Rating 4.2
The book pulled me in from the very beginning, and I laughed so hard at the MC, Lorenzo, who found himself stopping to help someone who had been in a car accident. His POV description of the injured driver, practically removing his clothes, and some of the things she said in her delirium had me laughing and rereading the section over again. At first, I thought I had misread something and then realized that it was the scene of an accident where they had stopped. He was on his way to a cabin with his daughter to spend a little quality time. Unknown to him, the driver of the wrecked vehicle was actually his ex-wife, Mary’s former best friend, Harper Jones. She was also the lawyer, who had handled Mary’s custody matter, almost ripping his daughter, Winlow from his life. They each had held misconceptions about the other, all brought about by Mary’s lies.
It was quite eye-opening for both Enzo and Harper to realize that they had been taken in five years ago by Mary. Mary had led Harper to believe that Enzo had been cheating on her, had threatened to hit her, and if she did not guarantee that Winlow would remain with her, she was certain that he would be beating on her as well. Angry feelings, festered between the two of them. Enzo had held such animosity toward Harper as he viewed her as the one person who was attempting to take his daughter from him. Harper worried that in leaving Winlow with her father, that she had actually doomed her to a possible life of abuse. Mary, disappeared after the court, hearing and information, eventually surfaced that she was actually the one having an affair, and she practically dissed Winlow. Neither Harper nor Winlow had had contact with Mary in years. Harper felt extremely guilty for having pushed to have her removed from Enzo’s custody, realizing as she watched their interaction that he was a kind and loving father and Winlow was exactly where she belonged.
As they let down some of their defenses, and each one saw the other in a different light, feelings began to take over, and they basically received their happily ever after.
I guess my complaint would be that feelings, went from anger and hatred to love and wanting to be together in a matter of days. It just did not seem feasible to me. Although, I could understand them, breaking down their defenses, and seeing the other in a different light, I just don’t know that I believe that the “I love yous” would have been said that quickly. my second complaint would be that there were a lot of typographical and grammatical errors. I don’t know if a proof reader was employed, but if so, they missed quite a few mistakes. On several occasions, I had to reread sections over and over again to figure out what was being said. My last complaint would be that once the characters are introduced with their full names, I don’t think that it is necessary to refer to them by their full name throughout the entire book. There may be times when a point is being made, and I can see the full name being used but when the characters point of view is being presented, I found it somewhat annoying that the majority of the time Harper was referred to in Enzo’s thoughts as Harper Jones.
I’m glad I read the book and it was worth the time but I don’t know that I would put it in my group to reread.