An earlier work by Thea Devine where she has not developed her signature writing style. There is no vagueness or stream-of-consciousness passages. What remain Devine hallmarks are the erotic scenes, hate-to-love chemistry, and mystery plot.
Everything is spelt out, and it is this that makes Tempted By Fire boring, at times. There is almost a perfunctory feeling to the romance, like this is how a romance should be written, and I do not begrudge Devine for this since it is an earlier work, and for an earlier work, it is well-written, it is sexy, and there is a good, if a little synchronistic ending. As someone who has read the earlier works of other authors and have found them to be juvenile to unreadable, Tempted By Fire is readable but missing Devine's essence.
The pedantic descriptions make it hard to be engaged in the story, despite a captivating prologue. The opening chapters are also intriguing and creative but also bogged down with words. It is when Jenae and Southam's agreement is set into motion that this really bears weight on the pacing of the story, and the plot, feels, at times, rudderless. There is attention spent upon detailing, at length, scenes, that don't have to be. I almost quit reading when Jenae was getting her London wardrobe.
However, there is a good plot in here, and I am a fan of Devine's heroines. Again, I was struck by how Devine can write a good femme fatale. They almost remind me of Emile Zola's Nana, in their unapologetic magnetism to the other sex. Jenae is another heroine who knows their sexual power and their sexual desires and uses it.
Jenae and Southam must be both Scorpios because there is so much power dynamics in their relationship with each other. The main crux to their chemistry is how much they want to make the other submit to their sexual power. They both want to dominate the other. Some of the more risque scenes involve silk ropes, and pots of chocolate. Again, there is a pedantic quality in their barbed conversations. Each volley they throw at each other is dissected minutely by the other. Sometimes, this is entertaining, other times, you want to move on.
Other reviewers have noted that the ending felts incomplete. Even Southam notes with disappointment that Jenae is more focused on wrapping up the mystery than dealing with their relationship. However, deal with the mystery we must.
While I noticed that there wasn't an ending scene where they make their declarations of love and clear up any misunderstandings with their behaviour, it did not bug me because there was at least one moment where we got into Southam and Jenae's brains and they were honest, at least to themselves, that they did care for the other person.
Southam, in particular, memorably has this realization a few times, in his fear that she will leave him, or in telling her that their marriage will not be annulled or end. Jenae had a lot going on LOL - most of her POV was spent trying to figure out how not to die or be kicked out on the street.
Overall, I recommend Tempted By Fire with some reservations. Devine's adherence to writing conventions can drag down the pacing of the story, depending on your reading tastes, but if you like femme fatales and are piqued by the erotic scenes, you might find yourself holding on, and enjoying the ride.
P.S. This cover is gorgeous! :P