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On his 19th birthday Kyle Beauchamp gets the surprise of his life—a make out session in the back of the bus. With his wide receiver.
Kevin Beauchamp loves two things, football and Kyle. After a rough game and a discreet blow job in the back of the bus, Kevin’s life will never be the same. But the love of his life is straight, and off limits in more ways than one.
When Kyle returns his feelings, Kevin has to decide if a few nights of intense passion is worth destroying their future. He knows one thing—loving his twin might be wrong, but losing Kyle would be like losing the other half of his soul.
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BLURB
On his 19th birthday Kyle Beauchamp gets the surprise of his life—a make out session in the back of the bus. With his wide receiver.
Kevin Beauchamp loves two things, football and Kyle. After a rough game and a discreet blow job in the back of the bus, Kevin’s life will never be the same. But the love of his life is straight, and off limits in more ways than one.
When Kyle returns his feelings, Kevin has to decide if a few nights of intense passion is worth destroying their future. He knows one thing—loving his twin might be wrong, but losing Kyle would be like losing the other half of his soul.
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September 24, 2015
Okay, my friends have verrrrrrrry wide and varying opinions on this book, from "H.A.T.E.D. it", to totally squicked out, to "Where's the sequel???"
Twincest is definitely a taboo subject, but in real life, being totally honest here people, answer me this:
If you were out drinking in a dark, sweaty club, the bass is pumping and you stumble upon two ridiculously hot, muscley twins making out hot and heavy in the shadows...
What would *you* do?
Something to think about, huh?
I seriously doubt that many of you would be walking away -- until you got busted for staring.
I can guarantee that my feet would be superglued to that goddamn sticky floor. Mesmerized. And stupidly DROOLING.
So people are kinky bastards. Yeah, we know this. Straight people, gay people, yep. Kinky bastards, the lot of us. It's like asking if water is wet. It's a given, so I’m not picking up any rocks while standing in my own glass house on this kink.
And now that I have at least one or two of you in a possibly more receptive mindset, let us proceed... :- D
In this particular twin adventure, Kevin is gay and secretly sneaks off to gay clubs for a bit of kissing and a one-off handy now and again. And he's still a virgin, but has a love thang for his identical twin brother.
His twin, Kyle, seemed almost asexual to me in the beginning, with only a stray finger bang for a hummer now and then -- but so infrequently that he honestly can't remember how long ago or with what girl. And he's a virgin, too, as he's never gotten all that excited about anyone before (female or male).
Then everything changes on a very oral bus ride home after an away football game on their 19th birthdays.
If we're still being honest, the story is definitely an erotica-fest, with about as much plot depth as that strand of spit that books always describe when someone pulls their mouth away from a really sloppy BJ. (Mmm hmm, you know you've seen that strand of spit, so don't lie.)
After the fated bus ride, the "plot" is full steam ahead on the hot, sexy variations on getting down and dirty in pretty much every way that you'd picture two hot 19 year old football boys going at it.
And they just hit it over and over and over and over again.
But the midnight swimming pool scene with Kevin losing his V-card? Sweet, merciful baby Jesus. *Sweating*
The author makes full use of the word 'brother' a crazy number of times in the book, just in case you forgot (or tried to forget) that they were twins, so that felt a bit much.
BUT... Without a doubt, the sex scenes were very vividly written and I'd bet my own hard-earned cash that if you de-incested the book and said 'boyfriend' everywhere that it says 'brother', a ton of the squicked out crowd would be giving this book 4+ stars for the hawt factor alone. Just sayin'.
Anyway, I normally stay away from straight-up erotica, since I'm really a plot driven reader, so I'm giving the book 4.75 stars for all of the X-Tube'esque [bus, bedroom, den, locker room shower and swimming pool] scenes, but rolling 1 star back for the fairly thin, somewhat predictable plot, so 3.75 pervy stars for this read.
Disclaimer: No twins were harmed in the making of the videos above. ;- )
March 6, 2014
Steam Factor--5 Stars!
Story Itself--3 Stars!
We'll round it out to--4 Stars!
First of all...
And here's your...
This book contains some smoking, and I mean SMOKING, hot man on man action.....between twin brothers. Yes, that's right.....twincest.
I mean there really are no words.
Honestly, I completely forgot they were brothers....
So, obviously this books isn't for everyone. But if you can look past the whole twin thing, this was a pretty decent story. I'd say it's more along the lines of being a novella, as it was only around 150 pages.
Kyle an Kevin are 19 year old identical twins. The story starts with them being on the bus home after a football game when Kevin proceeds to give his twin brother Kyle a BJ on the bus ride home.
Um....
I know I shouldn't be turned on by this but damn....HOT is HOT. And it is just a book after all.....
So Kevin is gay and Kyle didn't think he was. But that was some BJ and so now Kyle doesn't know what to think. Kevin and Kyle start sneaking around. They are in high school, play football, etc. Their parents go out of town for the weekend and they explore whatever it is that is going on between them.
I really kept thinking I would find out they were distant cousins....step siblings....IDK something. But
Kevin and Kyle have always been close and their friends at school tease them about it. The teasing goes too far and then eventually Kevin and Kyle are caught in the act by their dad.
All of the gays unite and rally around Kevin and Kyle to show their support.
IDK...this was definitely more of a HFN. Not even sure a HEA is in these two's future but what do I know. Not even sure if there is going to be another book.
Story Itself--3 Stars!
We'll round it out to--4 Stars!
First of all...
And here's your...
This book contains some smoking, and I mean SMOKING, hot man on man action.....between twin brothers. Yes, that's right.....twincest.
I mean there really are no words.
Honestly, I completely forgot they were brothers....
So, obviously this books isn't for everyone. But if you can look past the whole twin thing, this was a pretty decent story. I'd say it's more along the lines of being a novella, as it was only around 150 pages.
Kyle an Kevin are 19 year old identical twins. The story starts with them being on the bus home after a football game when Kevin proceeds to give his twin brother Kyle a BJ on the bus ride home.
Um....
I know I shouldn't be turned on by this but damn....HOT is HOT. And it is just a book after all.....
So Kevin is gay and Kyle didn't think he was. But that was some BJ and so now Kyle doesn't know what to think. Kevin and Kyle start sneaking around. They are in high school, play football, etc. Their parents go out of town for the weekend and they explore whatever it is that is going on between them.
I really kept thinking I would find out they were distant cousins....step siblings....IDK something. But
Kevin and Kyle have always been close and their friends at school tease them about it. The teasing goes too far and then eventually Kevin and Kyle are caught in the act by their dad.
All of the gays unite and rally around Kevin and Kyle to show their support.
IDK...this was definitely more of a HFN. Not even sure a HEA is in these two's future but what do I know. Not even sure if there is going to be another book.
March 7, 2014
This was wrong, oh so wrong. I went into this with an open mind. I didn't expect much, but this was essentially porn without plot.
What bothered me the most is that the psychological implications of incest weren't addressed at all. One brother is gay, the other "straight" (maybe?). And one day, faster than you can say hoedown, one gives the other a blow job on a school bus.
The MCs are identical twins, and each thinks the other is hot; narcissistic much? The guys both had "K" names (Kevin and Kyle), and their personalities were so flat, I couldn't tell them apart and keep track of
At one point Kevin confesses that even when he was young he was IN LOVE with Kyle and cried when they stopped sharing a room. WHAT? Don't throw sexuality on a young child. It's normal to cry when you get separated from your twin; that doesn't mean you want to fuck him when you grow up.
All the secondary characters were cookie-cutter. There was an evil crazed bitch of a cheerleader and a psychotic dad. The ending was abrupt. There was a shitload of angst thrown in, because fucking your twin isn't angsty enough?!
NO, just NO.
March 6, 2014
Ok first, a warning- this is twincest. If that's not your thing, this isn't the book for you.
But if it is your thing, this book is totally for you. It's not something I ever thought about before I got into reading M/M, but now, it flips my switch. It really makes a strange sort of sense, two people who have been together literally FOREVER, I can see how that love could evolve, and how it might be hard for them to ever really love someone else in that way.
This book starts with a bang, or really, a blow job on the school bus, on the way home from a football game. A first for both guys, but we eventually find out that while they are both virgins (at 19!), Kevin is gay, and has exchanged a few hand and blow jobs at clubs, and Kyle has fooled around with girls, but that was it.
I have a few niggles about this story. Because they were twins and because their names were similar, I often forgot which twin was which, who was doing or saying what to whom. Which could have been totally the point, but still, it got confusing after a while. I also thought the editing fell apart at the end, with a few wrong words and confusing phrases during the talk with cheerbitch #2.
But if it is your thing, this book is totally for you. It's not something I ever thought about before I got into reading M/M, but now, it flips my switch. It really makes a strange sort of sense, two people who have been together literally FOREVER, I can see how that love could evolve, and how it might be hard for them to ever really love someone else in that way.
This book starts with a bang, or really, a blow job on the school bus, on the way home from a football game. A first for both guys, but we eventually find out that while they are both virgins (at 19!), Kevin is gay, and has exchanged a few hand and blow jobs at clubs, and Kyle has fooled around with girls, but that was it.
I have a few niggles about this story. Because they were twins and because their names were similar, I often forgot which twin was which, who was doing or saying what to whom. Which could have been totally the point, but still, it got confusing after a while. I also thought the editing fell apart at the end, with a few wrong words and confusing phrases during the talk with cheerbitch #2.
January 8, 2018
This book was very much in the
meh
category for me. I couldn't tell who was whom because their names both started with "K" and it got annoying after a bit, there was a psychotic cheerleader who I don't understand why she even existed, then there's the cooky friends and the equally cooky dad, it was just a big jambalaya of weirdness. This is my first twincest and I'm almost certain it is to be my last.
will-never-ever-read
March 11, 2014
March 31, 2014
I have absolutely no idea if this was a well-written novel or not. Frankly, I was way too busy slobbering over the sex scenes. (I was surprised to find it on Amazon though. I've heard that while dinosaur erotica is a-ok, anything ending in a -cest is right out unless it's pseudo-incest. Not that I'm looking for...well, anyway.) It was a fun read though! Where's the sequel?
December 29, 2023
∆ This book needed some serious editing.
∆ The story didn't shine through as much as it could've if the writing was better.
∆ The ending is abrupt, the story stops somewhere in the middle with no epilogue.
∆ Misogyny, because why the hell not?
Kyle and Kevin were likeable characters with a sweet coming together story, but again, so much of their past was left unsaid and as we come to find out later on, that past was pretty damn important.
🔴 Taboo - twincest
🟢 One brother gay / other straight
🔵 Both virgins
🟣 Coming out
🌶️ A lot of sex
🟠 No HFN, no HEA
❗ Some homophobia
Kevin and Kyle are 19 years old identical twins and both football players. Kevin's been in love with Kyle since they were teenagers. The parents then decided they were to live in separate rooms, because they apparently suspected Kevin was gay and wouldn't be a good influence on Kyle.
For most of the story it seems like Kevin and Kyle are constantly spending time together, but that's not really the case, since it's mentioned they both have very separate social lives and at 19 they don't even know intimate things about each other, like them both being virgins. So, a lot of things could've been written down for me to get a really clear picture of where these guys are coming from, but the story starts with Kevin blowing Kyle on the team's bus, so - a bit misleading, since there's absolutely no build up to that particular moment. You have to read the whole story to really get the full picture.
I did like both MMCs and their brotherly relationship developing into a forbidden one, the smut was really good and the comforting they provided for one another was sweet, but in general the storytelling wasn't working for me. The writing was pretty bad, the book needed extensive editing and because of that most of the time I wasn't sure how exactly Kyle and Kevin felt about each other, did they really want to continue being together? Were they actually saying goodbye, since they're off to separate colleges? What exactly is their end goal here? And most importantly - how does it end???
The villain in this story was supposed to be a 17-year old cheerleader, who went from a skank to having acid in her pussy to acusing them both of sexual assault, so again I wonder - why? Why even put that in there? Can't Kyle and Kevin have a sweet story without all that crap? Some authors just have to do it, there always has to be a completely rotten woman somewhere in there, in this case also a minor - so thanks for that, didn't need it, at all. Kyle and Kevin claimed they were bullied by this particular group of girls for years, but that could've been put in their past story too, if there was any to begin with.
The story ends in the middle of the peak conflict resolving, so basically we never find out how it all turned out for them, what happened to Kyle and Kevin after everything really came to light. We know nothing. So a good portion of the story is completely missing.
There were more bad than good things in this book, so I can't say it worked for me, but I did like both Kyle and Kevin, the disappointing fact is that I'll just have to imagine their happy ending.
∆ The story didn't shine through as much as it could've if the writing was better.
∆ The ending is abrupt, the story stops somewhere in the middle with no epilogue.
∆ Misogyny, because why the hell not?
Kyle and Kevin were likeable characters with a sweet coming together story, but again, so much of their past was left unsaid and as we come to find out later on, that past was pretty damn important.
🔴 Taboo - twincest
🟢 One brother gay / other straight
🔵 Both virgins
🟣 Coming out
🌶️ A lot of sex
🟠 No HFN, no HEA
❗ Some homophobia
Kevin and Kyle are 19 years old identical twins and both football players. Kevin's been in love with Kyle since they were teenagers. The parents then decided they were to live in separate rooms, because they apparently suspected Kevin was gay and wouldn't be a good influence on Kyle.
For most of the story it seems like Kevin and Kyle are constantly spending time together, but that's not really the case, since it's mentioned they both have very separate social lives and at 19 they don't even know intimate things about each other, like them both being virgins. So, a lot of things could've been written down for me to get a really clear picture of where these guys are coming from, but the story starts with Kevin blowing Kyle on the team's bus, so - a bit misleading, since there's absolutely no build up to that particular moment. You have to read the whole story to really get the full picture.
I did like both MMCs and their brotherly relationship developing into a forbidden one, the smut was really good and the comforting they provided for one another was sweet, but in general the storytelling wasn't working for me. The writing was pretty bad, the book needed extensive editing and because of that most of the time I wasn't sure how exactly Kyle and Kevin felt about each other, did they really want to continue being together? Were they actually saying goodbye, since they're off to separate colleges? What exactly is their end goal here? And most importantly - how does it end???
The villain in this story was supposed to be a 17-year old cheerleader, who went from a skank to having acid in her pussy to acusing them both of sexual assault, so again I wonder - why? Why even put that in there? Can't Kyle and Kevin have a sweet story without all that crap? Some authors just have to do it, there always has to be a completely rotten woman somewhere in there, in this case also a minor - so thanks for that, didn't need it, at all. Kyle and Kevin claimed they were bullied by this particular group of girls for years, but that could've been put in their past story too, if there was any to begin with.
The story ends in the middle of the peak conflict resolving, so basically we never find out how it all turned out for them, what happened to Kyle and Kevin after everything really came to light. We know nothing. So a good portion of the story is completely missing.
There were more bad than good things in this book, so I can't say it worked for me, but I did like both Kyle and Kevin, the disappointing fact is that I'll just have to imagine their happy ending.
March 29, 2015
Looking for plot? Then move along, there's nothin' to see here. What there is, though, is some extremely hot twincest! *fans myself*. Definitely not for everyone, but dayum. I'm not gonna lie -- there is a part of me (the extra pervy part) that finds twincest hot, and this book delivers hot. So, if you can get past the taboo and you're in the mood for a light on plot, porny read, you've come to the right place.
January 5, 2018
Oh that was so great - I loved those characters! How the author takes us through that intense, emotional time for Kevin and Kyle, it was absolutely captivating... but that ending whoa.
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April 20, 2014I've sort of worn a hole the size of a pro-NFL locker-room in the athletic department of this genre, so when new sports/themed releases hit..I'm on them like a sweat-stained-jockstrap.
So-this is supposed to be some sort of doublemint-twins-taboo-jock-cock-kind-of-story. Wish I could say nice try-good game but this was like a two-point conversion that didn't convert. The only football I found was the title and a convenient coaching character.
As a side note this 'taboo' subject of twincest/brocest is literally like open-season for a skilled writer. I base this on my recent OCD researching episode triggered by this reading attempt. Taboo was probably the meatiest thing I could locate (& don't quote me on that) because even that's lean.
I've noticed a peculiar fan-pandering occurring in this genre. Kind of like in music. The more popular a band gets it seems the more specifically they pander to the fans watering down their material. Same shit-different day-another $dollar$.
TPC's dedication kind of said a lot to me (I sort of like to analyze that shit) regarding the content-prioritizing, focus-processing, etc; "To Sharita Lira who threw down the challenge to write a twincest."
SO-if this is the writer's best effort and attempt at what could have been a thought-provoking, deeply-moving subject matter in a throw-down-challenge of a trivialized-taboo-po-dunk-porno-farce. Well..that's unfortunate they couldn't rise to the occasion. Aaand..kind of unfortunate for me that I'm not this stimulation-simple. Sometimes stupidly-amused. Sure-dependent on the day but pretty sure we were going for something else here.
As far as the story issues; let's just say I could rip it a well-lubed asshole big enough to drive a semi-truck through..but I won't..because I'm not financially compensated to do so.
So-this is supposed to be some sort of doublemint-twins-taboo-jock-cock-kind-of-story. Wish I could say nice try-good game but this was like a two-point conversion that didn't convert. The only football I found was the title and a convenient coaching character.
As a side note this 'taboo' subject of twincest/brocest is literally like open-season for a skilled writer. I base this on my recent OCD researching episode triggered by this reading attempt. Taboo was probably the meatiest thing I could locate (& don't quote me on that) because even that's lean.
I've noticed a peculiar fan-pandering occurring in this genre. Kind of like in music. The more popular a band gets it seems the more specifically they pander to the fans watering down their material. Same shit-different day-another $dollar$.
TPC's dedication kind of said a lot to me (I sort of like to analyze that shit) regarding the content-prioritizing, focus-processing, etc; "To Sharita Lira who threw down the challenge to write a twincest."
SO-if this is the writer's best effort and attempt at what could have been a thought-provoking, deeply-moving subject matter in a throw-down-challenge of a trivialized-taboo-po-dunk-porno-farce. Well..that's unfortunate they couldn't rise to the occasion. Aaand..kind of unfortunate for me that I'm not this stimulation-simple. Sometimes stupidly-amused. Sure-dependent on the day but pretty sure we were going for something else here.
As far as the story issues; let's just say I could rip it a well-lubed asshole big enough to drive a semi-truck through..but I won't..because I'm not financially compensated to do so.
November 2, 2015
I think I'm done. DNF at 70%, I will skim through the rest but I don't think anything in that last 30% is going to change my mind on this review. Rant begin:
So things I didn't like about this book
- Kevin and Kyle.... honestly I still don't know or care who is who, I was constantly thinking, 'wait, Kevin is the gay one right?' because that's really the only thing that separates them, not that you can really tell, which brings me to my next point
- Kyle is the worst GFY character ever, he literally gives/receives hand jobs and blow jobs within the first 10% and doesn't have any concerns over it. He fucks Kevin at 50% and confess' he's in love with him and then at 70% he is worried that someone thinks he's gay - because he obviously isn't - and STRAIGHT after that, reminds Kevin it's his turn to fuck him. It just makes NO sense.
- These two flip flop so often and not in the 'normal' taboo/incest, where there's tension and concerns over it all being wrong, then they fall in love and get over it. At the beginning of the sentence one of them is all like, 'shit this is wrong' and by the end of the sentence they're having sex... again.
- No sexual tension, at all! They just have lots and lots of sex
- No Plot - that's kind of a big one... they just have lots and lots of sex...
- So many side characters that mean absolutely nothing to be or the story line, aside from Lucas and Cody and when they popped up at 60% I actually had to think if I had met them before, despite apparently being the twins best friends.
Things I liked
- Twins have sex.
So things I didn't like about this book
- Kevin and Kyle.... honestly I still don't know or care who is who, I was constantly thinking, 'wait, Kevin is the gay one right?' because that's really the only thing that separates them, not that you can really tell, which brings me to my next point
- Kyle is the worst GFY character ever, he literally gives/receives hand jobs and blow jobs within the first 10% and doesn't have any concerns over it. He fucks Kevin at 50% and confess' he's in love with him and then at 70% he is worried that someone thinks he's gay - because he obviously isn't - and STRAIGHT after that, reminds Kevin it's his turn to fuck him. It just makes NO sense.
- These two flip flop so often and not in the 'normal' taboo/incest, where there's tension and concerns over it all being wrong, then they fall in love and get over it. At the beginning of the sentence one of them is all like, 'shit this is wrong' and by the end of the sentence they're having sex... again.
- No sexual tension, at all! They just have lots and lots of sex
- No Plot - that's kind of a big one... they just have lots and lots of sex...
- So many side characters that mean absolutely nothing to be or the story line, aside from Lucas and Cody and when they popped up at 60% I actually had to think if I had met them before, despite apparently being the twins best friends.
Things I liked
- Twins have sex.
March 8, 2014
Disappointed.
I usually like taboo stories and surely I have no problem reading book about incest/twincest (it’s just a fantasy, isn’t it?).
This book however is a missed opportunity to deal with such an interesting and controversial theme.
The characters lack depth and are not at all believable. The twins seem to have the IQ of a porcupine, the side characters are laughable and predictable: couple of best friends (surprise: they’re gay too!), the coaches (surprise: they’re gay too!), the cheerleaders (surprise: they’re evil bitches!).
Mind you, if you’re looking for a porny quick read, you could give it a try.
I usually like taboo stories and surely I have no problem reading book about incest/twincest (it’s just a fantasy, isn’t it?).
This book however is a missed opportunity to deal with such an interesting and controversial theme.
The characters lack depth and are not at all believable. The twins seem to have the IQ of a porcupine, the side characters are laughable and predictable: couple of best friends (surprise: they’re gay too!), the coaches (surprise: they’re gay too!), the cheerleaders (surprise: they’re evil bitches!).
Mind you, if you’re looking for a porny quick read, you could give it a try.
May 12, 2017
I liked this book, but I can't say I loved it. Sure it was hot as hell, but there were a lot of things that also bothered me.
Kyle and Kevin are 19 year old identical twins. Which is were my annoyance started. Their names...it was so confusing to keep up with who was saying what. Maybe it would have been an easier read if the names would have started with different letters. I kept forgetting who the gay one was and after a while I just didn't care who was speaking...they kind of morved into the same person.
Kevin and Kyle are in their last year of high school and on the football-team together. They were close for a long time, but eventually grew apart, spending time with their own friends. Kevin is gay, but he hasn't told anybody about this and Kyle is straight. After a game, the team gets on the bus, Kevin and Kyle getting a seat in the back. When Kyle shows Kevin he is still worked up from the game and in need of some relief, Kevin decides this would be a good a time as any to blow his brother. Now don't get me wrong, it was hot....just a bit weird that they would risk getting caught like that, especially since it's their first time getting sexual.
This however is the beginning of a physical relationship between the two brothers. It's not just sexual though...they really are in love with each other. It takes a bit longer for Kyle to come to this realisation, since he still doesn't think he's gay.
But being gay is not the big issue here...being in love and screwing with your twin brother is. It's a big secret they have to keep and as we all know....secrets always have a way of coming out.
Shit really hits the fan for these boys, question is...how will they dig themselves out.
This is were my second issue comes in. I just had a little problem with the fact that everyone turned out gay all of a sudden and that the shockfactor was so low. Kyle and Kevins best friends turn out to also be gay and in a relationship together. After they find out about Kevin and Kyle being together, instead of being shocked...they drop their pants, blow each other (in front of the twins) and later on listen to the twins having sex.....That was just a bit ott for me. I liked that these boys had good friends and support, and I get that this is fiction, but for me it was a bit too easy.
Still....I enjoyed reading this one and these twins sure were hot together. This book ends on a hfn, which is understandable, because I don't think they will ever have an easy way of being together. I would have liked an epilogue though...to see how things end up in the future.
3 stars :)
March 5, 2014
*4.5 stars*
Not gonna lie, I picked up this book PURELY for the fact that it was MM featuring twin-cest (which means twin-incest). This book is not for everyone, in fact in may not appeal to many because of the incest factor BUT I took a gamble and I gotta say I DON'T REGRET IT!!!
This book was highly emotional and very touching and the love that the twins; Kevin and Kyle, had for each other was so sweet (and okay, I admit it, it was FUCKIN' HOT too!!!). And while the book ends on what feels like a HFN (after all the guys are ONLY 19 AND their relationship/love is what society would consider "taboo"), there is HOPE and ACCEPTANCE and that is enough to make me happy!
So if the subject matter DOESN'T put you off, then I say give the book a go!!!
I'll just leave y'all with the picture that may or may not have inspired Mercy to write the story *DROOL*
Not gonna lie, I picked up this book PURELY for the fact that it was MM featuring twin-cest (which means twin-incest). This book is not for everyone, in fact in may not appeal to many because of the incest factor BUT I took a gamble and I gotta say I DON'T REGRET IT!!!
This book was highly emotional and very touching and the love that the twins; Kevin and Kyle, had for each other was so sweet (and okay, I admit it, it was FUCKIN' HOT too!!!). And while the book ends on what feels like a HFN (after all the guys are ONLY 19 AND their relationship/love is what society would consider "taboo"), there is HOPE and ACCEPTANCE and that is enough to make me happy!
So if the subject matter DOESN'T put you off, then I say give the book a go!!!
I'll just leave y'all with the picture that may or may not have inspired Mercy to write the story *DROOL*
March 11, 2014
High school football players in a GFY twincest--I'll take one of those
Alright people just so you know, a twincest book is guaranteed one star just by being twincest. Every book gets one star if I rate it, so this book started out with a minimum rating of 2 stars. I liked it. There were some sweet moments of recollection and understanding how Kyle came to love Kevin as much as his twin already loved him. But the rest of the circus really didn't do much for me. Gotta say that Lucas and Cody added a few chuckles and smiles. Good job, boys.
Favorite passage:
Alright people just so you know, a twincest book is guaranteed one star just by being twincest. Every book gets one star if I rate it, so this book started out with a minimum rating of 2 stars. I liked it. There were some sweet moments of recollection and understanding how Kyle came to love Kevin as much as his twin already loved him. But the rest of the circus really didn't do much for me. Gotta say that Lucas and Cody added a few chuckles and smiles. Good job, boys.
Favorite passage:
"I don’t believe they’re doing that right in front of us,” Kyle muttered.
“I don’t believe they’re doing each other at all.”
January 2, 2018
I was so wanted to be smutted out reading this twincest story........UNFORTUNATELY, I didn’t feel the “oh my gawd, they’re twins and they’re screwing” excitement—because that would be my initial, automatic response. Taboo? Sign me up! I love brocest. If you’re all wrinkling your nose and flapping your arms and saying “nonononononononono!” Well, maybe you’re not ready to read a book about identical twins screwing, kissing, and loving each other because that’s what happens in this book. Sometimes in front of other people (I like these parts best!).
What I did feel was tension and stress. Not UST (which is always hot, but sorely missing here), but the tension that they’ll be found out. I’m no scholar, but aside from dynastic breeding around the world, I’m pretty sure that incest something that has and will remain taboo. I don’t think it’s part of the + in LGBTQA+.
See, these hot 19 year old twins did things like stupid horny teenagers do without thinking of the consequences. Well, this stressed me out and I WASNT ABLE TO ENJOY ANY TYPE OF CESTING, twin or no. *Fumes*
So, plotwise, we’ve got little aside from one twin being gay and jumping his twin. There’s a mean girl cheerleader who tries to cause problems, and an ass for a dad. It’s a bit disjointed.
In truth, this book made me sad because it’s hard to hide being twins. They love each other, but see no way forward. They’re slated to play football for different schools next year in college. This is where Mercy Celeste leaves us. Happy ending? Well, it’s not horrible. HFN, I’m not sure Happy ties into the equation, but the twins will take what then can for as long as they can, so that’s something.
FYI, this book was pulled from all major retailers for content. Taboo content. Now you should ask yourselves about books with incestuous relationships sold everywhere. A Game of Thrones comes to mind as does the classic series Flowers in the Attic. Of course, these were MF relationships, even if one was twincest. I’ve not checked, but are. MF incest books also banned on retailers such as Amazon? It’d be an interesting study.
** BUDDY READ with Shin, Shile, Trio and Michelle
**PEANUT GALLERY COMMENTS from Michaelle
What I did feel was tension and stress. Not UST (which is always hot, but sorely missing here), but the tension that they’ll be found out. I’m no scholar, but aside from dynastic breeding around the world, I’m pretty sure that incest something that has and will remain taboo. I don’t think it’s part of the + in LGBTQA+.
See, these hot 19 year old twins did things like stupid horny teenagers do without thinking of the consequences. Well, this stressed me out and I WASNT ABLE TO ENJOY ANY TYPE OF CESTING, twin or no. *Fumes*
So, plotwise, we’ve got little aside from one twin being gay and jumping his twin. There’s a mean girl cheerleader who tries to cause problems, and an ass for a dad. It’s a bit disjointed.
In truth, this book made me sad because it’s hard to hide being twins. They love each other, but see no way forward. They’re slated to play football for different schools next year in college. This is where Mercy Celeste leaves us. Happy ending? Well, it’s not horrible. HFN, I’m not sure Happy ties into the equation, but the twins will take what then can for as long as they can, so that’s something.
FYI, this book was pulled from all major retailers for content. Taboo content. Now you should ask yourselves about books with incestuous relationships sold everywhere. A Game of Thrones comes to mind as does the classic series Flowers in the Attic. Of course, these were MF relationships, even if one was twincest. I’ve not checked, but are. MF incest books also banned on retailers such as Amazon? It’d be an interesting study.
** BUDDY READ with Shin, Shile, Trio and Michelle
**PEANUT GALLERY COMMENTS from Michaelle
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 7, 2015
I'll start by saying that one of the things I have always loved about Mercy Celeste's writing is the passion. The characters - whether I love them or hate them - have always inspired passion from me. The sex is passionate and her books always storytelling more than just reading. She pushes boundaries, I know some may not have liked them, but I always have. This book pushed no boundaries, not even taboo.
This e-book is not passionate. The characters lack depth. The erotic content is not nearly as erotic as Beyond Complicated, Under a Crescent Moon or, say, Six Ways From Sunday, to name a few. I put this down for a while, but as a GR friend pointed out it is short. So I finished, but without much enthusiasm.
Kyle and Kevin, right, I really don't like characters starting with the same initial (I kept forgetting who was talking, same initials, same voice), are nineteen year old twins who have the hots for one another. Wait, the whole story is in the blurb, and tons of other twincest books, so there is no point in me saying anything because there really isn't much of a story. Nineteen years olds fucking, evil female cheerleader, who was not at all fleshed out, evil parent, accepting parent. This book is clear cut - good people, bad people and mediocre sex.
If you like twincest it's not a bad read. If you like more depth and, like me, expect more from this author, then you may feel as I do. Disappointed.
This e-book is not passionate. The characters lack depth. The erotic content is not nearly as erotic as Beyond Complicated, Under a Crescent Moon or, say, Six Ways From Sunday, to name a few. I put this down for a while, but as a GR friend pointed out it is short. So I finished, but without much enthusiasm.
Kyle and Kevin, right, I really don't like characters starting with the same initial (I kept forgetting who was talking, same initials, same voice), are nineteen year old twins who have the hots for one another. Wait, the whole story is in the blurb, and tons of other twincest books, so there is no point in me saying anything because there really isn't much of a story. Nineteen years olds fucking, evil female cheerleader, who was not at all fleshed out, evil parent, accepting parent. This book is clear cut - good people, bad people and mediocre sex.
If you like twincest it's not a bad read. If you like more depth and, like me, expect more from this author, then you may feel as I do. Disappointed.
October 2, 2024
This was not the best Mercy Celeste book I’ve read. The two boys were named so similarly that it got confusing. I think even the author got mixed up at times because there were several times that things just didn’t match up. The story was told from both MCs POV and that made it extra confusing. I often had to go back several paragraphs to try to figure out which boy’s POV it was. There were plenty of hot, sexy times and the twincest thing didn’t bother me. The ending was so abrupt and left me wanting to know more. You’re kind of left hanging. Decent story, but it could use some cleaning up to clarify certain aspects.
March 8, 2014
Let's be clear: I have no problem with twincest. This book is the 18th entry on my "brotherly love" shelf. I can't seem to stay away from it. I think it's because I'm looking for an author to do it right, to focus on the emotional/psychological implications of such a relationship along with the sex. Unfortunately, this is not that book. It felt porny and not at all believable. Disappointing.
March 13, 2014
Only thing bad about this book,was that it ended. I know this is a taboo subject (incest)for so many, but I nor Mercy Celeste gives a damn about what's socially acceptable. This book was awesome. I've enjoyed so many of her books and she didn't disappoint with this one. The brother's love was so genuine that it was beautiful. Mercy also makes the story realistic. The brother's fear and confusion of the feelings they have for each other was so real, that I found myself on the edge of my seat pulling for them. The sex scenes were so full of compassion and sincerity...it was just right. I loved the ending as well, it wasn't expected or foreseen...their mother's strength. Marvelous job hon.
Author A.E. Via
Author A.E. Via
March 10, 2014
3.5 STARS
I'm very confused. First of all I'm pissed of at the ending
Second... Even if this was a twincest story, we already knew it was, there was no surprise there so people went into this story with eyes wide open, if the idea of a twincest makes you sick don't read it!
Kevin cleared his throat, he couldn’t seem to move, or look away. “Are you really still wearing my jock?” Fastidious Kyle would never wear dirty clothes if he didn’t have to.
“There’s only one way to find out.” Kyle leaned on one elbow and slowly slid his foot up his leg.
I particularly enjoyed it, the way the story is told is in a very smart way, I can't get myself to feel completely grossed out about it, in fact I thought it was pretty HOT.
Kevin licked his inner thigh. “Stop teasing me.”
“I believe this is called foreplay.”
This is the story of Kyle and Kevin Beauchamp, on their 19th birthday the brothers end up doing something they never thought they would, they're conflicted but addicted about what their harmless exploration led them to, Kevin is gay and has always been in love with Kyle, but Kyle is straight but being with his brother has opened feeling in him he thought were hidden deep within. They struggle, they suffer, they enjoy and try to grasp what time they have.
Warning: if you're looking for a HEA this isn't the story for you, a BIG question Mark is what you end up with.
But it was entertaining and short. Not bad really just hoped for a prologue at least. Or a look into the future. Maybe even a sneak peak...
I'm very confused. First of all I'm pissed of at the ending
Second... Even if this was a twincest story, we already knew it was, there was no surprise there so people went into this story with eyes wide open, if the idea of a twincest makes you sick don't read it!
Kevin cleared his throat, he couldn’t seem to move, or look away. “Are you really still wearing my jock?” Fastidious Kyle would never wear dirty clothes if he didn’t have to.
“There’s only one way to find out.” Kyle leaned on one elbow and slowly slid his foot up his leg.
I particularly enjoyed it, the way the story is told is in a very smart way, I can't get myself to feel completely grossed out about it, in fact I thought it was pretty HOT.
Kevin licked his inner thigh. “Stop teasing me.”
“I believe this is called foreplay.”
This is the story of Kyle and Kevin Beauchamp, on their 19th birthday the brothers end up doing something they never thought they would, they're conflicted but addicted about what their harmless exploration led them to, Kevin is gay and has always been in love with Kyle, but Kyle is straight but being with his brother has opened feeling in him he thought were hidden deep within. They struggle, they suffer, they enjoy and try to grasp what time they have.
Warning: if you're looking for a HEA this isn't the story for you, a BIG question Mark is what you end up with.
But it was entertaining and short. Not bad really just hoped for a prologue at least. Or a look into the future. Maybe even a sneak peak...
March 13, 2014
Kevin and Kyle Beauchamp, Kev and Ky, are twins that share everything. A strong love for football, and each other. Aside from a couple times in their lives they’ve always been together and they share a bond that breaks the lines of social acceptability. On the outside, Kevin is gay and Kyle is straight, but on the inside things aren’t that black and white. They are two halves of the same whole.
One night of bliss on the bus after a game leads to confessions and passions that Kyle never fathomed, and Kevin only dreamed of. They hide their new found love from everyone around them, or so they think. Little by little the facade crumbles and as they get more caught up in their emotions, they take risks that eventually land them in very hot water. Friends become allies, mentors become saviours and family becomes the enemy in this brilliant story of forbidden love.
The subject matter of this book, twincest, may be controversial, but the story was so well written. Kev and Ky’s emotions are all over the place and well conveyed to the reader. The love is loud, the passion is perfect and the desperation is disturbing. As the story unfolds Kev and Ky learn that they have more allies than they ever thought possible. And the person that is screaming the loudest, condemning them, is someone they should be able to trust. I loved that even though most people didn’t understand or necessarily agree with the relationship as more than just brothers, most people still stood up for them. Don’t judge that which you don’t understand.
I realize this book won’t be for everyone, but let me assure you, the author did not write some tawdry porn script where a couple of twins just pound each other into oblivion as entertainment for the masses. This is a love story rooted in blurred lines. I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope that there is a sequel.
** I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review through MM Good Book Reviews **
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One night of bliss on the bus after a game leads to confessions and passions that Kyle never fathomed, and Kevin only dreamed of. They hide their new found love from everyone around them, or so they think. Little by little the facade crumbles and as they get more caught up in their emotions, they take risks that eventually land them in very hot water. Friends become allies, mentors become saviours and family becomes the enemy in this brilliant story of forbidden love.
The subject matter of this book, twincest, may be controversial, but the story was so well written. Kev and Ky’s emotions are all over the place and well conveyed to the reader. The love is loud, the passion is perfect and the desperation is disturbing. As the story unfolds Kev and Ky learn that they have more allies than they ever thought possible. And the person that is screaming the loudest, condemning them, is someone they should be able to trust. I loved that even though most people didn’t understand or necessarily agree with the relationship as more than just brothers, most people still stood up for them. Don’t judge that which you don’t understand.
I realize this book won’t be for everyone, but let me assure you, the author did not write some tawdry porn script where a couple of twins just pound each other into oblivion as entertainment for the masses. This is a love story rooted in blurred lines. I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope that there is a sequel.
** I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review through MM Good Book Reviews **
http://www.mmgoodbookreviews.wordpres...
March 28, 2014
3 CRAZY CRAZY STARS
One word to describe Two Point Conversion is - > TWINCEST!
This book is so wrong on so many levels since it's about twin brothers having sex, yet I had to read it.
Let's be honest... the story is sub-par. It's about two brothers who explore with each other and then **gasp** realize that they like it a lot.
There's lots of SEX, ORAL SEX, Fondling and Dirty talk.
Is it alright? Oh no, but did it peek my interest? Oh yes.
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
AMAZON
One word to describe Two Point Conversion is - > TWINCEST!
This book is so wrong on so many levels since it's about twin brothers having sex, yet I had to read it.
Let's be honest... the story is sub-par. It's about two brothers who explore with each other and then **gasp** realize that they like it a lot.
There's lots of SEX, ORAL SEX, Fondling and Dirty talk.
Is it alright? Oh no, but did it peek my interest? Oh yes.
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
AMAZON
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January 2, 2016Okay, so...this was my own fault because I bought the book without ever reading the blurb. I've liked Mercy Celeste novels in the past, and bought a whole bunch a while ago on sale. Then I just randomly picked a book out of my Kindle carousel to read, and, well...Anyway.
What was with the ending?! I powered through a lot of twin sex to It was majorly disappointing to be left with a whole lot of unanswered questions.
What was with the ending?! I powered through a lot of twin sex to It was majorly disappointing to be left with a whole lot of unanswered questions.
June 26, 2017
Holy.Effing.Shit
I have many conflicted emotions reading this. In ways it felt just... wrong, but then again,who am I to judge?? ya know? This is definitely a compelling and socially awkward topic. I think you either love it or hate it. I feel to mixed up about it to really say. I didn't hate it though.
That aside.. Mercy Celeste knows how to tell a story! This is book 3 that I have read of hers and she enraptures me every.single.time!!
So basically, even if you don't like what she is talking about, you can't argue that she isn't saying it well. And please tell me there's another book?? I feel like I need more to the story.
I have many conflicted emotions reading this. In ways it felt just... wrong, but then again,who am I to judge?? ya know? This is definitely a compelling and socially awkward topic. I think you either love it or hate it. I feel to mixed up about it to really say. I didn't hate it though.
That aside.. Mercy Celeste knows how to tell a story! This is book 3 that I have read of hers and she enraptures me every.single.time!!
So basically, even if you don't like what she is talking about, you can't argue that she isn't saying it well. And please tell me there's another book?? I feel like I need more to the story.
March 7, 2014
This is a very steamy book...but...on that note...when I read M\M...I like a little more meat to it!!! Yes...yes...the guys are gorgeous and well endowed...lol...but...I like there to be more of a story...build up to the first encounter. I did read some reviews about the book before reading it...and new sex would begin right from the get go...but...I thought then...maybe...a story would then begin to pull me into the sex...but sadly...it didn't!!! I will say this again...it is hot...and naughty...being two brothers in love...but...I am just not a fan!!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 7, 2014
Um, well, my goodness.
I'm not incredibly surprised that Mercy Celeste finally crossed THAT line. You know, the actual incest one. Skillfully.
There are a couple of stupid typos in this, which is annoying because it's well-written overall, and moves more smoothly than the last couple of her books have, with no loose plot ends.
I am not a particular fan of "twincest", but I can be fascinated by taboos, and no-one can dance around one like she can.
I'm not incredibly surprised that Mercy Celeste finally crossed THAT line. You know, the actual incest one. Skillfully.
There are a couple of stupid typos in this, which is annoying because it's well-written overall, and moves more smoothly than the last couple of her books have, with no loose plot ends.
I am not a particular fan of "twincest", but I can be fascinated by taboos, and no-one can dance around one like she can.
July 26, 2016
I'm thinking this was more of a 3.5 read
Twincest.
I was totally fighting for them. Even though everyone who found out was. Weird? Yup. I thought so too. Maybe they are all kinky in their twincest ways too!
I had a hard time telling Kyle and Kevin apart POV wise.
Then it kinda just ends? HFN I suppose.
Twincest.
I was totally fighting for them. Even though everyone who found out was. Weird? Yup. I thought so too. Maybe they are all kinky in their twincest ways too!
I had a hard time telling Kyle and Kevin apart POV wise.
Then it kinda just ends? HFN I suppose.
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