The story started up really good up until one point. The development of the relationship was intriguing, but then the whole story was a big miscommunication or more like unsaid things that made everything very messy. The story dragged a lot in the middle because just when you think they are finally getting together, they actually get in a situationship and only hook up when he's back in town or the few times she goes to games. I also had a few issues with some of the details and plot:
• I don't know Mia's age. The timeline for her dreams being taken away from her and then her going to culinary school is very fuzzy. Perhaps they mentioned this in the first book, which I did not read, but then it seems like an important detail to be missed on her story. We only know Nolan's age in one of the last chapters, and this was bothering me the whole time.
• What a stupid kind of idea it was to be parading women around and making the woman you like think you don't care about her. Wow, what a gentleman.
• His mom coming back suddenly and him accepting her so easily after she freaking abandoned him for a man (his dad, who's an ass). I don't buy it.
• The retirement announcement scene was so cringe, he left her hanging for a few days and then gave an interview without telling anyone in advance? Talk about self absorbed.
• The spoilers at the end of the story, during the epilogue. I was thinking about reading the third book because I was curious and wanted to know if it was a surprised pregnancy, but then the characters had to talk about theories that should have been left for the main story. Now I don't give an f about it, I will just go ahead and read some spoilers in the reviews because I can't believe that she's going to hide a whole baby in plain sight from the dad (for some stupid reason, I bet). What a dumbass. Seems like all the women in this series are insufferable.
• The final epilogue was also too cringe. She's better than me because if a man asked me to marry him by writing it in his body like a banner, I would have say no. Respect me a little, why don't you.
Overall I laughed and enjoyed the book but I don't think I'm going to continue with the stories, I did not love anyone here (except Liam).