I received an electronic ARC of this book in exchange for a review, and yikes.
I was so excited for this book because I love a sports romance, I love a why choose, and rugby guys, yes please! However, I ended up not being able to make it further than 12% before I couldn’t do it anymore.
Like a few of the ARC reviews posted already, I want to say that this book needs heavy editing. I ended up leaving notes on every page. It reads like a first draft and not a book ready to be ARC’d let alone published.
Just to start, the first 5 chapters are completely superfluous to the story, and in them, we learn little to nothing about the main character other than that she plays rugby, can’t function without caffeine, and has a cat. There’s a whole scene with her dealing with a Karen at the airport and her getting moved to first class because the Karen pitched a fit about her cat. I thought, oh maybe she’ll meet one of the guys in first class and that’ll make the cringey, self-indulgent scene make some sense. But nope. She goes about her flight and nothing else happens.
Though, if we got rid of the first 5 chapters, we would miss out on the main character stating that “adulting is hard.” As a millennial myself, I beg millennial authors to please stop.
Then the FMC shows up to her new apartment where she’s going to live with some unknown roommates that she was paired with. For some reason, there is a policy that she can’t know the names of her roommates beforehand even though she is supposed to be rooming with fellow women’s rugby team members, which makes no sense.
After a lot of clues that go over her head, she realizes that she’s been placed with male roommates, but then subsequently immediately forgets this because when two of the male roommates walk in, she thinks “What the hell?” And only after they state that they live there does she overcome her brief amnesia and once again come to the realization that there was a roommate gender mix up.
This is basically as far as I could go with the less than 2-dimensional characters, cringey writing, and confusing/stagnant plot.
No hate, but this really needs a proper editing pass through, especially because others have noted typos and other errors throughout.