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Heartsong #1
A Splintered Land
Tainted magic collides with unexpected love to shatter an already fractured land
Marieke is trained in the magic of songcraft, but without connections, she’s still lucky to gain a place on a foreign delegation. She hopes to learn whether Aeltas suffers the same mysterious blight as her own land—what she doesn’t expect is to suffer a near-fatal accident the moment she crosses the border.
Zev has no reason to love singers. But when he finds a girl barely clinging to life, he can’t just turn aside. Even when Marieke’s identity threatens everything his family has fought for—and fought to hide—for generations, he can’t bring himself to regret helping her. Instead he finds himself pursuing her back across the border.
As more accidents befall singers, Zev’s desire to protect Marieke battles with his duty to his family’s secrets. But while Marieke is blind to the past, he remains mystified about the present curse hovering over her land—and threatening to stretch into his. Neither Marieke nor Zev can deny what’s growing between them…and neither can predict what it will cost not only them but the splintered lands they love.
A Splintered Land is the first installment of Heartsong, a YA fantasy trilogy set in the Sovereign Realms, where magic is harnessed by singers. When a singer with too many questions meets a farmer hiding dangerous answers, past and present collide and heart is pitted against duty. If you enjoy adventure, magic, and clean and swoony romance, enter the world of Heartsong today.
Marieke is trained in the magic of songcraft, but without connections, she’s still lucky to gain a place on a foreign delegation. She hopes to learn whether Aeltas suffers the same mysterious blight as her own land—what she doesn’t expect is to suffer a near-fatal accident the moment she crosses the border.
Zev has no reason to love singers. But when he finds a girl barely clinging to life, he can’t just turn aside. Even when Marieke’s identity threatens everything his family has fought for—and fought to hide—for generations, he can’t bring himself to regret helping her. Instead he finds himself pursuing her back across the border.
As more accidents befall singers, Zev’s desire to protect Marieke battles with his duty to his family’s secrets. But while Marieke is blind to the past, he remains mystified about the present curse hovering over her land—and threatening to stretch into his. Neither Marieke nor Zev can deny what’s growing between them…and neither can predict what it will cost not only them but the splintered lands they love.
A Splintered Land is the first installment of Heartsong, a YA fantasy trilogy set in the Sovereign Realms, where magic is harnessed by singers. When a singer with too many questions meets a farmer hiding dangerous answers, past and present collide and heart is pitted against duty. If you enjoy adventure, magic, and clean and swoony romance, enter the world of Heartsong today.
322 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 19, 2024
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Deborah Grace White
44 books354 followersDeborah Grace White was more or less born reading. She grew up on a wide range of books, from classic literature to light-hearted romps. Her love of fantasy was inevitable from the time her father read the entire Lord of the Rings trilogy to her and her siblings when she was four years old.
The love of reading has traveled with her unchanged across multiple continents, and carried her from her own childhood all the way to having children of her own.
But if reading is like looking through a window into a magical and beautiful world, beginning to write her own stories was like discovering she could open that window and climb right out into fantasyland.
Now she gets to live that childhood dream amidst the fun and chaos of life with her husband and their four kids.
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The love of reading has traveled with her unchanged across multiple continents, and carried her from her own childhood all the way to having children of her own.
But if reading is like looking through a window into a magical and beautiful world, beginning to write her own stories was like discovering she could open that window and climb right out into fantasyland.
Now she gets to live that childhood dream amidst the fun and chaos of life with her husband and their four kids.
Visit Deborah at her website: http://deborahgracewhite.com
Or follow her on Facebook
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February 11, 2025
4 stars ✨ Clean Fiction - Fantasy
Thanks to having recently read another series by this author that was set in this world (“The Singer Tales”), I was able to figure out Zev’s family’s secret. Which made me very curious to see how the rest of this series would go. As a note, so far it doesn’t seem like you have to have read that series first (but I would suggest that anyway because I liked those a lot) and this series can stand by itself. As a fan of the other series, I obviously hope there will be mentions of appearances from those characters (or at least some of them) in the final book of this trilogy, but I’m trying to brace myself that there might not be.
I was really bummed that I couldn’t finish this book in one sitting and was eager for the rest of the day to end so I could get back to it, haha! There’s quite a bit of politics for this world and it was a wee bit confusing at times because Mari and Zev’s upbringings and stories they’ve been told about the past are so different. It was interesting in that way, but I had to try hard to keep up and understand what they were talking about. Particularly with Zev because he would talk in riddles which annoyed both Mari and me!
That said, I really like smart cookie FMCs and Mari was definitely one! She was able to piece a lot of things together and I found myself nodding along with her thoughts and explanations. I would have liked more of Zev’s POV, but he probably would have kept keeping secrets from us then too, so I was fine with Marieke’s POV instead.
There’s no cliffhanger which I appreciate, but basically nothing is wrapped up in this first book so it entices you to continue. I’ll definitely be continuing soon. This trilogy is shaping up to be magic heavy, which I expected and it makes sense, but also heavy on the political intrigue, which I wasn’t expecting and am curious about. I also really like academy settings (particularly in fantasy books) so I was a bit disappointed that Mari was already a graduate (though I knew that from the back cover) and interested to see glimpses of that with her visiting the academy. It reminded me at times of the Keeper of the Lost Cities series, which “The Singer Tales” also did when I was reading it. That series because of the trolls and elves; this trilogy because of the magic, academy, and a council that is keeping secrets.
Main Content-
Magic heavy as Marieke is a Singer, a person who can sing to use the magic in the land & has recently graduated from an academy for it; Marieke explains about magic, using magic, singing/songs and composing them, being a Singer, and other things related to it many, many times; Magic is used by other Singers and by Marieke (including for defense and healing someone); Magic is also felt by Marieke and described usually in water-like terms (pouring, rushing, rapid, trickling. etc); Many talks about all of this, one land being cursed and another being blessed, and Singers and their abilities; It’s said that magic is a “beautiful, dangerous power” and can be used for good or evil, so it’s up to Singers to learn to control it wisely and reliably; Singers are unable to create something out of nothing, but can learn to control the wind, water, and lift things without touching them (as long as it would be possible with their own hands); People cannot be controlled by magic & a Singer has to have the consent of a person to use magic on them.
Marieke thinks about how Zev must not have magic, but she feels under his spell; The phrase “Song preserve us” is said.
Many mentions of all of the magic elements, using magic, enchantments, & talismans; A handful of mentions of fate, cursing it, & Zev thinking that fate brought Marieke and him together; A few mentions of luck, bad luck, & being lucky; A mention of a place feeling like a ghost is lingering there fretfully.
No major language is used, instead minor words like “blasted” and fictional phrases like “sun and shade” are said a couple times at most; A couple mentions of curses (said, not written); Eye rolling & Sarcasm; Marieke faces prejudice from Zev’s family for her nationally and being a Singer (many comments from his brother, including him saying about her murdering them in their sleep); Marieke sneaks onto a delegation without permission; Marieke eavesdrops and feels some guilt about it.
Killing someone by stabbing the person (in protection of another, up to a few sentences); Falling into a canyon, almost dying and almost being killed including almost drownings (a few times), being attacked, being threatened, earthquake-like events, fighting, knocking someone unconscious, pain, injuries, & blood/bleeding (up to a handful of sentences); *Spoilers* .
Many mentions of deaths from attacks, an assumed death, almost dying, & near drownings (up to a couple sentences); Many mentions of a coup, violence, attacks, murders, attempted murders, & exiles; Mentions of injuries, pain, & blood/bleeding; Mentions of lies, lying, liars, & deception; Mentions of hatred; Mentions of gossip & rumors; A few mentions of captives; A couple mentions of an animal drowning and the carcass contaminating a dam; A couple mentions of ale; A mention of executions; A mention of a death in a farming accident; A mention of nightmares about someone dying.
1 forehead kiss,
2 almost kisses (up to a 2-4 sentences),
2 kisses lasting a few sentences (the same kiss from both perspectives),
Remembering kisses & almost kisses (up to a couple sentences),
A bit of staring at lips.
Touches, Embraces, Hand holding, Warmth/Heat, Butterflies, Nearness, & Noticing (including muscles, up to a few sentences); Remembering touches & warmth (up to a couple sentences); Blushes.
Zev takes off his shirt to use as a rope to save Marieke & she later thinks about his physique (up to a couple sentences); When Zev goes into Marieke’s room, he leaves the door open (she rolls her eyes at the protective act).
Mentions of an almost kiss; A handful of mentions of flirting & a flirt.
Thanks to having recently read another series by this author that was set in this world (“The Singer Tales”), I was able to figure out Zev’s family’s secret. Which made me very curious to see how the rest of this series would go. As a note, so far it doesn’t seem like you have to have read that series first (but I would suggest that anyway because I liked those a lot) and this series can stand by itself. As a fan of the other series, I obviously hope there will be mentions of appearances from those characters (or at least some of them) in the final book of this trilogy, but I’m trying to brace myself that there might not be.
I was really bummed that I couldn’t finish this book in one sitting and was eager for the rest of the day to end so I could get back to it, haha! There’s quite a bit of politics for this world and it was a wee bit confusing at times because Mari and Zev’s upbringings and stories they’ve been told about the past are so different. It was interesting in that way, but I had to try hard to keep up and understand what they were talking about. Particularly with Zev because he would talk in riddles which annoyed both Mari and me!
That said, I really like smart cookie FMCs and Mari was definitely one! She was able to piece a lot of things together and I found myself nodding along with her thoughts and explanations. I would have liked more of Zev’s POV, but he probably would have kept keeping secrets from us then too, so I was fine with Marieke’s POV instead.
There’s no cliffhanger which I appreciate, but basically nothing is wrapped up in this first book so it entices you to continue. I’ll definitely be continuing soon. This trilogy is shaping up to be magic heavy, which I expected and it makes sense, but also heavy on the political intrigue, which I wasn’t expecting and am curious about. I also really like academy settings (particularly in fantasy books) so I was a bit disappointed that Mari was already a graduate (though I knew that from the back cover) and interested to see glimpses of that with her visiting the academy. It reminded me at times of the Keeper of the Lost Cities series, which “The Singer Tales” also did when I was reading it. That series because of the trolls and elves; this trilogy because of the magic, academy, and a council that is keeping secrets.
Main Content-
Magic heavy as Marieke is a Singer, a person who can sing to use the magic in the land & has recently graduated from an academy for it; Marieke explains about magic, using magic, singing/songs and composing them, being a Singer, and other things related to it many, many times; Magic is used by other Singers and by Marieke (including for defense and healing someone); Magic is also felt by Marieke and described usually in water-like terms (pouring, rushing, rapid, trickling. etc); Many talks about all of this, one land being cursed and another being blessed, and Singers and their abilities; It’s said that magic is a “beautiful, dangerous power” and can be used for good or evil, so it’s up to Singers to learn to control it wisely and reliably; Singers are unable to create something out of nothing, but can learn to control the wind, water, and lift things without touching them (as long as it would be possible with their own hands); People cannot be controlled by magic & a Singer has to have the consent of a person to use magic on them.
Marieke thinks about how Zev must not have magic, but she feels under his spell; The phrase “Song preserve us” is said.
Many mentions of all of the magic elements, using magic, enchantments, & talismans; A handful of mentions of fate, cursing it, & Zev thinking that fate brought Marieke and him together; A few mentions of luck, bad luck, & being lucky; A mention of a place feeling like a ghost is lingering there fretfully.
No major language is used, instead minor words like “blasted” and fictional phrases like “sun and shade” are said a couple times at most; A couple mentions of curses (said, not written); Eye rolling & Sarcasm; Marieke faces prejudice from Zev’s family for her nationally and being a Singer (many comments from his brother, including him saying about her murdering them in their sleep); Marieke sneaks onto a delegation without permission; Marieke eavesdrops and feels some guilt about it.
Killing someone by stabbing the person (in protection of another, up to a few sentences); Falling into a canyon, almost dying and almost being killed including almost drownings (a few times), being attacked, being threatened, earthquake-like events, fighting, knocking someone unconscious, pain, injuries, & blood/bleeding (up to a handful of sentences); *Spoilers* .
Many mentions of deaths from attacks, an assumed death, almost dying, & near drownings (up to a couple sentences); Many mentions of a coup, violence, attacks, murders, attempted murders, & exiles; Mentions of injuries, pain, & blood/bleeding; Mentions of lies, lying, liars, & deception; Mentions of hatred; Mentions of gossip & rumors; A few mentions of captives; A couple mentions of an animal drowning and the carcass contaminating a dam; A couple mentions of ale; A mention of executions; A mention of a death in a farming accident; A mention of nightmares about someone dying.
1 forehead kiss,
2 almost kisses (up to a 2-4 sentences),
2 kisses lasting a few sentences (the same kiss from both perspectives),
Remembering kisses & almost kisses (up to a couple sentences),
A bit of staring at lips.
Touches, Embraces, Hand holding, Warmth/Heat, Butterflies, Nearness, & Noticing (including muscles, up to a few sentences); Remembering touches & warmth (up to a couple sentences); Blushes.
Zev takes off his shirt to use as a rope to save Marieke & she later thinks about his physique (up to a couple sentences); When Zev goes into Marieke’s room, he leaves the door open (she rolls her eyes at the protective act).
Mentions of an almost kiss; A handful of mentions of flirting & a flirt.
October 27, 2024
Deborah Grace White is quite possibly my favorite modern author. She did an amazing job with her enchanting series of fairy tale retellings in The Singer Tales, but I think I like her original fantasy romance stories even better. I was blown away by the magic, romance, and worldbuilding in her amazing mermaid tetralogy, The Vazula Chronicles. Since then she's done an excellent job of writing even more original romance stories about curious heroines living in controversial worlds. Her contribution to the Sacrificed Hearts series takes place in the same magically enriched world as The Singer Tales as does her newest trilogy, Heartsong. To celebrate the completion of Heartsong, she offered an irresistible promotion to read the first book, A Splintered Land, for free. To her readers' delight, A Splintered Land contains many of the same elements that I loved from her other books.
Marieke (pronounced muh-REE-kuh) is a recent graduate of the Academy of Song, a school that those gifted with singing powers can attend to learn more about their craft. As an accomplished student, she is offered an ambassadorship to travel to a nearby land to help calm political tensions between their leaders and learn more about their singing academy. Before she arrives, she is met with a natural disaster that nearly takes her life. The first person she encounters after the near-fatal experience attempts to do her in again, but she is rescued by Zev, a mysterious farmer with a heart of gold. Zev hopes to part ways with her after this since aiding a singer from enemy territory goes against his personal and familial goals. However, the two are fated to meet time and again, and each time, he is there to save her from an unknown attacker.
Although this book doesn't contain the dazzle factor of dragons and mermaids that populate so many of Debrah Grace White's other fantastical works, it shares the same heart and soul that makes her books enticing. Like Merletta, the feisty mermaid heroine from The Vazula Chronicles, Marieke is a curious student who is hungry for knowledge and innocent of the corruption that surrounds her territory and culture. Zev, like White's many other reluctant love interests, is fiercely protective of her and is willing to give up his personal interests for her safety. Unfortunately, his personal interests are in direct conflict with her safety. With his family's aversion to singers and his deceptively simple upbringing, hints are dropped that he is someone far more important than he lets on. Although Marieke has her suspicions, the book leaves many questions to be answered in the rest of the trilogy.
Deborah Grace White excels at writing clean romance with high stakes, and that's where this book shines. From Marieke and Zev's first encounter, it is undeniable that they belong together. Marieke is innocent and curious, and Zev is worldly and knowledgeable. If it hadn't been for Zev, Marieke's quest to solve the mysteries of their lands would have ended several times over with her death. Unfortunately, Zev alone was unable to save all the singers who became victims to the unknown threat. As only the first book in the Heartsong trilogy, it is heavily implied that their combined forces will be necessary to save countless lives in the future. Their romance is fraught with tension due to Zev's secret, which makes it all the more enticing when the young lovers can push aside their reservations and share tender moments together.
In A Splintered Land, Deborah Grace White weaves a formidable tale of magic, romance, and political intrigue, reminiscent of her previous works. Marieke and Zev's story is a slow-burning flame that builds into a passionate and suspenseful narrative, filled with twists and turns that will keep you on the edge of your seat. While it may lack the fantastical creatures of her other series, it makes up for it with its rich world-building and complex characters. As the first installment in the Heartsong trilogy, it expertly sets the stage for a thrilling adventure, with a clean romance that will leave you rooting for the star-crossed lovers. If you're a fan of White's previous works or just looking for a new fantasy romance to get lost in, A Splintered Land is a must-read. So, buckle up and join Marieke and Zev on their epic journey, as they navigate the treacherous landscape of their world and discover the true power of their hearts.
Marieke (pronounced muh-REE-kuh) is a recent graduate of the Academy of Song, a school that those gifted with singing powers can attend to learn more about their craft. As an accomplished student, she is offered an ambassadorship to travel to a nearby land to help calm political tensions between their leaders and learn more about their singing academy. Before she arrives, she is met with a natural disaster that nearly takes her life. The first person she encounters after the near-fatal experience attempts to do her in again, but she is rescued by Zev, a mysterious farmer with a heart of gold. Zev hopes to part ways with her after this since aiding a singer from enemy territory goes against his personal and familial goals. However, the two are fated to meet time and again, and each time, he is there to save her from an unknown attacker.
Although this book doesn't contain the dazzle factor of dragons and mermaids that populate so many of Debrah Grace White's other fantastical works, it shares the same heart and soul that makes her books enticing. Like Merletta, the feisty mermaid heroine from The Vazula Chronicles, Marieke is a curious student who is hungry for knowledge and innocent of the corruption that surrounds her territory and culture. Zev, like White's many other reluctant love interests, is fiercely protective of her and is willing to give up his personal interests for her safety. Unfortunately, his personal interests are in direct conflict with her safety. With his family's aversion to singers and his deceptively simple upbringing, hints are dropped that he is someone far more important than he lets on. Although Marieke has her suspicions, the book leaves many questions to be answered in the rest of the trilogy.
Deborah Grace White excels at writing clean romance with high stakes, and that's where this book shines. From Marieke and Zev's first encounter, it is undeniable that they belong together. Marieke is innocent and curious, and Zev is worldly and knowledgeable. If it hadn't been for Zev, Marieke's quest to solve the mysteries of their lands would have ended several times over with her death. Unfortunately, Zev alone was unable to save all the singers who became victims to the unknown threat. As only the first book in the Heartsong trilogy, it is heavily implied that their combined forces will be necessary to save countless lives in the future. Their romance is fraught with tension due to Zev's secret, which makes it all the more enticing when the young lovers can push aside their reservations and share tender moments together.
In A Splintered Land, Deborah Grace White weaves a formidable tale of magic, romance, and political intrigue, reminiscent of her previous works. Marieke and Zev's story is a slow-burning flame that builds into a passionate and suspenseful narrative, filled with twists and turns that will keep you on the edge of your seat. While it may lack the fantastical creatures of her other series, it makes up for it with its rich world-building and complex characters. As the first installment in the Heartsong trilogy, it expertly sets the stage for a thrilling adventure, with a clean romance that will leave you rooting for the star-crossed lovers. If you're a fan of White's previous works or just looking for a new fantasy romance to get lost in, A Splintered Land is a must-read. So, buckle up and join Marieke and Zev on their epic journey, as they navigate the treacherous landscape of their world and discover the true power of their hearts.
September 25, 2025
2.5 stars
Plot- The plot felt meandering and disjointed at times. Lots of seemingly unrelated incidents that the main characters piece together to form a loose hypothesis on what’s going on with the curse on the land.
I found many plot points to be contrived and overly simple. For example, there’s no way the governing Council of Singers could actually get away with their lies FOR HUNDREDS OF YEARS about the battle at the port or the creation of the sundering canyon. Obv people would go visit those places (they were certainly accessible), especially historians and researchers, over the generations. The fact that our two novice MCs discovered such monumental and shocking info just from a cursory look at those places was silly.
Characters- The FMC was likable, as was the MMC. I wasn’t super connected to them, but I was rooting for them.
Romance- There was definitely potential chemistry between them, but it felt mismanaged a bit. It was a slow burn, but the burn was flickering. For instance, their kiss right after the climax lacked… something… it was over too soon and there were no simmering after effects; once it was over, it was over. The MMC pushes her away/keeps her at arms distance the entire book for Reasons.
Writing - If the chemistry had been higher, I would have been fine with the simplistic writing. But I was getting a bit bored and so the pages of internal musings felt long.
I really liked the magic system of singing to manipulate magic, and the various specialties of magical training. Very unique premise!
Content-
Language- no swearing
Spice- no sex or talk of sex. One chaste kiss.
Violence- yes, a man is stabbed, but it’s not graphic at all.
Substance abuse- no
Cover- ok
POV- dual POV, 3rd person. Felt a little shallow.
Cliffhanger- yes, the characters part ways with no expectation of seeing each other again. There is no clear plot for the next book except that the FMC wants to learn more. I’m mildly interested in their romance but between the long winded writing and lackluster plot, I won’t be continuing.
Format- KU
Plot- The plot felt meandering and disjointed at times. Lots of seemingly unrelated incidents that the main characters piece together to form a loose hypothesis on what’s going on with the curse on the land.
I found many plot points to be contrived and overly simple. For example, there’s no way the governing Council of Singers could actually get away with their lies FOR HUNDREDS OF YEARS about the battle at the port or the creation of the sundering canyon. Obv people would go visit those places (they were certainly accessible), especially historians and researchers, over the generations. The fact that our two novice MCs discovered such monumental and shocking info just from a cursory look at those places was silly.
Characters- The FMC was likable, as was the MMC. I wasn’t super connected to them, but I was rooting for them.
Romance- There was definitely potential chemistry between them, but it felt mismanaged a bit. It was a slow burn, but the burn was flickering. For instance, their kiss right after the climax lacked… something… it was over too soon and there were no simmering after effects; once it was over, it was over. The MMC pushes her away/keeps her at arms distance the entire book for Reasons.
Writing - If the chemistry had been higher, I would have been fine with the simplistic writing. But I was getting a bit bored and so the pages of internal musings felt long.
I really liked the magic system of singing to manipulate magic, and the various specialties of magical training. Very unique premise!
Content-
Language- no swearing
Spice- no sex or talk of sex. One chaste kiss.
Violence- yes, a man is stabbed, but it’s not graphic at all.
Substance abuse- no
Cover- ok
POV- dual POV, 3rd person. Felt a little shallow.
Cliffhanger- yes, the characters part ways with no expectation of seeing each other again. There is no clear plot for the next book except that the FMC wants to learn more. I’m mildly interested in their romance but between the long winded writing and lackluster plot, I won’t be continuing.
Format- KU
July 24, 2025
Slow Start, Compelling Read
It felt like it took forever for the story to get off the ground. So many hints and suggestions but no concrete anything until about 70% through the book. Zev’s perspective is particularly frustrating to read since he purposely obscures knowledge from the reader in his narration. Half finished thoughts and vague allusions fill his narration. But despite these annoyances, the story is compelling. Once I finally made it to 70%, I couldn’t put it down as all the seemingly unrelated events of the meandering start up locked into place. There are still far more questions than answers but they build curiosity rather than apathy. Looking forward to the next book.
It felt like it took forever for the story to get off the ground. So many hints and suggestions but no concrete anything until about 70% through the book. Zev’s perspective is particularly frustrating to read since he purposely obscures knowledge from the reader in his narration. Half finished thoughts and vague allusions fill his narration. But despite these annoyances, the story is compelling. Once I finally made it to 70%, I couldn’t put it down as all the seemingly unrelated events of the meandering start up locked into place. There are still far more questions than answers but they build curiosity rather than apathy. Looking forward to the next book.
April 14, 2025
I'm feeling annoyed with this book. Like really annoyed. I bought it based on some really glowing reviews in a group but I can't say that I found any of the enjoyment they did in this book.
Firstly, this book starts off great. She's travelling to the neighboring kingdom and the bridge they go over starts to crumble as the magic fails - at this point I was so excited about reading this book. Like wow!
But then issues started. She is rescued (how convenient), they are baddies but somehow she escapes (okay...), she happens to be rescued by the handsome and very buff leading man (okay another coincidence), who has a secret (errr), who knows where our leading lady needs to go (okay...)....
And then for no reason reason our leading man decides he's going to travel to her kingdom with another .... well, because reasons.... And what do you know? In this big ol' kingdom our leading lady and leading man just coincidentally end up in the same place....
At that point I was really finished with this book. It was chapter after chapter of things conveniently happening. I didn't particularly enjoy reading third person either even though the pov switched between them - mainly because I didn't get a distinct voice - it was all bland. Also one pov quite often went back in time or we heard the same situation repeated over and over and over - like Marieke's near death with the - I think I counted that retold 3 times which is 2 too many for more. I have attempted to finish it but I can't.
Firstly, this book starts off great. She's travelling to the neighboring kingdom and the bridge they go over starts to crumble as the magic fails - at this point I was so excited about reading this book. Like wow!
But then issues started. She is rescued (how convenient), they are baddies but somehow she escapes (okay...), she happens to be rescued by the handsome and very buff leading man (okay another coincidence), who has a secret (errr), who knows where our leading lady needs to go (okay...)....
And then for no reason reason our leading man decides he's going to travel to her kingdom with another .... well, because reasons.... And what do you know? In this big ol' kingdom our leading lady and leading man just coincidentally end up in the same place....
At that point I was really finished with this book. It was chapter after chapter of things conveniently happening. I didn't particularly enjoy reading third person either even though the pov switched between them - mainly because I didn't get a distinct voice - it was all bland. Also one pov quite often went back in time or we heard the same situation repeated over and over and over - like Marieke's near death with the - I think I counted that retold 3 times which is 2 too many for more. I have attempted to finish it but I can't.
July 23, 2024
Mysterious accidents. Ancient coverups. Swoony romance.
What more do you need?
I thoroughly enjoyed this newest Deborah Grace White novel! I always admire her natural ways of introducing a new magic/land/history to the reader in a way that brings us right in!
*mild spoilers*
I loved following Marieke journey as she discovers that the past is not what it seems. I’m always down for political intrigue, and the setting of a council overthrowing a monarchy was a fascinating and unique setting for it!
And of course, Zev is amazing (plus I just love the names!). He comes across as tall, handsome, and (frustratingly) mysterious—packaged as a genuine, land-loving farmer. Deborah Grace White did an awesome job portraying all the nuances of his character in realistic and endearing ways.
While the major antagonist of this book is gone, I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see the main antagonistic forces of the series unfold as Marieke and Zev seek more answers. I can’t wait for the next installment in their series!
Another fantastic start to a fantastic series by one of my favorite authors!
What more do you need?
I thoroughly enjoyed this newest Deborah Grace White novel! I always admire her natural ways of introducing a new magic/land/history to the reader in a way that brings us right in!
*mild spoilers*
I loved following Marieke journey as she discovers that the past is not what it seems. I’m always down for political intrigue, and the setting of a council overthrowing a monarchy was a fascinating and unique setting for it!
And of course, Zev is amazing (plus I just love the names!). He comes across as tall, handsome, and (frustratingly) mysterious—packaged as a genuine, land-loving farmer. Deborah Grace White did an awesome job portraying all the nuances of his character in realistic and endearing ways.
While the major antagonist of this book is gone, I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see the main antagonistic forces of the series unfold as Marieke and Zev seek more answers. I can’t wait for the next installment in their series!
Another fantastic start to a fantastic series by one of my favorite authors!
July 22, 2024
This book was absolutely amazing! I've been waiting for this spin-off from the Singer Tales ever since I heard about it and this book didn't disappoint. The plot was intriguing and there are so many mysteries hidden in the history of the Sovereign Realms. Marieke's and Zev's romance was also so sweet. Zev is really steadfast and loyal and Marieke is curious and very open-minded, challenging Zev's beliefs about her and singers. There were some great plot twists as well that made the book even more intriguing and I hate that I now have to wait for another month before the next book comes out. The story was extremely well-written and well-developed and the overall book was very satisfactory. Great job, Deborah!
July 31, 2024
Academy graduate seeks purpose, finds danger and connection
I enjoy this type of read that emphasizes people first, then their adventures and mishaps. Marieke wants more from her life and, in an attempt to pursue what’s next, becomes involved in a dangerous and intriguing situation. She also meets a mysterious, compelling man. I like how they both want to move forward both on uncovering the mystery and on their connection yet are held back by secrets and feelings of what they should or shouldn’t do. The mystery is well-handled, making you think it could be more than one possibility. I plan to continue the series.
I enjoy this type of read that emphasizes people first, then their adventures and mishaps. Marieke wants more from her life and, in an attempt to pursue what’s next, becomes involved in a dangerous and intriguing situation. She also meets a mysterious, compelling man. I like how they both want to move forward both on uncovering the mystery and on their connection yet are held back by secrets and feelings of what they should or shouldn’t do. The mystery is well-handled, making you think it could be more than one possibility. I plan to continue the series.
January 11, 2025
full of magic and mystery!
Firstly, be prepared for unresolved and still full of questions end. So yes, it’s a grab the second book right away kind of read!
But what a read! Back to the world of singers and magic and finally all truth (or partially uncovered truth) of the Reviled Lands mentioned in the Singer series. So, if you’ve wondered about this island while enjoying those retold fairy tales (yes, go read them first), you are for a treat.
And of course, as in any story crafted by Ms. White you found issues of heart and of status and of desires neatly tucked into the well-developed plot with an incredibly engaging style.
Well done!
Firstly, be prepared for unresolved and still full of questions end. So yes, it’s a grab the second book right away kind of read!
But what a read! Back to the world of singers and magic and finally all truth (or partially uncovered truth) of the Reviled Lands mentioned in the Singer series. So, if you’ve wondered about this island while enjoying those retold fairy tales (yes, go read them first), you are for a treat.
And of course, as in any story crafted by Ms. White you found issues of heart and of status and of desires neatly tucked into the well-developed plot with an incredibly engaging style.
Well done!
September 13, 2024
New Adventure Begins
Marieke loves asking questions. Her questions though lead to more questions than answers. Enter Zev, a man surrounded by questions. Their paths weave together as they uncover truths long buried. Their chemistry is fantastic, and their character arcs well built. The mystery and pieces are in place. The mystery surrounding the Reviled Lands is proving to be much more intriguing than I ever thought, and I’m excited to see what’s in store in the latter two books of the trilogy.
Marieke loves asking questions. Her questions though lead to more questions than answers. Enter Zev, a man surrounded by questions. Their paths weave together as they uncover truths long buried. Their chemistry is fantastic, and their character arcs well built. The mystery and pieces are in place. The mystery surrounding the Reviled Lands is proving to be much more intriguing than I ever thought, and I’m excited to see what’s in store in the latter two books of the trilogy.
October 31, 2024
I loved this book. Deborah Grace White is so clever at dropping hints that make you want to read more. I loved Marieke and Zev's unique story and Ms White's development of the complicated relationship between them. She is so skilled at showing instead of telling. It was fascinating to read how Marieke found out more about the real history of their two countries were divided. I'm saving up to get Book 2 as soon as possible.
October 31, 2024
She is a singer in one country, he is a farmer in another. When the Council of Singers of her country go to the Council of Singers in his country, she is almost killed when she falls from the carriage on a bridge that has magically collapsed. Using her magic she is able to save herself but ends up meeting some folks that would like to kill her too! Oh my. He saves her as she is trying to escape the gorge, against his brother's advice, and their story begins.
This is a clean read.
This is a clean read.
July 29, 2024
Can’t wait for more!
New characters, new lands, amazing story! I love Deborah Grace White’s books and this one is no exception. She has such unique magic and worlds and the characters are always intriguing. I love Zen and Marieke and can’t wait to see their story continue. There’s also plenty of unanswered questions and more characters I want to know more about!
New characters, new lands, amazing story! I love Deborah Grace White’s books and this one is no exception. She has such unique magic and worlds and the characters are always intriguing. I love Zen and Marieke and can’t wait to see their story continue. There’s also plenty of unanswered questions and more characters I want to know more about!
October 12, 2024
3.5 stars. Contains: a couple of fights in self-defense, kisses.
This has the same magic system as the Singer’s Tales but is stand alone. Merike’s journey to find answers was pretty interesting. I like that the MCs have different beliefs about history which really just emphasizes the concept that “history is written by the victors”
This has the same magic system as the Singer’s Tales but is stand alone. Merike’s journey to find answers was pretty interesting. I like that the MCs have different beliefs about history which really just emphasizes the concept that “history is written by the victors”
December 25, 2024
Loved this book! Finished the entire series in less than twelve hours. Marieke was a fascinating, relatable character, and I loved her relationship with Zev. The world building was really unique, and the whole book was fun without dismissing or making light of any of the underlying themes of the book itself.
July 27, 2024
Loved it!
I loved reading this book, and I cannot wait for the second one! It’s going to be great! Deborah Grace White writes wonderful books, and I’m so happy to have read this story.
I loved reading this book, and I cannot wait for the second one! It’s going to be great! Deborah Grace White writes wonderful books, and I’m so happy to have read this story.
August 16, 2024
Such an exciting beginning
I knew I had to prepare myself for this book, and I was right. There is so much action and goings on in this first tale, that you MUST pay attention. I like it! Can hardly wait for the next book in the series.
I knew I had to prepare myself for this book, and I was right. There is so much action and goings on in this first tale, that you MUST pay attention. I like it! Can hardly wait for the next book in the series.
August 24, 2024
This was a really entertaining read. It was easy to read and flowed really nicely. Like many of Deborah's series there is a lot of mystery and intrigue, and we are left with a lot of questions. A fantastic start the series, I look forward to the next book.
November 30, 2025
Imma be honest- I sort of read this one with my eyes more than my brain. I know it's White's style for intricate world building, but it consisted of mostly info-dumps. Imma still read the rest of the series, though.
July 21, 2024
A stunning first book
This first book in the Heartsong series had me on the edge of my seat and I'm dying to know what happens next!!
This first book in the Heartsong series had me on the edge of my seat and I'm dying to know what happens next!!
July 22, 2024
Thank goodness this was dual POV
I don't blame Mari for going insane not being able to read Zev's mind. We readers actually could and he was STILL mysterious!
I don't blame Mari for going insane not being able to read Zev's mind. We readers actually could and he was STILL mysterious!
August 6, 2024
I really loved reading this book! I loved the characters and the plot! I had a hard time putting this really wonderful book down! I will be reading the next book in this really wonderful series!
September 3, 2024
Deadly song, dying land
A sweet romantic fantasy with a clever, curious heroine and a handsome, honorable love interest. I love the world that the author has created.
A sweet romantic fantasy with a clever, curious heroine and a handsome, honorable love interest. I love the world that the author has created.
October 5, 2024
Good story that I am curious to see how everything is resolved so I will continue reading the series. It is a clean book, which I appreciated.
October 13, 2024
Great start to this spin off series
I love this world of singers the author has created and really enjoyed this book. I look forward to the next books.
I love this world of singers the author has created and really enjoyed this book. I look forward to the next books.
October 25, 2024
A very strong 3 stars.
The romance is a slow burn.
The magic system still isn't very clear to me, though an attempt was made to explain some of it.
I do want to continue the series.
The romance is a slow burn.
The magic system still isn't very clear to me, though an attempt was made to explain some of it.
I do want to continue the series.
December 26, 2024
Awesome adventures!
I like that the story was more about the plot than the romantic relationship. I thoroughly enjoyed this first book!
I like that the story was more about the plot than the romantic relationship. I thoroughly enjoyed this first book!
January 1, 2025
A great start to an all new trilogy set in the same world as this author's Singer Tales (though you don't have to have read that series to read this one).
January 25, 2025
4.5
Really interested in where this is going.
Really interested in where this is going.
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