In Sweat, we meet Cassie as a personal trainer in a gym, who ends up assigned to her ex-boyfriend, Liam. The catch - Liam is now blind from a recently diagnosed brain tumour. Cassie alters her voice and personality to adopt a new persona, ensuring that Liam will not figure out who she is, allowing her to finally be the one with the upper hand in their relationship. Through dual timelines, we learn about their power-imbalanced, controlling relationship, and the subsequent attempt at getting her own back.
The tagline that sold me on this book was this: “I stared at him as if he were a picture. I stared at him the way women never get to stare at men: without fear.” Unfortunately, I don’t feel as though this is a particularly accurate representation of what the book embodies. I think Sweat has the bones to be that kind of a novel, but it falls short in a number of ways.
Within the first couple of pages, I found the humour of the book to feel quite misplaced. It didn’t get much of a laugh out of me, and I laugh at anything. Paired with the fact that we are immediately introduced to an abusive relationship that is always treated with deep levels of sincerity, it felt like a very strange tonal juxtaposition. Cassie’s first interaction with Liam post-blindness was bizarre and totally confusing. Why are you not just telling people this guy is your ex so you don’t have to work with him? I know - without this, there would be no book, but I immediately found it frustrating.
Cassie’s motivations are supposedly: I want to get revenge, I want to make him feel as bad as he made me feel, I want to look into his eyes without feeling scared. Love it, makes total sense given the scenario you found yourself in, keep it up. Except, none of this really comes through in the text? The most she does to him is fill his water bottle with toilet water (which she almost immediately dumps out and replaces with fresh water), puts soy sauce in his ramen, and gives him uneven weights. There’s a lot of talk about what she wants to do, but little of it comes through in her actions.
I found the tension build up in this book very minimal, and ultimately quite unconvincing. In theory, I understand why Cassie would want to follow Liam around, go through his bins, mess with his stuff, but because we don’t have a satisfying increase of tension or change of mindset in Cassie, it just seems like she’s doing these things because she has no impulse control. I think these events would have been far more effective if the snippets of their relationship were listed chronologically, and we could experience the increasing control, restriction and abuse that she faced from Liam, rather than flitting in and out of random vignettes of their relationship. We are immediately thrown in at the deep end and understand that she is in a toxic situation, which removes any kind of tension or anxiety that could have really made this story more compelling.
Similarly, she gets cut off from her friend as soon as she tells her that she is training Liam in the gym. There is barely an explanation for this, and relies heavily on the reader inherently understanding that she had been in a relationship that bad. We don’t know anything about Cassie or Tanya’s friendship, how she was supported by her during the relationship and pre/post-breakup. We know little about Liam at the point this occurs. It all feels rushed, and as if there hasn’t been enough of a picture formed of the past that led to this severing of ties.
I did enjoy parts of this book - yes, it left me unsatisfied, but it was easily readable, and kept my attention. Some parts were better than others, but unfortunately these parts end as quickly as they begin, without really delving deeper into the subject matter. For example, the passage about Liam not wanting her to be on birth control, but then being unsafe with his protection, and the following conversation about Tanya ‘telling her not to have children’. This was really effective and gave us an insight into Liam as a person, and it also felt tense: this could be detrimental to her, and their relationship, but as soon as conflict and dialogue grows, the chapter ends. We spent more time reading about her walking home from school with her friend and her kids than we did about this.
Ultimately, I felt like this never really went anywhere. We seemed to circle the same drain for 300+ pages, never really witnessing any character growth or plot progression. Cassie by the end of the book was identical to Cassie from the first page. As an exploration of coercive control, this book did a decent job, it just didn’t land as well as others of its type have. I think if this had been billed as a dark comedy, with Cassie’s revenge hijinks dialed up a bit (a lot), getting more and more twisted/peculiar, it would have been better at succeeding as more of a ‘good for her’ type.
Thank you to NetGalley and Random House UK, Cornerstone for the ARC ebook in exchange for an honest review.