So listen. First, I want to acknowledge that the folks who said this book needed some editing were not wrong. And I have dnf’d many indie books that sorely lacked an editor. But in this case the edits are for things like incorrect punctuation, an extra word here, a missing word there, a period when a comma was intended. Surface, not substance. It’s not that the book should have been 100 pages shorter or any major flaw like that. More like I was reading an ARC and one more round would have made it perfect. So, to my mind, that’s nbd.
In all other ways, this book is a delight. Both MCs are complex and endearing. The supporting characters (including Mabel!) are a lovely found family. Even the nursing rep and service work feels well researched - and I say that as a Nurse Practitioner who worked as a server for many years.
We have Jamie, sweet, a bit lonely. Struggling with significant body dysmorphia and associated restrictive eating and self-loathing. He lives with a lovely supportive roommate, works with a tag tag bunch of queer service industry weirdos, and I’m all in on him and all of them. And then we have Nathan, a travel nurse (10 points). The first time we see him he is actively taking a history, examining a patient, doing sutures - working in nursing scope!! Woo hoo! (100 points). He’s also lonely, but fighting it. He shares his life with his perfect little bulldog, Mabel and I love how hard he works to support her with her big feelings about the world. I am All. In.
Nathan also gives us the other side of body inclusivity rep. Not everyone who isn’t chiseled feels shit about their body but that’s not often what authors give us. I love this take on Nathan - he loves the way his body is changing as he ages and he (and everyone else) knows he’s an absolute *snack* because he’s thick and furry, not in spite of it. How delightful!
Their developing relationship was sweet and caring, earnest and low angst, with a ton of supportive, oddball found family and many cozy autumn activities to warm our souls. Though we do get some conflict to keep things interesting, there’s no dramatic third act break up - both MCs talk about their feelings and get over themselves quickly so we can move on to enjoying the sweet coziness of watching them be in love. Another great read from Micah Carver.