Between the shrinkwrap and the smutty summary, I wasn't sure how much of an actual story this one would have. But it turned out to be surprisingly sweet and satisfying. Fun characters with a nicely developed relationship that feels like they genuinely like each other as people, beyond the romantic atmosphere. Which shouldn't have to be stated, but sometimes that part doesn't really get much of a focus.
This story started out as a short one-shot about a student council president and scary delinquent who were secretly dating - and then, based on positive feedback and publisher pressure, got turned into a full 6 chapters plus bonuses volume. Sometimes that sort of journey results in a stilted narrative where you can feel the awkward transition, but Yoriko put in all the work to build out the behind the scenes pieces and emotional depth that weren't necessary for that initial short.
At first, I'd thought the original bit was the first chapter, but I think it must've been the final bonus story? Either way, we start out with Terano and Kumazaki already in a relationship, then take a step back in the second chapter to find out how they got there. And I was really, really happy about that part. I loved seeing the interactions that made Terano's annoyance turn to curiosity then to an attraction and attachment he wasn't expecting at all.
Like Terano says himself, Kumazaki's side is a little bit slower, and I think the confession and kiss caught him massively by surprise...but he wasn't unhappy about it. While he may not have been thinking of Terano in a romantic light, he had really been enjoying their time together, and responded to Terano's intense affection with a lot of awkwardness but increasing happiness. It's a really fun journey to follow. I love how much he responds to someone pouring their affection into him.
He comes from a supportive family, actually, so there isn't any traumatic backstory there; he's just a quiet, closed-off guy who hadn't made a lot of connections before Terano swept into his life and helped him to open up.
The Nishiki bits weren't entirely necessary, but it was surprising and funny and did lead to some good communication between Terano and Kumazaki. And I liked that, too; even though there are a few points where they're not speaking to each other about things or misunderstanding situations, they do a good amount of talking. Because the way they bonded initially was through honesty: Kumazaki telling Terano that he liked him a whole lot better when he was his true self, instead of the people-pleasing Ideal Student persona he was always putting on.
Terano is actually a little bit of a jerk, but in a fun way; he loves teasing Kumazaki, and he certainly has thick jealous streaks, but he's also aware of it and never pushes anything too far. They balance each other really well.
This is a very solid story that takes a spicy trope and builds it into something substantial. It's an enjoyable read that I'll definitely revisit.