few authors out there who excels at balancing out the lighthearted with the angst, the steam with the emotional, the sweetness with the "oh god I'm about to start sobbing out loud". And she also excels at backing all of this up with wonderfully real, relatable protagonists and absolutely believable, tangible, unforgettable character and relationship arcs. I seriously felt like I was there with Charles, battling his demons, his colours and his soul-wrenching grief, and with Florian, facing his own demons, an aging grandfather and struggling business; I was with them through the thick and thin, and I can't say how happy, and how satisfied, their story made me feel.
Charles is one of the most fascinating protagonists I've read about in quite a while: he's full of contradictions, and even more real because of it. He's a business shark and genius; he's an artist; he's funny and sincere and gentle; he's also grief-stricken and suicidal, so fragile you just want to jump into the book and hug him to bits and protect him from the whole world (and his landmine of a mind). Needless to say I loved him; I felt what he was going through at a deep personal level, and I related to him so damned much.
I think I've said this a dozen times in my reviews before, but the romance genre NEEDS more mental health rep. And it needs authors like Fearne Hill, ones who manage to tackle deep, important topics without cheapening them, without disrespecting them, and without losing a touch of lightheartedness and sweetness.
Florian was as unforgettable as Charles, and as real. He's a flirt, open-hearted and gentle and charming, but he also isn't afraid of showing his vulnerabilities and his insecurities.
I loved their relationship so damned much. Their romance made me want hurl myself from the nearest building, sob in a corner and squeal like a little girl, simultaneously. I laughed and swooned and cried alongside them, and their hard-won HEA was the most satisfying, perfect HEA you could wish for.
The setting was absolutely magical, so vividly depicted; it made me want to move to French, salt-harvesting island myself. The side characters, from Jerome to the mysterious (and seriously hot) Nico, from Papi to all the colourful, hard-working people of the island.
And the writing! God, like I said, Fearne Hill is one of a kind, and I can't believe I still haven't devoured all of her backlist.
I'm sooooooooo excited for the next book. I'm sure it will be as unforgettable as this one; I'm also seriously hoping it will have some mental health rep too. Nico's such a fascinating character, and I can't wait to get to know him properly and to finally meet his love interest.
TWs/CWs: suicide (described), suicidal thoughts, mental health crisis, depression, death of a parent and of other family members (mentioned), grief, character with dementia.
Thank you GRR and the author for the ARC. This is my honest review.
This book is magical: it sucked me right inside its pages from the very first paragraph, and I'm pretty sure it will stay with me for the next few months, at least. This one isn't an easy romance: it's magical for sure, and sweet and lovely and heartfelt and dreamy, but it's also dark and tough and angsty and gut-wrenching. Hill is one of the few authors out there who excels at balancing out the lighthearted with the angst, the steam with the emotional, the sweetness with the "oh god I'm about to start sobbing out loud". And she also excels at backing all of this up with wonderfully real, relatable protagonists and absolutely believable, tangible, unforgettable character and relationship arcs. I seriously felt like I was there with Charles, battling his demons, his colours and his soul-wrenching grief, and with Florian, facing his own demons, an aging grandfather and struggling business; I was with them through the thick and thin, and I can't say how happy, and how satisfied, their story made me feel.
Charles is one of the most fascinating protagonists I've read about in quite a while: he's full of contradictions, and even more real because of it. He's a business shark and genius; he's an artist; he's funny and sincere and gentle; he's also grief-stricken and suicidal, so fragile you just want to jump into the book and hug him to bits and protect him from the whole world (and his landmine of a mind). Needless to say I loved him; I felt what he was going through at a deep personal level, and I related to him so damned much.
I think I've said this a dozen times in my reviews before, but the romance genre NEEDS more mental health rep. And it needs authors like Fearne Hill, ones who manage to tackle deep, important topics without cheapening them, without disrespecting them, and without losing a touch of lightheartedness and sweetness.
Florian was as unforgettable as Charles, and as real. He's a flirt, open-hearted and gentle and charming, but he also isn't afraid of showing his vulnerabilities and his insecurities.
I loved their relationship so damned much. Their romance made me want hurl myself from the nearest building, sob in a corner and squeal like a little girl, simultaneously. I laughed and swooned and cried alongside them, and their hard-won HEA was the most satisfying, perfect HEA you could wish for.
The setting was absolutely magical, so vividly depicted; it made me want to move to French, salt-harvesting island myself. The side characters, from Jerome to the mysterious (and seriously hot) Nico, from Papi to all the colourful, hard-working people of the island.
And the writing! God, like I said, Fearne Hill is one of a kind, and I can't believe I still haven't devoured all of her backlist.
I'm sooooooooo excited for the next book. I'm sure it will be as unforgettable as this one; I'm also seriously hoping it will have some mental health rep too. Nico's such a fascinating character, and I can't wait to get to know him properly and to finally meet his love interest.
TWs/CWs: suicide (described), suicidal thoughts, mental health crisis, depression, death of a parent and of other family members (mentioned), grief, character with dementia.
Thank you GRR and the author for the ARC. This is my honest review.
February 5, 2025
This is my second time reading this book, 8mnths after the first attempt, and sadly I didn’t enjoy it much more the second time. I really wanted to love this but the characters felt too mismatched and the writing felt like it swamped my brain in a kind of overwritten, tedious way.
Highlights - the salt harvesting job is original. Florian and his relationship with his Papi developing dementia is sweet but sad. Florian does sound very physically attractive.
Lowlights - the mix of flowery but also gloomy writing feels heavy to read. I found myself glazing over all the time and not taking it in, skimming. Poor Charles has a significant mental illness with no family support. Florian is over a decade younger and has a lot going on with his Papi, his business and he used to be the flirty player type. I don’t really feel their connection and can’t help worrying that it’s going to be tough long road for Florian.
I also find it jarring that the characters are speaking French the whole time to each other, I believe Florian says he doesn’t have much English and Charles is fluent in French, they mention Charles’ accent a lot, but most of the dialogue is English with random French words interspersed. Same with Florian’s inner monologue, it’s all in English with random French bits. Obviously the book needs to be in English for us to read it but the way the French words were integrated felt unnatural.
”The gorgeous laugh floated after me up the stairs. Mon dieu, how much I still wanted him. My delicate Charles, with his fragile mind and tender kisses. With his silvers and greens and yes, I was here for all the scary fucking oranges and reds too. And the clinging, soul-sucking dark shadows. I wanted to feel everything with him. The love of course, and the fun sexy times. Putain, I wanted plenty of those. But I wanted the pain, too. The days when his skies clouded over, and his oceans turned grey and choppy. When his canvases were filled with ugly jagged lines or ripped to shreds before the paint had even dried. When he needed someone to hold him in their arms ready to catch his fall. I wanted to be there for all of that too. Oh, fucking merde, he hadn’t even needed to say hello when I opened the door. He had me the moment I heard that sweet sound filling my ordinary little kitchen.”
Highlights - the salt harvesting job is original. Florian and his relationship with his Papi developing dementia is sweet but sad. Florian does sound very physically attractive.
Lowlights - the mix of flowery but also gloomy writing feels heavy to read. I found myself glazing over all the time and not taking it in, skimming. Poor Charles has a significant mental illness with no family support. Florian is over a decade younger and has a lot going on with his Papi, his business and he used to be the flirty player type. I don’t really feel their connection and can’t help worrying that it’s going to be tough long road for Florian.
I also find it jarring that the characters are speaking French the whole time to each other, I believe Florian says he doesn’t have much English and Charles is fluent in French, they mention Charles’ accent a lot, but most of the dialogue is English with random French words interspersed. Same with Florian’s inner monologue, it’s all in English with random French bits. Obviously the book needs to be in English for us to read it but the way the French words were integrated felt unnatural.
”The gorgeous laugh floated after me up the stairs. Mon dieu, how much I still wanted him. My delicate Charles, with his fragile mind and tender kisses. With his silvers and greens and yes, I was here for all the scary fucking oranges and reds too. And the clinging, soul-sucking dark shadows. I wanted to feel everything with him. The love of course, and the fun sexy times. Putain, I wanted plenty of those. But I wanted the pain, too. The days when his skies clouded over, and his oceans turned grey and choppy. When his canvases were filled with ugly jagged lines or ripped to shreds before the paint had even dried. When he needed someone to hold him in their arms ready to catch his fall. I wanted to be there for all of that too. Oh, fucking merde, he hadn’t even needed to say hello when I opened the door. He had me the moment I heard that sweet sound filling my ordinary little kitchen.”
April 10, 2024
Florian stayed silent, just a gentle squeeze of his fingers at my waist told he understood. "It's okay to not be okay sometimes."
I know where I will be spending my summer this year: Île de Ré, a small island off the French coast where this story takes place. Unfortunately I won't be coming across Florian, because he's all made up by Fearne Hill, but the idyllic descriptions of this island tempt me to pick this destination for my summer holidays.
This book tells the beautiful, heartfelt story of Florian and Charles. Charles has come to the island to find some peace and quiet after his mother's passing and his declining mental health. He's rented a house and is mostly keeping to himself until he encounters Florian's lost grandfather, who is suffering from the early stages of dementia.
Despite their age difference, Florian and Charles immediately find a connection and attraction towards each other. They first become friends before anything else, Florian showing Charles about his profession as one of the last independent salt workers. It's clear Florian takes pride in what he does and owns!
Charles's mental health is fragile, though, and what he and Florian have is nothing more than a summer fling. Or is it?
When Charles's stressful job comes back in the form of his work partner (and former best friend) and he has to return to London, his mind is not in a right place yet, and once he is back to his old life, things go downhill very fast.
I really loved this new book by Fearne Hill. I love how she handles heavy topics. As she says herself, always with a light touch, and she does. Charles's mental health is very prominent in this story - it's threatening and disturbing. I loved how Florian wanted to be there for Charles, how he, despite his young age, tried to help him. But whatever he wanted to be or do, Charles's disturbing mind was too strong for them to fight. I wondered how he would ever heal enough for them to stand a chance, but this is a romance and so of course the happy ever after is there. It's one very hard fought for and very well deserved.
As always, Fearne's writing is with a light touch but still trigger warnings are in place because the subject of Charles's mental health is a heavy one, and as I mentioned before, very prominent.
Florian was such a delight, he was a beautiful character with a soft, loving and caring soul. I loved how his grandfather's mental state played an important role next to Charles's and how there were some similarities too.
This was a delightful read, one I truly enjoyed reading, despite the heaviness of it. Yes, it was heartbreaking at times, but knowing things were going to be okay made it more bearable.
I've reached a point where Fearne Hill can hardly do any wrong with her books. I have enjoyed every single one of them so far, and they always end up on my list of best books I read in a year. I don't think this year will be any different!
I kindly received an arc from gaybookpromotions and this is my own, unbiased and honest opinion
April 17, 2024
4.25 stars. Super interesting dive into rare mental health issues, heavy themes of loss, grief and mental illness, mind the TW. All of this heaviness woven into an interesting setting of French island life and sea salt harvesting. Well written, medium angst, mild spice. Was pleasantly surprised at the angle taken in the deal-making businessman and small time farmer trope. Really nice read.
HEA, m/m, France, sea salt, breakdown, business man, mental health, contemporary, small town, hurt/comfort, age gap.
HEA, m/m, France, sea salt, breakdown, business man, mental health, contemporary, small town, hurt/comfort, age gap.
April 12, 2024
Well, there goes one of my most expected releases this year and I think it’s this author’s weakest work after Cloud ten. Actually, I don’t even know if I liked this book so let’s just say I…didn’t dislike it? The thing I loved most about it was the bits about the salt harvesting because I had no idea such a thing existed. I always though the salt is extracted from mines, never thought about where the sea salt came from 🫣🤣 So yeah, that part -the landscape, the setting- was absolutely fascinating and I devoured it. Still, I don’t know if I’m grateful for the change of scenery (most of the books are set in US, Australia or as in this author’s case UK ) because, though beautiful, I missed one of the things that made this author special to me and that is the British witty dry humor. I missed “mate” and “bloody” and “twat” lol They were replaced by French “putain” or “merde” and to be honest I’m not a fan, and I’m sorry but “mon amour”, “mon dieu” or “mon cheri” sounds too …cheesy and …I don’t know, I might be too biased because I just don’t like French.
Let’s talk about the writing now. I always said that I loved this author’s more melancholic tone, more serious stories rather than the 24/7 silly banter but I swear I didn’t mean this whiny gloomy tone and writing that it was so flowery it gave off “trying too much” vibes. It wasn’t all bad though because this author can really write but the problem was that sometimes the writing got from beautiful to choppy and amateurish, like for instance the use of the MC’s name Florian. It was used 300 times in a book with less than 300 pages . Every conversation went on like this :
“What are you doing, Florian?
“I’m doing well, Charles.”
“You wanna come to my house, Florian?”
“Sure. Will you cook for me?”
“Yes, of course Florian. What would you like to eat, Florian?”
The author REALLY likes this guy’s name, I tell ya because she added it at the end of every freaking sentence.
As for the guys what can I say, I liked Florian a lot yet I don’t know what he saw in Charles, I swear. He was so bland and he had no personality outside of his illness. I didn’t feel their connection, they had sex 2 times and Florian, the island’s Don Juan and the perpetual bachelor was already head over heels for a man he barely knew and who had a VERY serious mental illness. The sex was hot, ok but that’s pretty much it, I couldn’t connect to Charles, his whiny tone and passiveness grated on me. The weight of the book was on Florian’s shoulders, and his relationship with his Papi was wonderful-I enjoyed their interactions so much.
I know the book tries, I do, it wants to be deep and to hurt but I couldn’t care less about Charles and I read the entire book with a straight face. I think Florian had enough on his plate with his grandpa and he would have been better off with someone his own age and without so much baggage. Especially since it didn’t feel to me like an epic love story. The side characters were meh although I felt a bit bad for that cop and I would definitely read his book.
And one last thing, I was very bothered by the name calling and slurs Florian received from the villagers. I don’t understand how in this day and age one could accept and resign himself to such treatment.
So yeah, the book is worth it for the setting, for the salt harvesting and for Florian and Papi but that’s about all there is.
Let’s talk about the writing now. I always said that I loved this author’s more melancholic tone, more serious stories rather than the 24/7 silly banter but I swear I didn’t mean this whiny gloomy tone and writing that it was so flowery it gave off “trying too much” vibes. It wasn’t all bad though because this author can really write but the problem was that sometimes the writing got from beautiful to choppy and amateurish, like for instance the use of the MC’s name Florian. It was used 300 times in a book with less than 300 pages . Every conversation went on like this :
“What are you doing, Florian?
“I’m doing well, Charles.”
“You wanna come to my house, Florian?”
“Sure. Will you cook for me?”
“Yes, of course Florian. What would you like to eat, Florian?”
The author REALLY likes this guy’s name, I tell ya because she added it at the end of every freaking sentence.
As for the guys what can I say, I liked Florian a lot yet I don’t know what he saw in Charles, I swear. He was so bland and he had no personality outside of his illness. I didn’t feel their connection, they had sex 2 times and Florian, the island’s Don Juan and the perpetual bachelor was already head over heels for a man he barely knew and who had a VERY serious mental illness. The sex was hot, ok but that’s pretty much it, I couldn’t connect to Charles, his whiny tone and passiveness grated on me. The weight of the book was on Florian’s shoulders, and his relationship with his Papi was wonderful-I enjoyed their interactions so much.
I know the book tries, I do, it wants to be deep and to hurt but I couldn’t care less about Charles and I read the entire book with a straight face. I think Florian had enough on his plate with his grandpa and he would have been better off with someone his own age and without so much baggage. Especially since it didn’t feel to me like an epic love story. The side characters were meh although I felt a bit bad for that cop and I would definitely read his book.
And one last thing, I was very bothered by the name calling and slurs Florian received from the villagers. I don’t understand how in this day and age one could accept and resign himself to such treatment.
So yeah, the book is worth it for the setting, for the salt harvesting and for Florian and Papi but that’s about all there is.
April 10, 2024
This isn’t the first time saying this but Fearne Hill writes just so beautifully.
She tackled a very heavy dark topic that hit me in the gut. Charles is really so fragile but he meets the best person that sees him for who he is and loves him hard in Florian.
Let’s start out with location. She describes it so perfectly and to then google images. Just beautiful. I mean who wouldn’t want to live there.
Charles mind is a scary place to be and Florian learns that first hand. But what he does with that is absolutely heartbreaking and a hero. I hurt for both of them through this book. I loved how Fearne portrayed Charles and the importance of getting help when needed and welcoming that help to fight for who he wants.
Florian is young and taking care of his grandpa and has a lot on his plate but I love for Charles doesn’t waiver and I think helps with his Papi too.
Fearne, thank you for this beautiful story. You are always a go to author for me and will stay that way. I can’t wait for the next one to see what Nico is up to or who. lol
She tackled a very heavy dark topic that hit me in the gut. Charles is really so fragile but he meets the best person that sees him for who he is and loves him hard in Florian.
Let’s start out with location. She describes it so perfectly and to then google images. Just beautiful. I mean who wouldn’t want to live there.
Charles mind is a scary place to be and Florian learns that first hand. But what he does with that is absolutely heartbreaking and a hero. I hurt for both of them through this book. I loved how Fearne portrayed Charles and the importance of getting help when needed and welcoming that help to fight for who he wants.
Florian is young and taking care of his grandpa and has a lot on his plate but I love for Charles doesn’t waiver and I think helps with his Papi too.
Fearne, thank you for this beautiful story. You are always a go to author for me and will stay that way. I can’t wait for the next one to see what Nico is up to or who. lol
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December 7, 2024Convincing description of paranoid psychosis which dominated the book. Secondary plot concerned co-operative farming—interesting, but ultimately air-brushed into a profitable ending.
Less convincing is the central romance: it's really not clear why the younger more energetic French salt farmer should fall for the disturbed venture capitalist. I mean, I'm told he does, but I can't feel it.
Less convincing is the central romance: it's really not clear why the younger more energetic French salt farmer should fall for the disturbed venture capitalist. I mean, I'm told he does, but I can't feel it.
May 23, 2025
Beautiful story…the setting and Flor’s work were so beautifully described, I could see it all. The thing I loved most throughout was the gentle pacing. It’s completely appropriate for this story. There were a couple times it was a bit wordy but overall, I didn’t want to put it down. Charles was interesting with his color visions and Flor was the sweetest source of love and strength for him.
October 9, 2024
This is a gloomy depressing story, at least for me. I struggled to take care of my dementia/Alzheimer parent a few years back, it was depressing. I have no idea why Florian is still sane and took another one under his wings, psychosis paranoia no less. Florian must be an angel.
The romance between Florian and Charles is nice and sweet. I get that Florian has 'type', a weird kind of type. But someone has to love Charles for what he is, right? I'll probably run to the hill after seeing what happened to Charles in the UK. But I guess Florian is much stronger than me. Again, why?
I enjoyed the story, especially how sweet Florian's relationship with Papi.
Kinda afraid facing the next installments, but I need to know about Nico.
(ARC received from GRR for an honest review)
The romance between Florian and Charles is nice and sweet. I get that Florian has 'type', a weird kind of type. But someone has to love Charles for what he is, right? I'll probably run to the hill after seeing what happened to Charles in the UK. But I guess Florian is much stronger than me. Again, why?
I enjoyed the story, especially how sweet Florian's relationship with Papi.
Kinda afraid facing the next installments, but I need to know about Nico.
(ARC received from GRR for an honest review)
April 14, 2024
What can I say about this book? Maybe I should start with not being able to rate it. After some pondering, I've decided on 4 stars, but it's really rounded up from 3,25.
In "Salt," we meet Florian, a beautiful young salt-harvester who probably was a saint in his previous life, and Charles, an older man with a long list of mental health issues. Their meeting was an accidental one, but it sparkled something in both of them. With each meeting, they became closer and closer, finally giving it to their mutual attraction.
I've fallen in love with the beginning of the story, although the prologue had me squinting my eyes a bit because I had a problem understanding the sentences. Maybe it was done on purpose to better represent Charles' mind? However, it sounded a bit like a fairy tale. A small town with friendly locals, an ode to slow life and the beauty of nature. Something that lots of people are looking for, and thanks to this search, various different problems emerge. What the author captured perfectly.
I greatly enjoyed reading about Florian and Charles encounters, their conversations, and their intimate moments. But somehow, everything went a bit too fast, especially with Charles' illness. And when THE moment happened, I was confused with Florian and his behavior. Maybe it's because the author didn't build their relationship enough? He was all a doting lover one moment, and next, cutting all ties. Also, those paintings were a bit—well, a lot—over the top. And everything that happened after was too rushed.
Overall, I don't regret having read this book, despite the flaws I have mentioned. And I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews in exchange for my honest opinion.
In "Salt," we meet Florian, a beautiful young salt-harvester who probably was a saint in his previous life, and Charles, an older man with a long list of mental health issues. Their meeting was an accidental one, but it sparkled something in both of them. With each meeting, they became closer and closer, finally giving it to their mutual attraction.
I've fallen in love with the beginning of the story, although the prologue had me squinting my eyes a bit because I had a problem understanding the sentences. Maybe it was done on purpose to better represent Charles' mind? However, it sounded a bit like a fairy tale. A small town with friendly locals, an ode to slow life and the beauty of nature. Something that lots of people are looking for, and thanks to this search, various different problems emerge. What the author captured perfectly.
I greatly enjoyed reading about Florian and Charles encounters, their conversations, and their intimate moments. But somehow, everything went a bit too fast, especially with Charles' illness. And when THE moment happened, I was confused with Florian and his behavior. Maybe it's because the author didn't build their relationship enough? He was all a doting lover one moment, and next, cutting all ties. Also, those paintings were a bit—well, a lot—over the top. And everything that happened after was too rushed.
Overall, I don't regret having read this book, despite the flaws I have mentioned. And I'm looking forward to reading the next part.
I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews in exchange for my honest opinion.
August 17, 2024
Urgh!!! Plodding, boring, and to be honest, the mixing of the odd French word in English sentences was ANNOYING!
But the descriptions of the Île de Ré and its Salt flats were lovely!
But the descriptions of the Île de Ré and its Salt flats were lovely!
March 26, 2024
“I see us, my love. Only us. And we’re beautiful.”
Alright, it’s now an established fact, I love everything Fearne Hill writes. This story was absolutely stunning in its telling of Florian and Charles’s path to falling in love and fighting for their HEA. The language is absolutely sublime, it’s beautifully immersive and gripping. It’s swoony and romantic and the fire between the two builds gently until it’s a massive spontaneous combustion of chemistry and lust between the two protagonists. The tone shifts seamlessly from idyllic to anxious to melancholic and then threaded though with effervescent joy. I could not put this book down and I highly recommend giving it a go but since there are a few content warnings please do check those out first if you like
Expect:
* Opposites attract
* Sexual awakening
* Mental health rep
* Slow burn
* Hurt comfort
* Age gap
* Found Family
Alright, it’s now an established fact, I love everything Fearne Hill writes. This story was absolutely stunning in its telling of Florian and Charles’s path to falling in love and fighting for their HEA. The language is absolutely sublime, it’s beautifully immersive and gripping. It’s swoony and romantic and the fire between the two builds gently until it’s a massive spontaneous combustion of chemistry and lust between the two protagonists. The tone shifts seamlessly from idyllic to anxious to melancholic and then threaded though with effervescent joy. I could not put this book down and I highly recommend giving it a go but since there are a few content warnings please do check those out first if you like
Expect:
* Opposites attract
* Sexual awakening
* Mental health rep
* Slow burn
* Hurt comfort
* Age gap
* Found Family
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May 1, 2024
Rating:
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
“What colours do you see now, Charles?” As his whispered words ghosted across my cheek, the bare blank canvas rippled, as if his breath blew life into it. Bit by bit, like a shy new dawn peeking over the horizon, a lush emerald-green, hung with hundreds and thousands of brilliant silvery stars unfurled. Until none of the white was left. “I see us, my love. Only us. And we’re beautiful.” wow...just wow 🤩
Well, Fearne Hill you have got yourself a new fan. This is one of the most unique and one of the most beautifully written books I've read this year.
At its core it's a very simple story that revolves around Charles, a broken man with debilitating mental health and Florian, a flirty, charismatic sunshine. Their paths cross when Charles takes a vacation at Ile de Ré, (an island situated off the southwest coast of France), in hopes of finding some peace and solitude and meets Florian who is a salt harvester there. Despite coming from very different backgrounds and lifestyles, they strike up this beautiful and sweet relationship, until Charles's life catches up to him and he is forced to abandon everything.
First of all I really love how the author handled really heavy topics (mental health issues, suicidal thoughts, loss of a Loved one, dementia, etc.) without making the story overly depressing. In the story we see Charles with this very unique condition called synaesthesia, which although scary at times, is also at other times, really beautiful, especially the way the author described it.
And the entire story, the setting, everything radiates this very domestic, homey vibe that I can't get enough of. It really captures the essence of everyday life, that is very much grounded in reality, but at the same time has this magical feel to it.
I don't really know how to describe this😅. I probably sound like a total retard but this is always the case...the more I like a book the less coherent my thoughts get.
But what has captured my heart the most is the character Florian. Despite being so young and oftentimes clueless about a lot of things, he is really dependable, caring and mature, especially when it comes to Charles and his mental health. He is one of those characters that you can't help but fall in love with. And his relationship with his grandfather was too precious.
Also my guy made me blush like a freaking school girl with his flirty comments. 😆🤭
I absolutely loved this book, and I highly recommend it. But I will give a heads-up that this story is a slow burn and doesn't have a lot of drama, so make sure you're in the right mood to feel all the emotions.
“What colours do you see now, Charles?” As his whispered words ghosted across my cheek, the bare blank canvas rippled, as if his breath blew life into it. Bit by bit, like a shy new dawn peeking over the horizon, a lush emerald-green, hung with hundreds and thousands of brilliant silvery stars unfurled. Until none of the white was left. “I see us, my love. Only us. And we’re beautiful.” wow...just wow 🤩
Well, Fearne Hill you have got yourself a new fan. This is one of the most unique and one of the most beautifully written books I've read this year.
At its core it's a very simple story that revolves around Charles, a broken man with debilitating mental health and Florian, a flirty, charismatic sunshine. Their paths cross when Charles takes a vacation at Ile de Ré, (an island situated off the southwest coast of France), in hopes of finding some peace and solitude and meets Florian who is a salt harvester there. Despite coming from very different backgrounds and lifestyles, they strike up this beautiful and sweet relationship, until Charles's life catches up to him and he is forced to abandon everything.
First of all I really love how the author handled really heavy topics (mental health issues, suicidal thoughts, loss of a Loved one, dementia, etc.) without making the story overly depressing. In the story we see Charles with this very unique condition called synaesthesia, which although scary at times, is also at other times, really beautiful, especially the way the author described it.
And the entire story, the setting, everything radiates this very domestic, homey vibe that I can't get enough of. It really captures the essence of everyday life, that is very much grounded in reality, but at the same time has this magical feel to it.
I don't really know how to describe this😅. I probably sound like a total retard but this is always the case...the more I like a book the less coherent my thoughts get.
But what has captured my heart the most is the character Florian. Despite being so young and oftentimes clueless about a lot of things, he is really dependable, caring and mature, especially when it comes to Charles and his mental health. He is one of those characters that you can't help but fall in love with. And his relationship with his grandfather was too precious.
Also my guy made me blush like a freaking school girl with his flirty comments. 😆🤭
I absolutely loved this book, and I highly recommend it. But I will give a heads-up that this story is a slow burn and doesn't have a lot of drama, so make sure you're in the right mood to feel all the emotions.
dnf
April 15, 2024DNF. I usually don't care about not finishing books. There are plenty out there and time is too short to read books I don't enjoy. But this one pained me to have to DNF. This author always calls to me and I keep trying their books but I just can't enjoy them in the end. The premise is always so original and the blurbs are right up my alley. Add in a slow burn and I'm all in. But somehow it just doesn't work and I get very bored after the 5/10% mark. Beautiful writing but something just always feels off. I will still keep trying. I am sure there will eventually be a 5* book for me in the future haha
April 10, 2024
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.5 stars
I found this book to be absolutely fascinating. It is one of those books that is difficult to put down as the story unfolds and I enjoyed the ride, as much as getting to the end. The location is great as well, set on a small island in France, and I was able to learn a grain or two about salt farming.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
4.5 stars
I found this book to be absolutely fascinating. It is one of those books that is difficult to put down as the story unfolds and I enjoyed the ride, as much as getting to the end. The location is great as well, set on a small island in France, and I was able to learn a grain or two about salt farming.
Read Michelle's review in its entirety here.
June 3, 2024
It was sweet and kind off subdued but in a good way. Even the topic of severe mental ilness was approached in a calm way, without unnecessary drama or "love cures all" nonsense. I really enjoyed the vibe of the French Island with its salt marshes and own way of life. Great summer read.
April 24, 2024
This book was so beautifully written- I absolutely loved every element: the story, the characters, the setting, the sensitive portrayal of mental illness, and the gorgeous prose. 10 out of 10 perfection. ❤️❤️❤️
March 30, 2024
So much more than a romance. The writing is brilliant, I can only imagine how much research was needed to pen such a multifaceted book.
First and foremost our men: I adored Florian, he might have been a fun loving flirt but there’s grace and maturity. And Charles….It’s impossible to not to feel for Charles, he endures such torment from his own psyche.
I was transported… not only to the French land of salt marshes but also Charles’ mind, the grief, psychosis, and colors that dominated every moment. They make an unlikely pair but there’s so much love.
I can’t say I “enjoyed” Salt as the subject matter is deep and not easy to read…but I respected it. What I can say is Salt is beautiful, mystical, romantic, tragic, hopeful, lovely, and in the end peaceful. Heed the trigger warnings. I read it in one sitting.
First and foremost our men: I adored Florian, he might have been a fun loving flirt but there’s grace and maturity. And Charles….It’s impossible to not to feel for Charles, he endures such torment from his own psyche.
I was transported… not only to the French land of salt marshes but also Charles’ mind, the grief, psychosis, and colors that dominated every moment. They make an unlikely pair but there’s so much love.
I can’t say I “enjoyed” Salt as the subject matter is deep and not easy to read…but I respected it. What I can say is Salt is beautiful, mystical, romantic, tragic, hopeful, lovely, and in the end peaceful. Heed the trigger warnings. I read it in one sitting.
April 15, 2024
10 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
10 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I loved it. So beautiful, so poetic, so heart wrenchingly romantic ❤️
It is hard to read about Charles's depressed condition and I'm sure I could not have been this strong as Fabian.
10 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I loved it. So beautiful, so poetic, so heart wrenchingly romantic ❤️
It is hard to read about Charles's depressed condition and I'm sure I could not have been this strong as Fabian.
May 1, 2024
I wanted to like this more than I did but the heavy storyline and mismatched MCs kept me from fully connecting with it. As with every FH book I’ve read, the writing was beautiful. I can always depend on Hill to vividly evoke a sense of time and place, to pen realistic and engrossing dialogue, and to simply make me feel. The setting was beautiful, the descriptions of salt farming unlike anything I’ve read before, and the house Florian and his grandfather shared—it was as if I was there with them, enjoying coffee in the kitchen.
But the story itself, Charles’s struggles and breakdown, his and Florian’s painful time apart, and their odd drawn-out reunion all felt heavy and plodding. Worse, Charles and Florian never felt like they belonged together. Florian, so light and easygoing, Charles, so downtrodden, ill, and glum. I couldn’t understand what attracted Florian to him, why he so quickly became devoted to someone who was so innately different from him. It didn't fit into an opposites-attract mold because it was all just too implausible. By the 50% mark, I felt uninvested and was tempted to skim. I hung in there, but a week out from finishing I’m struggling to remember how things wrapped up.
Not my best FH experience but still a solid three-star read, mostly because of the excellent writing. I will absolutely read book 2 but fingers crossed it’s written with a lighter tone and is populated by MCs with juicy chemistry.
But the story itself, Charles’s struggles and breakdown, his and Florian’s painful time apart, and their odd drawn-out reunion all felt heavy and plodding. Worse, Charles and Florian never felt like they belonged together. Florian, so light and easygoing, Charles, so downtrodden, ill, and glum. I couldn’t understand what attracted Florian to him, why he so quickly became devoted to someone who was so innately different from him. It didn't fit into an opposites-attract mold because it was all just too implausible. By the 50% mark, I felt uninvested and was tempted to skim. I hung in there, but a week out from finishing I’m struggling to remember how things wrapped up.
Not my best FH experience but still a solid three-star read, mostly because of the excellent writing. I will absolutely read book 2 but fingers crossed it’s written with a lighter tone and is populated by MCs with juicy chemistry.
April 16, 2024
Salt is a beautiful, touching, personal, romantic book. No macho men in sight, supportive, vulnerable and loving guys who have to fight for their HEA.
I enjoyed getting to know some things about salt tiles, marshes, harvesting. Hill wrote that in an intimate way - the work and the budding romance and connection between Charles and Florian intertwining.
An emotional and beautiful journey.
“You’re not French?”
I indicated no.
“On holiday here, yes?” He grinned, the grin of a mischievous schoolboy, although he must have been in his mid-twenties. His silver glowed brighter. “You have travelled all the way to beautiful Loix to learn how Florian produces the finest salt in the whole of France, yes?”
After all, when your dreams came untrue, what else was left? Somewhere in London, in a hospital, a sick man lived through an indescribable nightmare, and I couldn’t dwell on that right now. He was in a good place. And I had salt to harvest and a cooperative to run.
Seriously, if Fearne Hill writes it, I will read it-
I enjoyed getting to know some things about salt tiles, marshes, harvesting. Hill wrote that in an intimate way - the work and the budding romance and connection between Charles and Florian intertwining.
An emotional and beautiful journey.
“You’re not French?”
I indicated no.
“On holiday here, yes?” He grinned, the grin of a mischievous schoolboy, although he must have been in his mid-twenties. His silver glowed brighter. “You have travelled all the way to beautiful Loix to learn how Florian produces the finest salt in the whole of France, yes?”
After all, when your dreams came untrue, what else was left? Somewhere in London, in a hospital, a sick man lived through an indescribable nightmare, and I couldn’t dwell on that right now. He was in a good place. And I had salt to harvest and a cooperative to run.
Seriously, if Fearne Hill writes it, I will read it-
April 10, 2024
3.5 ⭐️
I went back-and-forth on this one. A quick read (although some slight editing glitches and typos stood out) that I quite enjoyed, but that felt simultaneously over- and under-written. As typical with Fearne Hill, the writing is very stylized, which either works for you or doesn't. Here, Charles's POV veers, for lack of a better term, into the fancy-schmancy -- that's the overwritten part; Charles is very in his feelings, and fair enough -- while Florian is more stereotypically Gallic (Napoleon references!), salt-of-the-earth himbo. (He is also written with French words regularly plopped in to remind us that he is definitely Not English, which I understand functionally but always find annoying when it's interior monologue. Like, for bilingual characters in dialogue, it's fine that they're switching between English and non-English words. But doing this in interior monologue is . . . not really my thing). Anyway, the thing about Florian is that he's not really a himbo, he just kind of reads that way? Like I said: stylizedly breezy.
The main thing I felt was lacking -- the underwritten part -- was Florian's immediate connection to Charles. In general, I thought their transition from tentative friends to real friends to lovers was well done, but Florian is very keen from the drop -- indeed, is the initiator of pretty much all the action in the book -- and it's not really clear why he's so bowled over by this guy. Charles's attraction to Florian's sunny simplicity, jokey confidence, and hot bod are easy to understand; the reverse, not as obvious.
I vacillated over whether to round up or down, but decided to reward originality: Charles's synesthesia, which is not just interesting as a condition but also ties in well to his relationship to his mother and his mental health struggles; and Florian's salt farming, which was fun to read about. Charles's mental health crises are dealt with forthrightly, although, of course, it is easier to get the kind of attentive treatment and make the kind of drastic life changes Charles eventually makes when you're stinking rich and don't have to worry about where next month's rent will come from. Note, though -- Charles refers to himself throughout using disparaging terms for mental illness (crazy, insane, nuts, etc); while there is at least one instance of Florian referring to Charles's "crazy, warped brain," although this reads more like an echo of Charles's framing and comes from a place of sympathy rather than mockery. I personally think it's ok when characters use these kinds of derogatory (but common) descriptors to describe their own situation, especially when it reflects their own self-esteem issues and how they disparage and battle themselves; but obviously, ymmv.
This is blurbed as bi-awakening for Charles, but I read him more on the ace spectrum. Either way, it was all very under-played in the way I tend to appreciate: no No Homo, Big Gay Crisis here. There is also an age gap between the two men, but this basically doesn't figure into things at all; this is not a Daddy book. The main relationship stressor is to do with Charles's mental health and his status as temporary visitor to the island, not issues related to the age difference.
In all, a brisk read that was doing a lot and had some real bright spots, but could have been more fleshed out in terms of the relationship development. Basically, if you like Fearne Hill, you'll probably enjoy this. If you've never read Fearne Hill -- get thee to Rossingley first!
CWs: suicide of secondary character (off-page); suicidal ideation (Charles); psychotic breaks (past and present); reference to electroshock therapy (past); secondary character shows symptoms of dementia
I got an ARC from GRR.
I went back-and-forth on this one. A quick read (although some slight editing glitches and typos stood out) that I quite enjoyed, but that felt simultaneously over- and under-written. As typical with Fearne Hill, the writing is very stylized, which either works for you or doesn't. Here, Charles's POV veers, for lack of a better term, into the fancy-schmancy -- that's the overwritten part; Charles is very in his feelings, and fair enough -- while Florian is more stereotypically Gallic (Napoleon references!), salt-of-the-earth himbo. (He is also written with French words regularly plopped in to remind us that he is definitely Not English, which I understand functionally but always find annoying when it's interior monologue. Like, for bilingual characters in dialogue, it's fine that they're switching between English and non-English words. But doing this in interior monologue is . . . not really my thing). Anyway, the thing about Florian is that he's not really a himbo, he just kind of reads that way? Like I said: stylizedly breezy.
The main thing I felt was lacking -- the underwritten part -- was Florian's immediate connection to Charles. In general, I thought their transition from tentative friends to real friends to lovers was well done, but Florian is very keen from the drop -- indeed, is the initiator of pretty much all the action in the book -- and it's not really clear why he's so bowled over by this guy. Charles's attraction to Florian's sunny simplicity, jokey confidence, and hot bod are easy to understand; the reverse, not as obvious.
I vacillated over whether to round up or down, but decided to reward originality: Charles's synesthesia, which is not just interesting as a condition but also ties in well to his relationship to his mother and his mental health struggles; and Florian's salt farming, which was fun to read about. Charles's mental health crises are dealt with forthrightly, although, of course, it is easier to get the kind of attentive treatment and make the kind of drastic life changes Charles eventually makes when you're stinking rich and don't have to worry about where next month's rent will come from. Note, though -- Charles refers to himself throughout using disparaging terms for mental illness (crazy, insane, nuts, etc); while there is at least one instance of Florian referring to Charles's "crazy, warped brain," although this reads more like an echo of Charles's framing and comes from a place of sympathy rather than mockery. I personally think it's ok when characters use these kinds of derogatory (but common) descriptors to describe their own situation, especially when it reflects their own self-esteem issues and how they disparage and battle themselves; but obviously, ymmv.
This is blurbed as bi-awakening for Charles, but I read him more on the ace spectrum. Either way, it was all very under-played in the way I tend to appreciate: no No Homo, Big Gay Crisis here. There is also an age gap between the two men, but this basically doesn't figure into things at all; this is not a Daddy book. The main relationship stressor is to do with Charles's mental health and his status as temporary visitor to the island, not issues related to the age difference.
In all, a brisk read that was doing a lot and had some real bright spots, but could have been more fleshed out in terms of the relationship development. Basically, if you like Fearne Hill, you'll probably enjoy this. If you've never read Fearne Hill -- get thee to Rossingley first!
CWs: suicide of secondary character (off-page); suicidal ideation (Charles); psychotic breaks (past and present); reference to electroshock therapy (past); secondary character shows symptoms of dementia
I got an ARC from GRR.
April 17, 2024
Contemporary romance with age gap (10 years), opposites attract, hurt/comfort, mental health representation, set on a French island called Île de Ré.
Charles Heyer (39), a British venture capitalist, decides to recuperate on the island following a mental breakdown brought on by work stress and the tragic death of his mother less than a year ago. He has synesthesia, which (in his case) means he associates colours with "moods and feelings", and "based on people and the emotions they generate". In his weakened mental state, his synesthesia became an "unwanted emotional liability" that stirred "all sorts of unusual triggers" like hallucinations.
Florian, a French local, inherited his salt flat from his grandfather (Papi), who farmed it for fifty years. In comparison to Charles, Florian leads a fairly carefree life tending to his salt flat and looking after his Papi, who is exhibiting signs of dementia. The island's salt farmers formed a cooperative many years ago and they have been approach by a large corporation with a takeover offer.
Florian and Charles cross paths and start a summer fling, which turns into something more but before they can explore things further, Charles is pulled back to his workaholic life in London. The pair tread a difficult path before finding happiness.
Overall, I was underwhelmed by this story. I sensed a lack of chemistry between Florian and Charles, which was exacerbated by having too much focus placed on Charles's mental health struggles. Vivid descriptions of his hallucinations turned the mood of the story much darker than what the setting allowed, in my view.
Charles was in a very vulnerable state when he arrived on the island and not in the best state of mind to start a relationship, which Florian failed to appreciate. After what happened when Charles returned to London, I found Florian's initial attitude towards Charles to be fairly unreasonable and uncaring. This was not a couple I could picture going the distance.
I found the whole salt cooperative business to be tediously boring. I was also not a fan of the dialogue with the French characters. It did not feel like they were speaking an English translation of French but rather, mostly British English with some French words here and there. I think there was at least one instance where a French character said "mate".
Still, I will read the next book in the series (featuring Florian's friend Nico) as I generally love this author's work even if this one did not hit the mark for me.
Charles Heyer (39), a British venture capitalist, decides to recuperate on the island following a mental breakdown brought on by work stress and the tragic death of his mother less than a year ago. He has synesthesia, which (in his case) means he associates colours with "moods and feelings", and "based on people and the emotions they generate". In his weakened mental state, his synesthesia became an "unwanted emotional liability" that stirred "all sorts of unusual triggers" like hallucinations.
Florian, a French local, inherited his salt flat from his grandfather (Papi), who farmed it for fifty years. In comparison to Charles, Florian leads a fairly carefree life tending to his salt flat and looking after his Papi, who is exhibiting signs of dementia. The island's salt farmers formed a cooperative many years ago and they have been approach by a large corporation with a takeover offer.
Florian and Charles cross paths and start a summer fling, which turns into something more but before they can explore things further, Charles is pulled back to his workaholic life in London. The pair tread a difficult path before finding happiness.
Overall, I was underwhelmed by this story. I sensed a lack of chemistry between Florian and Charles, which was exacerbated by having too much focus placed on Charles's mental health struggles. Vivid descriptions of his hallucinations turned the mood of the story much darker than what the setting allowed, in my view.
Charles was in a very vulnerable state when he arrived on the island and not in the best state of mind to start a relationship, which Florian failed to appreciate. After what happened when Charles returned to London, I found Florian's initial attitude towards Charles to be fairly unreasonable and uncaring. This was not a couple I could picture going the distance.
I found the whole salt cooperative business to be tediously boring. I was also not a fan of the dialogue with the French characters. It did not feel like they were speaking an English translation of French but rather, mostly British English with some French words here and there. I think there was at least one instance where a French character said "mate".
Still, I will read the next book in the series (featuring Florian's friend Nico) as I generally love this author's work even if this one did not hit the mark for me.
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