This is a cute story, a short, easy read, but I found it rather predictable. There wasn't much new added to the story; I've read a lot of fairy tale alternatives that add a unique take on a familiar tale, but for me, this one didn't. The prince's "insight" about his parents had potential, but then it went nowhere, and Cinderella's demand that her father and stepmother clean up after the pigs smacked of the "reeducation" of the professional classes that Asians despots instituted in the last century. OK, that last might be a bit strong, but I just didn't get the sudden concern for animals on the part of Cinderella and the prince. Her journal to her mother made her sound like a child so her sudden interest in balls and getting married seemed a not entirely credible development. The story was very anachronistic (she played soccer but also went to the ball in a horse-drawn coach) without being charmingly eccentric. Sometimes the silouetted illustrations were fun (like the true-to-life-size shoe), and sometimes they were annoying (like her bland outfit for the ball). In my case I've read too many Cinderella tales to find this particularly appealing, but I do think a twelve year old might enjoy this simple, sometimes slightly humorous retelling.