Book Two is almost no different from Book One. Still doesn’t deserve such a high rating; 2 stars, 3 at best.
Again, I had to put it down multiple times to go read something else because the story dragged.
The MFC is still definitely just another case of Mary Sue. Every guy she encounters immediately falls for her and her “quirks”. She can do no wrong, and if she does then it’s brushed off with hugs and kisses.
The paranormal themes underlying the story have potential going into book 2, but it’s still very Uh, what?? because they’re still not properly explored.
This time around the spice scenes aren’t so bland, aren’t as cringe to get through. Unfortunately the “quirky” woman attitude who cracks cringe jokes half the time is still around. The amount of “pet names” and nick names that get repeated — they still make up for 40% of the book. Still as repetitive, weren’t cute after the first five times they were said.
I, yet again, expected more out of a dark mafia style book that came with a title “Rise of the King”; more action, more fighting, more actual mafia anything. Instead book two was like book one; dragged on and was filled with A Lot of unnecessary filler of unnecessary conversations, repetitive lines and pet names, even scenes, and also unnecessary POVs. Again—repetitive.
At least this book ends on an actual cliffhanger.